A comic I am working on

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Basically it is a comic of two nameless guys who just stand around on an otherwise blank sheet of paper and chat about the world.
I'm hoping to make a series of them and I'm even working on a Site that will hold all future episodes.

Here are the 3 that are up now

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Tips, ideas, suggestions?
 
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Reminds me of when I made 4 comics (the whole front and back sides of college ruled notebook paper) called Abstractland. It was about a guy who is for reasons unknown trapped in a world that was a fusion between mathematics and modern art. Mind you it was stick figures and simple shapes, but I never finished it and lost the 4 that I had completed. Baw.

SUGGESTION TIEM

The comic...it seems kind of...I dunno. I don't understand what you're going for with this. It...it needs a feel to it. Abstractland was meant to feel confusing and bewildering (dunno if I achieved that...), but this...I dunno what to say. It feels off. I like the first one and to an extent the last one. However, the middle one just ain't doin' it for me. It definitely has potential, and I love the art, but maybe...I just can't put my finger on what I dislike abut it...sorry if I seem harsh...
 
Ultra Pidgeot said:
Reminds me of when I made 4 comics (the whole front and back sides of college ruled notebook paper) called Abstractland. It was about a guy who is for reasons unknown trapped in a world that was a fusion between mathematics and modern art. Mind you it was stick figures and simple shapes, but I never finished it and lost the 4 that I had completed. Baw.

SUGGESTION TIEM

The comic...it seems kind of...I dunno. I don't understand what you're going for with this. It...it needs a feel to it. Abstractland was meant to feel confusing and bewildering (dunno if I achieved that...), but this...I dunno what to say. It feels off. I like the first one and to an extent the last one. However, the middle one just ain't doin' it for me. It definitely has potential, and I love the art, but maybe...I just can't put my finger on what I dislike abut it...sorry if I seem harsh...
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Don't worry about sounding harsh, I like criticism. The hardest thing I find in making a comic is in fact finding exactly what feel I want my series to have. Being only 3 comics in I feel that I am still to some extent trying to figure out exactly what it is I am looking to do with this series.

I too have been having a problem with the 2nd comic, as I don't think I executed it as well as I should have. I wanted the message to be that you shouldn't waste time fearing that which you cannot control (like death) but in the end I feel that the comic's point was lost and it just ended up being a funny picture of 2 guys and a monster.
Thank you for the comment.

EDIT: Another one down. I just can't help but love this image
 
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You know what this reminds me of? XKCD
 
MFreak said:
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This one wins. I love jokes like that!

Do you like Smack Jeeves? I've recently started using Comic Dish and they give you control over everything, even allowing you to go ad-free and use your own domain. I bought an enom via Google Apps and was concerned I wouldn't be able to use it, but it works nicely. That was part of my personal criteria for finding a web comic host.
 
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