Art by me

[The Man Behind Door #2]

It's not pokemon, but I don't think it has to be... if not, I apologize.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/332753/pic1-1.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/332753/pic2-2.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/332753/pic3-3.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/332753/pic4-4.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/332753/pic5-5.jpg


I hope you enjoy them

 

[Vaporeon Lugia Krabby]

Hmm, now lets see...

1. I'm going to emphasis how few people here actually shade in pencil, and try it to realism. It's slim to nill. Generally for the picture, as with most people, the proportions are a bit off. But I'm pleased to see the attempt.
2. I like the eye, really do. Something about the red color appeals to me. Umm, might want to work a little on youe 3/4 view though. It's a little garbled.
3. Now that is one ugly fish. (Take this as a compliment.) Nice detail on the teeth and a funny idea. Umm, don't know if the bottom jaw is suppose to hang out so much though. You might want to tell me if it is suppose to be like that, mostly since I'm not all too familar with species of fish.
4. Proportions are better, I like the hands especially. Nice shading too.
5. Nice idea. I could nag about the absentee of clouds and bold outlines, but umm, it looks more pronounced and frankly better as is.

Overall, a bit of work on proportions needed, nice technique, good shading. Keek up the artwork. It's nice.

 

[The Man Behind Door #2]

Well, the fish is a piranha and the jaw is suspossed to hang out a bit further than the top, but I don't think as much as I had made it.

By the way, thank you. I don't think I have ever had some one who knew what they were talking about critic my art. Now I can fix my mistakes, and learn from them. Thank you.

 

[White Gryphon]

Originally posted by The Man Behind Door #2
Well, the fish is a piranha and the jaw is suspossed to hang out a bit further than the top, but I don't think as much as I had made it.

Oh, a Piranha! The jaw does hand out further than the top, but it goes upwards instead of outwards. Therefore the upper half of the jaw curves forward into the upward-curving bottom jaw. I hope that makes enough sense for it to help...