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Chapter 1: The First Clue
Location: Somewhere in the Sevii Islands
Time: November 8 2000, 12:00 AM, 21 Days before launch
“Status update” cried the enigmatic man whose shallow brown eyes overlooked the island from his dark office and whose body was cloaked in the dead midnight of the nearby tower.
“The time of launch is being questioned, my liege” said an equally enigmatic secretary on her computer, doing whatever her master told her.
“What!” barked the man angrily.
“ ‘If “d” decreases “p” will increase’ they say” replied the secretary.
“No. What they fail to realize is that the real source of the leak is the “a” factor. “d” is obviously down considerably, but because the real flaw is in “a”, factor “p” will also diminish, but not by as much. Now what else is there to report?” inquired the man, obviously bored by the group of fools he called his military.
“The shipment came in exactly as planned, but there is a little problem elsewhere… Our officer failed to capture Celebi, and Ho-oh’s Pokéball was crushed. The military also wonders why you don’t use the J Factor.” reported the secretary, opening a program to log the reports and see how this would effect the plan.
“I cannot afford to let any detail of this leak out, especially to Celebi! This entire operation has been painstakingly planned! If the slightest detail were to go wrong, it would come crashing down on our heads! As for the J Factor, I do not yet harness it and there is an infinite number of ways using that factor could go terribly wrong. Like I said, one detail I forget to mention would crash the entire operation... So everything else is still on plan and the only three left are Celebi, Ho-oh, and Jirachi?”
The secretary looked puzzled. “Apparently not. An officer claimed he used Groudon for the capture of Jirachi, but wouldn’t show Groudon. I suppose we have to add him to the list of Pokémon to capture.”
“In one meeting, our problems have doubled. I can only give seven days for the captures, starting at the beginning of today!”
“Who should I get on the case and where should we go to search for targets sir?”
“Our most skilled, trustworthy, and diabolical agents. Not just one. We need twenty-four agents in four groups of six for this case. One group of six for each target. Deploy them as soon as possible. I can even get the Pokémon locked in a one mile radius if they need it. Surely they can make a capture like that. And one more thing. Ensure that they posess Pokemon at a higher level then, or equal to, the target they’re going after and maximum equipment.”
“Yes, but they’ll get suspicious if we don’t give them a single fraction of the plan besides that it involves capturing legendaries.”
“Tell them something that they think is important but is not. Tell them this: There’s more then one use for an Everstone. That’s the first clue anybody that’s not us has to this plan.”
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Thus ends the first chapter. I'd like to see some commentary so I could make chapter two a little better.
Location: Somewhere in the Sevii Islands
Time: November 8 2000, 12:00 AM, 21 Days before launch
“Status update” cried the enigmatic man whose shallow brown eyes overlooked the island from his dark office and whose body was cloaked in the dead midnight of the nearby tower.
“The time of launch is being questioned, my liege” said an equally enigmatic secretary on her computer, doing whatever her master told her.
“What!” barked the man angrily.
“ ‘If “d” decreases “p” will increase’ they say” replied the secretary.
“No. What they fail to realize is that the real source of the leak is the “a” factor. “d” is obviously down considerably, but because the real flaw is in “a”, factor “p” will also diminish, but not by as much. Now what else is there to report?” inquired the man, obviously bored by the group of fools he called his military.
“The shipment came in exactly as planned, but there is a little problem elsewhere… Our officer failed to capture Celebi, and Ho-oh’s Pokéball was crushed. The military also wonders why you don’t use the J Factor.” reported the secretary, opening a program to log the reports and see how this would effect the plan.
“I cannot afford to let any detail of this leak out, especially to Celebi! This entire operation has been painstakingly planned! If the slightest detail were to go wrong, it would come crashing down on our heads! As for the J Factor, I do not yet harness it and there is an infinite number of ways using that factor could go terribly wrong. Like I said, one detail I forget to mention would crash the entire operation... So everything else is still on plan and the only three left are Celebi, Ho-oh, and Jirachi?”
The secretary looked puzzled. “Apparently not. An officer claimed he used Groudon for the capture of Jirachi, but wouldn’t show Groudon. I suppose we have to add him to the list of Pokémon to capture.”
“In one meeting, our problems have doubled. I can only give seven days for the captures, starting at the beginning of today!”
“Who should I get on the case and where should we go to search for targets sir?”
“Our most skilled, trustworthy, and diabolical agents. Not just one. We need twenty-four agents in four groups of six for this case. One group of six for each target. Deploy them as soon as possible. I can even get the Pokémon locked in a one mile radius if they need it. Surely they can make a capture like that. And one more thing. Ensure that they posess Pokemon at a higher level then, or equal to, the target they’re going after and maximum equipment.”
“Yes, but they’ll get suspicious if we don’t give them a single fraction of the plan besides that it involves capturing legendaries.”
“Tell them something that they think is important but is not. Tell them this: There’s more then one use for an Everstone. That’s the first clue anybody that’s not us has to this plan.”
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Thus ends the first chapter. I'd like to see some commentary so I could make chapter two a little better.