Double Battle RMT please?

[KimmyGoRawr]

I think there is room for improvement on this team. Personally I think my defenses are weak. Critique is highly welcome


Exploud-Modest Nature
Soundproof
1.Ice Beam
2.Surf
3.Rock Slide
4.Earthquake
252HP/100ATK/124SP.ATK/32SPD
EDIT:It's meant to take out Electric and Grass types that could easily wipe out other pokemon, as well as take out dragon-types. Surf is to Recover Lapras or Vaporeon as well using Water Absorb.

Vaporeon-Calm Nature
Water Absorb
1.Aurora Beam
2.Surf
3.Shadow Ball
4.Signal Beam
252HP/4DEF/252SP.DEF/
EDIT: Takes out Bulky Psychics and defends itself against Grass types. Water Absorb helps it stay alive.

Lapras-Calm Nature
Water Absorb
1.Ice Beam
2.Surf
3.Shock Wave
4.Psychic
252HP/100DEF/156SP.DEF
EDITeals neutral damage to most pokemon and takes out most dragons. Using water attacks on it helps it stay alive.

Swampert-Adamant Nature
Torrent
1.Earthquake
2.Stone Edge
3.Aqua Tail
4.Avalanche
100HP/252ATK/48DEF/48SP.DEF/60SPD
EDIT:My physical sweeper of the team and helps me keep vaporeon and lapras in the field.

Scizor-Adamant Nature
Technician
1.X-Scissor
2.Night Slash
3.Iron Head
4.Aerial Ace
252ATK/156SP.DEF/100SPD
EDIT:Takes out most psychics, dark, and other types my other pokemon can't take out. It helps out swampert in sweeping.

Gardevoir-Modest Nature
Synchronize
1.Charge Beam
2.Psychic
3.Toxic
4.Magical Leaf
56HP/100DEF/252SP.ATK/100SPD
EDIT:It's special attack boost from charge beam helps me out a lot in destroying other pokemon and boosts the power of psychic and magical leaf, and Toxic racks up some damage.

 

[Our Wasted Years]

What is each Pokemon's purpose? What does the set do? What are you having problems with? etc. Please add that to your post or I will close this.

 

[Mye]

Confusing. This set dies to any decent leafeon/sunny day team, and would hate having to deal w/ abomasnow/hail teams. Not really much to change/make better, 4.5/10.

 

[KimmyGoRawr]

really? I've battled a sunny day team before and it didn't turn out too badly, even though it was tough getting the win >.<
hail teams on the other hand, i had a few losses here and there to them lol

 

[coolking503]

I will be frank. This team sucks. Exploud is outclassed by almost everything up to and including chatot. You arent even utilizing its normal STAB. What are the evs for? they seem random. Also, why use 2 phyical moves and an atack - nature? think about it for a second, then use ANYTHING with a special attack more than 90. Try zapdos.

Stall has no place in doubles. If you want a pokemon to take out bulky psychic and grass types, why dont you use honchkrow, or anything else. that is what the comments are for. Not to tell us the type coverage of each move.

Lapras: HP electric has a higher BP than shock wave. Lapras does nothing vaporeon doesnt. If you want good nuetral coverage and recovery, why not use flygon with roost, dragon claw, earthquake, and fire blast/ fire punch?


Swampert: why not gyarados? or kingdra? or anything else.

scizor: While Iron head does more damage, bullet ounch has technetian and is more useful thanks to priority. Otherwise, jirachi is better.

gardevoir: why not use*insert pokemon with charge beam* instead? Also, magical leaf has less power than HP grass.

again:
When writing comments, make them helpful. Tell us why each pokemon is on the team and what it contributes. Why isn't there another pokemon instead? Why does it have good synergy with the team. Also, a type weakness evaluation yourself would help. Try mariland's team builder, and see what your team is weak to as it is. Make changes and then come to us.

 

[KimmyGoRawr]

this is how my team stacks up.
well if you haven't noticed most of my pokemon have surf to keep vaporeon and lapras alive. Unfortunately, they are my bulkiest pokemon I have that can work together.
I was thinking of switching this out of a sandstorm team but I know those are too common.
Well here is how my team stacks up:

well this is my first competitive team i ever build for double battling -___-" so of course I didn't expect it to be perfect.

 

[coolking503]

The common zapgon combo kills your team. I would get a ground or electric type. Try gliscor or flygon out, with a ground and electric immunity