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Fenrir Prison. Home to most dangerous and worst criminals. Well that's what was originally thought of it until the Odins came along. Suddenly the inmates at Fenrir became nothing compared to those in the group known as Odin. With Odin reeking havoc on the world, and untraceable by agents, it has been decided to delve deeper into the prison, to a secret area of the prison. This area holds the most dangerous criminals, and now they are promised a deal. The deal is they track down Odin, and arrest or kill them and in exchange they will be freed from their bindings.

So basically we'll be a group of criminals tracking down other criminals. You can also be an agent.

Rules:
  • All BMGF Rules Apply
  • I am the GM so my word goes
  • No bunnying or godmodding
  • Keep it PG-13
  • No auto hitting
  • If you are taking too long too reply (this means by like days) and the RP is waiting on you then I will take control of your character. This will be me typing things like "Mozilla was knocked out" and such.

Positions: (All should know how to fight though everyone is going to be specialized in something)
Senior Agent: Played by Scholar
New Agent:
Criminal specialized in tracking:
Criminal specialized in stealth:
Criminal specialized in sociology: Played by Scholar
Criminal specialized in technology:
Criminal specialized in thievery:


Sign up form: (Special thanks to Xavi on Mewnesha for permission to use this form)
PHP: 
[CENTER][IMG][/IMG][/CENTER] (If you want)
[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Introductory paragraph (written in first person).
[INDENT][B]IDENTIFICATION CARD FOR AGENT NICKNAMEGOESHERE[/B]
[HR][/HR]
[B]Name:[/B]  xxx
[B]Code Name:[/B]  xxx
[B]Alliance:[/B]  Agent/Criminal
[B]Position:[/B]  xxx
[B]Age:[/B]  xxx
[B]Sex:[/B]  xxx
[B]Orientation:[/B]  xxx
[B]Relationship Status:[/B]  xxx
[B]Height:[/B]  xxx
[B]Weight:[/B]  xxx
[B]Body Type:[/B]  xxx
[B]Hair:[/B]  xxx
[B]Eyes:[/B]  xxx
[B]Other:[/B]  xxx[/INDENT]

[B]PERSONALITY[/B]
Paragraph or two where your character describes their personality (again, in first person).[INDENT]
[B]ATTITUDE TEST INFORMATION ON FILE FOR AGENT[/B]
[HR][/HR]
List personality information here.  Include flaws.


[B]NOTES ON FILE FOR AGENT[/B]
[HR][/HR]
[B]Weapons/Fighting Style:[/B]  xxx
[B]Abilities/Powers:[/B]  xxx 
[B]Skills Lacking:[/B]  xxx[/INDENT]

[B]HISTORY[/B]
A few paragraphs about your character's history (yes, in first person).


My SUs:
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INTRODUCTION
You…want an introduction? All I can give you is my…name…Mozilla…which is actually my code…name…isn’t it?
IDENTIFICATION CARD FOR AGENT MOZILLA
Name: Yuri Foxx
Code Name: Mozilla
Alliance: Criminal
Position: Sociology
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Orientation: Bi
Relationship Status: Single
Height: 6'6''
Weight: 166
Body Type: Thinner than average.
Hair: Dark Blonde
Eyes: Violet-white
Other: Scars from things like broken bottles all over his back. On his right arm is a band that holds two daggers with wires attached to them.​

PERSONALITY
You…want to know…my personality…from my point of view…? I hesitate in my speech…when thinking of what to say next. I don’t understand…how humans work. The men abuse the women with no repercussions. They degrade them, rape them, treat them like the trash that they themselves actually are…why? It makes no…sense………………I like reading….romance. The men in them…are actually attractive…and gentlemen…Movies are boring. They have no imagination…no originality, and they suck it from those viewing…sports are pathetic too. Men crashing into each other and getting injured and then calling it fun. The women’s sports aren’t televised like men’s. It’s just another sexist aspect of society…I may be male but I have never acted like those pigs. My support is only for women…it’s why I’ve killed so many of those bastards…Also ever touch a child; I will kill you regardless of your sex.

ATTITUDE TEST INFORMATION ON FILE FOR AGENT MOZILLA
Mozilla acts emotionless and heartless. However it has been deemed that he can get along with anyone, depending on the subject. This is possibly due to the fact that he has been labeled as a psychopath, and thus has the ability to fake emotions perfectly, though he doesn’t seem to try to often unless it benefits him. He seems to highly dislike men who treat woman as unequal, while he himself treats them as equals. He is hard to control when he finds out about a man abusing his wife or something of the likes, being he tries to go and kill the man. He doesn’t care about the reverse, saying “it’s the karma of their idiocy.” He still identifies as a man, and is normally easy to satiate with romance novels, his favorite being a series known as Black Dagger Brotherhood. He does not like movies as previously mentioned, but seems to have no problem with videogames. He is also protective of children and has killed people in public for abusing them. He is honest of his opinions and does not harm other without knowing about them, or in self-defense, the former usually ending up with him killing them. He has a hitch in his speech, but this will disappear if he what is presumed to be engrossment, with what he is talking about.


NOTES ON FILE FOR AGENT MOZILLA
Weapons/Fighting Style: Mozilla uses two daggers with wires attached to the handles.
Abilities/Powers: He is adept at knowing what caused injuries. Due to his years of killing for the abused and being abused, he has become quite skilled at telling what caused an injury, if it was actually falling, or a punch, or whether it was a knife or paper cut, he can almost always identify it. Likewise he is adept at gathering information socially due to his ability to feign emotions perfectly and able to control his real emotions to fit the situation. He is also physically fit oddly enough, despite his thin frame. He is better at attacking from afar though using his wires, and using them to stab opponents with the daggers. He is best against men, usually taking away their chances of having children first, and then killing them.
Skills Lacking: He is not the best at making plans, or anything that might have needed schooling as he was self-taught and thus not sure what to actually learn. He is bad at timing when he works with others and thus is better off under someone’s leadership.​

HISTORY
You…want to know my history…now? I guess the only way….to know it is for…me to tell you. My father was a drunken bastard…who would abuse my mother…beat her with his fists…and me as well when I was older. I had put up with it for so…many years, he even started breaking glass bottles…on my back. I couldn’t go to the hospital…without my father becoming more pissed off. I always just let him finish and then did the best I could in front of our bathroom mirror. I was so injured that I could never go to school, so I started sneaking off to the library, and getting books to learn from them. I was seventeen when I snapped. My father beat my mother to death, and then lunged after me. I took a bottle and smashed it against a wall, breaking it, and then I shoved the broken part right into his face, especially the eyes. After I took away his eye sight I grabbed a knife and made sure that he would never have the ability to produce children again. He ended up in the hospital telling them it was me, but he didn’t even know how to describe his own son’s appearance so it was easy for me to sneak in and put some coke in the IV. I mean soda, not the drug. It replaced the medicine that was in it and he died from not having it. They couldn’t find me after that. I started to find out a lot more about this world by walking around in it. Anytime I found a woman who was injured in anyway, I charmed her into telling me who did it, the truth. Every time I found out it was a man, I tracked him down and killed him. I did the same with children, killed their abusive parents. Filth creates more filth in this world, thus its best to kill it all before it can.

I had mostly got away due to people being unable to describe me without seeming crazy or just getting it wrong. I eventually was caught and locked up here. When Odin came along, they took note of my skills, and they offered me this job. Since we are destroying filth, I don’t mind it. It’s better than being executed, or rotting away somewhere. Anything else you want to know?
 
Can I reserve the agent.
 
Thievery, if possible (since stealth is taken)
 
(If you want)
INTRODUCTION
My name is Milla Scarlet. I have just recently became an agent, my skill in fighting and decision making is second to none. I pride myself on my internal and external strength, and I refuse to let others get away with injustice in this world. This all started when I was at the age of 8, a little girl raised in new york, when my parents were robbed and killed during a brutal mugging. From this point on, I refused to idly stand by and let others feel the horrible pain I felt deep within my heart. I trained myself in martial arts, and became a bounty hunter. After spending my teenage years balancing High school with Bounty Hunting, I was offered a post as an agent. My latest assignment seems to be with several former criminals whom were promised freedom in exchange for their services for dealing with an enemy organization known as "Odin". While I wouldn't trust these brutes handling simple tasks like wielding a butter knife, if my superiors feel the need to utilize their abilities, then I will abide by their command. (However, this doesn't mean I won't keep a tight leash on all of them)
Milla
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Name: Milla Scarlet
Code Name: N/A
Alliance: Agent
Position: Field Agent
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Orientation: Heterosexual
Relationship Status: Single
Height: 5,3
Weight: 103 lbs.
Body Type: Slender hourglass figure.
Hair: Icy blonde, waist length.
Eyes: Icy Blue
Other: N/A​

PERSONALITY
If I were to describe my personality, I would say I am a serious hardworking individual, who is completely unwilling to be used or manipulated. I will not tollerate goofing off, or criminal acts under my watch, and any such action will be punished SEVERELY. I'm willing to get violent if the situation persists, however I reframe from outright killing my target unless absolutely needed. I can't stand perverted men, and I will retort with verbal attacks when being mistreated.

For my hobbies, I enjoy reading along with painting. I also enjoys cooking, being slightly decent at it. My favorite flowers are roses, but I tend to prefer white ones. My colleagues accuse me of being a major chocoholic, and I'm afraid their may be some evidence behind their claims. Lastly, I'm not afraid to show some skin, primarily my legs, but anything from the waist up is out of the question.
ATTITUDE TEST INFORMATION ON FILE FOR AGENT
Milla is serious and proud individual, who puts a lot of pride in her abilities. She comes across as distant and aloof, and can be quite condescending to those she's working with. None the less, she's capable of showing quite of bit of compassion when she feels like it. Milla's known to be fairly haughty and graceful in battle, and has an iron will that refuses to give in. If any weak points should be noted. Milla has the habit of placing the world on her shoulders, and refuses to let others help her in her goals. Finally, she has several trust issues stemming from her childhood.


NOTES ON FILE FOR AGENT
Weapons/Fighting Style: Milla excels at hand to combat, and often uses acrobatics in battle that look graceful and agile. Milla's form of martial arts tends to place a lot of emphasis on strong and quick kicks to harm the foe.
Abilities/Powers: Milla's prowess in battle is astounding, her movements being graceful and elegant, and her strikes being quick, precise, and powerful. Despite her small stature, she's demonstrated a great amount of physical strength and stamina, and is even capable of smashing a pike bricks with a single kick.
Skills Lacking: Milla's lack of long ranged attacks hurts her overall battle style, and she has poor aim, which limits her ability to use fire arms effectively. Milla is also rather frail in terms of defense, not wearing a lot of protective gear so her movement isn't inhibited.​
 
@Naoto; Okay several problems. They are supposed to have code names, and you choose it, and there are several places where you are supposed to put it, look at my SU to see. Also the history is its own section so I don't know why you shoved it with the introduction because it doesn't belong there.
 
INTRODUCTION
My name is Elize Bedford, and this is stupid. I don't give a hot damn about any Odins. I would be telling you to shove it if I didn't miss seeing the night sky so much. I miss the freedom of being able to melt into the shadows, to see without being seen. So I'm on board, but if you start demanding too much of me, I'll be gone and the idea of you finding me is laughable. And don't you dare call me by my name. You call me Dream or you call me nothing.
IDENTIFICATION CARD FOR AGENT DREAM
Name: Elizabeth Marie Bedford
Code Name: Dream
Alliance: Criminal
Position: Stealth
Age: 25
Sex: Female
Orientation: Bisexual
Relationship Status: Single
Height: 5' 5''
Weight: 98 lbs, 4 ounces
Body Type: Thin and short. Petite, for lack of a better word.
Hair: Black, cut short directly below her ears. Has a couple faded streaks of dark purple.
Eyes: Forest green
Other:​

PERSONALITY
What, you want me to describe my own personality? Fine, but you won't like it. I don't tend to like people, especially if they're rich. I'm snappy and sarcastic and make people cry with just words, and sometimes I enjoy it. I'm violent, and you better believe it, you government hippies. I put a man in the hospital for delivering my paper late. I'm proud of it, too. So shove off. I'm done now.

ATTITUDE TEST INFORMATION ON FILE FOR AGENT
Dream, as she prefers to be called, is very violent. She is nearly incapable of cooperation with anyone. She houses an intense hatred of the upper class, possibly due to trauma in her past. She kept people at a distance by mouthing off to everyone she was in contact with. She was observed crying when she was kept in a room with no windows, however, and this is likely due to an extreme love of her freedom that she has already expressed. She is sensitive about her sexuality and height, and whenever someone asked, they were either punched or kicked in sensitive areas. Several things she has said have been proven to be false, hinting she is a compulsive liar.


NOTES ON FILE FOR AGENT
Weapons/Fighting Style: Two unregistered pistols, with silencers so the shots aren't heard, on a gun belt around her waist, and a dagger strapped to her underarm.
Abilities/Powers: Can camouflage herself, especially against shadows, but also against different terrains, and she's an expert at slipping past any sort of security undetected, and can pick locks. She is also a dead shot with her pistols.
Skills Lacking: Lacks any sort of physical strength, something emphasized by her small built. And while she can defy any sort of manual lock, guards, and cameras, electronic locks are the death of her.​

HISTORY
Total hell. Do I have to? Ah, whatever. I grew up in a rich family. My mother was a wonderful, caring woman, but my father was a total ass. He never took care of me or my little brother. I loved my brother, man. You know, his name was Owen. I think I'm the only one who even remembers his name. So, me and my little bro and my mom, we were real close. One day, my mom catches my asshat of a father cheating on her with a porno chick. She asked for a divorce and my dad gave it to her, splitting everything up. Including me and Owen. I wanted to be the one to go with my dad. I didn't want that for my little bro. But the judge ruled that I would go with my mom. Owen was going with my dad. I couldn't let that happen, after all I had learned about my dad. He wouldn't be a good parent to my little bro, and I could let that happen. I honestly would kill myself. But I didn't. I killed my dad instead, man, and I took my bro to my mom and ran away. I knew I was guilty. I was eighteen at the time, old enough to be tried as an adult, and I knew there was enough evidence to convict me. I ran away. Ran for years, stole shit when I realized I was a lost cause. You government dicks were chasing me the whole time. So there, that's my story. Now piss off.
 
INTRODUCTION
Cold greetings, my friend. Would you like a cup of tea? -snicker- No? Wasn't I supposed to be polite? Eh, fuck that. Call me Naga, Psycho, Crazy - whatever floats your damn boat. I really don't give a shit if you're gonna question me, your questions are the exact damn same questions since I got here. It'll take a hell of a lot to interrogate me, just warning you. Oh, your little agent is going to set me free? How cute. Now go die in a hole.
IDENTIFICATION CARD FOR AGENT NAGA
Name: Daichi Nagamaki
Code Name: Naga
Alliance: Criminal
Position: Thievery
Age: 21
Sex: Male
Orientation: Heterosexual
Relationship Status: Single
Height: 5' 2"
Weight: 191 lbs.
Body Type: Lean, wiry
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Other: Daichi is Japanese. He also cusses a lot.​

PERSONALITY
Ah, so you'd like to know me? -chuckle- I am a fairly sarcastic person who has a problem with my sadism. You could call me a psychopath, or a smart-aleck, whichever floats your boat. I hate being corrected, if that makes sense to you.. I prefer to work alone, unless I of course am required to. Hehe, better keep your valuables in a safe place; it would be a shame if they were to disappear..

ATTITUDE TEST INFORMATION ON FILE FOR AGENT NAGA
Naga, as everyone calls him, has a split personality disorder. He is a very sarcastic and sadistic sociaopath who strongly dislikes others for no apparent reason. He has an extensive vocabulary of curse words, and likes to use his persuasive ways to commit theft. His intelligence level is unknown, but suspected to be fairly high.


NOTES ON FILE FOR AGENT NAGA
Weapons/Fighting Style: Naga uses two hidden blades as self defense, but he also uses them to pick locks. He also carries numerous knives and a blowtorch.
Abilities/Powers: Naga can easily deactivate bombs, detonate bombs, and pick locks. Electronic locks are a bit of a hassle, but he is still able to deactivate them.
Skills Lacking: He majorly lacks muscle mass, and fighting techniques. While he is very fast and cunning, he lacks honesty and strength.​

HISTORY
Well, damn. It's been a while since I could remember.. Ah, yes. I grew up in the distant city of Nagoya, in Japan. I had learned how to pick locks when I was eight. I eventually developed a sense of kleptomania (don't know how). When I was around twelve, I began pickpocketing many people in the city, especially since I was poor. There was, however, one time I was caught. I was hauled away to Juvenille facilities. When I turned sixteen, I used all the riches I had stolen, and went to the Americas. I eventually became a legallized citizen, and I continued my pickpocketing habits. At age nineteen, they brought me here. They've been asking me the same questions since I've been rotting here. For two years, kid. Now go to hell.
 
@Heliolisk; I'm going to reject. 1)That is an excessive amount of weapons. Don't forget they're criminals, and are being watched by agents. They won't have that many powers. 2)The SU doesn't reflect a split personality disorder. 3)The personality could be expanded more. 4)Make sure your facts are accurate when talking about another country. You should read up on Japanese punishments for juveniles.
 
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