Kirby Box Art

[Princess Viola]

I made this box art for a (fictitious) Kirby game for the Wii. I'm not the best, but I try.

 

[WitchChao]

It's not that bad for an attempt, especially if this is your first and only boxart hoax, but it's a little cluttered and disorganized.

For one thing, Kirby shouldn't be part of both the logo and the background art, it's redundant and looks sloppy bad. Plus, the Kirbies (lol English plural sucks) being in two different styles and qualities adds to the bad effect.

Secondly, the logo shouldn't be covering up half of Kirby's face. Either shrink Kirby down (better), or shrink and move the logo (Solves the problem, but looks less professional). Furthermore the enemies shouldn't be overlapping Kirby either. They should either be moved behind Kirby or dropped altogether.

Finally, the Nintendo and Hal logos shouldn't be so big. They literally take up a good 20% of the box. Also, the Hal logo should actually include the Hal Laboratory text below it as well, and not just the Dog. Shrink them up and move them more into the corner.

Not bad otherwise though. I really like that star in the background and the art of Kirby you chose

 

[Kazooie]

That is really good

 

[Cross Poison]

good!
judging by the art it looks like its should be called 'super paper kirby'