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Forbidden Love (rated PG-13)

Kamen_Fanatic

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((This is my very first fanfic - well, here. I based this on my crush on female Gardevoir. Oh, Blackjack Palazzo. If you don't see any improvement in the future 3 times, can you close this? Or send this to the HoS. Whatever floats your boat.))

Part 1: Escape
"There they are! Let's get them, boys!" "Move it, Voir!" A human is risking his life - for me. Nobody has ever done that for me. "Come on, into the forest!" In the dark of night, we ran. I tripped over a root. "Charlie!" He skidded to a stop. "Voir, you all right?" I tried to walk, but I winced in pain. "Come here. He lifted me up and started to run.

I looked behind us. A pack of Mightyena and Houndoom was closing on us. "We got company!" He looked behind him and saw the pack. However, when we ran though a clearing, he tripped over a human who decided to rest there (imbicile). He tumbled right into a tree, where I rolled into some shrubbery.

I should explain myself - my name is Voir. I'm a Gardevoir, in case none of you figured it out. The human in question is Charlie, a sweet human who protect all who are dear to him with his life, much like how all Gardevoir are toward their Trainers. He's middle-built, has long brown hair (in men standards), deep blue eyes, slightly tanned, about 5'5", he's 17, and weights 158 lbs. His usual attire is with jeans, a black and green shirt, a pure red bandana, black leather fist-guards, and grey Running Shoes.

We first met when I was a Ralts, and he was 3. His hometown is an out-of-the-way town of Humana Town. They absoluty abhore Pokemon and human couples. He actually thought I was a human child! We became fast friends, regardless. His family took me when I didn't have a faimly - they abandoned me at birth. We played every day. When he got older, he realized I was a Ralts, not a girl. When he reached 10, I evovled into a Kirlia. Since then, he used me in battles to help me get stronger, though I forced him into it. He also taught me to speak like a human.

On his 16th birthday, I evolved into a Gardevoir. He was very taken back when he saw me (he even fainted!). Every birthday, he has a huge party. And this was no exeption. It's a wonder he isn't spoiled rotten, since his parents shower him with gifts every birthday bash. Later, after the party, we shared a kiss. Oh, how I wanted more. From that day, I deveolped feelings for him, as he grew feelings for me.

The reason why we are chased out of the town, because, only yesterday, his mother caught us paissoinately kissing. On his bed. Lying down. The crazy human tried to hit me with a cast-iron skillet! Charlie took the hit - it was to the side of the head. Before he passed out, he said this - "I fell into love with the wowan of the dreams. I don't care if she's not human, I love her. And you aren't going to say shit about it. Teleport, my love." When we were outside the town, I used a Healing Wish on Charlie. After he woke up, we ran for our life.

The punishment is your Pokemon gets put down in front of the Trainer and 25 years to life - if we are ever caught by those monsters.

"Ow..." Charlie said as he hold his head in pain. When I got up, we were in a makeshift camp site. "What going on out there? "sleeply asked a girl with blue hair and eyes. "Ow.." "Ash, you alright?" asked the girl when she ran to the boy Charlie tripped over. "What the heck was that for?" A nearby Pikachu (possibly his) said the same thing. "That!" Charlie yelled when the pack bursted into the clearing. "What are those?!" said the girl. "Mightyena and Houndoom!" said a brown trainer with squinty eyes. "Houndoom? Mightyena?" Both Ash and the girl pulled out a PokeDex (the girl's was pink).

Houndoom. The Dark Pokemon. Long ago, people image it eerie howls to be the call of the grim reaper. If you are burned by the flames it shoots from its mouth, the pain will never go away.

Mightyena. The Bite Pokemon. Mightyena travel and act as a pack in the wild. The memory of its life in the wild compels the Pokemon to obey only those Trainers who it recognizes to posses superior skill.

"I think I'll catch one." "Don't! They already have owners! They are a hunting posse!" yelled Charlie. The pack then fires a barrage of Shadow Balls. One barely missed the girl.

"Dawn! Staravia, I chose you!" A male Staravia then emerges from a PokeBall. "Brave Bird, Go!" The Staravia flew high , then crashed into a couple of Houndoom.

"Lopunny, spotlight!" The Lopunny hugged Pikachu with all its strenght. "Stop hugging Pikachu and use Jump Kick!" Letting go of Pikachu, Lopunny kicked one of the Mightyena in the jaw.

"Croagunk, Brick Break!" A male Croagunk comes out. Fists glowing white, he then smashes two Mightyena on the head.

"Voir, Focus Blast!" Oh, that's my cue! I fired a sphere of concentrated energy at the pack. It exploded as it hit the ground.

Suddenly, a Houndoom came out of nowhere and pinned my down. "Merde!"I said right when I got hit. Then, teeth digged into my right shoulder. I yelled in pain. "Charlie!" I pleaded "Voir!" "Pikachu, use Thunderbolt, go!" "Pika!! (You got it!) PikaCHUUUUUUU!" The Houndoom yelped in pain as the Thunderbolt hits its intended target. It fainted, landing next to me. I pushed the Houndoom away. "This is why I hate Dark-types." I muttered.

"Sorry about all of that." agologizing Charlie "It's all right. By the way, my name's Ash, from Pallet Town." "Pika Pikachu. (My name is Pikachu.)" "And I'm Dawn." "Hi, I'm Brock." "The name's Charles. At your service."said Charlie, bowing courtiously. "Call me Charlie, though. Thank you for saving me and my Gardevoir. Got any Potions, by any chance?" "Sure. Which one?" "A Super." When he kneeled to me, I sarcastically said, "What? No ring?" Everybody but Charlie sweatdropped at that remark.

"This is gonna sting." He spread the medicine into my bite wound and on my ankle. I bit my lip as the medicine start to mend my wound. "Thanks." "Not a problem, my love." he whispered. Aloud, he said, "Happy to help." "Why were those Mightyena and Houndoom after you?" asked Dawn. Charlie sighed a heavy sigh. "Brock, you have a Sinnoh Guide Book, right?" This came out of left field. "Uhhh, yeah. What do need from it?" "Search for Humana Town." Grabbing a treebranch, Pikachu used a Thunderbolt to ignite it. Using the flames. Brock finds Humana Town. "Ah, here it is!It is widely known for..." he stops and looks at Charlie like he was a sicko. "For being against couples consisting of a human and a Pokemon," Charlie finished for Brock.

To be continued...
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So, how was it? If you wondering, yes, it was rushed. I'll explain later. Also, I at least tried to tie it to the anime. Part 2 coming soon!
 
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Excellent. However, I've warned plenty of authors about one thing in particular: Make new paragraphs in the case of a new speaker. Other than that, you're perfectly fine.

~Ivan-kun, Critic
 
Dude...yeah, you seriously need to stop with the block paragraphs. And the parenthetical asides as well.

It also seems strange that she'd describe him in such detail.
 
((Here's Part 2!))

Part 2: Rescue

"You...and her?" asked Dawn in disbelief, pointed to me and Charile.
"You make it sound like its wrong."
"That's because there isn't a famous Pokemon-human couple!"
"Actually, they either avoided the press or kept it hidden. I'm gonna be all over the news, watch." said Charlie nervously. He started to pace. He only paces if he's extremely nervous.

"Charlie, calm down. Let's just hope that the Humana hunting party doen't find us." I said, testing out my ankle - little sore, but that's it.
"And how long do you think we can last before it grows old?" He did have a point - how long can anyone keep running before starting to get sick of running?

A hoot nade us look skyward - it was a Mail Hoothoot, carrying a bag created for the little darlings.
"What is that?" asked Dawn.
"A Hoothoot." said Brock.
"Hoothoot?" she echoed. She pulled out her PokeDex.

Hoothoot. The Owl Pokemon. It always stand on one foot. It changes feet so fast, the movement can't be seen. It has a perfect sense of time. It hoots at the same time everyday, so some Trainers have replace their clocks with this Pokemon.

"Is it carrying something?" asked Ash. "That is the Delivery Hoothoot. They, along with Noctowl, are used by post offices for night deliveries." explained Charlie. "Also, give them a picture of the recipient and they'll never forget the face."

The Hoothoot, lifted a picture, and hooted 3 times. Translated - he said "Which one of you is Charlie?" "That would be me." said Charlie. The Hoothoot then put down the bag, unzipped the bag, digged through it a little, then gave him a letter. Charlie gave him 10 PokeDollers as a tip.

The Hoothoot thanked him for the big tip and flew off, to deliver some more mail. Usually, they get 2-3 PokeDollers, 5 if they're lucky.

"Look like somebody cried on this." said Charlie. "Let me see." I asked. He was right - somebody did cry on it. Most of the words were blochy and ruined. I started to read what ledgible handwriting there was. "Charlie, you might what to read this." I don't know how he's gonna take it. "Sammy's been arrested." he whispered when he slumped to the ground on a tree.

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Samantha A.K.A. Sammy is a friend of Charlie's since kidergarden. She a year older then him. She has black hair and blue eyes. Her normal garb is torn jeans reaching her knees, pink Running Shoes, and a pink-and-red shirt. She has a scar on her right hand when a Trapich bit her when she was seven - she made the mistake of petting it. I believe Sammy's around 5'7", 5'06". She's quite tall. When Charlie got me, she found a Torchic. She named him Blazer. Now, it's a very strong Blaziken.

In the letter, she said that she and Blazer has fallen in love. Her father caught her rubbing Blazer's left cheeck and looking loving at him. Just when they were about to kiss, her father came in - with a loaded shotgun. Like Charlie, she protected Blazer. However, the father didn't (thankfully) shoot Sammy. Blazer gave himself up to make sure Sammy doesn't get hurt.

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"So, what's the course of action, Charlie?" I asked him. He looked at me with a devilous look. "Spring her from the joint, what else?"
"I like it, but there's a problem - the guards are extremely good."
"Like that will stop me." said Charlie and got back up.
(Well, there's no stopping him. Once he gets THAT look, there's no stopping him.) I thought with a sweatdrop. "Ash, Dawn, Brock, there's something I need to ask from you. We got until 6 A.M. to spring Sammy and Blazer from the joint."

((Cliffhanger! The actual rescue is in Part 3! See you then!))
 
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Eheh...eh?

Maintain the same tense. Saying things in present tense at one point means that you have to keep it present all the way.
 
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