I made some music

[thestarjar]

Through about 30 non-consecutive minutes of experimenting on a piano and then copying it to an online program because I do not have the three hands required to play this all together, I have created a music composition: Is It Worth It?
Feedback/Constructive Criticism is greatly appreciated! I'm the kind of person who wants to know everything I'm doing wrong right from the start so that I don't make things worse.

The song is now done. I hope you like it!

 

[That Guy]

That was actually really good. I feel almost like if the piece kept going in the right direction, it could have made me cry in the way that particularly emotive pieces of music do. By all means, do keep this up.

 

[thestarjar]

Thank you! I will do my best.

EDIT: I have fixed the wrong harmonies in measures 7 and 8, and I've also added another 8 measures that I'm actually quite happy with.

EDIT2: The song is done. [33 measures total]