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BITTERNESS AND RUTHLESS DOES NOT EQUALS JUSTICE

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Here's a fic I made about and RP I played here a few weeks ago.

As the story progresses there'll be more characters but for now I'll just put the characters that appear. Thanks goes to all of my friends that let me borrowed their characters; Nareta (Shinjilover), Kenji(Kenji Sasaki), Elliot (Me), Allison (Pikachu200), Shadow (Shadow comics)

BITTERNESS AND RUTHLESS DOESN’T EQUALS JUSTICE

Chapter 1: The four adventures

Near the safari zone in Fuchsia city, the sun’s shining brightly and the plants are rustling with the wind; after all it had just rained a few hours ago. On the street road a kid’s walking down the path that takes to the safari zone.

The kid was looking around for any Pokemon that might attack him or his Eevee. He wear a black shirt with black pants, he has brown hair and wears glasses; only thing is that he also has a look of fear of some kind. His Eevee was strolling down the street and trying to catch some grass that flew off cause of the wind.

“Come on Eevee, don’t go too far” the kid said with a nervous tone as he walked up to Eevee. “Don’t worry once we get to the safari zone we’ll catch some more Pokemon for you to be friends with” he smiled at the little puppy; Eevee gave him a huge smile back.


On another part of the forest a girl is training with her Pikachu and Charmander. The girl wears a red chair with long black hair, she has blue pants and a stern face; she looked like she was kinda angry at something though.

“Okay Pikachu, we have to give Charmander some training” the girl starred at the Pikachu with hate on her eyes. The Pikachu walked up to Charmander and they started walking to the trees to see what Pokemon they could find. “Comeback, I didn’t say you were gonna fight a wild Pokemon” the girl starred back at the confuse Charmander. “Pikachu, thunderbolt” Pikachu looked at her with an indecisive face. “Do it now!” she yelled; the Pikachu turned back and it hit Charmander with a barrage of lightning.

Charmander toppled over to the floor but it managed to get up again. “Charmander flamethrower” the girl ordered. Charmander charged and it fired a jet of flames that sent Pikachu crashing into a tree nearby. Pikachu got up and it starred at Charmander.

“That was worthless, you didn’t even managed to knock Pikachu out!” this really scared the Charmander as it ran out; but it tripped over a twig. “Pikachu shockwave” Pikachu fired a small ray of sparks at Charmander, it made the lizard fly up into the sky and it landed on the floor after a few seconds. “I gotta say that was not bad” the girl scratched her chin as she starred at the Charmander.

Charmander got up and it fired an ember at Pikachu without the need of a command. The girl grinned at this. “Now that’s what I’m looking for, go for a scratch” Charmander started running at Pikachu as it raised its claws up in the air.


The kid was walking through the bushes; he had lost track of where he was going. “Where are we Eevee?” he asked the little Pokemon that was trying to keep up with him. The Eevee gave a small howl. “I know, maybe we should ask for directions” he started looking for someone that could help him out.

He saw a girl training her Pokemon. He started walking up to her but then saw that the girl was giving orders to both Pokemon; in other words, she was making them attack each other. “Should I do something” the kid asked himself while looking at the battle.

The girl looked at the rustling bushes. “Pikachu, thunderbolt’ Pikachu let out another barrage of thunder and it hit the kid straight on. He had to run out of the bushes immediately.

“You okay Eevee” he asked; he was holding Eevee on his arms; Eevee just nodded. “Why did you do that!” he yelled after he turned to look at the girl. She just smirked.

“I don’t like stalkers” she didn’t even turned to look at him, or at least blink. “And anyways, I think a few thunderbolts would do that Eevee some good, it really looks weak and poorly trained” she turned to look at the kid for the first time; this just scared him cause she had those vicious eyes.

The kid finally stepped up and growled at her. “Okay, I can take any insults you give me, but insulting my way of training and my Pokemon, I just can’t take it!” he yelled with an upset voice.

“What are you gonna do about it?” she smirked at the kid.

“I…challenge you to a Pokemon battle” his tone of voice went down to a scary tone; but the girl smirked so she must’ve heard him say it.

“Okay, how many Pokemon are you using” she asked. The kid raised to fingers and got a second Pokeball out of his black belt; although he did it a bit shakily.

“Go Diglet” when the Pokeball pooped open a Diglet came out and it dug into the ground. “Diglet I still haven’t give you any commands!” he yelled shaking his arms around; Diglet came out and it waited for his trainer’s commands.

“How stupid, Charmander show him what a real Pokemon looks like” she looked down on her Charmander with another disgusted look. Charmander nodded and it walked in front of Diglet. “Now, attack it with a flamethrower” Charmander started running at Diglet and it fired a jet of flames.

“Diglet use dig” the kid threw his finger in the air and Diglet dug into the ground. *With this I’m sure I can beat her* he thought as he grinned at the girl; she was yawning though.

Diglet pooped out of the ground and it sent Charmander back. “Charmander, I’m sure you can take more than that, go for a megakick” Charmander started running and it gave Diglet a strong kick that left a mark on its little body.

“Diglet are you okay?” he asked as he started getting his Pokeball back out. Diglet just starred at the Charmander sternly and then it threw a barrage of rocks at it. “That’s rock throw” the kid starred at the attack while it hit every single visible part in Charmander’s body.

“Charmander you’re so weak” she growled at the battered up lizard that was starring at her sadly. “Return” the girl just looked away from it and returned the Pokemon back into its Pokeball.

“Well that was mean, how can you treat Pokemon that way?” the kid asked looking at the scared Pikachu. “I just don’t think that’s what a trainer’s suppose to do!” he yelled; his glasses almost fell off though.

“This is none of you business for all I know, go Pikachu” Pikachu walked up to Diglet and starred at it waiting for its orders. “Now, use quick attack into iron tail” Pikachu started dashing at Diglet at a great speed.

“Diglet try to use dig again!” he yelled to the little mole. Unfortunately Pikachu wasn’t just too fast as to stop it from using dig, but it also hit the Diglet with its know shiny tail; the hit was strong enough as to make it fall unconscious.

“That was easy, your Diglet may have a strong ground attack, but when it comes to speed it’s too slow to keep up with mine” she smirked.

“Return” the kid grabbed the Pokeball and returned the Diglet. “Go Eevee” the Eevee that has been watching the battle all along stepped up front and glared at the rat. “Go for a quick attack” Eevee started running at Pikachu.

“Pikachu, jump and use thunder attack” Pikachu just jumped over the little puppy and it fired a huge thunder. The thunder hit the dog and it sent it crashing back to the floor; it got up after a few minutes though.

“Okay Eevee, use tackle” Eevee obeyed its trainer’s orders and it hit Pikachu on its flat stomach and made it crash with a tree. “Nice Eevee, I never knew a tackle could be so strong” he smiled at Eevee with admiration.

“I’m gonna make you eat those words” she smirked and raised her hand up. “Pikachu use iron tail” Pikachu jumped into the air and its tail started glowing white. It fell back to the ground and it swept its tail at Eevee; the Eevee was swept down and had to use all of its strength to finally get back on its paws.

“Eevee are you okay” he ran up to Eevee and returned it. “Don’t worry I’ll get you to the Pokemon Center immediately” he started to run but then turned back to look at the girl. “My name’s Kenji by the way” he said looking at the girl with seriousness.

She just gave him an unemotional look. “So what, you expect me to tell you my name” she just turned around and started walking off with her Pikachu. Kenji just starred at her for a few seconds and kept running to the nearest Pokemon Center.


Kenji got to the Pokemon Center and healed Eevee. He was finally on Fuchsia and the safari zone was just a few miles off so he could start walking. “I still wonder what was up with that girl, but guess I can’t worry about it too much” he shrugged and started walking off.

He heard a group of people talking about the legend that lived in the safari zone, so he couldn’t resist to take a look. “Excuse me what were you saying?” he asked one of the guys; he had blonde hair and was wearing a red jacket.

“I was saying that there’s a legend about the safari zone that says there’s a Dratini living in the bottom of the river” the guy looked at Kenji and then started talking again. “Me and my friends are gonna go hunt that Pokemon you wanna come?’ he asked.

“No thanks, I just wanted to see what was happening” Kenji started walking back to the safari zone. After a few minutes of walking he stopped to think about what the guy said. *A Dratini, boy those are really rare Pokemon, if I could get my hands in one of those I could probably show that girl* he thought as he starred into the sky.


After about an hour or so Kenji was finally inside the safari zone. “Okay, go Eevee use shadow ball” Eevee leapt up and it fired a ball of darkness at a Psyduck Kenji was fighting. The Psyduck took the hit but it countered it with a water gun. The huge stream of water started getting Eevee’s fur wet but the little dog could take it.

“Okay, let’s catch it” Kenji threw the Pokeball at the Psyduck; it only wiggled once before it broke open. “Okay, let’s use a sand attack” Eevee started kicking sand off the floor and it blinded Psyduck’s eyes. “Now, use tackle” Eevee ran at the Psyduck and it hit it in the chest. “Now, go Pokeball” Kenji threw his second Pokeball and he finally caught the Psyduck. “All right, we got a Psyduck” Kenji went to pick the Pokeball up and it started raining. “Better find a shelter” he started walking to a cave nearby.


Kenji started walking down the cave and spotted some Zubats and other kind of cave Pokemon. “Wow, who knew there could be a lot of Pokemon living in caves” he said while he was starring at the Pokemon that were appearing here and there.

He saw the five guys from before entering another cave nearby. “What are those guys doing” Kenji started to walk slowly to the cave; looking back every few seconds to make sure there wasn’t anyone else that might be guarding the others.

Kenji entered the cave and was starring the five guys that were throwing rocks in the pond. “Come on guys, I’m sure you can throw better than that” the guy Kenji had talked to before yelled while he was starring at the pond.

Then something started coming out; it was a Dratini, it looked really upset that its house was being attack. “There it is, go Usaring” the guy took out a Pokeball and a Usaring came out. “Hyper beam” the Usaring started charging a beam of energy. After a few minutes it fired the beam at the poor dragon; the Dratini started descending out of the pond till it landed in front of the guys.

“I can’t keep watching” Kenji jumped out and he started running at the guys. “Go Eevee” he threw his Eevee’s Pokeball on the floor and it came out instantly. “Now shadow ball” Eevee fired a ball of dark energy at the Usaring.

“Usaring use hyperbeam” Usaring turned around and it fired another beam of energy that overpowered the shadow ball and sent Eevee crashing with the rock wall.

Kenji ran up to Eevee and returned it. “Okay, go Psy…” before he could let his Psyduck out something came out from the pond. It was a Dragonair; it starred at Kenji and the other guys before firing a dragon rage at them. Kenji jumped out of it but the other guys couldn’t manage and the got sent out all around the cave.

Kenji noticed that the Dratini had crawled up to a Pokeball that had fallen on the floor; the Dratini starred at it for a few seconds and the then pressed the button. The Pokeball started absorbing it and the Dratini got caught.

Kenji just starred at the Pokeball without even remembering that the Dragonair was in front of him. Dragonair wanted to keep fighting till it recovered its child; but it saw that Kenji smiled at the Pokeball. “Don’t worry, I’ll take care of it” he smiled at the Dragonair. And for some weird reason the Dragonair just sunk back into the pond and left.


The girl from before was walking down the safari zone with her Pikachu. “How come those people at the counter knew that my name was Nareta, I’ve never even seen them so how did they knew” she frowned.

Then she stepped on a thunder stone that was on the floor. She picked it up and grinned. “This is what we’ve been waiting for Pikachu” she turned back to the Pikachu. The rat just looked at her frighten.

“Now, you’re finally gonna evolve, so suck it up okay” she put the thunder stone in front of the Pikachu’s face. “Either you use it, or you go” she looked at it with an upset look. The Pikachu just looked at her sadly and walked over to the thunder stone; it touched it and started glowing.

After a few seconds of glowing it finally evolved into a Raichu; it didn’t looked happy about it though. “Now that that’s done with, let’s go we need to capture more Pokemon around” she kept walking ahead, Raichu just starred at her and started following her.


Around three days before Kenji met Nareta another new trainer was cruising out of Route 1.The kid ran out at full speed and was being followed by a Charmander. He started gasping for air before he turned to look back to see if the followers were still behind.

“Who knew that Beedrils could get so angry just because we were trying to take some of their honey” the kid laughed but the Charmander just sighed and shook its head. “Come on Dragon, look at me” he said leaning down to look at the Charmander.

The kid had a messy black hair and was wearing a black shirt with red sleeves; he had blue jeans on and the jeans had chains on the right side. “Here” he took out a rice cake from his Pocket and gave it to the Charmander. Charmander just smiled and took the rice cake. “Now that’s the Dragon I know” he laughed again.

“Okay, we’re in Viridian city, and we finally started our journey, now let’s go” the kid started walking into the city. He stopped and looked at the sign that said ‘welcome’. “Okay world here comes Elliot!” he yelled as he started running into the city with Dragon.


A girl was coming out of the Pokemon Center and was talking to her own Charmander. She had long black hair and was wearing a pink top, she had blue jeans and a pair of sneakers.

“Okay Wildfire, let’s go to Pewter, considering that the gym here’s empty” she looked down to her Charmander; the salamander just smiled in agreement. “Plus we can find something to test your new attacks on” she laughed evilly and started walking out of the Pokemon Center.

So, this four new trainers have all started on their adventures, each of them having their own destiny that waits for them and each of them being oblivious about the adventures they will have in the distant future.

Next chapter: Trapped in the forest
 
BITTERNESS AND RUTHLESS DOESN’T EQUALS JUSTICE

They don't equals? Also, WHY ARE YOU SHOUTIIIING?

“Go Diglet” when the Pokeball pooped open a Diglet came out and it dug into the ground.

You know, that's exactly the sort of typo that made Dr Thinker internet famous (no really. He got famous for writing a fic that included the line "Out pooped Sailor Mercury").

Anyway, seriously. Pick a tense and stick with it. You can't say the girl is wearing something and then say the Pikachu did something. Either she's wearing it and Pikachu is doing something, or she wore something and Pikachu did something.
 
I'm glad That this finally got made. I think I joined a bit late, though. I will continue to read this.
 
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