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Adventures of Green:Kanto

Mr.Green

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Note:I finally got an Idea!!

Chapter 1:Adventure time!!

One fine day in Pallet town.

A boy awakes to start his own quest across the land of Kanto and beyond. "Hm......What should I have for breakfest today" Green asked him self for the tenth time that morning "Captin Crunch? No. Coco Puffs? Nah. Ah ha!!! Frosted Flakes!!" After having a nice breakfest Green walked out and the first guy he saw was his own rival,Jack. "What cha doin' loser?" Jack asked in an attempt to mock Green "You gonna get yer first pokemon? Ha! I already chose my starter." "I'm not in the mood to chit chat with the likes of you Jack." explained Green "I've got get my own starter.So just quit stalking me you weirdo...I thought we were rivals." As Green walked away Jack headed towards Viridian City with his own plans.

Later at Oak's lab. "Hey Oak." said Green "I'm here for my starter." Oak turned to Green. "Huh?" Oak said with confusion "Oh yeah! Right this way Green." As Green and Oak got to the table with three pokemon Oak said "These are your choices for starters, Bulbasaur, Squirtle, or Charmander. Choose your starter carefully Green." "Okay...I guess I will choose Bul-" Green was interrupted by Oak "Whoops! Almost forgot...All the starters have already been took by other new trainers." He explained "But.......I do have another pokemon." "I'll take it Oak!" Green said with excitment "Be sure to not regret it later." said Oak "Now in this box I have a........" Oak started to look through his box. Five hours later... "Found it!" Oak said "Now in this pokeball is a pokemon I caught a LLLOOONNNNGGGG time ago." Oak explained "Here. It's yours now." Oak handed the pokeball to Green. "Thanks Oak!" Green said "Now time to come on out pokemon!!" The pokeball was tossed up into the air and sent out an Mankey. "Oh boy a Mankey!! It's so awsome! I's has the word man in it's name too!" Green said with extreme excitment "Thanks Oak!" "No problem." Oak said "Okay Mankey, return" said Green as got Mankey's pokeball and Mankey returned into the pokeball. 'I'm off to Viridian now." Green said with determination "I'm gonna be the best of the best!" As soon as Green left "Whew...." said Oak "That was a close one..."
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End of Chapter 1:Adventure time!!

Next time, Chapter 2:Route 1
 
OK. I know i cant be sayinbg much because i havent done many fanfics, but the chapters could be longer, add more descripton, i mean you only put two paragraphs. That would be good for a prologue, but not a chapter. Other than that, the spelling and grammer are great!!



P.S. I might have to start a journey in kanto fan fic. It seems like i'm the only one on this sight not doing one
 
OK. I know i cant be sayinbg much because i havent done many fanfics, but the chapters could be longer, add more descripton, i mean you only put two paragraphs. That would be good for a prologue, but not a chapter. Other than that, the spelling and grammer are great!!



P.S. I might have to start a journey in kanto fan fic. It seems like i'm the only one on this sight not doing one

Thank you. I know have to make my chapters longer but I had already posted the chapter by the time I reconized how short it is.
 
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