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The long awaited first chapter of my pokemon fic! (its my first one ^_^)
i finally finished the FIRST chapter of the fic i asked characters for! yay! :7up: well here it is:
Chapter 1-
Above an immense forest the sky blackened and a storm began. Suddenly as lightning flashed two figures became visible. The first was a girl with bright yellow hair that stood straight up. The second was a man that was near the end. His wounds revealed however that he was a machine. The girl too was injured and bleeding in many places. Summoning the last of her strength she formed a massive energy blast that obliterated the machine-man. She turned and disappeared into the storm.
The next day, a boy named Ash and his friends Brock, May, May’s little brother Max, and Ash’s yellow pokemon, Pikachu, arrived at a small town bordering an enormous forest.
“It sure is pretty,” said May.
“Yeah,” agreed Ash “but, it doesn’t have a gym or a contest center.”
“Then I guess we should move on.” said May.
“Wait! We’re all out of medicinal supplies and almost out of food!” said Brock.
“And I’m hungry!” said Max.
“Pika!” agreed Pikachu.
“Okay then, into town we go!” Ash said cheerily.
In town at the only restaurant, an aged man wearing a trench coat approached the group.
“You wouldn’t happen to be from out of town, would you?” he asked. Ash’s mouth was too full of food to answer so May filled in by saying “Yes! How’d you guess?”
“Well actually by the way your friend is eating, I can tell you’re traveling.” the man said.
“If you are going to continue through the forest, I have a small request.” he finished
“ I guess we could, we’re going that way anyways…” Ash said after swallowing a large portion of food.
Meanwhile, in the forest, a black and white Meowth, a cat-like pokemon, was busy dragging a very large fish when suddenly a drop of red liquid fell on her head.
‘Those darn Tailow must be into the cherries again,’ she thought. The Meowth casually wiped the liquid from her head and licked it off her paw. Instantaneously she made a face and spat it out.
“plech!” she spat. It had tasted horrible! More of the liquid fell around her. Looking up, the Meowth saw a figure hanging on a branch like a wet towel. Meowth decided to get a closer look. As she shimmied up the tree trunk, Meowth noticed that there were no pokemon on any of the branches where most made their homes. When she reached the branch where she had seen the figure, she stepped onto it. However, the branch groaned under the weight. Meowth eased over to find the lifeless body of a girl with jet black hair. She was wearing tattered clothes and blood was not only trickling out of her mouth but from other wounds on her body as well.
“Mreow?” said Meowth cautiously prodding the body with her paw. Suddenly, the girl’s hand shot up and grabbed Meowth’s wrist! Meowth started to freak out, but the girl raised her head and said; “A cat, huh, gotta…” but she was cut off by the sound of the branch snapping. Down to the forest floor they fell, the girl held on to Meowth, protecting her. The force of the impact the girl had on the ground seemed to shake the entire forest. Pidgey, Tailow, and even a few Hoothoot were thrown from their roosts in the trees. Meowth opened her eyes to find herself still clutched in the girl’s arms.
“Oh, I’m glad you’re ok,” said the girl hoarsely, and ignoring her own wounds, she pulled a handkerchief out of her small backpack, and wiped the blood, her blood, off of Meowth’s face. Meowth was shocked, even though this girl was on the brink of death, she still was selfless. Suddenly the girl started coughing violently, and spitting out some blood. She lost consciousness again and fell backwards. Meowth made up her mind, she would nurse this girl back to health if it killed her! Plucking the largest and thickest vines she could find, Meowth hurriedly tied them to the girl’s wrists, then tied the other ends to herself. Then, grimacing under the weight she trudged back to her cave dragging the girl behind.
Back in town the old man gave the young heroes his request,
“All we ask is that you keep your pokemon catches to a minimum,” he said.
“Really? How come?” asked Ash.
“The forest is a habitatual network for all the pokemon who live there, so disrupting it by catching a lot of pokemon or expanding the town even can cause major disaster.”
“Wow, I’ve never even thought of it that way!” exclaimed May.
“Yes, the pokemon depend on us and we depend on the pokemon.” said the man “and while we can’t stop trainers from catching all the pokemon in the forest, we can at least maintain stability.” he finished
“We’ll be sure not to do anything to harm the forest sir!” exclaimed Brock as the group entered the forest.
Meanwhile, Meowth had managed to get the girl back to her cave, and had cleaned and dressed the girl’s wounds with leaves. She left soup simmering and departed to find the herbs and roots the girl would need to fully recover. When she returned, muddied, the girl was sitting up in the makeshift cot on the floor. She had just changed into a new set of clothes, a purple tank top, cargo shorts, a new band for her long black hair, she had a sword sheathed across her back, and she had replaced the leaves with proper bandages.
“Meowth mreow!!!!” wailed Meowth waving her arms wildly.
“Hm? Are you trying to tell me something kitty?” asked the girl. Meowth pointed to the bed.
“You want me to rest?” the girl replied. Meowth nodded.
“I’m sorry, I can’t. I have to find someone.” the girl said stonily. Meowth looked down at the root she held in her paws. It was the Full-cure root! If I can just get her to take this, she’d recover! Meowth thought. Casually she offered the root to the girl.
“No thanks, I really have to go now, so…” the girl started to stand but Meowth stamped REALLY hard on her foot! The girl’s face turned bright red, and then she let out the loudest bloodcurdling howl ever! While her mouth was open, Meowth threw the root in and then clamped herself over the girl’s mouth, preventing her from spitting the root out, for it was bitter.
Back with Ash, the group was still determined to keep the forest stable, when they heard the scream.
“Ack! M…May, what was that?” asked Max, panicking.
“ I, I don’t know!” said May who was panicking also.
“Hey what’s this?” asked Brock absently looking at a trail of some kind of red liquid on the ground. He tasted some, but then made a face and began to choke. Ash slapped him on the back a few times but to no avail. So with a gleam in his eyes Pikachu used his Thunder shock attack on Brock. Recovering quickly though, Brock said; “Yep, there’s only one thing in the world that tastes that gross!”
Everyone leaned closer to find out what it was.
“This is a trail of blood!” Brock said.
“WAHHHH?” said everyone.
“I think we should follow it, someone might need our help!” exclaimed Ash. So they followed the trail right to Meowth’s cave! The girl was just catching her breath as was Meowth.
“Uh, is everything ok here miss?” asked Ash.
“Well, for one, don’t call me miss,” said the girl “My name is Amanda, and where am I?” she finished.
“Well, you’re….” started Ash, but Brock cut him off.
“What he means is, my name is Brock and you’re in the forest of my heart!” he said in a sappy voice “Wont you help me find the way into yours?” he asked taking Amanda’s hand. Amanda made a disgusted face and with only one finger, flicked Brock into a tree.
“Dahhhhhh, love hurts……..” he said sappily. Pikachu spoke to Meowth; “Pikachu, pi, pi pika! (Is this your human?)” Meowth replied; “Mrew meowth meow mearth! (No, she helped me and I helped her.)” Meowth continued, “Mya! Meow mer mreaow! (I found her badly hurt on a tree, and brought her here, now she’s recovered, though.)”
“So is that your pokemon there?” asked Ash pointing to Meowth.
“Huh? What’s a pokemon?” asked Amanda. “This cat here saved my life though.” she finished. Ash was awestruck, someone who didn’t know what a pokemon was?
“Well, that cat there is a pokemon called a Meowth see?” said Ash pulling out his pokedex and pointing it at Meowth.
“Meowth, the scratch-cat pokemon.” it stated in a mechanical voice. “Meowth love any object that sparkles and therefore often have a hoard of stolen money.” it finished.
“Wow,” said Amanda.
“You see,” started Ash, and he explained the trainers and gyms and other tidbits I don’t want to type.
Meowth had fallen asleep in Amanda’s arms. Finally Ash finished.
“Cool, but I have to get going, I have to find someone, and then find a way home.” said Amanda and she set Meowth down and started walking when suddenly two large robotic hands came out of nowhere and grabbed Meowth and Pikachu! The pokemon cried out in vain as Amanda and Ash failed to grab them as they where pulled into the brush! Suddenly a voice was heard over a loudspeaker,
“You thought we wouldn’t be in this Fan fic so prepare for trouble!”
“Yes it was your mistake, so make it double!” A girl with long red hair and a boy with purple hair both wearing white uniforms with black gloves and a large R printed in red on the front appeared on top of a green balloon basket. The girl was holding Pikachu in a glass dome with a light bulb on top, and while he tried to shock his way out the light bulb absorbed the electricity. The boy was holding Meowth in a cage while another normal Meowth looked at her lovingly.
“To protect the world from devastation!”
“To unite all peoples within our nation!”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend our reach to the stars above!”
“Jessie!”
“James!
“Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“oh! MEEEOWTH! That’s right!” they all recited.
“It’s Team Rocket!” exclaimed everyone but Amanda.
“Yes, and not only do we have your Pikachu but this rare colored Meowth is ours too!” said James taunting. Amanda’s eyes suddenly became very serious.
“OK, Treeko! I choose….” started Ash, but Amanda cut him off.
“Ash, let me handle this.” she said with such a sternness that Ash froze completely.
“Oh, and what can you do? We’ve been spying on you the whole time, so we know you don’t have any pokemon to help you!” said Jessie laughing.
“I don’t need one.” said Amanda and then she disappeared!
“Wha? Where’d she go?” asked May.
“Yeah where?” asked the evil Meowth.
“Why, I’m right here.” said a voice from behind. With horrified expressions and the pokemon now somehow missing from their arms Team Rocket slowly turned around to see Amanda standing on the edge of the basket.
“H, how’d you do that?!” asked a horrified Jessie.
“And where are the pokemon we stole?” asked James. Amanda un-sheathed the sword from her back and pointed it at the evil trio.
“Give me one reason to let you live.” she said in an almost demonic voice. Meowth, Jessie and James all shivered in fear.
“No reason? Not a one?” Amanda.
“Pika!” said Pikachu crawling up on Amanda’s left shoulder.
“Meowth!” said Meowth crawling up on Amanda’s right shoulder. Team Rocket wet themselves. With a total look of disgust on her face, Amanda jumped backwards while Pikachu jumped forwards and used a thunderbolt attack! Amanda fell to the ground unscathed while Team Rocket’s balloon blew up, and as they were blown into the distance, Amanda could make out the words;
“We’re blasting off agaiiiiiiin!” Pikachu landed in Ash’s arms. But, before he could even thank her Amanda spoke up.
“You’re traveling the world, right?” she asked. Ash nodded.
“Would it be a problem if I came with you? I am looking for someone, so if I traveled all over I’d be sure to find him.”
“Ah! Of course you can come!” Brock said quickly. Amanda smiled uneasily.
“And, what about you? Do you want to come with me?” Amanda asked Meowth. Meowth smiled and nodded, happy to finally have a friend.
Meanwhile in another part of the forest, Team Rocket was licking their wounds.
“What’s with that kid?” asked Jessie to no one in particular.
“I’ll tell you, she’s some kind of monster!” James said in exasperation.
“Yeah, but I bet da Boss would like to know about her!” said Meowth.
“Yeah! If we give him some good info like that, maybe he’ll send us some money!” James said fantasizing.
“Well then, what are we waiting for, lets call him!” said Jessie evilly.
To be Continued…
i finally finished the FIRST chapter of the fic i asked characters for! yay! :7up: well here it is:
Chapter 1-
Above an immense forest the sky blackened and a storm began. Suddenly as lightning flashed two figures became visible. The first was a girl with bright yellow hair that stood straight up. The second was a man that was near the end. His wounds revealed however that he was a machine. The girl too was injured and bleeding in many places. Summoning the last of her strength she formed a massive energy blast that obliterated the machine-man. She turned and disappeared into the storm.
The next day, a boy named Ash and his friends Brock, May, May’s little brother Max, and Ash’s yellow pokemon, Pikachu, arrived at a small town bordering an enormous forest.
“It sure is pretty,” said May.
“Yeah,” agreed Ash “but, it doesn’t have a gym or a contest center.”
“Then I guess we should move on.” said May.
“Wait! We’re all out of medicinal supplies and almost out of food!” said Brock.
“And I’m hungry!” said Max.
“Pika!” agreed Pikachu.
“Okay then, into town we go!” Ash said cheerily.
In town at the only restaurant, an aged man wearing a trench coat approached the group.
“You wouldn’t happen to be from out of town, would you?” he asked. Ash’s mouth was too full of food to answer so May filled in by saying “Yes! How’d you guess?”
“Well actually by the way your friend is eating, I can tell you’re traveling.” the man said.
“If you are going to continue through the forest, I have a small request.” he finished
“ I guess we could, we’re going that way anyways…” Ash said after swallowing a large portion of food.
Meanwhile, in the forest, a black and white Meowth, a cat-like pokemon, was busy dragging a very large fish when suddenly a drop of red liquid fell on her head.
‘Those darn Tailow must be into the cherries again,’ she thought. The Meowth casually wiped the liquid from her head and licked it off her paw. Instantaneously she made a face and spat it out.
“plech!” she spat. It had tasted horrible! More of the liquid fell around her. Looking up, the Meowth saw a figure hanging on a branch like a wet towel. Meowth decided to get a closer look. As she shimmied up the tree trunk, Meowth noticed that there were no pokemon on any of the branches where most made their homes. When she reached the branch where she had seen the figure, she stepped onto it. However, the branch groaned under the weight. Meowth eased over to find the lifeless body of a girl with jet black hair. She was wearing tattered clothes and blood was not only trickling out of her mouth but from other wounds on her body as well.
“Mreow?” said Meowth cautiously prodding the body with her paw. Suddenly, the girl’s hand shot up and grabbed Meowth’s wrist! Meowth started to freak out, but the girl raised her head and said; “A cat, huh, gotta…” but she was cut off by the sound of the branch snapping. Down to the forest floor they fell, the girl held on to Meowth, protecting her. The force of the impact the girl had on the ground seemed to shake the entire forest. Pidgey, Tailow, and even a few Hoothoot were thrown from their roosts in the trees. Meowth opened her eyes to find herself still clutched in the girl’s arms.
“Oh, I’m glad you’re ok,” said the girl hoarsely, and ignoring her own wounds, she pulled a handkerchief out of her small backpack, and wiped the blood, her blood, off of Meowth’s face. Meowth was shocked, even though this girl was on the brink of death, she still was selfless. Suddenly the girl started coughing violently, and spitting out some blood. She lost consciousness again and fell backwards. Meowth made up her mind, she would nurse this girl back to health if it killed her! Plucking the largest and thickest vines she could find, Meowth hurriedly tied them to the girl’s wrists, then tied the other ends to herself. Then, grimacing under the weight she trudged back to her cave dragging the girl behind.
Back in town the old man gave the young heroes his request,
“All we ask is that you keep your pokemon catches to a minimum,” he said.
“Really? How come?” asked Ash.
“The forest is a habitatual network for all the pokemon who live there, so disrupting it by catching a lot of pokemon or expanding the town even can cause major disaster.”
“Wow, I’ve never even thought of it that way!” exclaimed May.
“Yes, the pokemon depend on us and we depend on the pokemon.” said the man “and while we can’t stop trainers from catching all the pokemon in the forest, we can at least maintain stability.” he finished
“We’ll be sure not to do anything to harm the forest sir!” exclaimed Brock as the group entered the forest.
Meanwhile, Meowth had managed to get the girl back to her cave, and had cleaned and dressed the girl’s wounds with leaves. She left soup simmering and departed to find the herbs and roots the girl would need to fully recover. When she returned, muddied, the girl was sitting up in the makeshift cot on the floor. She had just changed into a new set of clothes, a purple tank top, cargo shorts, a new band for her long black hair, she had a sword sheathed across her back, and she had replaced the leaves with proper bandages.
“Meowth mreow!!!!” wailed Meowth waving her arms wildly.
“Hm? Are you trying to tell me something kitty?” asked the girl. Meowth pointed to the bed.
“You want me to rest?” the girl replied. Meowth nodded.
“I’m sorry, I can’t. I have to find someone.” the girl said stonily. Meowth looked down at the root she held in her paws. It was the Full-cure root! If I can just get her to take this, she’d recover! Meowth thought. Casually she offered the root to the girl.
“No thanks, I really have to go now, so…” the girl started to stand but Meowth stamped REALLY hard on her foot! The girl’s face turned bright red, and then she let out the loudest bloodcurdling howl ever! While her mouth was open, Meowth threw the root in and then clamped herself over the girl’s mouth, preventing her from spitting the root out, for it was bitter.
Back with Ash, the group was still determined to keep the forest stable, when they heard the scream.
“Ack! M…May, what was that?” asked Max, panicking.
“ I, I don’t know!” said May who was panicking also.
“Hey what’s this?” asked Brock absently looking at a trail of some kind of red liquid on the ground. He tasted some, but then made a face and began to choke. Ash slapped him on the back a few times but to no avail. So with a gleam in his eyes Pikachu used his Thunder shock attack on Brock. Recovering quickly though, Brock said; “Yep, there’s only one thing in the world that tastes that gross!”
Everyone leaned closer to find out what it was.
“This is a trail of blood!” Brock said.
“WAHHHH?” said everyone.
“I think we should follow it, someone might need our help!” exclaimed Ash. So they followed the trail right to Meowth’s cave! The girl was just catching her breath as was Meowth.
“Uh, is everything ok here miss?” asked Ash.
“Well, for one, don’t call me miss,” said the girl “My name is Amanda, and where am I?” she finished.
“Well, you’re….” started Ash, but Brock cut him off.
“What he means is, my name is Brock and you’re in the forest of my heart!” he said in a sappy voice “Wont you help me find the way into yours?” he asked taking Amanda’s hand. Amanda made a disgusted face and with only one finger, flicked Brock into a tree.
“Dahhhhhh, love hurts……..” he said sappily. Pikachu spoke to Meowth; “Pikachu, pi, pi pika! (Is this your human?)” Meowth replied; “Mrew meowth meow mearth! (No, she helped me and I helped her.)” Meowth continued, “Mya! Meow mer mreaow! (I found her badly hurt on a tree, and brought her here, now she’s recovered, though.)”
“So is that your pokemon there?” asked Ash pointing to Meowth.
“Huh? What’s a pokemon?” asked Amanda. “This cat here saved my life though.” she finished. Ash was awestruck, someone who didn’t know what a pokemon was?
“Well, that cat there is a pokemon called a Meowth see?” said Ash pulling out his pokedex and pointing it at Meowth.
“Meowth, the scratch-cat pokemon.” it stated in a mechanical voice. “Meowth love any object that sparkles and therefore often have a hoard of stolen money.” it finished.
“Wow,” said Amanda.
“You see,” started Ash, and he explained the trainers and gyms and other tidbits I don’t want to type.
Meowth had fallen asleep in Amanda’s arms. Finally Ash finished.
“Cool, but I have to get going, I have to find someone, and then find a way home.” said Amanda and she set Meowth down and started walking when suddenly two large robotic hands came out of nowhere and grabbed Meowth and Pikachu! The pokemon cried out in vain as Amanda and Ash failed to grab them as they where pulled into the brush! Suddenly a voice was heard over a loudspeaker,
“You thought we wouldn’t be in this Fan fic so prepare for trouble!”
“Yes it was your mistake, so make it double!” A girl with long red hair and a boy with purple hair both wearing white uniforms with black gloves and a large R printed in red on the front appeared on top of a green balloon basket. The girl was holding Pikachu in a glass dome with a light bulb on top, and while he tried to shock his way out the light bulb absorbed the electricity. The boy was holding Meowth in a cage while another normal Meowth looked at her lovingly.
“To protect the world from devastation!”
“To unite all peoples within our nation!”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend our reach to the stars above!”
“Jessie!”
“James!
“Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“oh! MEEEOWTH! That’s right!” they all recited.
“It’s Team Rocket!” exclaimed everyone but Amanda.
“Yes, and not only do we have your Pikachu but this rare colored Meowth is ours too!” said James taunting. Amanda’s eyes suddenly became very serious.
“OK, Treeko! I choose….” started Ash, but Amanda cut him off.
“Ash, let me handle this.” she said with such a sternness that Ash froze completely.
“Oh, and what can you do? We’ve been spying on you the whole time, so we know you don’t have any pokemon to help you!” said Jessie laughing.
“I don’t need one.” said Amanda and then she disappeared!
“Wha? Where’d she go?” asked May.
“Yeah where?” asked the evil Meowth.
“Why, I’m right here.” said a voice from behind. With horrified expressions and the pokemon now somehow missing from their arms Team Rocket slowly turned around to see Amanda standing on the edge of the basket.
“H, how’d you do that?!” asked a horrified Jessie.
“And where are the pokemon we stole?” asked James. Amanda un-sheathed the sword from her back and pointed it at the evil trio.
“Give me one reason to let you live.” she said in an almost demonic voice. Meowth, Jessie and James all shivered in fear.
“No reason? Not a one?” Amanda.
“Pika!” said Pikachu crawling up on Amanda’s left shoulder.
“Meowth!” said Meowth crawling up on Amanda’s right shoulder. Team Rocket wet themselves. With a total look of disgust on her face, Amanda jumped backwards while Pikachu jumped forwards and used a thunderbolt attack! Amanda fell to the ground unscathed while Team Rocket’s balloon blew up, and as they were blown into the distance, Amanda could make out the words;
“We’re blasting off agaiiiiiiin!” Pikachu landed in Ash’s arms. But, before he could even thank her Amanda spoke up.
“You’re traveling the world, right?” she asked. Ash nodded.
“Would it be a problem if I came with you? I am looking for someone, so if I traveled all over I’d be sure to find him.”
“Ah! Of course you can come!” Brock said quickly. Amanda smiled uneasily.
“And, what about you? Do you want to come with me?” Amanda asked Meowth. Meowth smiled and nodded, happy to finally have a friend.
Meanwhile in another part of the forest, Team Rocket was licking their wounds.
“What’s with that kid?” asked Jessie to no one in particular.
“I’ll tell you, she’s some kind of monster!” James said in exasperation.
“Yeah, but I bet da Boss would like to know about her!” said Meowth.
“Yeah! If we give him some good info like that, maybe he’ll send us some money!” James said fantasizing.
“Well then, what are we waiting for, lets call him!” said Jessie evilly.
To be Continued…
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You don't always have to do it, but try to make the description part of what the character's doing. It makes it more active, if you know what I mean. Also, even if you use characters from the anime you're ficcing, you should still give at least a vague description. Some vets might not know who Max and May are. ^^;