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MATURE: - Ongoing Elements (Original, PG-13)

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Here's a little story that I really want to write. After every ten pages, I'll write a little work that digs a little deeper into the history of the world, written by the character Jonathan.

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Toban snapped his fingers and the logs lit, almost like magic, as he trampled through the bush to the fire pit. He moved to one of the tree trunks that had been laid on their sides in a hexagonal pattern. Others followed through the bushes; most of them were about 6 or 7 years old, some holding a flame in their hands, or a stone that levitated above the palm. Others held a tiny dust devil, others an orb of water. They all sat down and immediately stopped using their powers; they knew that it was story time. Toban then spoke up ‘What story do you want to hear tonight guys?’
‘Let’s hear the one about the dragon and the knight!’ said one of the kids, a boy.
‘No, no, I wanna hear the one about the great water sorceress!’ yelled one of the girls, a Water Kinetic herself.
‘Tell us the story about the gods and our powers!’ said a quiet boy, a young Earth Kinetic. Many of the other children agreed.
‘Ok, I’ll tell you that story’ and so he began.

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Long ago, our world was filled with strife and hatred, constant war and combat threatened to destroy us all. Everyone was at war with everyone else, death was rampant and graveyards gave way to piles of rotting corpses, children were left without parents, parents left without kids. It was a sad world.
One fateful day, the four elemental lords descended from heaven, Earth, master of the ground that we walk on, peace and solidarity; Fire, master of the consumer, war and pride; Wind, master of the invisible, intelligence and cunning; and Water, master of the life-giver, health and the flow of life.
They gave us their powers to control the elements that they watched over. They also gave us something else, unity. With these newfound abilities, we searched out the others who had similar abilities, to train and become stronger. Soon we were at peace, and we were left to our devices, to master these abilities and shape our land the way we wanted. Peace reigned, with out a few conflicts to be heard of.

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‘And that’s the story,’ said Toban, standing up, ‘now it’s time for sleep, you’re all young, and you need your rest’.
Toban snapped his fingers again, and the fire disappeared. One of the Water initiates doused the logs that still burned with embers.
‘I always like listening to that story,’ said the boy who had asked for it, ‘it makes you believe that these powers were meant to bring good, to changed the world’.
A few years later, the world would change, but it would be for the worst, not the better.

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Satoshi raised 5 stones off the ground, the edges crumbling and sharpening into Satoshi’s signature weapon, what was known in his village as ‘The Five Blades of Death’. The scarab roared, its mandibles clanging together sounded like a blacksmith fashioning metal into something or other. Satoshi pulled his gloves tighter on his hand and rushed the giant beetle. He jabbed and stiff-armed his opponent, while the stone blades flew around him, barely scraping the Scarab’s diamond hard carapace. The beetle finally retaliated after taking a few hits, moving its head in for a bite. Satoshi dodged the attack skilfully, but was hit by the scarab’s middle fore arm and knocked down onto the ground. Satoshi lost his concentration, so the flying stones dropped to the ground with a thud. The scarab jumped on Satoshi and pinned him to the ground, attempting to take bites at his face with its mandibles. The scarab’s mouth opened wide, its tongue flying wildly around and saliva dripping from its maw. Satoshi moved as much as he could to dodge, but on several occasions the insect barely knicked his face. The scarab finally held Satoshi’s head in place with it’s top forearms and prepared to take a large bite, just as a stone smashed into it’s face. It’s mandibles shattered, and it screamed in pain, the scream sounding like a dull knife on glass. The creature was dazed, so Satoshi took the opportunity and stiff-armed the creature in the chest and unleashed a flurry of punches. As black blood started to spatter over Satoshi’s hand, he quickly forged his stones and shoved them into the creature’s weakened exoskeleton. Seconds later, they emerged from the base of the thorax and top of the head. The creature was defeated, the last of a scarab nest that had recently been exterminated by some powerful Kinetics. This one seemed to be lost without it’s hive mind, but it was still a competent fighter. After finishing the battle, he burnt the body with some tinder and wood that he kept in his bag, this thing might have been female, and their eggs can hatch inside the mother’s body, so he didn’t want to take any chances. After the body had been thoroughly burnt, he went back to the village; he needed to regale the tale of his battle to his mates.

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The Lion’s Maw Tavern was a popular place to do anything really, and since it was in a small town, no one really did anything bad, maybe a few rowdy drunks every now and then. It was also a popular place for Earth Kinetics to meet seeing as this town was in one of the rockiest mountain ranges on the planet. Jonathan sat in the corner of the tavern, a book in one hand and a glass of water in the other. Though he wasn’t a Kinetic, he still enjoyed the tavern’s atmosphere. He got to meet new people, which was what he wanted to do. Jonathan was a writer by nature, and he’d written books about many different topics, from ancient religion, history, to the science behind Kineticism, but he was most interested in people, particularly famous people. Fame fascinated him, and he always went where the famed were. Jonathan had only stopped here momentarily on his way to Port Barr, but stayed when he saw the number of powerful Kinetics that resided here. One fascinated him in particular, and that man had just walked through the door.

‘Good afternoon Satoshi’ said Jonathan; a smile crawled across his face as he looked up from the book.
‘Good afternoon’ replied Satoshi quietly, exhausted from his battle.
‘What happened? There are so many bruises on your body!’ Jonathan reached for his notebook, sensing a story.
‘A wandering scarab from the destroyed hive attacked me while I was returning from the well’ Jonathan recalled the battle in his mind, and how taxing it was on him.
‘A scarab? Intriguing, can you explain to me what happened in detail?’ Jonathan was too curious for his own good. Satoshi regaled the story of what happened, explaining in detail many parts at Jonathan’s request. ‘My goodness, what an epic battle, I wish I was there to witness it myself’ Jonathan exclaimed loudly, garnering some looks from the few customers that visited during the day.
‘The way I explained it, you were pretty much there!’ Satoshi laughed, a rare lapse in his usually stern attitude. Then Satoshi returned to his usual self, ‘I must be going, if I let these wounds sit untouched any longer they will only get worse,’ he then got up and left for the healer’s residence.
‘My goodness that boy is stubborn, but he’ll make a mighty fine story some day’ Jonathan said talking to himself, garnering even more looks from tavern goers.

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Alba walked toward the growing group of people in the plaza, a ball of fire floating just to the left of her head. It was getting dark, so she was surprised to see so many people. The only time there was any sort of crowd in the plaza during the later hours of the day was when there was a festival, and the Harvest Festival had ended a week ago. In the centre of the crowd of people there was a balding man in a white, ranting and raving. She paid it no mind, until Kineticism was mentioned.

‘Kinetics are a plague upon this land, shaping it to their will without thinking about the ramifications!’ the man shouted. Alba saw many fires go out with the mention of that, but hers burned brighter. Like many Fire Kinetics, their temper altered the strength of their subconscious fire, ‘All Kinetics should be removed from society! While the true humans should be left to do the will of God!’ the man shouted. Many people cheered at that, and Alba’s fire burned it’s brightest, it’s flame beginning to turn blue as it’s heat increased. ‘You!’ he yelled noticing the raging fire, ‘are a plague on this earth, removed yourself from this messenger’s presence!’ Many people agreed, yelling at her to go away.
‘Why should I? Who are you to judge who should be allowed to live and who should die?’ Alba yelled above the crowd, her fire turning white hot.
‘I am not the judge simply the bailiff, the Lord is the judge of the court that is Palas, and he has decreed that all Kinetics should perish!’ People began to crowd around Alba, but backed away as her subconscious fire began to grow in size and ferocity. Alba suddenly felt a sharp pain on the back of her head, and she fell with a thud against the cold pavement of the plaza. Her fire fizzled out as she collapsed to the ground.
‘You have been judged by God, and he decrees that you should die. God must use his servants to act out his will, so I will kill in the name of God’ exclaimed the man as Alba fell. He then drew a dagger, and proceeded to stab it into Alba’s neck several times. ‘I am Mercutio Salamine, and I am God’s messenger!’ the crowd cheered, ‘I will be here again tomorrow, perhaps we can deal with more of these heretics’.
 
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Satoshi got up from the bed; his wounds had been cleaned and bandaged, though he didn’t remember it happening.

‘Good you’re up’ Satoshi looked to his right and saw a middle-aged woman sitting on a chair beside the bed. She was about 5’4” with a tan complexion and her long brown hair had streaks of grey in it.
‘What happened Stella?’ Satoshi asked politely, one of his principles was to respect his elders, his teacher had taught him that.
‘After a brief conversation at the door, you collapsed. I slowly dragged you to the bedroom and bandaged your wounds. Nothing to serious, but you shouldn’t do any fighting for a while,’ Stella smiled, ‘Y’know, you’re really heavy, must be all those well toned muscles’ she lifted a few millilitres of water from the glass beside the bed and watered her plants.
‘It’s amazing how good Water Kinetics are at healing’ Satoshi remarked.
‘Water cleans the body, calms the mind and soothes the being’ Stella said, lifting a few more drops of water from the glass.
‘So can I leave?’ Satoshi asked.
‘You may, but remember not to do anything to strenuous, try not to train very hard. The last thing I need is you coming in here again’ she laughed. Satoshi proceeded to get up, ignoring the pain in his stomach and chest.

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Jonathan was waiting outside of Stella’s house when Satoshi emerged. He rushed to his side, ready to help, but Satoshi looked at him in his usual way and Jonathan backed off. Satoshi usually didn’t need to speak, people were very intimidated by him. He was a large man, about 6’5” with toned muscles from years of training, his skin was very tan, as he enjoyed training outside, and usually only wore pants and sandals. He was in his late 20s, so he was in his prime and soon he would be finished at the temple, as he felt that he was ready.

‘So what was the diagnosis?’ Jonathan asked, taking out his notebook.
‘Nothing, just some bruises and scrapes, one broken rib, that’s about it’ Satoshi replied, staring straight ahead.
‘Ah…’ Jonathan scribbled some words in his notebook. He wanted to write a medical book one day, so he always wrote down what information he could about the human body. ‘So where are we headed?’
‘The school?’
‘Why?’
‘It’s the day that I tell the Master I’m finished learning’ Satoshi’s eyes narrowed, as if he was looking far into the future.
‘Are you sure you’re ready?’
‘Yes, I am, these wounds are nothing’

They arrived at the school in silence. Jonathan wrote as he walked, and Satoshi looked like he was pondering life’s greatest mysteries. There were people training in the front yard with the wooden dummies. Large gashes adorned each training dummy; people worked hard when training the Five Blades style, any who didn’t work hard enough were removed from the school. After standing and watching the people train, they went into the building. The Master Blade was sitting in his office at the end of the teaching room, a large space where people learned new techniques from the Master Blade. Satoshi entered the office while Jonathan waited outside.

‘Ah, Satoshi, welcome! What can I do for you today?’ the Master Blade proclaimed as Satoshi entered the room. The Master Blade, known more intimately as Takada Uzute was an older man of about 55 years old. He was in extremely good shape, and like many of the people he trained; he was extremely tan and extremely muscular. His short hair and beard had fully greyed, though it was a dark grey. It went well with his black robe and skin tone.
‘Master Blade, I believe it is time I took the final test’ Satoshi said unemotionally.
‘I’ve been waiting for this day for a long time,’ said the Master Blade, ‘I have thought you would have done this ages ago’ he laughed.
‘I didn’t feel like I was ready’
‘On the contrary,’ he joked, ‘you’ve stayed longer than any student, and probably know the most techniques out of all my students.’
‘I’m honoured that you would say such a thing about me’ Satoshi replied, blushing inwardly.
‘Always with the formalities, anyways, let’s go to the training area out back, that seems more fitting than the front training area,’ he jumped out of his seat and rushed outside, ‘Satoshi is taking the final test, all who wish to watch feel free, it will take place back training ring’. Many of his students dropped what they were doing and rushed to the back training ring.

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Satoshi entered the ring and forged his blades, the other students marvelled at the sharp edge and even size. Master Blade entered the ring opposite Satoshi and threw his black robe to the side and forged his blades. Jonathan pushed his way to the front of the crowd just as Satoshi entered the advanced starting position, standing low to the ground with all the weight on the back foot so the front foot could move forward quickly. It allowed him to move quickly while still being able to dodge if Master Blade moved first. Master Blade took a different position, the slow start position, which usually opened with all 5 blades attacking in different intervals in order to disorient the opponent, then the fighter moves in while the opponent is dazed. Jonathan quickly sketched the positions in his notebook; he planned to one-day write about the Five Blades technique.

When Satoshi looked sufficiently ready, Master Blade began his attack. The five blades attacked at different intervals and Satoshi dodged them all, though he just barely dodged Master Blade’s first punch by weaving to the left. Satoshi moved expertly around his teacher, all the blades moving with him. He landed a stiff arm on Master Blade’s spine, knocking his opponent forward. As Master Blade was pushed forward his blades spun around from his initial attack and attempted to skewer Satoshi again, Satoshi weaved out of the way of the blades, but was hit square in the shoulder. This pushed him back, allowing Master Blade to pummel his chest with 10 quick punches. Satoshi felt one of his ribs crack as he was hit and one final stiff arm knocked him down. Master Blade’s blades fell from the sky, Satoshi was cut on his left forearm, his left shoulder and left leg. He got up quickly and readied himself again.

This time, he entered the speed position and his five blades flew high into the air. Master Blade knew this technique and entered a defensive position, using his blades as a shield, this was also known as the Flower duh to the shape of the blades. Satoshi rushed forth, jumped using the Flower as a step and flew over Master Blade. Satoshi’s blades finally came down, the force of gravity accelerating them to a lethal velocity. Master Blade was hit by two of the five blades; one got him in square in the left shoulder and scratched his right pectoral. Satoshi took the opportunity to begin his physical attacks. Speed stance was meant so that you could make an opening for your attack, and usually began with a quick move followed by a disorienting blade attack. Satoshi opened up on Master Blade with quick punches to the back and stiff-armed the back of his knees, knocking his teacher to the ground.

Master Blade fell, not knowing what had happened, he had lost control of his blades, and he was falling to the ground. He hit the ground hard, still very conscious of his surroundings. Satoshi moved all five blades to his opponent’s head, the standard mercy position in a fight such as this.

‘I have won’ Satoshi proclaimed, his attitude unchanging, despite his victory. Everyone clapped and cheered for Satoshi. Satoshi dropped his blades and went to help his Master up.
‘Well done Satoshi, I am proud of what you have done’ said Master Blade, a big grin creeping across his face.
‘Thank you Master Blade’ replied Satoshi, again blushing inwardly.
‘I am no longer your Master Blade, you have no teacher anymore, please simply call me Takada’
‘Yes, Takada…’ he said the words almost as if they were a foreign language.
‘Meet me at my home tonight, I don’t get to many students leaving like this, most of them are snivelling wimps!’ Takada laughed, ‘we will feast! And bring your friend along too; he seems to be interested in the Five Blades style’
‘I am honoured’ said Jonathan, who had just recently moved to his friend’s side.
‘Be at my home around sunset’ Takada said, ‘I’ll be waiting.’ With that, he left for his office.
 
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Mercutio got up from his bed and went to his room’s door. There was an angry knocking, so he went to find out what it was about. He opened the door, and there were a few soldiers at the door.

‘Are you Mercutio Salamine?’ asked one of the soldiers.
‘Yes! What can one of the Lord’s messengers do for you?’ he asked, grinning widely.
‘You’re under arrest for the murder of Alba Delian,’ one of the other solders said, ‘please come with us’.
‘One moment, let me get dressed’ he quickly grabbed a white robe and his book from his bedside his bed and walked with the officers to local law enforcement agency, which happened to be an old fortress from some quarrel in the past. The entire way, he tried to explain his reasoning for the murder. The soldiers ignored him, and said to explain his side of the story to the Colonel. Mercutio knew that if he ran, he would be in more trouble; he also considered the fact that he might be able to convert a few of the soldiers at the compound.

When they arrived, Mercutio was promptly shown a cell, with 2 soldiers standing guard. The cell was about nine feet by seven feet, with a bench on each wall and a small toilet in the middle of the back wall. Mercutio crept up to the bars of the cell.

‘Good evening gentlemen!’ he said.
‘We’re not supposed to talk to any of the prisoners’ the guard on the left said.
‘I didn’t want to talk, you just looked bored, so I wanted to hand you this book,’ Mercutio held out his book, ‘I found it a very interesting read’. Mercutio grinned as the guard grabbed the book. The guard cracked it open and started reading.

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An hour later, the Colonel walked up to the cell, he was a tall, intimidating man compared to Mercutio’s small stature. He had a nice complexion and short black hair, with a very plain face. Mercutio got up from the bench and moved to the bars. His face suddenly turned to an angry frown.

‘So you’re the man who murdered one of my best Kinetics’ the Colonel said spitefully.
‘I’m afraid that I had to. Kinetics have been judged by the Lord and sentenced to death’ Mercutio replied, his face turning sad.
‘Your Lord… Who is this ‘Lord’ and who is he to judge who lives and who dies’ the Colonel spit on the ground.
‘The Lord is all knowing; he knows what they’re doing to the world. Twisting it and shaping it to their own designs, it’s appalling!’ The Colonel snapped his fingers, and an inferno raged in Mercutio’s cell, barely touching him but still surrounding him. He stood fast, not faltering.
‘I am Colonel Toban Heye, Inferno Kinetic, also known as the Living Hell!’ The flames roared as his voice boomed. Mercutio still held his ground.
‘It’s people like you who are damning our world’ it was Mercutio’s turn to be spiteful.
‘So be it, we were giving these powers and damn it we’re gonna use them’ With that, the flames died, and the Colonel walked away.
 
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