(Please read my thread in the Atlas before this)
Prologue
There was a helicopter there, but you couldn't really hear it.
"I'm in..."
"See that crack?"
"Yeah"
"Break it"
You could barely here the explosion. Such advanced technology.
He crawled through the hole. Through the hole was the very core of Stark Mountain, flooded with burning embers, sizzling lava, and the most precious of all, the Magma Stone.
He unleashed the grapple hook on to the platform by the stone, and zipped over to it. He landed softly.
"It's right here. I just have to grab it..."
"...with the hook"
The hook shot right at the stone, and quietly picked it up and steered it over to himself. He directed the hook to put it in the flame-proof case. The stone dropped into the case, without making a single sound.
He stood there, waiting.
Waiting.
Suddenly, the platform holding the Magma Stone sunk into the lava, and he pulled out his jetpack. He flew up to the highest point in the room as the very middle exploded with lava. That's why he came prepared. If he hadn't brought that backpack, he would've died.
Larvitar went right back through the hole and escaped with the rope he had brought along. The helicopter picked him up.
"Great job, Larvitar. We have the most crucial item to our mission now."
"Remember step two, Donphan?" Larvitar sniggered.
Donphan turned on the projecter. The projection showed a Yamask.
And a Axew.
And a Cubchoo.
"We need to destroy who is most likely to stop us." Donphan said.
"Let's go kill them..." Larvitar laughed, evilly.
"First we need to contact the Boss..." Donphan reminded Larvitar.
"Oh! Yeah, the Boss....."
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I'll take any type of criticism, as long as it's constructive and doesn't flame. I'd love to improve.
I noticed this chapter was slightly short. I promise 1 will be much longer.
Hope you enjoyed it. 1 will be out tomorrow.
Prologue
There was a helicopter there, but you couldn't really hear it.
"I'm in..."
"See that crack?"
"Yeah"
"Break it"
You could barely here the explosion. Such advanced technology.
He crawled through the hole. Through the hole was the very core of Stark Mountain, flooded with burning embers, sizzling lava, and the most precious of all, the Magma Stone.
He unleashed the grapple hook on to the platform by the stone, and zipped over to it. He landed softly.
"It's right here. I just have to grab it..."
"...with the hook"
The hook shot right at the stone, and quietly picked it up and steered it over to himself. He directed the hook to put it in the flame-proof case. The stone dropped into the case, without making a single sound.
He stood there, waiting.
Waiting.
Suddenly, the platform holding the Magma Stone sunk into the lava, and he pulled out his jetpack. He flew up to the highest point in the room as the very middle exploded with lava. That's why he came prepared. If he hadn't brought that backpack, he would've died.
Larvitar went right back through the hole and escaped with the rope he had brought along. The helicopter picked him up.
"Great job, Larvitar. We have the most crucial item to our mission now."
"Remember step two, Donphan?" Larvitar sniggered.
Donphan turned on the projecter. The projection showed a Yamask.
And a Axew.
And a Cubchoo.
"We need to destroy who is most likely to stop us." Donphan said.
"Let's go kill them..." Larvitar laughed, evilly.
"First we need to contact the Boss..." Donphan reminded Larvitar.
"Oh! Yeah, the Boss....."
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I'll take any type of criticism, as long as it's constructive and doesn't flame. I'd love to improve.
I noticed this chapter was slightly short. I promise 1 will be much longer.
Hope you enjoyed it. 1 will be out tomorrow.
