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EVERYONE: - Complete Dragon's Rage

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This is a new story your's truely. This time it's about a boy named Peter who wants to be the Sinnoh League's next Champion. He deals with intense battles using Dragon-types. I won't say more. Take a look!

It was a bright day in TwinLeaf Town. There was a boy named Peter. He was on his couch, listening to Rammstien's Feuer Frei on his i-Pod. He was wearing a red and black shirt, sleeve less, wearing baggy blue jeans. He had brown hair, long with a ponytail. His father entered the room. His father wasn't happy with a frown on his face.
Father,"I thought you were going to enter the league. But I find you on the couch instead."

Peter,"Dad I was going to but mom doesn't want me. She thinks Pokemon are for bumps."

Father,"Well you're a bump. Peter I entered the League at your age. I almost made it but I lost. I don't care what your mother says. It is yours and my dream. Here I have a gifts for you."
His father gaved him a Pokeball, a Pokedex, and five different kinds of Pokeballs.

Peter,"What's in the Pokeball?"

Father,"It's a Charmander. I had one at your age as well. Now go get a trainer card!"

Peter,"Sure dad!"
Peter ran to the next route. It stormed off from there to Sandjem Town. He went to the Pokemon Center. He got the Trainer Card after answering a couple of forums. He also got entered for the Sinnoh League.
Peter,"Thank you!"

Nurse Joy,"Your welcome. Come again!"
Peter ran to Route 2. He sent out his Charmander.
Peter,"Hi there. I'm Peter, your trainer. We are going to travel around Sinnoh, catching Pokemon and getting Gym Badges. Do you understand?"

Charmander,"Char! Charmander!!( Sure thing Peter! Lets go!)"

Peter,"That's the spirit!"
They began walking their route to Jubilife City. They had smiles on their faces. As they were walking they came across a Gible.

Peter,"Wow a Gible! But in this area?"
He fliped open his Pokedex.
Pokedex: Gible. The Land Shark Pokemon. This Pokemon is the first stage of the Dragon Garchomp. They live around beaches and caves.

Peter,"That explains it! Lets dance! Go Charmander!"

Charmander,"Char!(Sweet!)"
They began the battle. Gible used a Sandstorm, making it difficult for Charmander to see.
Charmander,"Charr!!!(Help!!!)"

Peter,"Focus on the center!"
Charmander did so, seeing a shadow of Gible.
Peter,"Flamethrower!"
Charmander did so burning Gible. Gible,"Gib!(Ouch!)"

Peter,"Use Leer!"
Charmander scared Gible with Leer. Gible was so scared it couldn't move. Peter chucked a Ultra Ball at it. He was hoping it would work. It did so making Peter and Charmander happy.
Pokedex:Ding-Ding! Charmander grew to Level 10! Gible is caught and is Level 14

Peter,"Sweet!"
They ran to Jubilife and entered the Pokemon Center. After they were healed Peter had a talk with them. Peter,"Listen up guys! The next City is Oreburgh City. NAd that's were the Gym is! We have to give it 110%!"

Gible and Charmander,"Gible Char!!!(Sure!!!)"
As they were on there way they saw a Galactic Grunt.
Grunt,"No one passes! Boss's orders"

Peter,"No way! I got a battle to do!"

Grunt,"Then battle! If you win you can go. If you lose, you give me your Pokemon."

Peter,"Your on!"
It was a one-on-one battle. Peter called out Charmander. The grunt send out Golbat.
Peter,"Charmander use Flamethrower!"

Grunt,"Dodge it!"
Golbat dodge it, also using Posion Fang. Charmander was hurt badly.
Peter thought that Golbat needed time injecting posion. He had an idea.
Peter,"Charmander stay were you are!

Charmander,"Char?(What?)"
He did so any way. The grunt tolded his Golbat to do another Posion Fang. It bit Charmander.
Peter,"Now grab it and use Flare Blitz!"
Charmander grab Golbat and did so. Golbat was so burn it fainted.

Peter,"Yes!"
Pokedex:Ding-Ding! Charmander is Level 13!

Grunt,"You won. You can pass.(I'll have to tell the boss.)"
Peter went in to Oreburgh City. He went to the Pokemon Center. He asked the Nurse Joy where was the Gym. She said it was in the center of town. But Roark wasn't there. He was in Oreburgh Mine. Peter went there to find him. He found Roark in the mine.
Peter,"You must be Roark right?"

Roark,"Yes. You came to Challenge me?"

Peter,"Yes."
All the sudden a huge angry Dragonite appeared. He was angry because the miners awoke him went he was sleeping there.

Roark,"Uh-oh..."

Peter,"I got this!"
Him and Dragonite began a battle. Peter sent out Charmander.
Peter,"Flamethrower!"
Dragonite used it to, cause a small explosion. Charmander's tail's flame to glow blue.
Peter,"Yes! Use Dragon Rage!"
Dragonite was surprised when Charmander used it. Dragonite was badly hurt. Peter used a Ultra Ball. Dragonite was caught.
Pokedex: Charmander grew to Level 16!

Peter,"Wait that means-"
Charmander glowed and evolved into Charmeleon!
Peter,"Sweet!!" Him and Charmeleon hugged.

Roark,"That was amazing! Come to the Gym and we'll battle!"

Peter was on the green side and Roark was on the red side. Peter sent out Dragonite. Roark sent out Onix. Peter began using Dragon Rush. Onix got pushed far but came back with Skull Bash. They both got knocked out after they used Dragon Breath due to making an explosion. Peter sent out Gible and Roark sent out Geodude.
Roark used Roll Out and Gible blocked it. Gible used Dragon Rage at Geodude burning it. As it was burning it used Roll Out, badly hurting Gible. Gible came back using Dragon Breath. Geodude got knocked out.
Pokedex:Gible grew to Level 19! Peter called back Gible.

Roark,"This is getting good!"

Peter,"That's true!"
Roark sent out Cranidos. Peter sent out Charmeleon. Charmeleon used Dragon Rage. Cranidos use Flame Thrower. It cause dust to scatter. It was in possible to see. Charmeleon remembered Peter's advice. He focused through the dust and saw the Shadow of Cranidos. Charmeleon used Slash, slicing Cranidos. Cranidos fainted due to the powerful attack.

Roark,"You won!"

Peter,"Yess!!!"
Him and Charmeleon hugged again. Later Roark gave Peter his new Coal Badge.
Peter,"Yes! Next up Eterna City!" He stormed off.
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Good story, but you majorly overpowered Peter. I mean, Flamethrower? Flare Blitz? How could a weak Charmander know those? Unless it was specially breeded, that is. Is it?
 
Specially breed. I got one in the game. And sorry about Peter. When I write the next he losses to Gardenia. You want to be in the story?
 
Sure, I guess. And on the breeding thing, that leaves a lot of open backstory for his father, as he gave Peter the Charmander.
 
good. I think a dratini would have been more apropriate. catching a dragonite before his first badge seems a lil unrealistic.
 
Thanks. There is room in the story for a traveling buddy for Peter. You want to be in it?
 
I'll need more.
Name:
Gender:
Dream:
Team:(Has to be teenager like)EX:Charmeleon,Wartorle, Staravia
Bio:(Info)
 
Name: tony
Dream: to catch a shiny Quagsire
Team: Sunflora, Teddiursa, Wooper
Bio: A young girl who looks up to her brother. She is sarcastic and rude. She wears a green hat, blue skirt and a green t-shirt with an upside down peace sign on it.
 
I will re-do it

Name: Tony
Dream: To catch a shiny Quagsire
Team: Cindaquil, Sunflora, Wooper, Teddiursa
Bio: A young girl who looks up to her brother. She is sarcastic and rude. She wears a green hat, blue skirt and a green t-shirt with an upside down peace sign on it.


There you go.
 
Can I be in it too?
Name Eric
Dream to find the rarest berries
Team piplup, starly, budew,
Bio a 13 year old boy who likes to pick and farm berries he usually wears a blue shirt and blue jeans, he is good at drawing berries.
 
You asked if I wanted to appear. Well, here's the info.

Name:Blaze
Gender:Male
Dream:To be the top-rank League Champion
Team:Blaziken, Umbreon, Lucario
Bio: Blaze has collected a set of 8 badges and is now a roaming professional trainer. He cares deeply for his Pokemon, especially his Blaziken.
 
Sweet. That gives the main character a rival. But that's a bit more far. How about
Pokemon:Combusen, Umbreon, and Lucario
Bio:Has a badge set of 2. And won the Hoenn League
 
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