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EVERYONE: - Complete In Memory (Single Poem)

ArvAl

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In Memory

Rise and shine,

The world's colliding.

We're watching your handmade dress,

Made of all their eyes.


Yes, mademoiselle.

It is Time.

He will escort us beyond,

Where we wouldn't find no walls that bind ourselves,

Below His trapped pressure.


Touch my skin,

Can you hear my happiness?

I am no longer set in the dark.

So are they,

And so are you.


O my,

Looks like your heart is pounding.

Don't put torment, worrisome.

Likewise,

We will ease your pain.


Mademoiselle,

We watched,

How those spines laughed at you.

Our words couldn't explain,

How you took the faulty pill.


You were sitting in the corner,

Spilling tears around everywhere.


Seconds ago,

You had your final wish.


The crowd spooked.

They will not believe.

But enough is enough!

No more winding excuses!

Let them have what they wanted:

A restful maiden.

Close,

And personal.


There there, Mademoiselle.

Such rubbish must not exist.

Come for us instead.

Likewise,

We will cure your vain.


Tomorrow and today,

Together forever.


Tell the dream,

To here,

To hear to.




(July 1st 1961 ~ August 31st 1997)
 
Hi, there! I always like seeing poetry pop up around here. It's a refreshing pace from fiction.

There's some interesting description and wording here, as per usual with your poetry. You make good use of the senses in particular, and this part...

Touch my skin,

Can you hear my happiness?

...had an impact on me personally. It's simple compared to the rest of the poem, but powerful nonetheless.

Hope to see more from you soon again!
 
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