HI I am still kind of new so this is my first attempt at a story that I thought up. If you would like to suggest anything plz post it and I will consider. It is mainly a mix between the dream world in B/W games but in stead lead to.. Wait I'm not ruining the plot.
And just so you know I WILL return a previous character.
So here goes:
Chapter 1: A strange wake up.
As the Sun rose of the horizon Ash ketchum began to awaken. Okay to be more precise It was 11:00 am and Cilian and Iris where ready to get going but Ash was still asleep. So pikachu took the honers of waking him up... With thunder. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!" He screamed.
"Thanks Pikachu. What time is it again?" "It's 11.05 just so you know kiddy and where all set to move except you!" screamed iris in his face creeping him out. "uhh iris maybe you should be a tad gentler on him I mean he only just finished a gym battle that took almost all of yesterday" Said Cilan in a nervous voice obviously scared of iris' rath *cough*axew'sdragonrage*cough*After about 5 minutes of Ash rushing to get dressed and eat breakfast, they were off. Little be known to them (per-usual) that someone was watching them. Dun Dun DUN!(screen slowly fades to a black)
As the group trekked of what were left of the few daylight hours no thanks to SOMEONE. after a while They decided to get ready for lunch in which Iris forced ash to go look for fire wood alone in a nearby forest alone where any wild pokemon could attack him. not that this bothered iris. Pikachu And the rest of Ash s pokemon had to help with getting the food. So Ash set off into the foreboding forest which he realized was mearly a large clearing surrounded by several
tall trees that were connected at the top, many other trees were growing in the middle of this clearing. Ash began to look for some broken branchs on the grass, when ( you notice that not much action happens but a lot of description ?) a group of wild Galvantula began to attack the defenseless ash, or was he. just as they where going to lunge at him and begin to consume him a strange, thin blue shield surrounded ash. He recognized it to be like the ones Riley from iron Island to use. this stopped the Galvantula in there tracks and they began to back off. some nearby bushes began to rustle but nothing came out. So our completely creeped out hero grabbed some wood and ran like hell.(scene end) fades into black.
Sorry for it being so short it's really embarrassing if my parents find out
tell me what you think and try to be as positive as usual
( I am soooooo going to regret saying that)
And just so you know I WILL return a previous character.
So here goes:
Chapter 1: A strange wake up.
As the Sun rose of the horizon Ash ketchum began to awaken. Okay to be more precise It was 11:00 am and Cilian and Iris where ready to get going but Ash was still asleep. So pikachu took the honers of waking him up... With thunder. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!" He screamed.
"Thanks Pikachu. What time is it again?" "It's 11.05 just so you know kiddy and where all set to move except you!" screamed iris in his face creeping him out. "uhh iris maybe you should be a tad gentler on him I mean he only just finished a gym battle that took almost all of yesterday" Said Cilan in a nervous voice obviously scared of iris' rath *cough*axew'sdragonrage*cough*After about 5 minutes of Ash rushing to get dressed and eat breakfast, they were off. Little be known to them (per-usual) that someone was watching them. Dun Dun DUN!(screen slowly fades to a black)
As the group trekked of what were left of the few daylight hours no thanks to SOMEONE. after a while They decided to get ready for lunch in which Iris forced ash to go look for fire wood alone in a nearby forest alone where any wild pokemon could attack him. not that this bothered iris. Pikachu And the rest of Ash s pokemon had to help with getting the food. So Ash set off into the foreboding forest which he realized was mearly a large clearing surrounded by several
tall trees that were connected at the top, many other trees were growing in the middle of this clearing. Ash began to look for some broken branchs on the grass, when ( you notice that not much action happens but a lot of description ?) a group of wild Galvantula began to attack the defenseless ash, or was he. just as they where going to lunge at him and begin to consume him a strange, thin blue shield surrounded ash. He recognized it to be like the ones Riley from iron Island to use. this stopped the Galvantula in there tracks and they began to back off. some nearby bushes began to rustle but nothing came out. So our completely creeped out hero grabbed some wood and ran like hell.(scene end) fades into black.
Sorry for it being so short it's really embarrassing if my parents find out
tell me what you think and try to be as positive as usual
( I am soooooo going to regret saying that)
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