Help with my story

[sgtbraders]

Hey, I am a new member, using tapatalk for iPhone.
I need help with my story, I want some ideas for my story.
Btw, my story is based on the text based rpg I made at turtlesandrpg.createaforum.com

 

[Prez]

The link made my interent stop working for a bit :/ (That and I couldn't find you on there) But what is the basis of the story? Sorry I'd love to help lol :lol:

 

[sgtbraders]

Well, The story part I am writing now is about the infinite, a rip in the galaxy, and if you find it you will be granted 3 wishes. I wanted to write how they got there but it is to hard to write, so now I am making up how the character got there. I needed some ideas on how they could of got there.
The main character's name is Bradley and he is a squirtle.
The other one is Niveus who is a snivy.

 

[Halophage]

Niveus? As in the Latin word for white? As in Black & White?

:201o::201k::201a::201y:...

Not sure how to react to that...

 

[Xenidal]

Niveus? As in the Latin word for white? As in Black & White?

:201o::201k::201a::201y:...

Not sure how to react to that...

What's wrong with that? It's actually quite creative, using a word that is not obvious that still means "white"

 

[Halophage]

I know. That's why I'm not sure.