Frosowl, Kurowl, Lucowl

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Will no one critique my work. i welcome challenges to make my work better not refute your claim. so please any criticism is welcome and wanted. i prefer negative ones. positive ones simply tell me something i already know. the negative ones tell me the problems.

Frosowl the Frost Feathered pokemon

type 1: Flying
type 2: Ice

Ability:
Frozen Feathers
User's speed raises sharply put Defense and Sp. Defense fall when users Physical Attacks land.

Signature move:
Frost Shatter
Ice
physical
pp 5
acc. 90
pow. 150
user's Speed raises one stage but Defense and Sp. Defense are lowered two stages.

Flavor text:
When dusk falls a chilling caw echoes and a bone-cold haze spreads across the forest where this pokemon dwells. This pokemon freezes its wings and tail to defend itself and train.

Hp 100
Attack 90
Defense 120
Sp. Attack 90
Sp. Defense 70
Speed 60

Kurowl the Wight Winged pokemon
type 1: Flying
type 2: Dark

Ability:
Wight Wings
User's accuracy is raised by one stage if hit with a Dark move.

Signature move:
Nightmare Flight
Dark
Physical
pp 10
acc. 100
pow. 70
this attack does Sp. Attack damage and has a critical hit ratio.

Flavor text:
When midnight creeps a wind-like caw bellows and darkness envelopes all who hear this sinister cry. This pokemon's wings absorb dark auras and sharpen its perception.

Hp 60
Attack 120
Defense 70
Sp. Attack 90
Sp. Defense 90
Speed 100

Lucowl the Pristine Plumed pokemon
type 1: Flying
type 2: Steel

Ability:
Pristine Plumage
moves with 100 acc. hit 80 percent of the time

Signature move:
FlyBlade
Steel
Special
pp 15
acc. 100
pow. 60
This attack always lands first.

Flavor text:
When dawn rises from night's maw a shrieking caw is heard and a flash of bright light is issued forth in the woods that surround. This pokemon uses its feathers to blind its prey.

Hp 70
Attack 60
Defense 120
Sp. Attack 100
Sp. Defense 90
Speed 90

the pictures below are sketches and are subject to change but feel free to point anything out:
 
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Naeslkt

Naeslkt the Boundless pokemon
type 1: Dragon
type 2: Grass

Ability:
Rampant Roots
This pokemon's evasiveness cannot be lowered.

Signature move:
Rampant Raze
Grass
Physical
pp 10
acc. 100
pow. 65
User's Speed rises one stage.

Flavor text:
This pokemon in opposition to the Boundary one has complete freedom. It lives within vegetation and can travel through it and only reveals itself to Kyurem.


Hp 130
Attack 90
Defense 125
Sp. Attack 90
Sp. Defense 95
Speed 130

as before just a sketch and is subject to editing so please show me errors BEFORE i set them in stone:
 
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i'm not sure if i should stick with shadowl or kurowl for the name though...
 
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