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EVERYONE: - Ongoing Brian's Journey - Chapter 1

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Chapter 1
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Brian stood at the end of the wharf, leaning against the railing. The

surf knocked against the pilings rhythmically, incessantly. The moored boats

bobbed up and down, waves slapping their hulls. A milky fog had descended

upon Fuchsia City in the night, and the rising sun rendered it pearlescent.

The Pidgy's began their morning cries, and Rattata scampered among the

coiled ropes. Brian pulls a beanie over his frayed, neck length, auburn hair.

He shoves his hands in the pockets of his open blue jacket, and walks back

along the wharf. Brian leaves the shoreline, without a backward glance. He

heads through the town, eventually arriving at his house. Brian opens the

front door, and shuts it quickly. Wouldn't want to let the early morning chill

in. "Hello?"

"In here" his mom returned, from the kitchen. She was sitting in one of their

old wooden chairs, holding a cup of steaming coffee. "Made up your mind?"

she asked.

"Yeah, I'm going"

She looked down into her mug, biting her bottom lip. "You'll be the second

son I've had leave on a Pokemon journey. Just make sure you come back."

Brian walked over to where his mom was seated, and rested his hand on her

shoulder. "I will." He stayed there, with her, for a few minutes. Then,

taking his backpack from where it lay on the table, departed.

As if on queue, the skies opened up, and a steady patter of rain

began to fall. Brian's beat up Puma's smacked on the slick sidewalk as he ran

to the Train Station. Ran away from Fuchsia, ran away from the shadowy

dojo and ninja gym master. Ran to a new beginning, a new life.

The Station came into view, and Brian slowed his pace to a brisk

walk. He quickly stepped under the overhang, and checked the ornate clock

that adorned the wall of the Train Station. 6:28, the train that would take

him to Pallet would arrive at 6:45. He saw Marie, sitting on a bench by

herself. Brian began walking towards her, and Marie, seeing him, stood

up. "Hey," Brian greeted her, "Don't really want to give you a hug 'cause I'm

so-"

She kissed him.

"Oh..." Brian started, dazed. Marie cut him off, "Are you ready?"

"Yes; yes, I am. I have my backpack, my ticket, my money... I think that's

all"

"And your mom? She was ok?"

"I don't know, it doesn't really matter. I want to go, I'm going to go, she'll

accept it."

"Well, Jake did die... out there."

"Jake was screwing with the wrong kind of people. If you fuck with Team

Rocket you get fucked. I know that; he knew that, he was just too damn full

of manly valor. And what did it get him? It got him killed."

"I know it did, I know, I know. Stop talking like that."

"Sorry, I just... sorry"

The train pulls up, and passengers begin boarding. "I better go, hey Marie...

it's been nice knowing you." Brian smiled, feebly.

"Wait, wait... take this." Marie passed an envelope over to Brian, and folded

his hand over it. "Maybe, someday, I'll see you."

"Fuchsia City, 6th Gym." And with that, Brian boarded the train. He sat near

the window, pushed his bag underneath the seat, and watched Marie. She

was standing alone, and as the train left, she disappeared into the fog. Brian

opened the envelope, and inside was a picture. A portrait of Marie

smiling. "She was a beautiful girl." Brian thought. He crumpled the picture

into a ball, and threw it out the window into the pouring rain.


~Newspaper clipping, 2001~

On this day, April 22nd, 2001, sixteen of the nation's top trainers

were abducted by an organization called Team Rocket. The sixteen were

participants in the annual Indigo League tournament, held at Indigo Plateau.

They were taken at various intervals on the 22nd, from 2 A.M to 8 A.M. The

current whereabouts of the missing people is unavailable at this time. The

Chairman of the Pokemon League comments...


~Newspaper clipping, 2003~

Team Rocket has released a video clip to the public, giving us the

results of the April 2001 abductions. 11 were killed, and 7 have been enlisted

into Team Rocket. The names of those killed are as follows - Alex Partrich,

Nadine Bashin, Stacy Geneva, Jake Cullins, George Nerferitz, Macy Tascin,

Tony Esperanto, Lucas Brazi, Katherine Uoyevoli, Steven Krassings, and

Albert Porges.
 
Interesting, but the formatting needs work. Why is it that every line is seperated from every other line?

like this

see what I mean?

Also, it's "Pumas", not "Puma's" if you want plural. An apostrophe indicates posessive, not plural.
 
Interesting, but the formatting needs work. Why is it that every line is seperated from every other line?

like this

see what I mean?

Also, it's "Pumas", not "Puma's" if you want plural. An apostrophe indicates posessive, not plural.


Because it's double-spaced you dipshit.
 
um... newbie, bit of advice: the members with the italicized or bolded names are moderators. Fuck with them, you're gonna get your sorry ass burned. And Blackjack has quite a bit of experience in fanfiction herself and knows what she's doing (she did become the mod for this section, after all). I suggest showing a little more respect rather than insult her whenever she tries to help.
 
true. Aside from being just plain rude, you're liable to be on his ass anyway for flaming. Bones, seeing as you're still new here, you best remember all of this. Accept criticism and be respectful of others, especially those trying to help, you may grow into a respectable member. If you ignore my advice, as well as anyone else's, and continue being a complete jerkass like you just were, then people're gonna scorn you, figure you're not worth talking or listening to, and as a result ignore every post or topic you make, including this fanfic. Not to mention you're at risk of getting walloped by the old ban stick.
 
Please note: The thread is from 19 years ago.
Please take the age of this thread into consideration in writing your reply. Depending on what exactly you wanted to say, you may want to consider if it would be better to post a new thread instead.
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