TEEN: - Complete Godo's Taking Flight small-shots (current; song:Flight) (Teen)

[moosie]

For all of my posts: these are "short" stories, songs, or poems.
For this one:Okay, this is my attempt at poems and provides some backstory to the flock's deity, Hiutzilo.
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Change

There was a deity that controls
The sun, and was a master of
War. People believed that he could burn
Out the sun, so he was worshipped
By an ancient tribe as the creator.
They offered their own for sacrifices,
And he was flattered. But he felt
Sorry for those poor souls, along
With the brave spirits that lost
Their lives and battle and
Women that lost theirs in childbirth,
And turned them into birds of his own
Creation. The birds, of course, could
Move at the speed of the light
That the deity himself emanates.
Their wings could flap fast and steady,
With the sound of a hum. The sacrifices
Lasted for decades, and then they stopped
When foreign people came. Over the
Years, flattery turned to hunger in the
Deity’s mind, and was enraged when his
Sacrifices stopped arriving. With savageness,
He went on a rampage, leaving very few
Alive. It took him years to realize what
He did. What have I done!?
Nobody can worship me and no sacrifices
Either… he thought. But then
He spotted one of his creations flying from his
Godly throne. My creations! Surely
They’ll worship me. That is,
If my hunger doesn’t rise again.
He thought with a guile on his face.
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The first of the reincarnated
Birds had formed a counsel, and decided that
Their deity was different. He had changed.
So they tricked him into falling into a
Deep slumber with the help
Of his sister and her sorcery.
And the deity’s last thought was:
I changed.​

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Comments? Problems? Mistakes?

 

[Kavidun]

Re: Change (A Taking Flight One-Shot)

Awesome.

It would work well as a RAP, to be honest.

 

[moosie]

Re: Change (A Taking Flight One-Shot)

Awesome.

It would work well as a RAP, to be honest.

0_0', I don't know how it would be a rap; it's a little bit long for that, and then there's the fact that I don't like rap :XD2:...
But thank you for liking it. I might just make this a dump for all of my Taking Flight shorts...

 

[moosie]

Re: Godo's Taking Flight small-shots

this is my first attempt at a song (and please note that this is supposed to be country song lyrics...)

Flight

Here I sit,
Once again,
Stiff with pain
And stuck with fear
Girl, I just want to
Take flight with you
and forget
My fears.
But now I’m stuck in
A chair in this
Dark room, with
Nothing to do but
Pass the time
Thinking of a rhyme.

Here I am
Once again,
Feeling like I’m
In a gutter,
Thrown around,
Beat to the ground.
Girl, I just want to
Take flight with you
And forget
My pain
And more

But now I’m stuck
In this dark room,
Staring out of the widow
Out to the stormy sky.
There I was
Once again,
Listening to the radio
Tuning it to the news
Hearing nothing
But bad news,
But feeling
Glad that your name
Didn’t pop up.
I just want to
Take flight with you
And forget
The worries
And more.

But now I’m in a dark room
Stuck on a chair
Stiff with pain
Gathered from
These past few weeks
Stuck with fear
Of what I seen,
What I hear
All I want to do is fly with
You girl, but I’m stuck here
For now.
But soon I’ll be in the
Air with you…
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[Kavidun]

There a tune?

 

[moosie]

There a tune?

You mean music? I'm going to that after I'm done posting this...

 

[Kavidun]

LOL...