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Ace black ideas

Just need a quick bit of more background
When is it set? during, before or after HG/SS
Do you want to do the gyms in the order from the games?
etc
 
Wait, just a random prediction?
???
Am i missing something that everyone else knows?
some hints first please
i can't pull your ideas out of thin air!
pokémon?
 
Gyms? In order? YOU CRACK ME UP! Lets just say bugsy IS NOT gym 2.
After HG/SS. Btw way he has a dratini so far. AND next chapter has to do with a sneasel. Will Ace catch it? Who is Mako? Who is Mike?
 
This is a thread made to advertise his fanfic. That's really all you need to know.
 
IM OFFENDED
I just wanna know predictions!! and ideas!!! Listen IM TEN. Im not smart enough to advertise. yet.
 
CHAPTER TWO UP!!! ZOMG!! MORE DETAIL!!! CHAPTER THREE... who knows. not even i do. i just type and when im done post.
 
Well, if you're ten (that's when I started writing), there's no reason why you can't make your chapters a bit longer. I'd suggest combining them in certain places.

Oh, and dialogue goes like this:

"Hello," he said.
OR
"Hello!" he said.
OR
"Hello?" he said.

"Hello." he said. is incorrect, so don't do that.
 
Azure Dragon said:
Oh, and dialogue goes like this:

"Hello," he said.
OR
"Hello!" he said.
OR
"Hello?" he said.

"Hello." he said. is incorrect, so don't do that.
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I'm glad I already knew that when I did my first fanfic (a oneshot when I was 11).
 
Aceblack4eva said:
CHAPTER TWO UP!!! ZOMG!! MORE DETAIL!!! CHAPTER THREE... who knows. not even i do. i just type and when im done post.
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Well, there's a potential problem. That and the fact that you're ten.

If you don't at least look over your fics at least once, you won't catch any errors that you made. Perhaps you should get somebody to beta-read it.
 
Zekurom said:
Well, there's a potential problem. That and the fact that you're ten.

If you don't at least look over your fics at least once, you won't catch any errors that you made. Perhaps you should get somebody to beta-read it.
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I never said i didn't read it over. but your right. :idea: want the job zekurom?
 
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