Co- Helper Needed - Academy Somoa

[Prez]

Is there anyone kind enough to help me with my story? If you will the only thing you need to know about is the Pokemon Special/Adventures Series....especially the BW series (I’ll be willing to tell you about it ) I have the first chap done and the second one half way done....it is a Romantic/Mystery/Comedy :3 Here's the link!

http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f244/somoa-academy-yes-another-school-story-d-122188/

Thanks! :mail:

 

[Nour386]

yeah it's great! I'd love to help! and I give you a good point you may want to check up on, didn't green's (blue) rude persona change during the Firered/leafgreen chapters?

 

[Prez]

yeah it's great! I'd love to help! and I give you a good point you may want to check up on, didn't green's (blue) rude persona change during the Firered/leafgreen chapters?

^ True True, that's gonna change later on > But yeah, nice point I'll show you part of chapter two, I can't write much cause my dad doesn't have internet :bawl: So I'm at my mom's ^^ And my the way, any plot ideas? :3 (It's not done yet , I have too many ideas for this XP)

Spoiler

Crystal’s POV
I don’t even know why I’m here, and all I remember are men in black shades attacking me with Gallades, and then I woke up inside of the gates of Somoa.

I looked around at my surroundings, nice place but....where am I? I looked to my right and I saw….Gold? He was unconscious, what was he doing here? There was also from what I remember, Sapphire and Ruby. They too were knocked out, Sapph with a huge gash on her shoulder. I then looked to my left, and I saw Blue, Green, Red, and Yellow. They were in a pile, toppled over each other. There was also Emerald near them. Why exactly where all the Dex Holders here? I started to get up but I couldn’t my legs were really wobbly and I fell backwards, on top of more people. I looked at them, it was Silver and 5 other people were there, A girl with a dark pink jacket on top of two boys with scarves. Slightly to their left were to other people, a girl with who seemed to wear a green barrette and boy with black hair and glasses, he started to stir.

“Ughh.” He started leaning up, he had his hand to his head. He noticed me.
“Oh, who are you?”

“But first who are you? Why is every Dex Holder here?” I replied
He looked around “I don’t know....but hey, where’s Black?”
“Who?”

“Black and that girl he travels around with, what’s here name...Oh yeah White”
“I’m sorry, I don’t know him or that girl”
“It’s fine. I must be rude, sorry, my name is Cheren...” He looked to his left

“Bianca! Get up!”
The girl groaned “Daddddyyy, please let me goooo”
She then went back to sleep

“Ok...What’s your name?” He questioned, Cheren seemed just as confused as I was...guess I could tell him
“Oh Crystal, are you a Dex Holder too? I’m from Johto”
“Yeah I am... I’m from Unova, I’ve heard of Johto, sounds nice”
One by one everyone woke up, confused. A man then came to greet us.
“Hello!” He greeted. Everyone groaned at his peppiness.

“Welcome to Somoa Academy! Here you can strive in all you do!”
“Hey! Where are we?!” Red asked, others joined in.
He continued on anyway, but louder.
“I’m Headmaster Colman, I run this school. Dex Holders, I will give you each a pamphlet with the rules, you are to follow them. Understood?”

No one responded
“I said, UNDERSTOOD?” He said frightenly serious.

“Uh- Yes!” “Sure.” “YES S-SIR!” “Ok?” “Meh.”
“Receive your keys and go to your condo. You are free for today and tomorrow, Dismissed.”
Me, Blue and Gold were Condo #5. Everyone else? I don’t know.

“Where are our keys?” Blue asked Headmaster Colman
“Oh. Just go to condo #5, the other two woke up earlier and I sent them there first.” He then walked away.
Ok, than that was weird. But we continued on our way.
Here I am now. We just finished unpacking and met up in the living room.“What are we doing here?” Blue asked “Yeah my head still hurts, real bad...” Gold complained

“Well I think we should try and make the best out of this” White said
“Why? We are all wounded and you want to make the best out of all of this?” I groaned
“Yeah, didn’t you say you hurt your back?” Black asked
“Well, yeah but...” She looked around, mad.

Do you guys wanna hand around all day feeling sorry for yourselves!?!?!?” She yelled, her voice cracking. No one responded.
“I’m not sure about you but I’m not gonna do that! It’s pathetic!! Have fun.” White stormed off upstairs.

We all paused.
“I’ll see if she is all right...” Black muttered and also headed upstairs
“Might as well....” Blue said
“Hey!” Gold pepped up “Wanna watch a movie?!” A movie? That’s random.
“Movie?” Blue asked
“Yeah! There’s Hydreigon Mom, Cabbage Patch Sewaddle, To Embrace a Moonstone,

Uhhh” He dug through the TV’s cabinet.
“Oh! Hail over my Sunny Day, Across Unova with Tornadus....and Calcium Man!” Gold explained
“I personally like To Embrace a Moonstone...” I said.
“Same here~” Blue said.

Black and White walked down the stairs, White being dragged.
“Oh, fine!!!” White groaned
“Which movie do you like guys?” Gold said holding up the DVDs
“Oh~! Those were some of....the movies that....Gigi were in...” White faded out.
“I’d like the Sewaddle movie, Ehehehe...” White groaned.

Those are actual movies Gigi were in except for Sewaddle and Hydreigon

 

[Nour386]

pika? dex holders kidnapped? RED? now I really need to read this to start the argument. and don't complain about internet, just plan on word then post it up.

 

[Prez]

^ Sorry it's confusing :sweat: but it will alllll make sense in the end I don't have a laptop and my dad won't let me on the comp :S So yeah..