Kyuuketsuki
◓Gypsy Vanner Horse
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I had the idea for this story for quite a long time. It's original name was 'Blind Eyes', and it focused more on the Pokémon Characters, while this finalisation of the story focuses more on the Human Characters. There will be some fantasy elements in the story, and some dark themes, as well as few paragraphs of blood. Quite a short Prologue, but as usual, the coming Chapters should be longer.
It was a rainy night, and no moon hovered amongst the clouds. The candles’ fire fluttered out of existence, one by one, until the darkness filled the room. Addanc pulled the sheet up to his head, covering himself in a different type of darkness, a safe one. His ears caught the sound of the wooden floor of the hallway creaking, a sound that extended to his door.
He felt a hand pet his hair, slowly caressing the light blonde strands that danced in his mother’s fingers. He lay still, like he did on some nights, as his mother gave the same prayer she gave every day, for him to be safe, and as if the universe obliged, the rattling of the window against the rain stopped, and the wind slowly died down. Addanc heard his mother light the candle that rested on the other side of the room, not too far away from the bed, before she slowly closed the door behind her.
His head sunk into his shoulders, finding the warmth that he knew would always be there. A smile crept across his face as he curled into his body like a Pidgey in the middle of winter, and slowly, sleep took over. It had been a long year, and as Addanc’s mother pulled her own sheet up to her head, she forgot all her problems for the last time, and allowed the rest her body longed for to dominate.
Prologue
It was a rainy night, and no moon hovered amongst the clouds. The candles’ fire fluttered out of existence, one by one, until the darkness filled the room. Addanc pulled the sheet up to his head, covering himself in a different type of darkness, a safe one. His ears caught the sound of the wooden floor of the hallway creaking, a sound that extended to his door.
He felt a hand pet his hair, slowly caressing the light blonde strands that danced in his mother’s fingers. He lay still, like he did on some nights, as his mother gave the same prayer she gave every day, for him to be safe, and as if the universe obliged, the rattling of the window against the rain stopped, and the wind slowly died down. Addanc heard his mother light the candle that rested on the other side of the room, not too far away from the bed, before she slowly closed the door behind her.
His head sunk into his shoulders, finding the warmth that he knew would always be there. A smile crept across his face as he curled into his body like a Pidgey in the middle of winter, and slowly, sleep took over. It had been a long year, and as Addanc’s mother pulled her own sheet up to her head, she forgot all her problems for the last time, and allowed the rest her body longed for to dominate.
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