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EVERYONE: - Complete Final Fantasy X-3 Fanfic

darkpikachu02

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I am posting it here after a certain mod had complained about me not doing it.

Here it is:

It was Earth year 2020. One day, a childhood friend, Ben, that Rikku hasn't seen in years tracks her down with his airship/spaceship, the Phoenix. He talks to her and she mentions that something seems fishy about her cousin Yuna's boyfriend, Tidus, because he was a dream of the Fayth and most of the Fayth have disappeared and he had all of a sudden had reappeared at the Zanerkend Ruins after the fall of Vegnagun. Ben was a skilled private investigator at one time and deicdes to look into Rikku's suspicions. Around the corner from Ben's temporary apartment in Luca, he overhears a conversation between a Yevon Priest and a man with the ability to make himself look like other people and monsters. Ben decides to record the conversation on his video camera.

He manages to record the man turning into a Tidus look alike. Apparently, Yuna was working with an underground movement to overthrow the Yevon government and to put in a democratic form of government with the help of the Al Bhed. Ben heads to the Djose Temple with an arrest warrant for the priest trying to harm the high summoner. When he tries to interrogate the priest, the priest tells Ben that he was just a middle man for Bevelle and that Ben can find his answers there. Ben boards the Phoenix and heads towards the Bevelle temple when the newly revived sacred beast of Bevelle attacks the Phoenix. Ben summons the powers left to him by his late super space fighter friend, Sam, who had died of cancer, and summons the sacred space fighing robot, Gabriel VII, to battle the sacred beast. Ben jumps into Gabriel VII's cockpit from the Phoenix's outside deck and summons the super space saber, Gungier, Gabriel VII's holy sword, powers it up, and finishes off the sacred beast, just like Yuna and her friends before him. Ben, in Sam's super space fighter uniform, leaves Gabriel VII's cockpit to confront Bevelle.

Ben, being a born again Christian from Earth, didn't know exactly how to confront Bevelle properly. When Ben arrives at Bevelle's front door, the shape shifting man transforms into Dark Midus, a monster 3 times the size of Sin and had 20 times the power that Sin contained. Ben had rembered Sam telling him on his death bed that there is 4 add on pieces to Gabriel VII that Ben could summon if he needed them, containing the power of the sacred light. These pieces could enhance Gabriel VII's power by 300%. So Ben climbs back into Gabriel VII's cockpit and prays to his late friend, "Sam, I need your help and I need it now! My friend's cousin needs me to defeat this giant monster to protect Spria's Future. She no longer has her summoning powers that she used to defeat Sin." Sam's holy spirit had turned Gungier into the Battle Nexus, and the 4 add on pieces came and locked onto the Gabriel VII.

A big battle had started, and it seemed like that the monster was going to defeat Gabriel VII when Ben had remembered the words of his friend Jin's sister, Shion, "The Gabriel VII is only at full strength when your Mind, Body, and Spirit are at their full strength." Ben remembers the day when he had stopped the shape shifter, as a fake Tidus, from attempting to rape Yuna, and manages to bring the Battle Nexus to full power and finishes off the shape shifter. The shape shifter's last words were, "Yevon Forever!" All of the priests and religious officials had ran from Bevelle out of fear of being killed by Ben. Yuna, with the backing of Ben, Rikku, Paine, and all of the people of Spira, had torn down the Bevelle temple and had built Spira's new democratic government headquarters in its place. Ben had managed to expose Yevon's and New Yevon's 3,000 total cover ups. Ben had to leave to go home. Yuna and Rikku were sad to see Ben go, but Rikku asked, "Ben, can I go with you?" Ben loved Rikku and he had said, "Yes." Ben had taken Rikku to Las Vegas, Nevada and they were married by Elvis. Ben had went back a year later to pick up Yuna, Paine, Wakka, Lulu, and Wakka and Lulu/Ben's Godson, Larry, to take them on a trip to Earth.
The End.
by: darkpikachu02

Ben
 
I'm sorry, but the whole thing reads like a recap of a Mary Sue fic. Don't just give us "and then this happened", you need to explain things with the characters.

And Ben suddenly being in love with Rikku? Totally out of nowhere, like a great deal of things in the story.
 
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