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EVERYONE: - Ongoing Chronicles of Renji and Kon

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I have had this story in my mind for a while, but i just figured out how to add a story.

This story is through the eyes of Pokemon. The Pokemon sorta act like humans, each with there own different personallities, life story and different ropes that tie these friends all together.

The two main Pokemon are Renji, a shiny umbreon and Kon, an espeon. They are on a jorney to stop the great evil that threatens to control the pokemon world, destroying anything that comes in there way.
 
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Chapter 1: Two Friends

Deep into an unmarked forest, two figures were swiftly moving through the forest, leaving as little as footprint behind them.

"How much longer do we have to sprint Kon?" said Renji.

"We can't stop Renji until the sun sets. We still have another hour or so." staited Kon.

"It hard to believe that I'm still able to keep up with Kon" murmured Renji,"espiecially with my leg."
"Did you say something Renji" asked Kon.

"No I didn't say anything. You're just tried." said Renji assuringly.

"Ok" said Kon, but he knew something was wrong.
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As the sun was setting, Kon and Renji finally stopped in a deserted part of the forest overlooking a hill.

"Man,l'm dead tried. It's hard to believe that we'll have to do this everyday now." said Renji, while trying to catch his breath between words.

"We won't have to do this every day, just until we get out of this forest. You know sprinting is better than walking if we want to be descrete. Now I'm going to go look for some food for us. You stay here until I get back." commanded Kon

"I'm coming with you. We can't dare stay apart for long," said Renji, forcefully.

"NO!" yelled Kon demandingly " You are in no condition to help me. I know your were trying to
hide you injured leg all day, and I'm surprised you were able to do it for so long and keep up with me. But I'm no fool! Something happened in that battle against The Great Evil that hurt your leg. Now the best thing for you to do is to rest your leg. Now I'll be on be on my way."

"I'm coming with you, Kon. I'm not risking anything happening to you like what happened to me." yelled Renji, trying to hold back tears.

"You have always hated being on the sidelines Renji, but you have to let pride and stubborness go. I know whats best for you even if you think differently.But I could care less about what you think. Now I have to get going. Oh, and if you even think about following me, I will not hesitate to hurt you." yelled Kon, showing no fear in what he said.

"A-Agreed." stamered Renji fearfully.

"Good," said Kon, and suddently he was gone, sprinting through the forest for food.

As much as Renji hated to admit it, Kon was right. Kon always seem to know what to do. He was like that since the first day they met at eevees.

He could barely move unless he used all of his remaining energy. But he knew he needed to use most of what energy he had left to make camp and guard the area from intruders.

"I guess I better make this place more homie if we are staying here for the night," murmured Renji to himself.

Renji first wanted to make a bed for Kon and him out of leaves. Renji climbed up a tree and focused all his power to his feet. "Faint Attack!" yelled Renji and he started sprinting all around the trees. Renji was removing leaves so fast that as soon as a leaf was on the branch, it was off.

Afer a few minutes, Renji had gathered enough leaves for king beds for both of them. He felt like collapsing but he knew he had a job of keeping guard. But to make his job a little easier, he wanted to set a trap.

Renji knew his trap would be very effective, but he needed to use all of his power first. Renji was just using all his moves he knew at random targets, but being careful about not making too much noise.

Finally, after about an hour, Renji finally used up all of his moves. "I only have five tries to make this work." said Renji.

Renji got on top of the bare tree and jumped off. As he was falling, Renji stuck his front paws out and out of nowhere, emmense power was flowing around him. Suddently, Renji struck the ground and a big explostion happened.

When the dust cleared away, a huge crater was under Renji."Oh crap. I made too much noise. I just hope noone heard. Well I guess there's no use crying over spilled milk. Back to work."
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Quietly sleeping in a dark cave, a creature simply know as Razar awoke angrily from his slumber with a loud BANG!

"What the or who the hell woke me up!? Whatever it was they won't get away from it easily, or probably not at all. Heh heh..."

Even though Razar was huge, the night sky made him look like a blur thanks to his purple coloring and if he held his arms up a little, he could look like a tree.

"They'll pay dearly, heh heh" were Razar's last words before he went off into the night.
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Renji was putting dirt on the last bit of the trap left ,when he heard a voice out of nowhere.

"You're not safe."

For a second, Renji thought it was Kon who said it, but the voice sounded too feminime to be Kon's, and Kon isn't the type to scare someone he knew like this.

"Get out now. Your not safe."

"Who are you? Show yourself coward." Yelled Renji, trying not to show fear.

"If its what you want, I'll show myself."

Suddently, a swift movement was made above Renji and Renji couldn't believe what he saw!
" I must be dreaming, because you look like a jet!"

Indeed, the figure over Renji looked like a jet taking off, except it had legs and wasn't more than a few feet over Renji.

"What are you?" stammered Renji.
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Chapter 2: Jackie. Friend or Foe

As the jet-monster landed on the ground, Renji was surprised to see the jet had eyes, let alone a mouth, arms, and a fin.

"Your Renji, aren't you?" stated the jet shark.

"Yea-ah, but how in the world did you know my name, let alone where I'm taking shelter?" said Renji, unassuringly.

" That can wait. We need to get out of here now." said jet shark, as though it was in a hurry.

"I'm not going anywhere with a big freak like you that won't tell me anything about itself. Besides I need to wait for Kon to get back before I go anywhere." said Renji.

"I had a feeling you'd say that. But your friend isn't coming back anytime soon. So your come with me." said jet shark, evily.

"Wait, what did you do with Kon, you Bas..."

Before Renji could finish his sentence, a big blade-like object hit him on the back of his neck,
knocking him out instintly.

"I hated doing it to the little guy, but he left me no choice. I had a feeling he would run away and look for Kon if I didn't do anything. I mean, I could have easily caught up to him, but there is no need to waste more energy than needed. Especially since a member of this so called Great Evil is lurking in this woods, searching for rare pokemon as we speak." thought jet shark to itself."Come on, dude, we need to heal you up if your to help me with these tresspasssers. "

The jet shark picked Renji up by its legs, threw him onto its back fin and ran off into the woods.
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"Everything seems so blurry. I can't, I can't think clearly. But why. What happened to me so that I'm in this stait. Maybe if I can remember what happened before.

Ok, I was just finishing burying my trap when a voice called to me. I don't remember what it was saying but soon after a jet with legs landed right in front of me. The same voice was trying to convince me to come away with it, but I don't remember why.Was it about The Great Evil. No, I doubt the voice even knew a thing about them. Was it about me? No, besides it knowing my name, it staited nothing else. Was it about- Yes that was it! The voice staited somthing about-"

"Are you awake, Renji?"

"There's that voice again."

"Renji."

"What do you want with me. What did you do to-"

"WAKE UP!"

Suddently, Renji quickly up from where he was laying. But suddently, a pain shocked his leg and he fell over again.

"At least i know I'm not dead. That's a relief. At least I hope so."

"Well you seem to be doing well, Renji. I think the berries I found in this cave seem to be taking effect. What do you think. Are they working?" asked the jet shark.

"Wait, what?" stammered Renji.

Renji didn't notice it before, but they weren't at the camp site. Instead, they were in some sort of cave. But the cave didn't look like a random cave someone just wandered into to. It looked rather ... nice. Even though the cave still had some stones and some staligmites and staligtites around, the cave was very organized. There was a nice little bed made of dirt and leaves right at the end of the cave, a hole in the ground with ashes and twigs in it was centered in the room. Renji wasn't 100%, but he pretty much figured out it was an area a fire could be made. Renji also noticed that there were pitts on the floor and in the walls. Probably for storing food and other items one pokemon would need. But the one thing that caught Renji's eyes were crystals growing from the walls that seemed to glow a pretty shade of blue. Much like Renji's rings on his body.

"I see you're facinated by the Capture Crystals."

"Huh? Oh yeah. Wait a minute, aren't you the monster that I met earlier?" asked Renji.

"Yeah, but I have been so rude haven't I, not to give you my name. My name is Jakie. I'm a
Gabite. I already have been introduced to you, Renji, the Umbreon." said Jakie.

"So your name is Jakie, huh? That's funny, heh heh." snikered Renji.

"What, dear I ask, is so funny about the name Jakie. Jakie was a family name in our clan and if you think I'll take this sitting down..." At that moment, Jakie got up from it's sit, got balanced, and lifted its leg up, looking like it was preparing to make an earthquake.

"Relax, relax. There's no need to cause an earthquake. Besides, I'm not making fun of the name Jakie. Its just that a Pokemon as fearsome and manly as you has such a girly name."
said Renji, not holding back any laughter from his voice.

"Did it ever relise to you that no matter how fearsome a pokemon looks, it could be a girl, like me? If you even wanted proof, you could have just looked at my fin on my back."

"Sorry, but I just figured that you were a male, by how you look. I mean you have sharp teeth, sharp fins, and your huge." stammered Renji.

At that moment, Renji could have sworn that Jakie had grown three times bigger and three times more fierce, by that glare that she was giving Renji. He could have sworn that there was fire in her eyes.

Just then Jakie started walking towards Renji, with that same glare and cracking her knuckles at the same time.

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Please have mercy, on a little guy like me.

" I know your sorry, Renji. But you of all people should know that mercy is for the weak. You said it yourself that I look, and I am, strong. But just think of the next few minutes as a way of paying me back for what you said, heh heh." said Jakie, with and evil grin on her face.
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On the outskirts of the forest, Kon was picking some apples from a tree, telepathically, when he heared a booming voice in the distance.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"

"If I didn't know better, that sounded like Renji screaming. But it couldn't be. He's with Jakie, and should be healing up. I couldn't risk him trying to help me yet. At least until his leg healed a little more." said Kon to himself.

"Are you the nusinse that woke me up from my slumber, you little Espeon?"

"You must be Razar, the Drapion Slayer. I've heard about a great deal of you. So if my sorce is right, your the unofficial king of this forest?" said Kon, still having his back turned to Razar.

"Yes you are correct, dear espeon. But if I remember, my forest never had any eevees or there evelution. And then you show up, knowing so much about me. I'm imprest. But will you mind if you tell me your name, little guy. I always love to know the names of my victims." said Razar.

" If you must know, my name is Kon. But I'm sorry to dissapoint you, as I will not be another victim." said Kon.

"You know, the Pokemon that say that are usually the quickest to go, at least in my experience. But if it's a fight you want, its a fight you'll get. But well do it my way, if its ok with you.

"Agreed," said Kon, bravely."So, what are your rules?"

"There are only two rules. First, the game isn't over until one of us is dead or unable to battle. The second rule is, we can travel anywhere in the forest and use anything around.
Since I'm so considerate, and because I like my battles to last more than five minutes, you can get a head start." staited Razar.

"If it's what you want, I'll do it. But when do I get my head start?" asked Kon.

"In 5...4...3...2..
 
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Sorry about the lack of story. I started school so i have to tend to that first. But i will add a third chapter later
 
Chapter three has a few rules in it sense it is a flashback format.
()-If a section has this around it, it means it is a flashback
""- This is a regular sentence in current time


Also, depending on how fast i can get my homework done, chapter three won't be guarenteed done in a day.
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Chapter 3: Stories of the Past, Journey of the Future

Back in the cave that Jakie and Renji were taking shelter in, a lot of commotion was taking place.

"Renji, you can't run around the cave forever." said Jakie, menencingly.

"I don't have to run forever, just until you give up on trying to kill me, or until I can escape from this cave." panicly said Renji, somewhat limbing from his scratches and bruises on his body.

"We'll, I think I'll add a thrid option into that," said Jakie."Dragon Claw!" said Jakie,and suddently, her hand started to glow a bluish-white and it extended a little bit. Then, Jakie started to run towards Renji, them she jumped up in the air a little and stuck her arm at Renji and slammed it to the ground, right on his head.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!"

After Jakie finished her attack on Renji, she looked down on him to see his condition after the blow. Renji had a big bump on his head, which nearly knocked him out, a few more bruises on his back, and he could have sworn he heard his bad leg crack during the impact.

"Ooohh." moaned Renji.

"Well you must have good defense if you were able to survive a blow like that, especially to the head. You got my attention, little Renji," said Jakie, impressed.

"How do I have your attenTIONNN!!!! OW OW OWWWWW!" yelled Renji at the end.

Jakie grabbed Renji from his bad leg and lifted him off the ground, so that Renji and her were at eye's level. "I already agreed to your little friend that I would help you two out on your journey, but I would love to know why exactly you guys are trying to stop these people and what they did to you to, and their plans. I want to know all of it." commanded Jakie, right at Renji's face.

"Alright, I'll tell you all about our journey that Kon and I are taking, but you have to promise me that you will stop trying to kill, hurt, or injure me in any way. Agreed?" asked Renji.

"...Agreed."said Jakie. Just then, Jakie started to spin Renji around and then just threw him at the wall at full force, his face hitting the Capture Crystals.

"Hey, I thought we had a deal?" staited Renji, angerly.

"Starting now," said Jakie, smiling.

"GGGRRRRRRR." growled Renji at Jakie.
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Renji and Jakie, now settled down after their "argument" were sitting around the fire that Jakie just made. Renji was a little tired down, since of his new injuries, and all of that running didn't help either. Bu he promised Jakie an explination, so he figured he would just come out straight.

"Where would you like me to start?" asked Renji. "From the begining of when the trobles started," responded Jakie, looking serious. "Alright, I'll start from as far as I can remember." staited Renji.

(Way past the ocean, farther than any eye can see past the oceans of Iron Island, there is an unmarked island simply know as "Elemental Island" to my people. This island is the birthplace of 90% of the eevee and eeveelutions in the world, including Kon and me, making it the most eevee populated area in the world.

The island has everything a eevee or an eeveelution could ask for, differing on what the eevee evolves into, like a volcano for a flareon, or a waterfall and lake for a vaporeon.

Every year, during autum, all of the eggs that the females lay hatch, but it is said that the time when the egg hatch will determine what the eevee becomes, but this is just a superstition. But even superstitions can come true, like it did with me and Kon.

Kon and I hatch at the same time, but he hatched in the morning, I at night. But only a few hours after I hatched, I met Kon, and I will never forget the first time I met him.

I was just running around the village, exploring everything, since I was just very curious for being a newborn, when I tripped over a hole and landed on my face.

"Hey, what was t'at? Why did me twip." said Renji.

"I would be caweful where you would wun if I was you," said someone.

And behind me was Kon himself, his arms and head sticking out of the ground, and a little muddy." I'm pwacticing my dwig attack the big, green pokemon showed me, so be caweful where you step." said Kon.

"Hey, you look like me. Except for you color being dffewent, we the same, " I told Kon, excitingly. "Oh, but it's you that looks diffewent, because I have seen many eevees today when I went 'ploring and of all the eevees had bwown fuw, but yours is white. Why?" asked Kon.

"Me don't know why me fuw is white, but what is an eevee?" I asked Kon. "Why an eevee, is a breed of pokemon, and a pokemon is a cweature with amazing powers. We is eevees, you and me, and the bigger, colorful pokemon is awe evelutions. We can change forms at certain times, if conditions is met," Kon told me.

"Why you so smawt?" I asked Kon, jeliously.

"The big gween pokemon taught me all this, along with digging. She also gave me my name. My name is called. It is Kon. A name is someting that tells other who you awe." answered Kon, proudly.

" Me want a name! Me want a name!" I yelled happliy

"Alwight. But can I go with you? I would love to know your name." asked Kon, shyly.

"Suwe, the more the merwier." I said excitedly, and off we ran into the village to look for my name.)

" I see you were very energetic as a kid, Renji. But why didn't you have a name? Didn't your parents name you, like mine did?" asked Jakie.

"Well, unlike where you were hatched, eeveelutions lay eggs in a field with many others, and by the time that we hatch, noone knows who eggs is whos. The elders had it like that so we could learn to depend on ourselves." answered Renji.

"Who are the elders?" asked Jakie, curiously.

"You'll find out. You can't rush a good story," snikered Renji, with a hint of being a smart alic in his voice.

("Who's t'at up ahead?" I asked Kon, excitedly.

" It looks like the green pokemon that named me. I bet she'll name you." staited Kon,"Lets huwwy, befowe she leaves."

"Lets go!" yelled Renji, and I sped off toward the green pokemon, but I was running too fast, and before I knew it, BAM! I ran into her.

"Ow, what just hit me?" said the green pokemon.

"Sorry, it was me," I told her, a little embarressed.

"Well, aren't you a little special eevee. You must be one of those shiny pokemon that I have heard about from the other elders. Well its nice to meet you, my name is Vapor Wish, the Leafeon elder of the village. But you can call me Vapor. What's your name?" asked Vapor.

"I thewe Vapow, its nice to meet you, I'm sorry, but I don't have a name," I told her,sadly "I was hoping that you would name me, like you did my fwiend Kon."

"Kon? Oh yeah, the bright one of the eevees that was in my group earlier of other morning hatched eevees. You must have been hatched at night, huh?" asked Vapor. "Yes, I was," I told her.

"I thought Zodiac was in charge of the night hatch eevees? It figures that he would skip one." mumbled Vapor

"Well, can you name me?' I asked her impatiently.

"Sure, little one, I'll name you. But an extra special eevee like you should get a special name. So from this day forth, you shall now be known as Renji, after my teacher who taught me just about all my moves and skills I know." said Vapor, proudly.

"So I have a name now? It's Wenji?" I asked Vapor.

"Yes, it's Renji." said Vapor.

"YAY!!! I have a name just like Kon!!" I yelled with joy. "Lets go show my name off to the village, Kon.""Alright lets go" said Kon.

"Just don't forget to come to center of the village later today, for the eevee ceremony today, dudes, alright?" asked Vapor." Ok, we'll come," yelled Kon and me to her, as we ran off.
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" WELCOME ALL NEWCOMERS TO THE GREAT ELEMENTAL ISLAND!!!" screamed seven great voices to the heavens at the center of the village later that day.

The center of the village was crowded with eeveelutions, but more than half of the crowd were eevees, espeacially newborns. But not all of the eevees were there, as Kon and me were running frantically to get there.

"I see a bunch of eevees and other pokemon all clumped up together. I think that is the center of the village. I hope we awen't late." said Kon, while giving me an evil glare.

"I'm sowwy, but that apple looked too good to pass up." I told Kon.

"It was a wock, Wenji. Anyone with eyes could have seen t'at." staited Kon, angerly.

"Shut up," was all i said, "Besides, we're hewe now, so just stop complaning."

Since me and Kon were late, we had to stay in the back of the crowd, so our view wasn't the greatest, but what we could see was amazing. Seven great pokemon, each of a different color, stood up high on a hill in front of the crowd. A yellow one was in the middle, on the right side were a blue, black and light blue. On the left were an red, a purple, and a green one.

"AS YOU SEE IN FRONT OF YOU TODAY, WE ARE THE GREAT LEADERS OF THE ELEMENTAL ISLAND, OUR HOME. YOU SHALL LEARN ABOUT ELEMENTAL ISLAND'S RULES AND HISTORY!!" yelled the yellow pokemon in the middle."FIRST YOU SHALL LEARN YOUR ELDER'S NAMES.

"FIRST UP IS CRYSTAL, THE VAPOREON ELDER OF THE VILLAGE!"
Crystal was in charge of the waterfall area in Elemental Island. Most of the Vaporeons from the village lived there, since it has the puriest water in the island. Crystal became the elder because she knows everything about the aquatic world, and she's the only Vaporeon to ever cross the waters of Elemental Island to Sinnoh and back and live to tell about it.

"BESIDES HER IS ZODIAC, THE UMBREON ELDER OF THE VILLAGE!"
Zodiac was the only different one of the village, because he didn't come from the village. Noone knew where he came from. He had a tendency to forget things a lot, but he was still very helpful for what he did. Zodiac became the leader because he helped come up and install Hana, the teleportation device of the island, but it is only to be used in emergency. He also guards the island with his friends during the night.

"UP NEXT IS HIMALAYA, THE GLACEON ELDER!"
Most Pokemon are surprised to find out that Himalaya is a male, espieacially since his moves are some of the most elegent in the village. His signature move is R.C., the Glacier Dragon. It is really just an ice beam, but he learned to harness the power inside of him to make it look like a dragon. He became elder for his studies in controling power.

"ON MY LEFT IS DOJO, THE FLAREON ELDER!"
Dojo knows the most about the geography of Elemental Island, so he knows were everything is on the island. In fact, he was the one to discover that there was a volcano on the other side of the island. His geography knowledge, along with his fire power, is what helped him bscome an elder.

"NEXT TO DOJO IS LUPE', THE ESPEON ELDER!"
Lupe' is on of the smartest Pokemon in the world, her knowledge almost surpassing that of an Alakazams. She knows all of the island's past, and surprisingly, she sometimes knows the future. She can always plan a stratigy a spilt second before she does it. This knowledge helped her not only become an elder, but second in command of the island.

"OUR NEWEST ELDER, VAPOR WISH, THE LEAFEON!"
Vapor can make any remidey with the plants found on the island. It is said that during her studies, she evolved, becoming one with the plants. It was a real surprise that she turned into a Leafeon. Noone else in the village has figured out how to turn into one yet. Everyone thought she would be an Vaporeon, thus her name, and her signature move, wish. Do I really need to tell you why shes the Leafeon Elder?

"AND I'M JIRAIYA, THE JOLTEON ELDER AND LEADER OF THE VILLAGE!"
Jiraiya is the strongest Pokemon in the island, his thunderbolt being able to knock out even the biggest of foes. He is so fast that he can cover the whole island in 24 hours. He became the leader bcause he was the one that saved the island from The Great Evil over 50 years agos (yes he's that old.) He is also in charge of the justice system in the island and the travel
system.

" Whoa, they seem so cool, Kon. I'm gonna geta closer look." I told Kon.

"Wait Renji," yelled Kon, but it was too late. I ran off into the crowd.

"Hey, move out of the way, punk!"

"Sorry,"

"Watch it"

"Sorry,"

"Take this, you little," yelled a voice.

"Huh, wait AAAGGGGHHHHH!!!!!" I yelled as someone kicked me over the crowd and I flew over them, only to land on my face.

"Well well, what is this. Who are you son?" asked Jiraiya.

"I'm Wenji," I told him, embaressed and scared.

"Well, you must be the shiny eevee that Vapor told me about today. I don't think I can even recall the last time a white eevee appeared here. Your a special one." said Jiraiya, smiling.

"Oh yeah, the shiny one," mumbled Zodiac, somewhat angerly.

"I'm sorry I diswuppeted you," I told Jiraiya.

"It's quite alright. It was only a mistake." said Jiraiya, "You know, I did the same thing when I was your age?"

"Weally" I said in awe.

"Yea, and I turned out ok, so its no big deal. If you want, you can stay in the front for the rest of the ceremony," said Jiraiya.

"OK!" I said excitedly, and I watched Jiraiya talk about the island and its rules in awe.

But in the backround, Zodiac wasn't paying attention to Jiraiya, but at Renji, giving him a look that if you looked directly inside the, you could see evil in them.)

To be continued...
 
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Write it down!Write it down!I looovvvee this stuff!
You, Torgetsu, are the coolest!
 
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Thank you!What do you think of mines?It is Sinnoh stories.I decided to make it for what you made.+can you add a character that decribes me?
 
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Chimchar 26 said:
Thank you!What do you think of mines?It is Sinnoh stories.I decided to make it for what you made.+can you add a character that decribes me?
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Sure! I have been needing to think of another character, so after the next few chapters I can add you in, but you need to tell me a little bit about yourself, what pokemon you want to be (except Bagon. He's already in my mind for something later) and anything else you want to tell me.
 
Sorry, no. A mew is impossile to do at this point in the story, but if you don't mind waiting a while until a mew will be a good edition to the story. Either that or be somethng else.
 
Sure, quilava's fine. you'll be in the next few chapters
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Chapter 4:Stories of the Past, Journey of the Future Part II

(For the next years that came up against Kon and me, it was a lot of fun, but hard work learning new techniques and moves that could aid us in the future to come. We would learn from the elders, friends and villagers in the village, but the elders didn't want us to learn too much as eevees, because our true power won't show until we evolved.

Kon always had a thing for Lupe', so he wanted to be an Espeon. That is why he refused to train at night, on case he'd evolve then. I thought that he would fit the description of an Espeon perfictly. He was smart, gave good advice, could think on his feet in a battle, and perfered special antics insted of physical.

I, myself didn't have a true favorite of what I wanted to be, because no matter what I turned in to, I would still look different. But if I had to choose, I guess I would have wanted to be a Leafeon, not because of its powers or anything. It was because of Vapor. Any time that Vapor would show the eevees something, I was always in the front, hoping that this knowledge would help me achieve Leafeonhood.-)

"Hah, hah. Renji had a girlfriend," laughed Jakie, while she fell on the floor, not even trying to hide her laughter.

"Well I guess you could say that..." stammered Renji, embaressed.

"Renji and Vapor sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-" sung Jakie.

"ALRIGHT, ENOUGH." yelled Renji, cutting off Jakie, " Now do you want to hear the rest or not?"

"I'm sorry." said Jakie, still giggling a little, "I just think its funny that you had a crush on someone that was WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY out of your leage."

"OK, WE GET IT!" barked Renji."Now can we get back to the story?"

"Ok, ok. Continue." said Jakie.

(Kon and me would train as hard as we could together, but he always seemed more advance than me. If I almost perfected a move, he perfected it ten-fold. I always seemed inferior to Kon, like I was the underdog. But I never gave up. I always worked my best to try and keep up with Kon, but to this day, Kon still seems to be superior. I even had the perfect chance to be a hero,to show I could be someone. But I messed that up, and I cost the village dearly.

It was the day that the village elders would discuss something about the village, and me and Kon and me were training in a clear field.

" Don't worry Kon, you can do it!" I yelled out to Kon as he was trying to crack a rock with his take down.

Kon and I would always practice a different move at a time, and we would take turns, by praticing baton pass. I had just switch out after cracking a rock, but I had a feeling I'd be waiting for a long time because Kon wanted to break a rock that was double his size.

"HIYAHHHHHHHHH!!" yelled Kon as he ran face first into the rock. As the impact happened, you could clearly hear a crack, but there was no trace of a crack anywhere on the rock.

"Aww, I thought for sure you cracked it Kon," I told him, sadly.

" I thought I did, too," said Kon, kind of uneasy, and he was twiching a little bit every now and then.

"Are you all right, Kon?" I asked him." You seem kind of uneasy. Do you fell OK?"

"Well, I do fell a little weird, like I have something wanting to come out. But I don't know what. But I'm sure it's nothing to worry about. Lets get back to training, Ok?" said Kon, still uneasy.

"All right, if you say so," I said, unesurly.

"Begin!" said Kon to himself, and with that, he ran of to the rock, full force. Before he made contact, he jumped up in the air, stuck his paws out in front of him, and rocketed towards the stone. "HUYAHHHH!" was the call that Kon yelled right as he was about to make contact. And then ... CRACK!!

The sound from the collision that Kon made was deafening, and it was to no surprised that the rock obelterated into thousands of pieces. I was in awe of the whole thing.

"Whoa... Kon, how did you do that? There was absolutly no way that was a take down. Do you fell all right?" I asked.

"That felt good, really good," said Kon, sighing relief. I feel like that last blow took a lot of power, but I feel great now."

Just as soon as Kon said that, he started glowing. His body grew bigger, and more leaner. His ears separated into two, the top portion growing ten-fold. He lost the fluff on his neck, and his tail grew longer and thinner, splitting into two at the end. Finally, his legs grew more leaner and taller.

When Kon stopped glowing, he was no longer the little Eevee that stood here just a few moments ago. No, he was an elegant Espeon, that now had new powers waiting to be discovered.

"Oh my god! Kon, you did it! You finally evovled, and not into any eeveelution, you became and Espeon! Thats always what you wanted to be since you were little, and now your dream is fofilled!" I said excitedly, while still in shock.

"Yeah, this is so cool, Renji." said Kon, happily. " Lets see what I can do."

Suddently, the new red orb on Kon's forehead started to glow, and then two rocks ahead of him started to fly in the air, a little wobbly at first, but then it got straight. Before our eyes, the two rocks were flying all over the place, over our heads, next to us, and even five feet away from us. The Kon decided to end his little show and smashed the two rocks together. As soon as there was two flying rocks, there was gravel falling from the sky.

" A little shaky, but not bad for a first try," said Kon to me.

"Huh, oh yeah right," I told him, not really paying attention.

" Whats wrong Renji? I can tell you're not really paying attention to me." asked Kon.

" Well, Kon, I think I should start training on my own. It's not anything that you did, if that's what you think, but all the training that is good for my level is way too easy for you. You're just too good for me at this point right now." I told him, angerly.

"... Well, if that's what you want," said Kon sadly.

"Its for the best." was all I said.

"All right. Well, I'll be at the village, just to let you know." said Kon.

"OK." I responded.

"See you," said Kon as he left.

What Kon didn't Kon was that I sworn to myself that I wouldn't return until I evolved, so that I could at least be a match for Kon. What I would do was train at a different area everyday so I would be surprised what I would be. But to not be a copy-cat, I would have to cancel out training in this field in the morning.

"Time to get started!" I yelled.
..................

Back at the village, all was peaceful and normal, as Lupe' and Vapor were having lunch together.

" You seem to have big plans tonight, Vapor, if I recall," staited Lupe'.

"Oh yeah, I have a meeting in the woods tonight with Zodiac. He wants to discuss something about the Hana Transportation device tonight. He saids a certain plant can help it run more smoothly," Vapor told Lupe'.

"I would skip out on it tonight, Vapor. Something bad is going to happen tonight there." said Lupe', stiernly.

" You always worry too much, Lupe'. For as long as I have known you, you always been a worried wart. But what problem will we have tonight, if two elders are together. Now I thank you for the lunch, but I really have to get going, Lupe." said Vapor, impatiently.

"Wait! Vapor you..." yelled Lupe', panically.

"Goodbye Lupe'!" screamed Vapor.

" If only she wasn't so impatient, I could have warned her that the evil in the woods was not a creature, but an X-ally. I better go warn the village." thought Lupe' to herself.
................

It was nearly night at the island, and I was continuing my training in the forest. I was trying to see how many trees I could knock down with only my take down.

As I tackled a tree, I heard a big crack and in front of me, the tree fell down with a thud. I looked at the stump with satifaction in my face.

"Well, that was my seventh tree total. I'm surprised I'm not getting tired though," I thought to myself.

Suddently, I remember my leg was strating to twitch a little, and I felt a little weird on the inside.

"Why do I fell all twitchy? This was just like Kon today," I told myself.

Then I just remembered about earlier this morning, how at first Kon felt twitchy and weird, then in the next few minutes, he evolved.

"Awsome! I getting close to evolution. There's no way I'm quitting now." I said in excitement.

I thought about the way that Kon did his final attack and so I prepared myself to destroy the stump that remained after my tree attack. So I position myself and jumped into the air.
Everything was going fine until tried to stick my paws out. I'm not sure what went wrong, if I didn't have enough balence, but my body started to turn and before I knew it, I cracked the stump with my back.

"OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!" I yelled as loud as I could, after the impact. Few minutes later, I was able to get up and get balenced on my legs.

"I'll try it again, but this time on a tree," I told myself. I position myself perfectly, and jumped up in the air, ready to strike. That was when it happened.

As I was under the direct moonlight, my body started to glow. My body grew bigger and leaner and I lost my mane as Kon has earlier. My ears extended and thinkened up, as did my tail. My body actually felt like it combind with the darkness and moon around me. When I was finished glowing, I was an elegent Umbreon, but instead of yellow rings, I had blue rings, as you can see, and my eyes are yellow, instead of red.

I was falling down on to the tree with great force, and the impact on the tree was so powerful, it cracked the tree in four different parts. After the impact, I relised I wasn't an eevee anymore. I was an Umbreon. I was excited, but a little disappointed at the same time.

I was happy because not only did I look so cool as an Umbreon, but I turned into something that would give Kon a hard time. Now I felt like I could no longer be the underdog. I was a little disappointed because I would have loved to have been a Leafeon. But since noone else still figured out how to turn into one, I was a little ok with that.

"Cool, I've got to go back to the village and show Kon," I told myself and I ran off through the woods, back to the village.
..............

Outside the village, Vapor was waiting next to a cliff, waiting for Zodiac.

"I knew I came too early. He's always so late, Zodiac. If it wasn't for Hana, I bet Zodiac would be just any random Umbreon in the village. And wasn't it his idea to come in here in the first place?" mummbled Vapor to herself.

Suddenrly, a rustle in a bush got Vapor's attention. She could barley see the figure in the bush, but she could make out a head with two huge ears that glowed an ocean blue.

"Zodiac, is that you?" asked Vapor, in disbelief.

"Not quite," I said, embarressed. I step out of the bush slowly, and reveiled to Vapor my new body.

"Renji, is that you?" asked Vapor in astonishment." You're, you're..."

"An Umbreon? Yeah, I guess I am. Just evolved about an hour ago." I told her shyly.

"And I thought the regular coloring of an Umbreon was neat. Renji, you look so cool!" staited
Vapor.

"Really? I wanted to become a Leafeon like you. I just thought you were always so cool." I told her shyly and embarressed, a little.

"Trust me, if I could, I would have been an Umbreon. Besides Zodiac, I think Umbreons are cool. I even trained at night. But I guess I was training at the wrong spot at the wrong time. I mean it's cool to be the only Leafeon in the village, but it was my dream to be an Umbreon." said Vapor sadly.

"Oh, I never knew that," I said softly, a little sad for her "By the way, where were you training when you evolved, if you don't mind me asking?" I asked her.

" I was training in the mountains past this forest, next to the end of this forest. If I recall, a huge rock covered in moss overlooked the area. I'm not sure if thats has to do with anything, though," answered Vapor.

"I doubt it does," I told her. "Dam, I was going to train there tomorrow!" I yelled in my head.

"Are you Ok, Renji? You seem angry," asked Vapor.

"No, I'm fine," I told her embarressed,"Did I say that out loud?" I thought to myself.

"Now where's Zodiac? I'm getting pretty impatient," said Vapor, steamed.

"Give him a few minutes before you ditch him, Vapor," I said, somewhat smartaleckey.

Vapor just looked at me. She didn't need to say anything, because by her glare, Icould tell she wasn't in the mood for jokes.

"Sorry to keep you waiting so long, but I was busy. With things." said Zodiac, even though he was nowhere to be seen.

Suddently, a huge stone was falling from the sky, right over me.

"Razor leaf!" yelled Leafeon, and in an instant, two leaves flew out of Vapor's ears and headed torwards the stone. Then, the leaves sliced the stone into four different parts, and the rubel landed next to us.

"Where did that come from," I asked, still a little startled, searching the sky for more.

"Sorry, I guess my little present missed. Sentarou!!! You need to work on your aim!" yelled Zodiac. Suddently, he was on top of the cliff, looking over us.

" Sorry, Stars. My timing was a little off, but the next won't miss." Suddently, a little bird came out of the trees. The bird had a feather mane, and it had rainbow feathers. Its tail was shaped like a metronome, and it head was shape somewhat like a note. It was also wearing a red headband, but I bet someone put it on him, for reasons unknown.

"Stars?" asked Vapor in disbelief.

"Yeah, Stars. It's my nickname for Zodiac here. I've always called him that since he was an Eevee," staited Sentarou, proudly.

"Yes, and he still hasn't listen to me, no matter how many times I tell him I hate the nickname," said Zodiac, a little embaressed.

"Heh, Stars," I mumbled to myself while giggling.

"Shut up. Stars is a good nickname, huh Stars?" asked Sentarou.

"Shut up," said Zodiac to Sentarou.

"I have a question, if you don't mind," asked Vapor.

"What is it?" said Zodiac.

"Why is there a Chatot on Elemental Island? This island is only home to Eevees and their evolutions. And according to the other elders, this island is known to very few, if any." asked Vapor.

"Well, I'm not even sure myself how I got to this island the first time, because I was washed up on the shore on the beach here, but once I left, I was able to come back to this island by instinct," said Sentarou.

"And if you happened to have forgotten, I was not born here," interuppeted Zodiac.

"No, I still remember that," staited Vapor.

"Well, I never said that I wasn't from this island," staited Zodiac.

"How is that possible? If you were not born here, how are you from this island?" I asked, forcefully.

"Well ,you can thank me for that," staited Sentarou, instantly."You see, when I washed up on the beach of this island, I was on a mission from my masters, The Great Evil. The mission was a failure, but I didn't want to come back empty-handed, so I searched the island for anyhing worthy to bring back to them. To my surprise, I found a whole field of poke'eggs! I had no idea what was in them, but any Pokemon would aid in the The Great Evil's plans. When the egg hatched at base, The Leader was very pleased with Sentarou, but he had a favor to ask of me. He had this idea that would involve this Eevee, this Island, and a few years time. I had to train Zodiac to the style of The Great Evil, and to train him for this mission, which is almost complete."

"Wait, what is The Great Evil, and what is this great plan you talked about? I want to know NOW!" demanded Vapor.

"Under the rules of The Leader himself, I can't tell you about The Great Evil, but you'll find out about this plan, and your destiney, in no time, heh heh," staited Sentarou, eviley.

"Now to start 'Phase two' of the B.E.H." said Zodiac.

"What does B.E.H. stand for?" I asked.

"B.E.H. Big Elemental Heist. Any more stupid questions?" aked Zodiac, impatiently.

"No, but I won't let you get away with this," I told him bravely.

"Bombs away!!!!" yelled Sentarou from behind.

Suddently, a huge stone was heading towards our ways.

"Take down!" I yelled and I smacked my body towards Sentarou's rock. Then as I made impact, the rock went towards Sentarou and hit him on the head, and he fell out of the sky to the ground.

"Yes, right on the bull's eye," I said in excitement.

"Don't get too kacky, Renji." said Vapor." He isn't down yet."

"Dark pulse," said Zodiac, and then, a black orb was forming on top of his head. Then he sent it towards Vapor, with her not having a clue.

"Watch out!" I yelled, and at that second she looked behind her, seeing the orb coming her way.

At that moment, she jumped off of the ground, nearly avoiding a harsh impact. The orb continued to a nearby tree,and then when the two met, a huge exploshion was created, obleterating the tree that once stood there.

"Thanks Renji," said Vapor, trying to catch her breath.

Then, the ruble that Renji made with his take down was suddently moving, and Sentarou appered from under, with a big bleeding scratch on his head.

"You going down, punk," said Sentarou, angerily. Just then, Sentarou started screaming so loudly, that it was actually hurting Renji, inside and out.

"I'm guessing that's Uproar, huh?" I asked him.

"Shut up and take some more." said Sentarou. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!"

I tried to get out of the way, but his Uproar caught up with me and knocked me over.

"Renji!" yelled Vapor, but she got knocked over by a take down from Zodiac.

"You can't win. This island is as good as ours," smearked Zodiac.

"You will never get this island," said Vapor angerly.

She got up and started running towards Zodiac. Her ears started to glow, and they grew bigger and straightened out. She jumped up in the air and started to flip towards Zodiac.

"Leaf Blade," was all she said before she slashed Zodiac's face.

"AGHHHHHHHHH!" yelled Zodiac with impact.

"Got yah," said Vapor when she finished her attack.

"You little, look what you did to my face!" stammered Zodiac with pain.

Clearly on his face, you could see deep cuts all over Zodiac' face. His fur was messed up with all the blood that covered it.

"This will teach you," said Zodiac.

Zodiac jumped off of the cliff and headed towards Vapor. He stuck out one of his paws and with one whack of his paw, he sent Vapor flying back, making her hit a tree,and falling over.

"Payback," staited Zodiac."Does double damage if I already got damage done to my body.

"Not bad, but you'll have to do better than that if you want to get rid of me," said Vapor, bravely.

"Nice one, Stars," said Sentarou, breathing heavely, since he just finished his uproar.

"You have a lot of energy and stamina for a little guy, huh Sentarou?" asked him, running out of breath myself.

"You're not to bad yourself." said Sentarou, but what will happen if I change the playing field a little?"

Sentarou flew up to a top of a tree branch over Vapor and took a big breath, like he was getting ready for something.

"Laaaaaa, laaaa la la, la la la, La la laaaaaaa," sung Sentarou, ever so heavenly.

At that moment, all I can remember was Zodiac and Vapor falling over. Iwas gatting slepply at that moment, and not long after, I fell asleep to.

When Sentarou was done with his song, he flew over to Zodiac and stuffed a berry in his mouth. At that moment, Zodiac woke up from his sleep, with a shock.

"Where am I?" he said, startled.

"We don't have time Stars. We got to get these two to Hana if we want to complete part 2 of B.E.H. Lets move," whispered Sentarou.

"Alright, lets move. You can carry the Umbreon while I'll carry Vapor. Just don't drop him," said Zodiac, seriously.

"Ok," was all Sentarou said before he went over to pick me up.

I'm not sure what woke me up at that moment, but I think it was ethier when Sentarou pushed his tilons into my skin or when he pulled me up by my tail, but whatever it was, I let out a sheirk that startled Sentarou enough to drop me.

"What happened?" I murmured, still not fully awake.

"Sentarou!!!"yelled Zodiac."What did I tell you not to do?!!"

"S-s-sorry S-stars,"stammered Sentarou, scared.

I was looking around the area, trying to remember where I was when I suddently saw Vapor on the ground. Then I remembered everything.

"What did you do to Vapor?" I asked, angerly.

"Don't worry. You and Vapor will be in good hands, once we knock you out again.

I angerly got up, glaring at Zodiac for all he has done to us.

"You won't do anything to Vapor. I won't even let you touch a hair on her," I growled at him, making sure he got my point."Now, I'm making sure that you won't harm anyone on this island,"

I suddently felt immense power flowing through me. It was like nothing I have ever felt in my life, but I knew what I had to do with it.

"Take this!"

I ran towards Zodiac and jumped into the air, only a few feet off the groung though. I stuck out my paw and it started to glow. All my power then went from my body to my paw.

"This is my LAST RESORT!!" I yelled right in front of him ready to make impact.

The second my paw was about to touch Zodiac, a strange force pushed me down and slammed me to the ground.

Zodiac, still shocked, looked up to the sky and saw Sentarou, flying overhead.

"Was that you, Sentarou?" asked Zodiac, still in shock that he was in one piece.

"Yes Stars. Hyper Voice. My signature move," staited Sentarou.

"Wow. If Sentarou didn't go into action, I would have been a goner." thought Zodiac.

"Sentarou, use hyper voice to finish off Renji," commanded Zodiac.

Sentarou let out a big scream. But as he was screaming, the soundwaves were visible, white rings all in a row, getting bigger the farther they traveled.

"I can move. This is it," I murmured to myself, as I was about to be hit.

As the Hyper Voice was about to hit me, something jumped in front of me and took the attack. Whatever it was, it got sent flying behind me and hit a tree, nearly being knocked out.
I turned around to see my savior, but what I saw, I never can get out of my head.

"Vapor..." was all I was able to say in my condition.

Vapor looked terrible. Her body was all scratched up and bruised. Her back had a huge wound that blood was escaping from heavely, and it covered her back. Her left ear was ripped and she had a black eye, so swollen that she couldn't open that eye. I was surprised she was alive, let alone awake.

"Why'd you take that blow for me, Vapor. Just look what happened to you," I asked her, sadly.

"I'm an elder, Renji. It is our job to protect our village with our lives," responded Vapor ,with what little voice she had left. "Besides, that final attack didn't do all of this to me, but it sure did the majority. I did my best to stop this Great Evil, and thats what counts. My only regret is that I couldn't stop you, Zodiac, and Sentarou."

"Vapor..." was still all I said.

"And Renji. Ever since I have met you, that day you were hatched, I knew that you were destend for greatness. You still have a chance to stop The Great Evil, with or without me.
This might be the last thing I ever say, but I am glad that I got to meet, Renji," said Vapor before she collapsed over.

"Vapor... no," I said with a tear, and I fell over, unconsious.

"Yes, we won, Stars," screamed Sentarou with glee.

"Don't celebrate yet, Sentarou. We still aren't done with part two yet. Now, we have to get both of them to Hana, before they awake, if they still can," said Zodiac." I'll carry Vapor while you take Renji, Sentarou."

"Right Stars," staited Sentarou, and with some positioning, Sentarou picked me up and Zodiac and him traveled to the moutains, to Hana.
.................

Lupe' was scrurry through the village, the next morning, looking for any of the elders that were nowhere to be seen.

"Jiraiya, Dojo, Himalaya, anyone. Where are you guys?" Lupe' asked herself.

"Yo, Lupe'," yelled Kon, from a distance away,"Why are you in such a hurry?"

Lupe' ran to Kon, to see what he wanted.

"Why are you in such a hurry. Is something wrong?" asked Kon.

"Quick, Kon, do you know where any of the elders are? I need to talk to them. It's an emergency," asked Lupe', frantically.

"Well, Crystal is at the waterfall. She has to stop two Vaporeons from fighting on top of the waterfall. Dojo is at the volcano, and I'm not sure where Jiraiya, Himalaya, Vapor or Zodiac are." responded Kon,"On the topic of finding buddies, have you seen Renji?"

"Oh, I don't trust Zodiac anymore. He's going to betray the village, and try to take us down. That is why I need to find any of the elders, to make a plan. As for Renji, something happened to him and Vapor last night outside of the village," said Lupe'.

"What happened to them? Are they ok?" asked Kon, panically.

"I, myself, am not completly sure what happened, but I do know a huge battle happened with Zodiac, and the battle went in favor to Zodiac," said Lupe', sadly.

"I have to find Renji. Lupe', do you know where I can find him? I have to help," commanded Kon.

"I'm sorry, I have no idea where Renji or Vapor are. I don't know if they are on the island still or even alive," staited Lupe'.

"Oh, alright then. I hope you find one of the elders soon, and I know that you guys can stop this plan on the island," said Kon, not looking up to Lupe'.

"Ok. Well I have to hurry," and with that, Lupe' ran off through the village.

"Good luck," said Kon, softly, with a little tear flowing down his face.
......................

"Heh heh heh, wake up, little Pokemon,"

Something was poking my ribs continiously, with a sharp stick, I may add. But if it wasn't for the stick and the thing poking me, I probably wouldn't be on this mission right now.

"Huh," I murmured, still partcially asleep.

"Good, you're awake, little umbreon. I was wondering when you would wake up."

"What, wait who's taking to me?" I asked.

When I opened my eyes, I saw a face looking directly at me. The face was yellow, had stubby ears on top of its face and two little slits for a nose. There also was a huge grin on the Pokemon's face.

"Aghh! Who the heck are you?" I asked, still shocked.

"Heh heh heh. There's no need to be frightened by me, little Pokemon. I am a friend, and have helped the village for years." said the weird Pokemon, still grinning.

"Call me Renji. And what do you mean that you've helped the village for years? You look nothing like an Eevee evelution," I asked, still confused.

"That's because I'm not an Eevee, or it's evelutions. In fact, I haven't even evolved yet," said the Pokemon.

"Well what are you?" I asked.

"Oh, how rude of me, heh heh. I know a lot about you, but you know nothing about me. Well, my name is Hana. Hana the Abra," staited Hana, while bowing at the same time.

"Hana, Hana. Where have I heard that before?" I asked myself.

"If you are wondering about the Hana transportation device, that would be me," said Hana.

"That's you!?" I asked in shock. "Now that you mentioned it, Zodiac never told anyone who didn't go to Hana what, or in this case who, Hana was."

"I requested that he did that. I don't really want Pokemon to disrupt me, on the mountain," said Hana." That was my name, The Lone Flower."

"The Lone Flower?" I asked in wonder.

"Yeah, The Lone Flower. In Japan, Hana means Flower, and that is what my old trainer named me, because he thought I was as beautiful and elegant as a flower, heh heh," explained Hana.

"He must have been blind," I murmured.

"Did you say something?" asked Hana.

"No. I didn't say anything," I said, making sure I had a straight face.

"Anyway, the lone part came from the fact that I was his only Pokemon. He wanted to show people that he could become a great trainer with only one Pokemon. But his dream is never to be," said Hana, sadly.

"What happened?" I asked.

"Well, one day, while my owner was walking on the streets of Heart Home, he was all excited because he was going to challenge the gym leader there, even though the odds were against him. But as he was walking, He," before Hana spoke about the results, she started to cry.

"What happened," I asked, sadly.

"Well, he was just walking down the road, and there was a cab driving down the street. Wether the driver wasn't paying attention, asleep, or drunk, I'm not sure, but he started to go off the road. And then, the car turned and hit my trainer, and that was it.

The car ran into the nearby building, so the driver didn't survive either, but everything being fine one moment, then chaning for the worst, forever. That was the worst.

A nearby person relised me from my Pokeball, and he told me I had to live on my own now. I had no idea what he meant, until I saw my trainer, being taken away in an ambulence. My heart has shattered into a million pieces, and I still feel like I haven't fix it, to this day," cried Hana.

"I'm... I'm sorry, Hana," I said, feeling like I wanted to cry myself.

"Well, the past year, I learned to live on my own. I learned how to gather food, find resting grounds for the night, and my teleporting powers added me in many tight spots. I guess thats how my teleport ability has improved so much. I'm able to go farther than most Abras can travel. But thats how I am here today." said Hana, trying to dry her eyes.

"How is that related to the island? Did you teleport to the island on accident?" I asked.

"Not quite," said Hana. "You see, one day while I was teleporting to my resting hideout for the day, two Pokemon saw my ablilities and followed me. When I went up to my hideout, a bird swooped down and hit my head, and when I was down, an Umbreon, like yourself, except for the color, jumped on top of my back, holding my hands so I couldn't teleport.

They said they had a big plan that could changed the world, and they needed me, and my powers.

They said that I could help them travel from this island to Sinnoh a lot easier, and news from their mission could be transfered much faster. But in order for the transportation area to run smoothly, very few Pokemon must know that I live in the moutains. The ones that do or did have been sworn to never tell about me, or have never returned to the island," staited Hana.

"Who made you become a transporting machine, out of your own free will?"

"Well, one was a Chatot, and the other was an Umbreon, like I staited before," replied Hana

"I should have known that, especially since Zodiac gets credit for inventing the Hana Transportation System," I mumbled to myself.

"Can't you just teleport away, now that no one is holding you back?" I asked.

"Well, I guess that I could, but I'm happy here," responded Hana.

"You're happy here? Alone. On a mountain?"

"Yea, I am." said Hana, happily."Ever since my trainer past on, I love to just be alone, and see what happens around me. You don't really see life happing, unless you focus on it. Everyone seems to just rush."

"Really?" I said in amasement. I looked up in the sky to see if it was really true.

The sky was a bright sky blue, brighter than my rings around my ears. There were a few white, fluffy clouds mix in, each with their own unique shape. The sun was at a 3 o' clock angle, shining ever so brightly on the islands surface. Out of the horizon, came out a flock of Pokemon, that looked like sea birds. Some had long beaks, with wings that were more than three times their body length. Others had normal sized wings, but the beaks were over 90% of the body. Both of the birds had white feathers, with a blue outlining to compliment the white. The birds were talking about the best spot to fish for the day, completly egnoring the island below them.

"You're right. You don't really notice the world around you, unless you really focus,"

"Yeah," siad Hana." But I do enjoy company every now and then. Like you. You're a very interesting Pokemon, Renji. And a very easy Pokemon to take a liking to."

"Thanks," I told her. "But, if you don't mind me chaning the subject, can I ask you a question?"

"Wing it."

"Why am I on the mountains. Last I can remember, I was battling Zodiac with... Vapor." Suddently, it came to me and I snapped.

"What did you do to Vapor?" I yelled at Hana angerly."If I'm here on this mountain with you, shouldn't that mean that Vapor is here with me?"

"Relax, relax. I'll tell you the whole story that happened to her," sais Hana, calm as ever.

" Well, what happened to her, and don't give me any crap," I told her, still with anger in my voice.

"Ok," said Hana. "The truth is... she was here already."

"She was?" I calmed down. "Well, what happened?"

"She didn't come on her own free will, if that's what you are thinking. Instead, she was delievered here.

You know the two Pokemon that brought me here, Sentarou and Zodiac? Well, they brought you Vapor over to me. Truthfully, I was hesitent to travel her, because of her wounds, torn flesh and blood. I thought she was dead. But they insisted that I take her with them, to their headquarters. They said they would take good care of her."

"You teleported Vapor to The Great Evil?" I bursted out.

"Yeah, I guess I did. But I didn't want to do it. I have never liked any of the plans that I have helped Zodiac and Sentarou with. But what can I do? I'm an Abra. Besides teleport, I have no other abilities, naturally, so I have to do what they say," said Hana, sadly.

"Oh. I didn't mean to yell at you. It's just..."

"It's Ok," Hana said, cutting me off. " I know you really care about your girlfriend."

"Girlfriend?!" I stammered, astonished, but not insluted by the comment.

"But the truth is that I was supposed to teleport you to their headquarters as soon as I got back. But I didn't."

"Why didn't you? If you didn't wake me up, you would have had the perfect oppertunity to take me away," I asked, confused.

"True, but as I told you, I have never approvide of any of their plots. I guess that now that no one was forcing me to do their deeds this time, I chose not to. But I did want to meet you," said Hana, happily.

"Oh. I guess that even though you work for a group as evil as The Great Evil, you are still a nice person," I said.

"Yup, I am," staited Hana." You know Renji, the more I get to know you, the more I think you will be perfect for my great plan against The Great Evil."

"Wait, what plan will I be perfect for?" I asked, confused as ever.

"Well, all of this time that I have been alone, I have thought of a way that The Great Evil can be stopped. But I can't do it, for several reasons, mostly because I can only aid in teleport. So I was hoping one day that I would meet a Pokemon perfect for the job, and I think I have," smiled Hana.

"What would I have to do?" I asked.

"Well, First you would have to go on to the island of Sinnoh. That will be the part in which I will aid you in. Next, you must find the the headquarters on the region, but this will be the hardest task to do. But on your journey, I will want you to make friends with as many Pokemon as you can, because, as the saying goes, there's power in numbers. They can aid you on your journey, with things you are unable to do on your own. But be careful of who you recuirt. Members of The Great Evil are always on missions, and are disguised as the local Pokemon in the region. So don't recruit a Pokemon that seems suspicious of The Great Evil's plans.

The last thing you must know is that this is a dangerous mission, so you might not ever make it back home, and there's a chance that you could die during the mission.

The choice is totally up to you, if you choose to take this mission or not. In my oppinoin, you would be the perfect choice for the mission, but the choice is yours," explained Hana.

I couldn't believe what Hana was explaining to me. That an Umbreon of my standards would be perfect for a mission as important as this. I really didn't have any amazing abilities, except my Last Resort, but that took all my energy to use. I guess I was a good choice for the mission, because I knew about The Great Evil, but Hana could explain to anyone who they are.
But Hana must have chose me for a reason, a reason unclear to me. Do I have potential?

"So do you accept?" asked Hana.

After careful thought and concideration, I happily told Hana "Yes, I accept."

" I had a feeling you would accept," smiled Hana.

"But before I leave, I have a request," I told her.

"What is it?" asked Hana.

"I need to go back to the village. To pick up a friend."

"Should I teleport you to the village?" asked Hana.

"No thanks. I can see the village from up here, so I'll just walk. I'll meet you up here later tonight." I told her.

When I got up to leave from Hana, I only took one step when I relised I was more injured then what appeared. A huge pain struck my back leg, causing me to trip over, nearly falling off the mountain. When I tried to get up, my leg felt ever worse.

"What happened?" asked Hana.

"I don't know. I guess I must have injuried my leg during the battle," I replied." I guess I will need you to teleport me to the village, Hana."
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We decided that Hana would take mto the village at night, because most of the Pokemon would be asleep, and that we could make a clear getaway.

When we got to the outskirts of the village, I told Hana to hide in case someone would wake up and see her.

I was quietly lurking through all of the Pokemon, limping sometimes, looking for Kon, but it was hard to find him, since there were a lot of Espeon sleeping in the village.

"We need a little light," I whispered to myself.

I started focusing my energy to my ears, and in a little bit, the blue rings started glowing.
But the blue rings kept on flashing on and off, since it was my first time attempting this.

"Now the search should be a little easier."

Looking through my way of Pokemon, I saw an Espeon sleeping in a pile of leaves. hoping it was Kon, I walked over there and nugde on the Espeon's back.

"Huh? Who's there?"

"Kon, is that you? It's me, Renji," I told the Espeon.

"Sorry, no," said the Espeon. "It's Lupe'."

"Oh, sorry Lupe. You wouldn't happened to know where Kon is sleeping, would ya?"

"Well, I believe Kon is sleeping next to a tree, leading to the forest. But what do you need him for, Renji?"

"Well, lets just say I have big plans, and I need Kon."

"You have a plan against The Great Evil?"

"Huh?" I said, shocked that she knew. "How did you know that?"

"Well, I have know about Zodiac true intensions for a little while now, and that you and Vapor had a big encounter with him. So, it concered to me that you had a big plan, and you need your friend's assistence." explained Lupe'.

"Oh, well thanks Lupe'." I told her, and went to the forest entrance.

Like Lupe' said, an Espeon was sleeping next to the forest entrance. High in hopes, I walked over to the Espeon and nudge on it's back.

"Huh?"

"Kon, is that you? It's me, Renji."

That last line seemed to wake him up instantly.

"Renji, is that really you?" asked the Espeon. By it's voice, I could see that it was Kon, and he seemed to be crying a little.

"Yea," I answered. "It's me."

"Where did you come from? I heard that Zodiac took care of you and Vapor?"

"Well, It's a long story." I explained to Kon the whole story, my evelution, the battle with Zodiac and Sentarou, meeting Hana, and the mission.

"So, will you help me Kon?" I asked him.

Kon still seemed to be in shocked about the whole thing, but his shock didn't stop him from answering. "Yes, Renji. I will aid you on this mission."

"Good," I responded. "Now we just need Hana."

"Where is Hana? Is she still on the mountains?"

"Not quite." I told him. "Hana!!"

Hana stepped out of the bushes and in front of us.

"Do you need me now, Renji?" asked Hana.

"You must be Hana," staited Kon.

"You are correct, Kon, if I said your name right," answered Hana.

"Correct," said Kon.

"So, Renji, do you need me to teleport you two to Sinnoh now?" asked Hana.

"If you please," I answered.

"Ok," said Hana. "Come close, you to."

We walked over to Hana, and she put her hands on top of us. She started to focus her mind, and in an instant, we were gone.

We kept on appearing and disappearing with this teleport, since it was a long way to travel, and so Hana can get a few seconds to get some more energy. For what seemed like the longest time, we teleported, but in the morning, we finally landed on land.

"Hear we are, guys," said Hana. "Sinnoh."

"Our adventure begins, Kon," I told Kon.

"Yea, and we got to make it count," responded Kon.

When we got to a forest in Sinnoh, Hana stopped teleporting and stood up.

"Well, it's up to you now, guys. I have to go back to the village, but before I go, there's one thing you should know," said Hana.

"Yea, what is it?" asked Kon.

"There's no way that I can get you back to the island once I leave. I will have no idea where you guys will be, so you'll have to find you're own way back. Just thought I'd let you know."

"Ok, thanks for letting us know," I told her.

"Goobye, Renji and Kon, and good luck on your journey." With that, Hana started to focus her mind, and she left the island.

"You ready, Kon?" I asked him.

"Ready Renji," responded Kon.

And with that, Kon and I ran into this forest, our adventure begining.)

"Wow. I never knew there was so much history in such a little Umbreon," said Jakie, amazed by the story.

"Don't judge a book by its cover, Jakie," staited Renji. "Now that I told you about my past, tell me what you are doing here."

"Fine, I guess you deserve it," said Jakie. "Well..."

When Jakie was about to tell me about herself, a huge crash went through the whole forest. The ground felt like it shook for a few seconds, and the sound went on for even longer. Something big had slammed into the ground, but the question was what.

"I'll tell you the story later, Renji. I bet something big had happened in Kon's battle, and we need to help him," said Jakie, in a rush.

"Wait, what battle?" asked Renji.

"I'll tell you on the way there, Renji. Now get off your but and lets go," yelled Jakie.

"Ok, Jakie." said Renji, getting up.

Jakie and Renji were leaving the cave that they took shelter in, but right before they left, jakie grabbed on to one of the Capture Crystals and yanked it off the wall.

"Lets roll" said Jakie and Renji, simultaniously, and with that, they ran out of the cave, to go aid their friend in need.
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Finaaly done with Chapter four!!!
 
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Chapter 5: A Slayer's Intentions; Who's the Bug?

As the moon shone brightly in the night sky over the forest, Renji and Jakie were running through the dense forest, searching for Kon.

"Well, talk, big shark," said Renji suddently.

"Huh?" stammered Jakie.

"You told me in the cave that Kon was in a big battle, and we had to help him. That's why we're running, right?"

"Oh yeah, I guess you deserve an explanation," said Jakie. "So here's the deal.

Your friend Kon, was traveling in the forest in search for food, as you know."

"Yeah, and?"

"Well, that was when I met Kon. Kon was very kind to me, like he knew I wasn't a bad Pokemon. He even gave me a berry, which shocked me. You never hear of a random Pokemon give a Pokemon they just met food. It was like he already knew me," replied Jakie.

"Well, that sounds Kon. Kind to all Pokemon, unless he sensed something about them," I told her.

"Anyway, Kon asked me to do a favor. Take you away from your camp and find shelter, as you're familier with. He somehow new a big Pokemon was coming near him. He sensed the footprints after a big bang shook the forest floor. So, he didn't want you to get involved in the battle, with your leg and you being tired from sprinting all day, so he asked me to take you away from the camp grounds, only to come if it sounded like danger," explained Jakie.

"Ok, but who exactly is Kon battling, Jakie?" Renji asked her.

"Well, his name is Razar, the Drapion Slayer, Razar for short. He is the unofficial ruler of the forest."

"Unofficial?"

"Unofficial because one day, a group of men dropped him off into the forest and abandoned him, and he started to pick on the little Pokemon of the forest, like Wurmples and Kriketots. He stole their food, barged and destoryed their home, and in rare cases, he killed a Pokemon. So noone dares to bother him, execpt Kon right now," said Jakie, with fear in her voice.

"Well, we better hurry, if Razar is as violent as you say, Jakie," said Renji.

"Right, we better get a move on," said Jakie.

"HELP!!" screamed a voice from nowhere.

"Do you say something, Jakie?" asked Renji, stoping his movements.

"No, I didn't, Renji. But I think I know who," staited Jakie.

"Who?" asked Renji.

"Look up."

When Renji looked up, their was a little red Pokemon stuck up in the tree. He wasn't on a branch, instead, he was dangling from very fine purple needles attatched to his neck collar. The needles seemed to be the reason that the Pokemon was struggling to get away, seeing that he was attatched to the tree. He had big, black anttena's that he kept on clanging together. The anttena's were making noise, similar to music, but the sound was distrubing.

"Help!!" yelled the Pokemon again. "Can someone get me down?"

"Sure, we can help," screamed Jakie to the Pokemon.

Jakie leaped up next to the tree, and her claw started to glow. She slashed her claw near the Pokemon, but not close enought to hurt it. When her claw stopped glowing, the pins that once held the Pokemon together with the tree fell silently to the ground, and soon after, the Pokemon started to fall as well.

"Renji, catch him!!" yelled Jakie.

"Gotcha'!" Renji yelled back, positioning himself to capture the falling Pokemon.

The Pokemon was falling at a fast rate. Renji tried to position himself so he would fall as well with the impact, but when the Pokemon landed on him, he instantly fell to the ground, with the Pokemon on his back.

"Gah!! Man, for a little bug, you're heavy. No offense," said Renji.

"Thank you, thank you, thank you!!"exclaimed the bug Pokemon. "If it weren't for you two, I would still be dangling from the tree!"

"Don't mention it, little dude," staited Jakie. "But what were you doing pinned up to a tree?"

"Well, Razar was tromping through the forest, evil as ever, and I was sleeping quietly through the night. Well, he woke me up, and he integregated me about waking him up. I tried to tell him that I had no idea what he was talking about, and that I was sleeping the whole night,"
stammered the bug, scared.

"So, what happened?" asked Jakie.

"Well, he wasn't too happy with my answer, so he pin missled me to the tree. I heard him curse under his breath under that, and say it served me right."

"That jerk," said Renji.

"But it's Ok now. You guys came to my rescue, and I am no longer stuck to the tree. Thank you, thank you, thank you," excitedly siad the bug, bowing to them, practically kissing their feet.

"Thank...you?" said Renji, confused and a little creeped out about the bugs actions.

"Don't mention it lil' dude," said Jakie.

The bug looked up from his spot and looked at Jakie. He seemed completly normal until he looked at Jakie's hand.

"Is, is that what I think it is?" said the bug, all excited and jumpy.

"Is what?" asked Jakie.

Jakie looked down at her hands, and when she looked in the left hand, she was surprised that a Capture Crystal was placed there.

"How'd this get in my hands?"

"Yes, it's a Capture Crystal!!" said the bug, jumping around with glee. "This is why I'm in the forest in the first place. I have been searching for days for one. Do you mind if I have it?"

"Why would you need it? Isn't it only good for capturing light in itself?"

"Well, that's its main purpose, but there's another use for it. A use that is very... useful,"
explained the bug.

"Well, I dont..."

SLAM!!!

"Woah, sounds like something big's happening, Renji," staited Jakie.

"Enough stalling, lets go!!" Renji said excitedly.

"Here, you can take the crystal. We have to get going," Jakie told the bug.

Renji and Jakie started to run through the trees of the forest, towards the sounds of the crash. It was like they forgot all about the bug that they had just helped. But the bug thought otherwise.

The bug put the crystal in his collar coat and started heading towards the direction Renji and Jakie went, as fast as he could.
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"1."

As soon as Kon heard the one, he sprinted off through the trees in the opposite direction of Razar.

"Now to think of a plan," mumbled Kon to himself.

"You're gonna have to run faster than that, little Espeon, if you ever hope to outrun me, Razar!"

Razar jumped out of two trees and was right behind Kon. He slashed and bashed all of the trees near him, either slashing part of the tree off or slicing the tree in half.

"Take a load of this. Pin missle!"

"Razar opened his mouth, showing off his fangs. Suddently, greenish colored pins shot out of his mouth like a torpedo in water, heading start for Kon.

"Huh?"

Kon looked behind him and saw the torpedoing missles coming his way. He had little time to react, so he did all he could do at that moment. He tried to dodge.

Kon bened his knees and skyrocketed into the air. While avoiding most of the pins, a few hit some of his back areas, mostly his tail, but this was the least of his worries. Kon just wanted to make sure he landed safely, so Razar couldn't get a free hit. The wind was blowing a little this night, and any wrong movements could spell disaster. Kon decided that since he was up in the air, to land on a tree branch.

"Looks like you're aiming to land on a branch, huh little Espeon?"

"Well, looks like there is a brain under that big hard head of yours," snickered Kon, as he landed on a branch.

"Grrrrr, he who laughs last, Espeon. He who laughs last."

Razar opened his mouth wide now, showing all of his fangs. In an instant, all of his fangs, especially the ones that stick out of his mouth, started glowing a bright purple.

"How about a taste of some posion?" said Razar, looking up at Kon.

Razar then leaped up in the sky, trying to the branch that Kon was resting on. Razar stuck out his arms to grabbed the nearbye branch, to pretty much guarantee a hit.

"Take this!!" yelled Razar.

"No thanks. You can have it," replied Kon.

Kon turned the other way and jumped off of the branch, but he was too little, too late. Razar clamped down hard on the branch, swinging a little back and forth. Kon tail started to hurt a little, and he wasn't getting to the ground. What was happening? Kon was confused until he looked the other way.

Razar was not only biting down on the branch, he also had Kon's tail! Kon was just dangling in the air now, his tail in immense pain. If only he could think of a way out of this mess.

"Dwarbs dnow Besspape," murmured Razar to Kon.

Kon wasn't sure what he said for sure, but he was pretty sure it was "there's no escape". Then, Kon heard little cracks.

"Oh no."

The branch was breaking from the weight. Kon didn't know if this was a bad thing or a good thing. It was a good thing because this could be his chance to get away, even think of a plan. But it was a bad thing because if Kon landed first, Razar could crush him. Kon had to act fast.

"Hey Razar, heads up," said Kon. Kon turned his body towards Razar and placed his feet on his body and ran up his body until he reached Razar's head.

"What are you doing, you little Espeon?" asked Razar angerly, getting ready to hit Kon.

"My plan," responded Kon with a big grin written on his face.

"Huh? What do you mean..."

Before Razar could finish his sentence, his back slammed into the ground hard. Kon knew that Razar would be too busy to pay attention to landing safely if he could distract him, and how he distracted him made it so that Razar would get more damage done, and he would be in mint condition.

Razar got knocked out from the fall, so Kon had enough time to get away. He started to run out of the battle scene, and he was fine until after a few minutes of running. He started to notice that with each minute he was getting weaker and weaker, and his tail started to hurt worse. Kon had no idea why it was hurting, until he remembered something.

"It was the bite," Kon suddently remembered. Now that he remembered, he had no idea how his tail escaped from Razar's clutches, unless Razar let him. Drapions had a habit of letting go of prey when all of the necessary poision was taken in.

Kon looked behind at his tail. There were two cuts, one on each end of his tail, and little streks of blood dripped out of them. If one looked closely enough, you could see hints of purple in the blood.

"I've been poisioned," said Kon to himself. "I better find a Pecha berry quick, before it's too late."

"Oh, I wouldn't count on that, little Espeon."

"Razar!!" excitedly staited Kon.

"That's right, heh heh," snickered Razar with glee, but still evily.

"How are you walking? I thought you got K.O."

"Foolish little Espeon," snickered Razar. "It would take more than a little hit on the back to stop big, strong me. I also see you're slowing down. Has my poision takened effect yet?"

"Wait, how did you know I was poisioned?" asked Kon, surprised.

"Well, it was my intention to poision you in the first place, little Espeon. Though I had no guarentee that it would work, my Poision Fang was pretty strong that time, so I had a good feeling," explained Razar.

"Well, it doesn't matter. I'll just find a Pecha berry and stop the poision."

"Good luck with that," snickered Razar. " I have poisioned so many Pokemon in my forest that most have had to use a Pecha berry. Over use of the berry practically made the berry extinct in this forest, or in the next few miles from here.

"Figures," mumbled Kon.

"Well, your poision isn't lethal yet. At most, you will be very weak and unable to move very far for a few days. But I can change that, heh heh."

Razar's claws on both hands started to glow a bright purple. He clicked them together, probably just to get his blood flowing, and swept them around Kon, to intimidate him.

"If I were you, I would run. Run as fast as I could, probably out of the forest. But I highly doubt that you will make it even that far."

"Guess I have no choice," Kon told Razar. Kon got up and started to run away from Razar, but Razar was chasing after him, not too far behind and almost close enough to crunch down on Kon's tail for a second time. Kon would leap, hop, sprint and climb up trees for a few seconds, hoping he could get a lead. But after for what seemed like hours, Kon was getting weaker, and slowing down, gasping for breath.

"The poision must be taking affect," Kon said to himself.

"Interesting," said Razar, coming from behind the trees. "The poision in your tail is taking greater affect then what I thought, for such a small wound. Probably because you haven't rested yet, and you're exceeding your body's limitations."

"And I will keep on exceeding until you die!!" Kon snapped, yelling. "I won't let a little bit of poision stop me."

"Funny, usually the Pokemon that say that to me end up dieing faster. But who knows. You have been an interesting prey for me to chase tonight, so you could live a little bit longer. But just a little bit, heh heh." snickered Razar.

Razar raised his glowing hand in the air, keeping his eyes on Kon, so he wouldn't escaped. He brought his hand down, with great force to strike Kon, hoping it would finish him off. But Kon had other ideas.

Kon was watching Razar's arm carefully, waiting for the right moment to jump out of the way. When Razar's hand was only a few short inches away, Kon moved out of the way backwards, just dodging the blow.

"That was close," Kon said, mainly to himself, not caring if Razar heard. But he was too little, too late.

Yes, Kon did dodge the blow, but it was the aftershock that caused problems. The aftershock lifted up so much dirt, that it blinded Kon. Rocks flew out of the ground, hitting Kon and sending him back, and bruising him. Also, the shaking of the ground made it that every time Kon fell on the ground, he was sent back up, sending him farther away.

"Grrr, I missed," snarled Razar.

Kon finally stopped moving, but his condition was nothing to brag about. He had numerous cuts and bruises, and blood was flowing a little bit on his body. His front leg was all bent up, probably sprainged or even broken, and his gem on his head was cracked a little. He had no breath lefted, coughing for air, and he had no energy to get up.

"Man, after all that, you're still alive?" asked Razar, in shock. "Well, I guess you aren't an ordinary Espeon, little Espeon. But as everything in life, you must be put to an end."

Razar made his claws glow purple again, and, skipping the strech, he lifted his arm in the air and was just about to make his way towards Kon.

"WAIT!" yelled Kon, with most of the air in his system left.

"What is it now, little Espeon?" aske Razar, impatiently waiting to slay Kon.

"Why is it that you like to slay innocent Pokemon? I'm not begging you to stop trying to kill me, you can do as you wish, but why do you do it?" Kon asked weakly.

"Well, to tell you the truth, I can't remember a time I haven't loved the thrill of a good fight. Even as a Skorupi, I loved to battle and attack Pokemon, trying to take them down. I wasn't a wild Skorupi though, as I had owners. I wouldn't say they were trainers, and I wouldn't say they were loving, as I never got any emotion from them. But they did own me for a reason.

Now, my owner was the boss of a big organization. I believe the name was The Great Evil, or something. It's been so long, I'm not completely sure."

"No wonder why he's such a big jerk," thought Kon.

"Anyway, I had a job there, and it was to take care of the Pokemon that have failed numerous missions, or try to revolt against us. I was so good at it, I knew all the techniques to take care of them. I was so strong, even as a Skorupi, that I sometimes killed the Pokemon. My owners didn't really care what happened to the victims, saying that they deserved it and he had no use for them anyway. And he didn't care for me, and I will never forget the day he made that clear.

It was an average day in The Great Evil's headquarter, and I had just finish taking care of a Heracross that tried to revolt. I felt like I was the king of the hill that moment, because the battle was so good, and once again, I came out on top.

My owner walked in the battle scene once the battle was over. I thought he came to remove the body off premises, but I was wrong. He held up a red and white ball, and it shot out a red beam. When the beam materialized, a huge purple monster came out. Spikes covered a big part of his body, and he was very muscular. His ears were tinted with green on the inside, and a huge horn stood on top of his head, like a crown. He also stood upright, like a human, and had claws on his hands and feet.

"Goodbye, Razar," my owner told me. "You have done a lot for us, but we have found another Pokemon that can do the job better. Prince, take him out."

"As you wish, master," said Prince, even though I was the only one who could understand what he said.

"Why?" I asked myself. Why was I being replaced? Have I offended the master in any way? Was I not strong enough? What?

"Take this!!" yelled Prince.

Prince was charging towards me. He clunched up his fist, getting ready for a fight, and it started to spark. His fist was releasing electric bolts, and they sparked everywhere. He was right at me, and then it happened.

WHACK!

Prince's fist smacked me right in the head, between the eyes. His fist was so powerful, that it sent me halfway across the room, and I went right into a wall.

I got a little bump on my head, but I wasn't gonna let some newbie beat me. I ran to Prince, opened my mouth wide, and crunched down on his arm.

"Let go, you worthless excuss for a Pokemon!!" Prince yelled in pain.

Prince's arm was hurting, and he wanted me offf. He started swinging his arm around all over the place, hoping to get me off. When he saw I wasn't letting go, he ran to a wall and smacked the back of my head on it, worsening the bump I had previously.

That blow made me let go, and I was mad. Very mad. This Pokemon just comes in and trys to take my job? I wasn't having that.

I remembered a move the master taught me, that could help me with Pokemon that had an advantage. I opened my mouth, and gathered energy to my teeth. My teeth were becoming icy cold to the touch, and an icy mist was surrounding them, for a gurateed icy sensation. I started to run towards Prince, opening my mouth even wider for a harder crunch, and the hit that would be his demise.

Prince saw what I was doing, and counteracted it. Prince ducked his head to mouth level, and his horn started spinning. He than began to charge at me. Two Pokemon using devistating attacks about to collide spells trouble, either for one or both.

I didn't see Prince's horn spinning, so I thought I had a perect hit. Being able to crunch his skull with my Ice Fang, it would knock him out and show that there's no replacement for Razar.

But destiny favored Price. Right when I was about to crunch down, he hit me. His spinning horn went inside my mouth, and struck the back of it. Instint K.O. Though I was out, he continued with his attack and drilled a hole through the back of my mouth.Blood splatered everywhere. He thought I was dead, so he lifted me off of his horn, which was now covered in the blood of his victim, and threw me to a wall.

"Very good, Prince. I knew a Nidoking could aid us more than a Drapion could. Now we just need to dispose the body," said master.

Master called some of his men to take me away and drop me in a field. His men then traveled to this very forest, and dropped me here to die. I even heard on man say "His body could feed the carnivorious Pokemon that live here."

For what seemed like eternity, I lied on the forest floor, helplessly, waiting for destiny to take coarse, and to my surprise, destiny favored me.

I finally woke up, still confused about what happened. Then I remembered the battle with Prince. How my pride was besmeerged, and I let that Pokemon take my place. What did master think of me now?

That was all water under the brigde, though. I had been asleep for so long, I no longer had the hole in the back of my mouth, so it would be impossible to track them. But I swore that one day, I would battle Prince again, and I would win. I just needed prey to practice with, and thats where all of the forest residents that have been attacked over the years," explained Razar, angerly at the end.

"So you hurt innocent Pokemon to get stronger?" Kon said, very weakly, but angerly.

"Well, yes. But it also is part of a slayer's instinct. And lucky you gets to know what the instinct really feels like, heh heh," answered Razar.

Razar lifted his arm again, and it started glowing purple. He was going to strick Kon with his claw, and bring and end to the team of Renji and Kon.

"Goodbye, little Espeon. Cross Poision!!"

Razar started moving towards Kon, so he wouldn't have to reach. But that was his mistake.

When Razar stepped forward, the ground started to collaspes. Razar started to fall down into the Earth, no matter how hard he tried to resist. He stuck out his arm to try and grab on to something, but instead, he struck Kon's back. Now Kon was even more damaged, and, even though Razar didn't intend to do it this, he poisioned Kon even more, to the lethal point.

"Argh, was all Kon was able to make out, with what little breath he had left.

Razar was still falling, and as he fell, he felt a vine under him. As he fell on the vine, two trees started to fall down towards the hole. One of the trees hit Razar on the head, knocking him out, and the other tree overlaped the first tree. Now that he wasn't resisting, Razar fell to the bottom of the hole, hitting his head once more on the bottom, and the two trees covered the hole.

"What was that?" Kon asked himself. "There was no way that was a natural occurence."

Kon then looked around his surroundings, and, even though he has been here with Razar for a long time, he just relised that he was back at the campsite that Renji and him were taking shelter in.

"Thank you Renji," Kon said on his last breath, before passing out.
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"We've got to hurry, Jakie!!"

"Don't worry Renji, we have got to be close."

Renji and Jakie were still searching the forest for Kon, and they weren't thinking of giving up anytime soon, even though their legs begged them.

"I see something strange coming up," staited Jakie.

"What is it?" asked Renji.

"It looks like two trees on top of each other."

This got Renji's attention. There was no way that could be his trap. They were far away from the campsite. Or at least he thought so.

"Lets take a look," said Jakie.

"Ok. Lets move," responded Renji.

Jakie and Renji made their way to the two trees, and they were shocked to see what it was.

Kon was fainted on the ground, lying in a pool of blood. He had multiple bruises and cuts, but the one that stood out was the one on his back. His back was so damage, it didn't even look like it had skin on it, it was bleeding so much. There were also traits of purple in the blood, so that said Kon was poisioned, badly.

"Kon!" cried Renji when he saw his friend. Renji ran over to Kon and placed his ear next to Kon's ribcage. "He still has a pulse, a little one, but a pulse. We need to do something Jakie."

Jakie wasn't really paying attention to Renji. Instead, her focus was on the trap.

"Wow. Whoever built this trap must have known what they were doing, like they knew Razar was going to come here tonight," Jakie said to herself.

"JAKIE!!" yelled Renji.

"What?" asked Jakie, and as she turned around, she understood what Renji wanted. "Oh."

"I know." said Renji, with tears flowing down his face. "We have to do something, Jakie."

"I know we do, but what? I'm not very familier with treating wounds, or what plants heal what,"staited Jakie, sadly.

"Prehaps I could be of assistance."
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To all of the fans of the story, don't be afraid to post. I don't bite:-D
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You'll make a brief apperence in the next chapter, but your main chapter is Chapter 7.

(If you think the next chapters will take as long as #4, you don't need to worry. I just had a lot of tests to study for at school)
 
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