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Adventures of BMGf (PG)

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This is my first fic in a while and the first on Bulbagarden! This multi-one shot stories will be about people on this forum so I have to get permission to make characters based on them.

The first story is about my character.


Will's Day

It was a sunny Thursday afternoon in Goldenrod city. It was a lazy day for Pokemon trainers, especially for William. He had a long day the day before, hiking through the maze-like Ilex Forest while training for his 3rd badge in Goldenrod. After arriving in the city he healed his team and challenged the Normal-type Gym....and lost horribly.

William arose from bed after sleeping in following his lost and strolled towards the bathroom. His Croconaw, Aqua, was still asleep at the edge of his bed as he fought a tough battle yesterday. After William took his shower, he clothed himself with a gray short-sleeved t-shirt, black jeans and vest lucky green vest with his nickname "Yoshi" etched on the side.

"Well it hasn't been so lucky as of late" William sighed as he exited his room. He was lucky to find a room in the Pokemon Center because he came so late after that gym battle. William went into the lobby and found a bunch of trainers waiting for their Pokemon to be healed. They were random conversing about things like gyms and contests or whatnot. William ignored the babble and went to the couches the Pokemon Center provided for the trainers.

He let out his team to check how they were doing after the battle. First Aqua came out. Aqua was his starter Pokemon and best friend. William always counted on him to win battles and support the team. Aqua was a little down at the moment because of losing.

"Don't worry Aqua! Next time we'll beat her! Come on cheer up!" William cheered. Actually William is feeling the same but he didn't want Aqua to see.

Next came Sparkle his Flaafy. She was a little Mareep he caught while in Violet City and evolved a little later. She stretched a bit and jumped on the couch he was sitting on. William petted her cotton-like wool and felt some static for it. She likes it when he does that.

After that came Sora his Pidgeotto. He was caught around Azelia Town and also evolved since. He loves to battle but hates to lose. Sadly he was defeated since William lost the battle at the gym and was pissed off.

William sweaat-dropped and said, "Don't worry" but Sora wasn't having any of that. He scoffed and flew off towards the ceiling railings.

William sigh and got up to the vending machines. When he got there, there was a couple blocking the way.

"Excuse me" William cried but the couple didn't hear him. They were just talking and not buying anything.

"EXCUSE ME!" William yelled

"Argh! WHAT!?" one of them yelled back.

"You're blocking the food! Please move!"

"Whatever. Come on Dana" the guy said as he left with his friend.

They both glared at William before leaving the area. William just rolled his eyes at them as they were leaving. He came back with food and fed his Pokemon with the Pokemon food he bought earlier.

"Hey Dana! The bug catching contest is today!"

"Oh yeah! I want to enter it! I heard you can get strong bug types like Scyther!" Dana replied.

"So let's enter it! I'll use-"

"Excuse me!"

"Agrh! WHAT IS IT NOW?!" the guy yelled

William stood up and asked, "Where is this contest?"

"Wouldn't you like to know!" The guy answered. Obviously he was still mad at William for yelling at him.

"Chaos, calm down" Dana said. "It's in the National Park. Just go out of Goldenrod and up until you see a sign saying where the park is at. I'm Dana by the way."

"Thanks Miss Dana. I'm William....sorry about earlier"

"It's OK, We should of moved anyway, right Chaos?"

"Oh...right...hehehe" He laughed. "I'm Chaos"

"Hello" William shook hands with Chaos. "I have a feeling we'll meet again"

"Yeah."

After that Chaos and Dana left the Pokemon Center. William gathered his things and Pokemon and left soon after. He started running towards the exit of Goldenrod but...

CRASH

William and another fell onto the ground. William instantly got up and saw that he crashed into a girl...and she was mad!

"HEY WHAT THE BIG IDEA?!" She screamed "YOU SHOULD WATCH WHERE YOU ARE GOING MISTER!"

William replied, "I'm sorry little girl-"

"LITTLE GIRL?! I'm 14 Years old! IS IT BECAUSE I'M SHORT!? YOU JUDGE ME BECAUSE YOU BIGGER THAN ME?!"

"No no no it's-"

THAT'S IT MISTER! BATTLE TIME!" The girl got a Pokeball out. "Go Veronica!"

Out came a female Pikachu. She went into battle mode as her cheeks were lighting up with electricity.

"Sigh....go Sparkle" William sent out Sparkle to battle the crazy girl.

What a day this turn out to be.....

END

Please read and review!
 
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Haha, hey, I'm in this story! :D

Anyway, I liked it. Despite having its share of grammatical errors, the story's easygoing and lighthearted. Just one thing, though: I would have liked a flashback scene that showed us how horribly William did against Whitney. Oh, and I suppose you could have described what these awesome-sounding trainers, Chaos and Dana, looked like. Doesn't matter if they don't look anything like the people they're named after...does it? ^_^

Other than those minor complaints, this is a good start. :] Oh, and...maybe you ought to call Chaos by a more realistic name, like, say...Danny? ;]
 
Chaos Chikorita said:
Haha, hey, I'm in this story! :D

Anyway, I liked it. Despite having its share of grammatical errors, the story's easygoing and lighthearted. Just one thing, though: I would have liked a flashback scene that showed us how horribly William did against Whitney. Oh, and I suppose you could have described what these awesome-sounding trainers, Chaos and Dana, looked like. Doesn't matter if they don't look anything like the people they're named after...does it? ^_^

Other than those minor complaints, this is a good start. :] Oh, and...maybe you ought to call Chaos by a more realistic name, like, say...Danny? ;]
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll get on to the descriptions of Chaos and Dana next chapter!
 
I'm working on the next chapter now. I just need to proofread and send it to my proofreaders.

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Here's chapter 2!

Will's Day, Part 2

William stared at his opponent. She was pretty short for her age, as William was only 12 years old and basically 2 heads taller than her. She dusted her blue and white jacket off as she readied her first command.

"Veronica, use Quick Attack!"

"Pi, pi, pi, pi!

The Pikachu started running in a fast speed towards Sparkle. A white light shined along the path of the speedy rodent.

"Sparkle, dodge it, then use Tackle!" William responded. The Flaafy jumped away from the Pikachu and jumped towards the mouse, making a direct hit.

Veronica fell towards her trainer, but was still strong enough to continue.

The girl cried "Veronica! Try a ThunderShock!"

"Sparkle, counter with your ThunderShock, too!"

"FLAAFY!"

"PIKACHUUUUUU"

Both of the electric-types charged up and fired a blast of electricity towards each other. The two blasts collided with each other and Sparkle and Veronica both blasting each other with their attacks.

"Come on, Veronica! Beat this guy!"

"You can do it, Sparkle!"

Suddenly, the blasts caused an explosion, hitting both Sparkle and Veronica and causing smoke to cover the field. William looked through the smoke to see one of the Pokemon had fainted. After the smoke cleared, Sparkle was still standing, but Veronica had fainted.

"Oh no! Veronica!" The girl cried as she ran to her fallen Pokemon. "I won't forget this!"

The girl huffed and ran off to who knows where. William sighed as he return Sparkle to her Pokeball and gathered his things.

"...What's this?" William noticed a case on the floor. He picked it up and saw a few badges and something scribbled on the case:

If lost please return to Lisa!

"Who's Lisa?" William pondered as he went towards the gate to the National Park.

"I guess that girl I battled is Lisa...I'll give this back to her...later...maybe."

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"Dana... Can we PLEASE stop shopping! I gotta go to the Bug-Catching Contest!"

"Oh hush! That contest doesn't start till an hour from now. Please be patient, Danny."

"Don't call me that!"

Sigh~ Dana thought as she shopped more. After Chaos and Dana left the PokeCenter, Dana convinced Chaos or "Danny" to go to the Goldenrod Department Store. He bought a few PokeBalls, Medicine, and a few TMs but Dana on the other hand....

"OMG! I love that top! I'm definitely buying that!"

She's a shopaholic....

"Danny! I need your help! I can't choose betwee- huh?" Dana looked around the store and saw the Chaos disappeared.

"Hey where did you go?"

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Chaos sighed in relief as he rode on the elevator to the Rooftop Square. He really didn't want to leave Dana alone but she was driving him nuts with her shopping!

"Note to self, never go to cities with malls and/or Dept. stores..."

The elevator stopped at the roof and Chaos exited. The Rooftop Square was a pretty large place. It has several vending machines, discount venders, a nice view of the city and lots of trainers with their Pokemon.


"Come out Mega!" Chaos released his Bayleef which is his first Pokemon he had on his journey. Mega stretched a bit after being called out from his ball and looked around.

"Today I'm going to enter the Bug-Catching contest and I choose you to use today!" Chaos said

"Bay! Bay!" Mega cried in response. Suddenly Mega noticed something and ran off!

"Mega! Where are you going?!" Chaos ran after Mega throughout the rooftop. When He finally found him, Mega was snuggling against the leg of a trainer. She was wearing a black sleeveless shirt and Black jeans. She also had a black hairband on her curly brown hair. She was cooing Mega, like she knew his Pokemon from before.

"...Neku?"
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Chapter end. Please review!
 
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I volunteer me. Name me Aaron since Ryuutakeshi is kinda... long.
 
If you're still working on this (awesome) series, I'd love to star in a chapter or two XP If I'm famous enough, of course.

But the chapters you've written are great, just a bit short in my opinion. I guess that's how you rope 'em in, though ;D
 
Might as well follow the crowd. :D If it's not too much to ask, and it doesn't have to be in the next chapter or so, would you mind including me as well? Also, if you could, just use the name Skye, as it'd be less of an inconvenience.
 
At least he won't have trouble with low character number... xD
 
OK. Like I said before I'm currently working on chapter 3. It's a surprise that many people want to be in my story now XD!

Well in my blog I said this fanfic will be in several arcs. I already have 3 arcs in mind and the characters who are in it.

For the people who want to be in the story, I'll have to make and arc for your characters 'cause there's no room for more characters in the ones I planned already. When I make it I'll VM/PM you.

anyway Thanks for reading my story! :D
 
I got the chapter half done as of now. I have a bit of writer's block right now but I AM GOING TO AT LEAST FINISH THIS ARC! I just need some more time. I hope y'all can hold out little more...^^;

I MUST WORK HARDER!
 
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