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Another art pic I did (just reviews, no nit-picking)

TK n Happy Ness

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Just review my pic, don't say anything like "You need to work on shading", because I don't want to shade my pics.
 
I won't criticize your lack of shading but I see some faults to your picture that I wish to address. First of all your color rendition is a bit off, its close but not enough so that it is not noticeable. Next your drawing style on this paticular picture looks blobby and blocky. You did not give enough form and shape to the two Pokemon and gave some curved features angles. I'm sorry but I can't really point out many good points. Take your time while doing the picture, it will help improve your style.
 
- try to make the shapes somewhat more clear.
- Work out Skitty's legs better. try to add some dept into his legs and body. His body now looks one flat shape
- Use thinner lines
- try to be more original on the poses. they are just the same as the sugemori pictures and the R/S sprites
 
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