Help with my Pokemon fanfic?

[Werewolf Hero]

So anyway, I'm a strange guy. Likewise, my idea for a Pokémon fan fiction is pretty out there. The basic premise a pair of monster girl trainers on their Pokémon journey thru Kento and Jhoto. It's mostly just a goofy story that I'm writing to have fun. So I'm probably not going to pay attention to the four moves per Pokémon thing. Mostly I want help with my Pokémon coordinator. However I would appreciate help for anything.

My Pokémon trainer Is Crystal. She is a werewolf. She's a goofy fun loving girl. Most of the time, but when she gets serious. She turns out to be a cold calculating strategist. She loves her Pokémon and always treat them with kindness and respect there her pack and there is no Omega and her pack. I consider her teaching all of her Pokémon the attack Return, and having it be insanely powerful for all of them. Also, she's the only one who nicknames her Pokémon. Her starter is Luna the Clefairy. Her other Pokémon listed in the stage. She catches them as are Charmander, Turtwig, Chinchou, Meditite and Sneasel.

My Pokémon coordinator in the Gorgon named Sam. She is a very shy timid girl when not on stage. She think she is very ugly. Nobody else agrees with her. She likes using unexpected Pokémon for Pokémon contests. They mostly are like the anime contests however, they have categories like in the games. She likes showing that any Pokemon and anyone can be beautiful, so she uses weird Pokemon in contests. Her starter is Bulbasaur and might be her main Pokémon for smart contests. I'm not sure what other Pokémon to get her. However I am considering Snorlax for cute contests. Other Pokemon I'm thiking about are, Magikarp, Spinarak, Gramer, Skunky and Sableye.

I might add a Breeder and a Water Pokemon Trainer lader. Also a Pokeathlon Compider who I might just combine with the breeder.
So Ideas? Help? Anyone? NO Elves.

 

[Der_Neuevenmenschen]

So anyway, I'm a strange guy.

Ahem, sir, but I do believe I'm the strange one around here.

Also, this fic seems so crazy it just might work.

 

[Zekurom]

Not sure those werewolves and Gorgons would really fit into the Pokemon fandom... just like making them into vampires doesn't really work.

But try it anyway. Who knows, you might be on to something.

 

[Pikaluvz]

Ahem, ahem, if your looking for a Pikachu FREAKAZOID her username is Pikaluvz.

Anyway, for the first character Crystal, I would make her a were-pokemon. I think it goes along with Pokemon better. Like a were-absol or something... just a suggestion.

 

[Sith Droideka]

For some reason this smells like Mary Sue. I'm not saying it is, but it might be. Otherwise, go for it!

 

[Chrona]

This could be pretty cool, actually. Maybe the Pokethlon competitor could be a ghost? They could be able to interact with the physical world if they focus hard enough.

 

[Werewolf Hero]

Way the Pokethlon Comperiror? And Not the Breeder?

I was thinking the water pokemon trainer ether be a Robot or a Mermaid.

 

[Chrona]

Yeah, it could work if written well, but it's up to you. A ghost trainer in general would be kinda cool, and a robot would make an interesting water-type trainer. Imagine all the stuff they'd have to overcome.

 

[Amarillo]

She think she is very ugly. Nobody else agrees with her.

Isn't that rather Mary Sue/cliché?

 

[Werewolf Hero]

Isn't that rather Mary Sue/cliché?

Normally but this is a Gorgon she at least has a case. Claws, brown scales, Snake eyes. and snakes for hair. She is what Media was. Also she not beautiful, just ordinary.