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It’s Not Over! PG-13 (Minor Violence, Drama, and Romance)
Another Aqua Marina fic by eevee91
This is the continuation of, and the last part of, Aqua Marina’s story. This part starts off with where “The Final Training Frontier” left off. Will Aqua find out about Cosmeon and finally be Deoxys’ master? Will she battle Red, and if so, who will win? Will her dream of being a Pokémon Master finally come true? And most importantly, what will become of Vee? Please Read and Comment/Review.
*** And the sci-fi theme will be very short this time. It will not be through the whole story. ***
P.S.-I’m still rewriting “Taking Over a Trainer’s Heart and Soul.” It’s going to have a lot more detail, and a better plot. And Aqua and Red meeting will be longer, and more dramatic. That’s all I got so far… (It's out as of now.:-D )
Chapter 1: A Dangerous Act
Prologue
(Fade in)
Continues from The Final Training Frontier:
“Aqua, are you alright?” Red was next to her. “You were acting like you were having a horrible nightmare.”
Aqua looked at Red. “I was, but I figured it out.” She smiled knowing it was a dream, and Red would never hurt her.
“Well good morning, Space Princess.” Red then kissed her.
“Good morning, Red.” She kissed him back. This part was not a dream, but a dream that came true the day before. They were going to start being more than friends.
But something else seeped into Aqua mind. “I have to get out of that.” She thought back to the twisted nightmare. “Get ready.” The words slipped from her mouth.
“What?” Red stopped her.
“You heard me.” Aqua was serious. “It’s time to train Deoxys, and you’re helping.”
TO BE CONTINUED….NOW.
A new day had come, and today Aqua Marina was to be sent on another space mission, but alone this time. This she did not like too much. Aqua sat outside the Space Center on her new Deoxys, in a blue and white space suit that looked to be more of a body suit.
Meanwhile, Red was looking for his best friend Aqua Marina. He looked all around the Space Center in a panic when “AQUA! NO! STOP!” He had spotted her.
“I’ll be back.” Aqua put her helmet on and smiled at him as Deoxys started to leave the ground.
All Red could do was watch until she was out of sight………… “Aqua…………”……………………………………
It’s Not Over
Chapter 1: A Dangerous Act
19 year old Aqua Marina stared at the earth as she held onto Deoxys tight. Breathing heavily the air in her spacesuit; the sight in front of her brought tears to her eyes. The earth was so beautiful and peaceful from orbit, but hidden on the surface was wars, violence, hurt, and other misery. She wished things looked as nice down there as they did from her current view.
With her was her Pokémon, Vee, an eevee who she loved dearly. He too was in a spacesuit fitted for him, the same one he would have worn on their first visit to space, if only he had not transformed into cosmeon, the space form of eevee. That’s what this whole mission was about, to find out if cosmeon was really an eevee space form. This mission was just not how the space center had planned. In fact, they were very uninformed.
“Ok. We just wait for Vee to transform now.” Aqua said nervously. She bravely held onto on her Deoxys, who was untrained and could turn at any minute. Before Aqua caught it, it roamed through space freely without ever having any human contact. After her battle to tame in, and almost being killed in the process, Deoxys was still untamed, but calm and somewhat obedient. For now it listened to her, but who knew what it would do in the next five minutes. Knowing this, Aqua still trusted the Pokémon, and wanted to befriend it. So they waited nervously about the earth with unsure trust.
Meanwhile back on earth…..
A 21 year old Red, still Pokémon champion, could not believe her. Red was wearing jeans, a black t-shirt, and white sneakers. His spiky black hair was partly over his brown eyes. He pleaded with her not to do this, but she refused to listen. His only choice now was to alert the Space Center, who was actually waiting to send her on a space mission that day. He ran into the lobby, and came face to face with a space pilot, Ash, who was on Aqua’s first space mission with her. Ash was around 30 years old, had light brown hair, pale skin, and being fit, he looked like an athlete. He was wearing grey pants, a blue shirt, and black shoes. “Aqua took off on Deoxys.” Red said panic stricken.
Ash could not believe what he heard. “She did what?!” He heard it alright, he just didn’t know Aqua was that stupid. He knew Aqua was a smart girl, but just could not understand what she was thinking.
But Red knew what was in Aqua’s mind as she pulled the dangerous stunt. “She really wants to prove she can control Deoxys.” Red stared into Ash’s eyes with fear, fear Aqua’s life.
Ash nodded. He remembered hearing about Aqua wanting to control Deoxys. Luna, an astrobiologist, friend of, and another space travel partner of Aqua’s, had told him to watch her. They knew Aqua did not like the Space Center’s plan to send her into space on a rocket, alone. Aqua was not just scared, but wanted a chance to do what she failed to do in her first attempt, which was ride Deoxys into space with no problem. Ash knew Aqua probably had a radio on her, and knew he had to try to contact her. “Red, let’s get to mission control.” Ash too was worried about her.
Red followed as Ash led him to the control room. Inside the room was computers and monitors for communicating with space crafts and astronauts. Red followed Ash to a computer.
Ash looked at some data, and turned pale. “Red, Aqua is in deep danger.”
“What’s wrong?” Red felt sick hearing this. All he could think of was how he could not stop her. Aqua taking off on Deoxys while he tried to talk her out of it played over and over in his mind.
“It seems there is a lot of space junk today.” Ash felt sick too. “And if she is hit by it, or her suit is torn, Aqua….may not come home.” He said uncomfortably.
Red was about to panic upon hearing this. “Ash, do something now! We have to save her!” The last thing Red wanted was to say goodbye to Aqua. The very thought of her possibly being hurt affected him deeply. Afterall, Aqua was very special to him.
Ash went over to the computer, and put on a headset. After trying a few things he finally contacted Aqua. “Aqua! What are you doing? Do you know there is a high amount of space junk up there today?!” He screamed in a panic, hoping to get through to her.
Up in space Aqua heard him. Upon hearing Ash’s voice, she knew she had been caught. “Oh hi Ash.” Aqua laughed nervously knowing she was in trouble when she got back to earth. Then her brain comprehended his words. “What do you mean space junk?”
“You know, pieces of debris from space ships and satellites….but that’s not the point. You need to get back to earth right………….” That’s when Red and Ash began to hear static. “Aqua. Are you there?”
…………………………………………………………..
There was silence for minutes. Red could not take it any longer, and screamed out “Aqua…..Aqua……Space Princess…..ARE YOU THERE?!”
Little did they know, Aqua was in deep trouble.
There is a long chapter coming.
No spoiler to give, as it will ruin a lot. But I will ask “Who’s that Pokemon?” about the chapter coming up. Guess?
Please. Please. Please read and review. This and the rewrite are my last fanfics...as of now. Starting September, I don't know if I'll be writing fics for awhile since my life will be very busy once again. I really think I've improved in my writing this year, but think I like to go over borad with the sci-fi/fantast themes. :/
Another Aqua Marina fic by eevee91
This is the continuation of, and the last part of, Aqua Marina’s story. This part starts off with where “The Final Training Frontier” left off. Will Aqua find out about Cosmeon and finally be Deoxys’ master? Will she battle Red, and if so, who will win? Will her dream of being a Pokémon Master finally come true? And most importantly, what will become of Vee? Please Read and Comment/Review.
*** And the sci-fi theme will be very short this time. It will not be through the whole story. ***
P.S.-I’m still rewriting “Taking Over a Trainer’s Heart and Soul.” It’s going to have a lot more detail, and a better plot. And Aqua and Red meeting will be longer, and more dramatic. That’s all I got so far… (It's out as of now.:-D )
Chapter 1: A Dangerous Act
Prologue
(Fade in)
Continues from The Final Training Frontier:
“Aqua, are you alright?” Red was next to her. “You were acting like you were having a horrible nightmare.”
Aqua looked at Red. “I was, but I figured it out.” She smiled knowing it was a dream, and Red would never hurt her.
“Well good morning, Space Princess.” Red then kissed her.
“Good morning, Red.” She kissed him back. This part was not a dream, but a dream that came true the day before. They were going to start being more than friends.
But something else seeped into Aqua mind. “I have to get out of that.” She thought back to the twisted nightmare. “Get ready.” The words slipped from her mouth.
“What?” Red stopped her.
“You heard me.” Aqua was serious. “It’s time to train Deoxys, and you’re helping.”
TO BE CONTINUED….NOW.
A new day had come, and today Aqua Marina was to be sent on another space mission, but alone this time. This she did not like too much. Aqua sat outside the Space Center on her new Deoxys, in a blue and white space suit that looked to be more of a body suit.
Meanwhile, Red was looking for his best friend Aqua Marina. He looked all around the Space Center in a panic when “AQUA! NO! STOP!” He had spotted her.
“I’ll be back.” Aqua put her helmet on and smiled at him as Deoxys started to leave the ground.
All Red could do was watch until she was out of sight………… “Aqua…………”……………………………………
It’s Not Over
Chapter 1: A Dangerous Act
19 year old Aqua Marina stared at the earth as she held onto Deoxys tight. Breathing heavily the air in her spacesuit; the sight in front of her brought tears to her eyes. The earth was so beautiful and peaceful from orbit, but hidden on the surface was wars, violence, hurt, and other misery. She wished things looked as nice down there as they did from her current view.
With her was her Pokémon, Vee, an eevee who she loved dearly. He too was in a spacesuit fitted for him, the same one he would have worn on their first visit to space, if only he had not transformed into cosmeon, the space form of eevee. That’s what this whole mission was about, to find out if cosmeon was really an eevee space form. This mission was just not how the space center had planned. In fact, they were very uninformed.
“Ok. We just wait for Vee to transform now.” Aqua said nervously. She bravely held onto on her Deoxys, who was untrained and could turn at any minute. Before Aqua caught it, it roamed through space freely without ever having any human contact. After her battle to tame in, and almost being killed in the process, Deoxys was still untamed, but calm and somewhat obedient. For now it listened to her, but who knew what it would do in the next five minutes. Knowing this, Aqua still trusted the Pokémon, and wanted to befriend it. So they waited nervously about the earth with unsure trust.
Meanwhile back on earth…..
A 21 year old Red, still Pokémon champion, could not believe her. Red was wearing jeans, a black t-shirt, and white sneakers. His spiky black hair was partly over his brown eyes. He pleaded with her not to do this, but she refused to listen. His only choice now was to alert the Space Center, who was actually waiting to send her on a space mission that day. He ran into the lobby, and came face to face with a space pilot, Ash, who was on Aqua’s first space mission with her. Ash was around 30 years old, had light brown hair, pale skin, and being fit, he looked like an athlete. He was wearing grey pants, a blue shirt, and black shoes. “Aqua took off on Deoxys.” Red said panic stricken.
Ash could not believe what he heard. “She did what?!” He heard it alright, he just didn’t know Aqua was that stupid. He knew Aqua was a smart girl, but just could not understand what she was thinking.
But Red knew what was in Aqua’s mind as she pulled the dangerous stunt. “She really wants to prove she can control Deoxys.” Red stared into Ash’s eyes with fear, fear Aqua’s life.
Ash nodded. He remembered hearing about Aqua wanting to control Deoxys. Luna, an astrobiologist, friend of, and another space travel partner of Aqua’s, had told him to watch her. They knew Aqua did not like the Space Center’s plan to send her into space on a rocket, alone. Aqua was not just scared, but wanted a chance to do what she failed to do in her first attempt, which was ride Deoxys into space with no problem. Ash knew Aqua probably had a radio on her, and knew he had to try to contact her. “Red, let’s get to mission control.” Ash too was worried about her.
Red followed as Ash led him to the control room. Inside the room was computers and monitors for communicating with space crafts and astronauts. Red followed Ash to a computer.
Ash looked at some data, and turned pale. “Red, Aqua is in deep danger.”
“What’s wrong?” Red felt sick hearing this. All he could think of was how he could not stop her. Aqua taking off on Deoxys while he tried to talk her out of it played over and over in his mind.
“It seems there is a lot of space junk today.” Ash felt sick too. “And if she is hit by it, or her suit is torn, Aqua….may not come home.” He said uncomfortably.
Red was about to panic upon hearing this. “Ash, do something now! We have to save her!” The last thing Red wanted was to say goodbye to Aqua. The very thought of her possibly being hurt affected him deeply. Afterall, Aqua was very special to him.
Ash went over to the computer, and put on a headset. After trying a few things he finally contacted Aqua. “Aqua! What are you doing? Do you know there is a high amount of space junk up there today?!” He screamed in a panic, hoping to get through to her.
Up in space Aqua heard him. Upon hearing Ash’s voice, she knew she had been caught. “Oh hi Ash.” Aqua laughed nervously knowing she was in trouble when she got back to earth. Then her brain comprehended his words. “What do you mean space junk?”
“You know, pieces of debris from space ships and satellites….but that’s not the point. You need to get back to earth right………….” That’s when Red and Ash began to hear static. “Aqua. Are you there?”
…………………………………………………………..
There was silence for minutes. Red could not take it any longer, and screamed out “Aqua…..Aqua……Space Princess…..ARE YOU THERE?!”
Little did they know, Aqua was in deep trouble.
There is a long chapter coming.
No spoiler to give, as it will ruin a lot. But I will ask “Who’s that Pokemon?” about the chapter coming up. Guess?
Please. Please. Please read and review. This and the rewrite are my last fanfics...as of now. Starting September, I don't know if I'll be writing fics for awhile since my life will be very busy once again. I really think I've improved in my writing this year, but think I like to go over borad with the sci-fi/fantast themes. :/
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