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MATURE: - Complete Blog: Created Love (for teenage or mature audiences only)

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This original story is in a form of a blog. So it'll be safe to assume that the knowledge will be limited heavily, but more of the past will come in the future.

This is told in the point of a teenage boy. His name isn't revealed, because he feels he doesn't need to do so. Backstory: He lives in a broken family and an equally dysfunctional society. Set in out time, his interests consist of video games, heavy metal music, and the miracles of science and chemistry. He's a broken soul.

I've set the dates for some of these back then. So some dates don't match with today. The first eight, anyway. After those, the dates will match my posts. Here's "Chapter 1".

7-16-2010 The Perfect Child!


I've finally done it! I've finally cracked the code! I've found the chemistry behind the genetics of humankind! I am so proud of all those days I spent working like a mindless cog!

With this knowledge, I shall finally have the perfect little girl! She will be small, with short hair and yellow eyes. I will create my perfect little girl...

I've been so lonely these years. I've had no one to talk to as a family.

My friends seem a bit unaware of my face. They only stare at my mask...

But this little girl of mine shall become my family. I will love her until the end.

I'll get the ingredients to make the egg and seed later. Right now, I'm too tired from working all night. I've grown weary; to the point of giving up. But no. My desert rain shall fall until the end!
 
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Gastly's Mama said:
Wow, this is weird.

The good kind of weird.

I'd be interested to see more as that is very, very short.

Anyway, seems good so far.
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Coming from you, I'm extremely flattered. I'm sorta trying to grasp that Portal sort of weird.
 
Whoa. This is some serious sci-fi funk right here. Rock on.

EDIT: I found a few extra chapters in your blog. I liked how the last one mentioned him smashing his head open with a hammer, a reference to the goddess Athena's creation via headache.
 
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The next blog, for the sake of it. Here's numero dos:



7-17-2010 The Gathering!


Damnit! These ingredients are too hard to simply come by! It takes way too much money to obtain or purchase them! But what if I were to get these ingredients elsewhere?...

I've heared many tales of people seperating many things to obtain their primative elements. Like turning Kool-Aid into dye. Maybe I can do the same with cheaper products...

But it's hard getting the ingredients. I have only 22% out of the required 100%! It'll take too long! So long that my thoughts on this project may wade into nothing. But I have to keep myself on task. And you know what? I've accomplished so much! I've done the research! I should put it to good use! And what better way to do it than giving myself my one true desire?

My perfect little girl. Oh I long for her. Not even created yet and already I have fallen in love with her. But is it right? Should this fate even be?

Am I a fool? Is this taboo that I'm comitting?

If my project were to get into the knowledge of the public, then a catastrophe may break out! I'm going to have to keep a tight lid on my precious work! I'll have to work on it in the deep dark. So deep into the darkness, that people would tremble in fear and turn back rather than continuing.

But this work that needs to be done is too difficult for me. Damnit, what am I saying!? I know I've quit so many times in the past! But I've done the research! I didn't fail on that job! And I succeeded with flying colors! My perfect little girl can't die before she's born! I have to give life to her little body!

In the meantime, I'll rake in more money and gather more pieces of the puzzle. All the while, this will be done in the dark and I'll make more decisions for my perfect little girl. Who knows? Maybe she'll turn out better than I'm hoping for!
 
Like it and yes it's like portal in a sense. It sent shivers done my spine actually. Very good. A bit of length and it would be great!
 
Next up! I'll go slower when I start writing again


7-19-2010 Kind Stranger!


Today was a day like no other. I had gone walking to various places for ingredients, as usuall. Except, today, I forgot to eat breakfast or drink water! Oh what a fool I was!

On my way to the last store of the day, I felt very weary and tired. I always do, but this was different. For half an hour, I stayed on the side of the road resting and vomitting green fluids. I decided to find help...

I went to a house and rang the doorbell. A man came out asking what was wrong. I asked for water and rest, but he said he couldn't help at all. I thanked him anyway. After he shut the door, I was on my way to another house. Sadly, I was very slow.

Something came to mind. I was almost about to faint. I thought: Is this the end of me? Is my life at its peak? How can I take care of a child if I can't take care of myself?

And so I tried four more houses, but to no avail. It seemed that no one was home. Bastards! All of 'em!

So I was on my way, with hopes of living. But I decided to try one more house nearby. And a female answered the door. She seemed as if she was in her mid-life, and she wore a Twilight shirt. I asked her for some water, and she gave me some! I wanted to marry this woman, but I then came to my senses. She gave me two glasses; one for there and one for the road. After thanking her very much, I was on my way. I felt completely energized after those glasses of water! I was back, baby!

And I finished off my gathering for the day. I now have 50% of the total ingredients! Plus three more:

-"Eclipse" book
-"Breaking Dawn" book
-Letter of Thanks

I shall deliver then sometime later.

Now I know that I must be careful. If I am to give life to a child of my own, I myself must be full of life to give...

...it's so hard for a good soul to survive. I hope she survives...

Gastly's Mama said:
This is really quite creepy. Not much more than that I can say.

Take that as a compliment btw, creepy stuff is usually good imo. =)
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I used to have Gin Ichimaru as my avi. 'Nuff said.
Yumega said:
Like it and yes it's like portal in a sense. It sent shivers done my spine actually. Very good. A bit of length and it would be great!
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...maybe I'll go for longer...
 
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After reading this entry, you've made the world the blogger lives in seem very odd, even stranger than his wonky goals of creating himself a perfect daughter.
 
Last one for the night! Part four! You'll get the other half tomorrow:


7-20-2010 Candy For My Child!


It was very strange. It was very convinient. It was strangely convinient.

I was out, looking for ways to make more money for my ingredients, but I was able to only make one purchase today. I also delivered the books, as promised.

When I got home, I decided to relax, watch The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air, eat Doritos, and sip some Lemon Iced Tea. My American Dream! While I stored my ingredient for today, someone knocked on my door. I answered, but saw no one. Then, a delivery man with that black truck pointed at my feet from a distance, and took off. It seemed I recieved a package! I love suprises! And I got a free box! Happy day!

There was no return address. Strange. When I opened it, it was a package from the Nestle sub-company, Willy Wonka Company. I remember signing up for it out of boredom back then. But I digress.

It was a "mission" as the "Head Wonkafier" called it. Inside the box were various candies, markers, printing paper, and fabric paint. My "mission" was to create and design a shirt using everything in the package and other Wonka candy if desired. I didn't care! Willy Wonka gave me candy! Nuff said!

But something unexpected caught my eye! I saw the ingredients for some of the candy! I couldn't believe it! It contained ingredients I needed to create my perfect little girl! I found my own version of the Golden Ticket!

I guess candy doesn't always kill! I immediately got to work! I started separating the elements and I found a few! I was finally able to cross them out of the list! And I had more than I needed! If these egg and seed fail, then I'd have some more ingredients to start off with later on!

So I stored everything and left it for later. When my little girl is born, the Willy Wonka Company shall recieve a gift basket...
 
I just read the first four chapters, and I'm hooked. I can almost hear his half-crazed voice narrating, great job! His world kind of sucks you in, in an awesomely creepy way.
 
I got bored again. Part five:


7-22-2010 Complete Recepie!


...well, today I was so very tired. Nothing special today, just went out with some friends and mowed the lawn.

After I mowed the lawn, my mother brought some Whataburger to eat. Oh Whataburger. The mere thought, look, and name bring water to my mouth! Happy day!

I got to eat a large, double-meat burger with cheese and no onions, a large side of fries, and a large Coca Cola.

When I sipped some, I only thought of the sweetness cruising down my throat! Which brought me to this other thought: I only need one more sugar of the default four to create her!

I immediately searched for the ingredients used to make the soda! All the while munching on my burger and fries!

...Happy day!

It was there!

I had found my final ingredient! It was right in front of me this whole time!

I immediately began separating the elements! And I found the final sugar needed for the DNA strands! I even had tons left over!

I will begin to put her together tomorrow. Today, I will do nothing but eat my meal, watch Futurama, and pat myself on the back.

...no. One more thing. I will go out today and find as many ingredients as possible, just incase these first egg and seed fail!

...just one more day, my sweet. One more day, and I will have you to love...
 
Part six. My favorite. Remember, for mature audiences because of the language used:



7-23-2010 Creator Failure!


Damnit!!!

I knew this would happen! What a fool I've been!!!

I successfully created them! The egg and seed! But it was a failure!

It seems that my research is incomplete. I have it all in hand, but now I have to work with it all, rather than making a glorious lump of everything put together...

The DNA codes are all I need. Everything in the egg and seed were a blank sheet. I need to put her properties in it all.

Black hair. Widow's peak. Yellow eyes. Pale skin. Small stature. Tiny hands. Big rounded eyes. Little mouth. Tiny nose. Attatched earlobes. Small breasts. Sweet voice.

All of my image's properties!

"I also ask of you my lord
Thy god in heaven"

But It wasn't a total failure. I now know that it's possible! I've always had a doubt in the back of my mind. I was even looking forward to giving up! But no! I've done it! Happy day!

I was right to gather more ingredients yesterday! I have 87% left over! I can maybe get the rest in no time! But now, I must continue my work. And to prevent more of this, I'll have to obtain more items for the following phase: The Growing! I need something to place her in. An eviroment for her to grow and prosper in. I've seen many science fiction media, and they seem to have capsules with liquids in them, complete with tubes and all. But where would I get these things? I'll have to make them, if need be, just to create "my own Mewtwo"...

But right now, I'm mad as hell! As I sit here with the petri dish containing the beta, I wonder why it still managed to breed, but die... No matter! I'll throw the beta child outside, somewhere...

...but it was scary, seeing my unborn child die right there and then. I was so afraid...

...I'll have to be careful from now on...

"A failure of creation ... abomination"

EDIT: Fix'd
 
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