Hello some advice or comments on my team please

[Booker]

hi I was just wondering what you guys thought about my team

Gallade with mindplate/maybe choice band thing for attack
psycho cut
swords dance
close combat
night slash

Torterra with earth plate
earthquake
wood hammer
swords dance
(I don't know it's blank cause I deleted cut)

Garchomp with draco plate
outrage
earthquake
swords dance
sandstorm

eletarive (idk how to spell it last evo of elekid)with magnet
thunderpunch
meditate (only attack boosting move I found)
brick break
earthquake

magmortar with charcoal
Flamethrower
sunny day (looking for a better SpA boost but can't find any)
psychic
thunderbolt

Milotic mystic water
surf
ice beam
recover
dragon pulse

any comment or flaming me are fine but please tell me anything that I should change or keep. Thanks

 

[Tina]

EVs and natures please. They're required as per the rules.

 

[Booker]

oh sorry I can give stats not quite sure about evs still, i get most of it like u faint a emploeon u get 3 SpA evs but i'll give u stats and natures just to be sure

gallade at lv81
impish nature, likes to run.
hp:242
a:240
d:162
SpA:127
Spd:211
s:192

Garchomp lv81
impish nature, scatters things often.
hp:299
a:257
d:200
SpA:140
SpD:164
S:217

Electivire lv81
quiet nature, likes to fight.
HP:235
A:249
D:149
SpA:196
SpD:155
S:170

Torterra lv81
sassy nature, capable of taking hits.
HP:258
A:210
D:217
SpA:163
SpD:188
S:126

Milotic lv66
Hardy nature, likes to run.
HP:220
A:117
D:133
SpA:181
SpD:189
S:140

magmortar lv81
careful nature, likes to fight.
HP:244
A:196
D:137
SpA:230
SpD:187
S:165

sorry if anything is wrong with how I did that.

 

[Tina]

...Is this ingame or competitive?

The rules state that there's no need to post the actual stats, just the EVs and IVs..

 

[Booker]

Ingame at the Battle Frontier I suppose.

and I said I'm not sure about evs and ivs. -_-

i'll try to find out.

 

[Envoy]

You can always edit your first post to add whatever it is you need to without having to write a completely new post.

First and foremost: The natures are pretty bad, sorry to be the one to break it to ya, but you need to catch/breed the pokemon with better natures. Something like this:

Gallade-Adamant/Jolly
Torterra-Impish
Garchomp-Adamant/Jolly
Magmortar-Modest
Electivire-Adamant
Milotic-Bold

Now for the moves:

If you choose Choice Band on Gallade, you're gonna want to get rid of Swords Dance. Otherwise, I say go for the Life Orb (which is my suggestion.) The moveset looks pretty solid but you might want to consider Stone Edge to deal with it's Flying type weakness.

Torterra benefits more from Rock Polish than from Swords Dance since it already has a very nice Attack stat. The moveset I suggest though, is:

-Wood Hammmer
-Earthquake
-Leech Seed
-Stealth Rock/Protect

FYI, you'll get more out of the Leftovers than out of the Earth Plate

A jolly Garchomp with that moveset would be killer, but I suggest replacing Sandstorm for a Fire Fang. The Life Orb works for him too. Although you may want to consider a Haban Berry (cuts Dragon type damage by half) or a Yache Berry (cuts Ice type damage by half)

Electivire benefits from an Adamant nature, Expert Belt and the following moveset:

-Thunderpunch
-Ice Punch
-Earthquake
-Cross Chop

You'll have to breed for that last move

If you go for Sunny Day, then Magmortar should learn Solarbeam as it covers all of his weaknessess. I say remove Thunderbolt because with the other three, you have near perfect coverage (only Lati@s and Lugia resist all of your moves.) Modest or Timid are the best natures for him and use the Heat Rock or the Expert Belt as it's item.

Milotic is a wall. So a Bold nature with either Hypnosis or Toxic to cripple your opponent. Then you have the choice of any of the following moves:

-Surf/Hydro Pump (former for reliability, latter for power)
-Recover (self explanatory)
-Light Screen (to help it last longer. Works in tandem with Recover)
-Ice Beam (for Grass and Dragon types that otherwise wall this set)

It all depends if you want her for Screen Support (Light Screen) or for Sleep Support (Hypnosis)

Hope that helped

 

[Booker]

I also kinda meant the movesets thought

 

[Envoy]

I also kinda meant the movesets thought

huh?

 

[Booker]

yes it did thank a lot but a few things
oh well about natures next time hehe

I found that swords dance with gallade is useful to wipe out shuckle and wobbuffet and other of the same kind that don't have really any attack moves and u got a super gallade to pwn what eva comes next but i'll try your way and see how it goes stone edge is inaccurate though and i'm kinda really unlucky
life orb sound good so i'll try it, I wish that psycho cut power was like 90
instead of weak 70

i don't really like fire fang cause it's weak and 95% accurate and if I get rid of sandstorm no ability bonus

hypnosis misses a lot but might be worth a try sound cool with recover/ light screen thing

expert band looks good to

thanks mate

 

[Booker]

talking to tina

 

[Tina]

talking to tina

...Huh? I didn't write the rate, Envoy of Water did.

 

[Envoy]

yes it did thank a lot but a few things
oh well about natures next time hehe

I found that swords dance with gallade is useful to wipe out shuckle and wobbuffet and other of the same kind that don't have really any attack moves and u got a super gallade to pwn what eva comes next but i'll try your way and see how it goes stone edge is inaccurate though and i'm kinda really unlucky
life orb sound good so i'll try it, I wish that psycho cut power was like 90
instead of weak 70

i don't really like fire fang cause it's weak and 95% accurate and if I get rid of sandstorm no ability bonus

hypnosis misses a lot but might be worth a try sound cool with recover/ light screen thing

expert band looks good to

thanks mate

Don't remove Swords Dance. That's not what I'm saying. I'm saying test out Stone Edge+Swords Dance and see if you like the combination better than Swords Dance+some other attack

Without a Fire type move, Garchomp is completely walled by a Shedinja. I suggested Fire Fang because I'm not sure if it can learn Fire Punch. The ability bonus is just that, a bonus. Garchomp is so fast, the opponents will barely have a chance to attack, let alone hit it.

Sleep Support is always welcome, but if you prefer the Screen Suppoort, it's very viable too

 

[Booker]

...Huh? I didn't write the rate, Envoy of Water did.

I meant before i replied to Envoy i ment talking to tina when u were asking 4 evs

i didn't see Envoy 1st post here before post it

 

[Booker]

Don't remove Swords Dance. That's not what I'm saying. I'm saying test out Stone Edge+Swords Dance and see if you like the combination better than Swords Dance+some other attack

Without a Fire type move, Garchomp is completely walled by a Shedinja. I suggested Fire Fang because I'm not sure if it can learn Fire Punch. The ability bonus is just that, a bonus. Garchomp is so fast, the opponents will barely have a chance to attack, let alone hit it.

Sleep Support is always welcome, but if you prefer the Screen Suppoort, it's very viable too

oh ok fair enough thanks but i think perhaps crunch is better against Shedinja