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DarkBones

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I nervously approached my trainer not knowing what he would do. I accidentally froze his bag that morning and therefore he was mad, because my Ice Beams were hard to thaw out.

"Hello there, Sheath," He said quietly, "What's that?" He pointed to what I had in my hand. I showed him 7 of his favourite berries out of 9. He took the soft Pecha from my claws and ate it. A disgusted look drew to his face and he spit it out. I stared at him. What's wrong with him?, I thought, he absolutely love Pecha berries...

"Sheath... I'm sorry," He said, "Ciao my friend!" And he sprang off like a Weavile chasing it's prey, which he learned from me. I showed him how to move like that and he abandoned me. I didn't chase him, but started to walk off into the Johto woods.

I heard a voice of that I did not know. I spun around quickly to see a small Pikachu.

"Who are you?" I asked with my teeth barred and sharp claws gleaming in the midday light.

"I'm Kitamay," She said, "Who are you and what gives you the right to threaten me with your teeth and weird long nails?" Sheath eased down to answer her.

"Sheath," I said drawing myself up tall, "I was just abandoned by my trainer, now good day." I told her and marched off. She followed me quickly.

"HEY HEYHEYHEYHEY!!!!!!!!" Kitamay screeched, "Get back here! I want you to come to Sinnoh with me." I looked at her strangely .

"Fine," I said at last, "I'll go." And we got aboard a boat and sailed off into the Sinnoh...
~*~
Kind of weird and a little wish-washy but this is still the beginning. After a couple more posts I'll put in part two.


 
When you are writing down small numbers in a story, it is best to type them out

7 of his favourite berries out of 9

seven of his favorite berries out of nine.

I forget how high the number is before you can type it as such without it looking too akward.
 
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Well, I know in journalism and other non-fiction, numbers higher than 10 should be typed as numbers, but from one to ten, they should be typed out, if that helps.
 
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