First Fic - Help May be Needed

[Yun]

Hmm, where do I start? Well for one, I am very new to this site's fanfiction. DEFINITELY NO to fanfiction in general, I have written well over 90. But I am nervous because I have NO idea how people will recieve it ^^;

Hm, I may want help on it, but people need to know the story first things first.

It's really a journey-fic infused into an intricate story. The first chapter is just introducing the main character. The second, however, will introduce more people.

The link itself is here: http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/pokemon-colossus-chronicles-chapter-one-burning-daylight-117315/

Anyone think they can help me on it?

 

[Kyuuketsuki]

You're not allowed to advertise your stories in the Writer's Block, so unless you are actually asking for help, this thread might get you an infraction.

 

[Yun]

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