Legends Arise! Past, Present and Future! (PG)

[pikachu_pancakes!]

Story: Legends Arise! Past, Present and Future!

Rated: PG: There is slight violence but just the average pokemon things (you know pkmn battles)

Summary: A legend written by ancestors in the pkmn world was written in the past after an event. It involved the past, present and future of 2010. Apparently this legend was caused through lost trust, now once this comes true in all three times, only the pure hearted hero can save the day with some help!

Main Characters: Ash Ketchum, Pikachu, Ash's Friends (Brock, Max etc.) and legendary pokemon (entei, ho-oh etc.)

Progress (chapters):
Chapter One > http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showpost.php?p=1401575&postcount=4

Genre (forgot this part 0.0): Action/ Adventure/ Romance (hints of romance come in but the ending is three seperate ones for the shippers!)

Prologue!!!

In a small town, in the hoenn region, well known as Little Root Town. It was known for many things, one of the famous people lived there, known as professor Birch.

The professor had brown short hair, in a boyish hair cut. He normally had a white lab coat, with few buttons; it reflected the light around him. He had brown shorts that seemed the color of the un-famous and un-liked mud. He had a simple light brown T-shirt as well, some wondered if the professor just loved brown? He had always replied, “That with research, you need to get into the field, and there for this color becomes fascinating to professors like I!” There for even his sandal like sneakers, was also that very color, brown!

Of course there were reasons for his famous quote of the in-famous color. Many in which did not know quite why it had been brown, nor did they bother to put interest into it. Others –the much smarter observers—were able to realize why the professor had chosen so. They said; “Ah! Professor Birch, a young man who spends his time in the fields and in the lab, when at home? I’m more curious about that! Why does he go into the fields? For pokemon of course! The same reason he mainly is seen in brown, pokemon! You see the professor is very interested in legends of all sorts, not just legends from hoenn, but from other regions; like Sinhou, Kanto, Johto; and even the newest region involved in the pokemon leagues and professor’s system, Hybid!”

Yes that’s right! The professor studied legendary pokemon and legends to him were fascinating enough. Even pokemon built and designed not to be such legends or myths, were fascinating through power. Many had different attributes and specialties in which they were known for! Hoenn in particular had a few, so far the most discovered was in Sinhou. The professor is trying to learn more about these very legends, trying to see just how all of them connect. But many must be patient for that very answer, for it shall be awhile before all of it is finally connected!

He understands many are connected in their own region, but what brought them all? Yes, Arceus, the arc like pokemon, seemingly the god of pokemon? He probably connects to all, but how exactly, is the question.

“In order to know how pokemon are connected to all living life, you must see them in real life,” is the other famous quote of the professor. Many had in-fact agreed with this, for it seemed impossible to know so much about something un-seen! Few trainers get such opportunities to unlock such puzzles; few trainers have the true meaning of pure heart directly in their souls. Those few trainers’ with pure hearts seem to be the lucky ones. This brings us to where this story starts to this very day.

A young boy from the in-famous town of pallet, “the town of new beginnings,” in which had a pure heart. One of the rare and few trainers, many of his friends also had this. However one in particular is connected to the paths of legends, pokemon and people. The boy’s name is our hero and main character in this very story, his name; Ash Ketchum. Ash is a pokemon trainer who is known and has befriended many upon his journey. But not nearly has he lived his entire life just yet! No, after all those journey’s, they were nothing compared to this story we are about to start, nothing compared to what comes later in life.

“Of all legends, they connect through time, with the help of the pure heart of trust, loyalty, determination and willpower. The legends of time shall come, upon times, past, present and future, shall the challenge of safety and peace arise! With its great and mighty tough times, arise all legends to seek the true heart of pureness and hope. Through only one hero and some help, shall the world be safe again, but if all else fails, all else will disappear, and become all but nothing. Though many shall try to help with greatest battle of war through all times. Many shall also fail; the legends shall finally be connected once the world is safe. So far part of this is already true, and so we warn the future, from the past, and hope that one specific person is there. We wish for luck and much more, as one shall travel through time with the only legendary pokemon at peace. The past, present, and future, all rely on what is now needed survival and others. This is only the start, and we cannot warn you much more!”

This is a large quote from an old tablet upon the wall of a ruin, called “Warpotorime (WARP-PORT-TOR-IME--think of time for ime--) Ruins.” The ruins in which were built by people of the past --for our current time-- the second disaster, present, then shall it start. Where Ash Ketchum will travel to all three, past, present and future, to stop all the legends that are simply connected through time. The legend pretty much explains it all, of which this non-fictional story shall say. But the action and pokemon, is that very legend!

*** Present time: 2010; Place: Canalave City of the Sinhou Region: the library***

Linda was a librarian; she has blue glasses that are placed just on the tip of her nose. She wore a simple dress as her outfit; it had red and green stripes, zipping all around the dress. She had fairly simple white runners and spent her time at the library reading books and doing business. With her left over time, she relaxed at home doing what anyone else would do, relax and watch some TV or simply do housework.

Linda turned on the TV to see what was on, she figured nothing good would be on, but she surprisingly had nothing else to finish tonight. So she picked up the small button filled TV remote, and clicked the large red button to turn on the larger black box. The screen lit up and on it, instantly was the news.

There was the average news reporter talking away. Finally a subject caught Linda’s interest, “Book talk time! Some of you readers have probably heard the legend of the tin tower’s? Well the in-famous book “Warpotorime Walls; the book of stories and warning’s from our ancestor’s,” apparently has some basic plot’s towards the past, present and finally, future. It is said the past of the great legend written on the walls are actually connected to all times.”

“According to the book, the past held a disaster which will somehow effect the other times. It has been recently established what that very past predicament was! Though we have a lot of evidence however, it is unknown if we are all correct. Some people, like professors involved in the studies of legends, have recently found some interesting points of view. Some people have misread the book!”

“For it connects all legends and all times, not just that, but it unlocks what is known as the unknown. We’re not just talking about pokemon here! We’re talking about things that can only happen, once certain things do, but what happens after is what was once unknown.”

“Apparently the present is created by the present past and future! The great legend that is not popular is said to have evidence of actually coming true! The great threat in which this holds between the legends is horrifying! But apparently the past, in which had a destiny of creating a horrible future, is said to connect to the year 2010, ours! It’s said that the past threat was connected to the tin-towers story, so far only two pokemon that were un-doubtedly connected, are apart of this legend.”

“The question is, what’s the next disaster they talk about? What is involved? Is it really every legend? Come back after this commercial break as we have an interview with professor Birch! The man who has more knowledge than us right now, since he is currently studying this subject!”

Linda had her eyes staring at the flashy television, she read that book awhile back when she was bored. She had always thought it was just a myth, which was built and connected to nothing! But now, she just had to have a second look, in order to get to the point, she just had to see the up-coming interview!

“And we’re back!!!” Yelled the interviewer. “Yes as promised here’s professor Birch, to help discuss! So professor, what do you fear about the knowledge of this book?” The professor was sitting in his usual clothes and replied his answer from pure mind!

“Well as it says all legendaries are connected, however I fear other pokemon are established with it. Think about it! War is created through high disagreement, the same with arguments! Back then, the tin towers experienced a horrible fate. Only through the matter of friendship being broken between pokemon and people. There for everyone was technically involved, this was realized awhile after, and jotted down in the book itself!”

“What ever happens in the present and future, is probably connected to that pure heart. If the tin towers are apart of this legend, the Lugia and ho-oh are likely to be involved with every other legendary. In which case, it’s unpredictable of what the present problem will be.”

“However, I can predict that the pure heart has something to do with what the past has told us. It’s about friendship, and this book is the warning of when that is lost! Once so happens, the pure hearted goes through time to save the tin towers, and travel to the present and future to stop the complete problems. Who knows what could happen, but I don’t think it’s all just Lugia and ho-oh or friendship. It’s pure fate, tragedy, friendship yes but most importantly, it all started from trust and every other legend that connects humans and pokemon. Trust in which was lost many times before, which is connected to everything else, its likely trust is the actual connection!”

‘Alright so then trust is what we lost and created such horrible fates. Then one day some guy with a pure heart that has trust has to regain it? I think that’s it?!’ Linda thought to herself, then she looked over at the clock…

11:58 pm

‘Yikes! I haft to get up early tomorrow morning better get to sleep!’ she warned herself. Shortly after she tucked into her soft cushiony white bed and drifted into a deep sleep…

Author: TADAH! My next new an improved story which probably bored you ALL… T_T I know it sucks but I’ve decided to get more serious with my stories, so I deleting my not so good, not paid attention to, old ones… This way I’m going to create an actual GOOD chapter’s with A LOT more description… I also NEED you guys to comment, point out ANY mistakes, no matter how harsh the lightning from the written thunder… And criticize!!! Other wise this WILL be ignored… T_T I really don’t want to do this, but I’m trying to improve on making GOOD stories… *sighs*

 

[Golem the shy hero]

It's ok! But there were some mistakes that my horrible grammer eyes spotted. T_T Bold = what I found... I back spaced the paragraphs with no problems that I found... Good detail I suppose, chapter one please?

Summary: A legend written by ancestors in the pkmn world, was written in the past after an event. It involved the past, present and future of 2010. Apparently this legend was caused through lost trust, now once this comes true in all three times, only the pure hearted hero can save the day with some help!

The professor had brown short hair, in a boyish hair cut. He normally had a white lab coat, with few buttons; it reflected the light around him. He had brown shorts, that seemed the color of the un-famous and un-liked mud. He had a simple light brown T-shirt as well, some wondered if the professor just loved brown? He had always replied, “That with research, you need to get into the field, and there for this color becomes fascinating to professors like I!” There for even his sandal like sneakers, were also that very color, brown!

Of course there were reasons for his famous quote of the in-famous color. Many in which did not know quite why it had been brown, nor did they bother to put interest into it. Others –the much smarter observers—were able to realise why the professor had chosen so. They said; “Ah! Professor Birch, a young man who spends his time in the fields and in the lab, when at home? I’m more curious about that! Why does he go into the fields? For pokemon of course! The same reason he mainly is seen in brown, pokemon! You see the professor is very interested in legends of all sorts, not just legends from hoenn, but from other regions; like Sinhou, Kanto, Johto; and even the newest region involved in the pokemon leagues and professor’s system, Hybid!”

He understands many are connected in their own region, but what brought them all? Yes, Arceus, the arc like pokemon, seemingly the god of pokemon? He probably connects to all, but how exactly, is the question.

A young boy from the in-famous town of pallet, “the town of new beginnings,” in which had a pure heart. One of the rare and few trainers, many of his friends also had this. However one in particular is connected to the paths of legends, pokemon and people. The boy’s name is our hero and main character in this very story, his name; Ash Ketchum. Ash is a pokemon trainer who is known and has befriended many upon his journey. But not nearly has he lived his entire life just yet! No, after all those journey’s, they were nothing compared to this story we are about to start, nothing compared to what comes later in life.

This is a large quote from an old tablet upon the wall of a ruin, called “Warpotorime (WARP-PORT-TOR-IME--think of time for ime--) Ruins.” The ruins in which were built by people of the past --for our current time-- the second disaster, present, then shall it start. Where Ash Ketchum will travel to all three, past, present and future, to stop all the legends that are simply connected through time. The legend pretty much explains it all, of which this non-fictional story shall say. But the action and pokemon, is that very legend!

There was the average news reporter talking away. Finally a subject caught Linda’s interest, “Book talk time! Some of you readers have probably heard the legend of the tin tower’s?... Well the in-famous book “Warpotorime Walls; the book of stories and warning’s from our ancestor’s,” apparently has some basic plot’s towards the past, present and finally, future. It is said the past of the great legend written on the walls are actually connected to all times.”

“Well as it says all legendaries are connected, however I fear other pokemon are established with it. Think about it! War is created through high disagreement, the same with arguments! Back then, the tin towers experienced a horrible fate. Only through the matter of friendship being broken between pokemon and people. There for everyone was technically involved, this was realised awhile after, and jotted down in the book itself!”

‘Alright so then trust is what we lost and created such horrible fates. Then one day some guy with a pure heart that has trust has to regain it? I think that’s it?!’ Linda thought to herself, then she looked over at the clock…

 

[PK I'm BAAACK~]

AWWW! Don't say they suck, you just need more detail in you're stories, they actually are good ideas for a story!... Anyways this is pretty good, you definately worked on it! Waiting for the next chapter! ^_^ This is the detail you need my friend! So I congradulate you for "taking it seriously"!

 

[pikachu_pancakes!]

Chapter One: The Very Start of the Beginning

*** 2010: Pallet Town: In the nearby forest ***

We meet our main character in this very story, in which begins in the nearby grassy green forest of Pallet town. Beautiful tall trees seemed like giants starring down on its visitors. The small flower’s gently danced with the wind the giants created, as the pedals drifted along raining on the ground. The grass was up to you’re knees, swimming around the bottom of you’re leg, as if you were swimming. The sun shined like a small rainbow, as little light came through the rough bushes of the dry forest.

A young boy, who lived in the town nearby, was happily skipping along, as his red and white shoes made drum noises on the ground. His black vest swished through the wind along, it had a yellow stripe zip across its top. A white shirt t-shirt was peeking out the sleeveless vest, on top as well, but not bellow. The red hat swung like a monkey from the branches as the boy skipped, its design was half a symbol of a blue poke-ball was on it.

A small mouse like yellow pokemon kept up with its trainer, it was surprisingly used to being outside of its poke-ball! It had a long lightning tale zig zag away from its body, at the tip of that tail was a brown color on the end, the rest of it was yellow. It had short stubby arms and legs and long ears that had black at the very tip. Red polka dot checks were filled with stocked electricity as the pokemon happily smiled with joy.

It was questionable it the little flying green pokemon, belonged to the boy as well? It seemed like not, since it was trying to fly out of sight while watching. It had huge green eyes tracking the boy’s movement and the Pikachu’s. It had two alien antennas’ that were also green on its head. Two tiny flapping wings that were placed on its back, violently flapping. It had small darker green feet as well hanging from its body.

The boy began, “There’s no place like home, right pikachu?” The little pokemon easily agreed, “Pika,” it squeaked in high but happy voice. The two were now resting there’s backs against one of the forest’s giants. Ash held out his pokedex to see what pokemon were around him, as they crawled through the woods sneakily. Suddenly it said something a little unusual…

Celebi, the Time Travel Pokémon. Celebi wanders across time as guardian of the forest. Where ever it appears, trees and grass flourish.

Ash looked at the small red device strangely, ‘where is there a celebi’ he asked himself. Pikachu began to look around for the hiding pokemon, its ears twitched along with its nose, trying to track down the pokemon. “Pika,” the yellow pokemon squeaked, as it frantically pointed to where it caught the celebi flying. Ash quickly looked up at the spot his trusted partner pointed at, he gasped, “c-celebi!”

“Bii,” the pokemon softly squeaked, as it fluttered around in the open clear air. Ash could not believe his eyes, he was sure this time pokemon had better things to do, but it just stared at him strangely. Suddenly it fell to the ground, Ash rushed over to quickly check its health, but then the pokemon got up again. Apparently that was just a test, to see how the young boy would react, kind, or mean. Quickly Ash gained celebi’s trust through his actions; he got up and watched the pokemon happily twirl in the air. Suddenly the pokemon came flying at him and swooped down into a friendly hug. Next it began to fly away as it waved goodbye, and slid through the wind, out of Ash’s sight…

***Back at Ash’s house in pallet town***

A woman with brown tied up hair, a pink t-shirt, and a purple long skirt, stood in the kitchen. A clown like pokemon stood next to her, it had thin legs and arms and danced around happily, helping out the woman with her chores. “Mime, Mime, Mime, Mime,” happily cheered the pokemon known as Mr. Mime. The woman heard the front door open, not long after did she hear footsteps, from someone light and normal weight. “Ash, sweetie is that you,” called the woman.

“Yea, mom it’s me,” replied Ash, as he stepped into the spotless and sparkling clean kitchen. Beside him like usual was his trusty partner pikachu, it stared at the newly swept kitchen amazed. Delia began to mutter something that only Mr. Mime had caught, “Oh, I should talk to him, but I don’t want to scare him…” Then she returned her head to face its normal position, it faced Ash to tell him something. “I think I’m going to go talk to professor Oak about something, I’ll be back soon to make dinner,” announced Delia. Ash nodded and stepped out of her way as she rushed towards the old man’s lab.

“Well, she must have something on her mind, oh well, let’s go to the yard, pikachu,” Ash cheered. His pokemon followed him up through the kitchen and out towards the fields of crunchy vegetables, juicy fruit and blossoming flower’s. Spring was always Ash’s favourite time, since his back yard always seemed the most magnificent then.
“Azu-Azu-rill” cheered a small hopping pokemon. It had a black zig-zagging tail, with blue orb on the end of it. Two fairly large mice like blue ears, small blue circular feet, and two white pouches on its cheeks. Behind was a young girl chasing after it; she must’ve been its trainer?

“Azurill, slow down, we haft to go back soon,” cried the young girl. She kept trying to catch the pokemon, but as much as she tried, she failed. Her red-brown hair was tied up into a side ponytail; a yellow top went down to her waist like a tank top hood-y. She had mini blue jean short’s, red and white sneaker’s, and white socks the ended just past her ankles. Finally she caught the pokemon in her arms, sweeping it up into a hug, as she held on to the mischievous baby pokemon.

Ash stared at the girl for only a few short seconds, he felt like he knew her, second after he remembered her completely. “M-Misty,” he yelled in a surprised and happy voice, he ran towards her, along with his pikachu, to get a closer look at his old friend.

She turned her head to see who called her, when her face also lit up with shock and happiness, “Ash!” It had been a long time since the two had seen each other, Ash was busy traveling the regions, while Misty had been the cerulean city gym leader.

“What are you doing here,” Ash asked his oldest friend. She had been the first friend to ever travel with him, even before Brock has started to travel with him. At first, it seemed like Brock wasn’t going to last since he left and Tracey started to travel with them. But little did they know then that they would split up and Brock would end up staying! However they still remained to be great friends.

Misty began to explain, “I came here to meet up with Tracey, he helps me out with my work at the gym, and so right we’re very busy creating a new area for the water pokemon. So I came here to pallet town to see him and discuss what we’re going to do, but my Azurill is still a baby and is getting tired, so I’m going to haft to call it a night and head back to the hotel.” Ash nodded and realised it was getting late, they should probably head back.

“Well, ok, I guess we’ll see you tomorrow then,” Ash waved and the two old friends set of in different directions.

*** Pallet Town: Ketchum Residents : 12:00 am***

Everyone was sound asleep in their beds, it was late at night, and however one pokemon couldn’t get to sleep! It sat there, staring at its awkwardly positioned trainer that was snoring away, not to mention hard to sleep beside! The little yellow pokemon decided it needed fresh air, so it carefully got out of bed, trying not to disturb its trainer. It snuck downstairs, aware that others were still fast asleep in bed, and hopped through the small door built for pokemon.

“Pikachu,” it stared at the backyard, something else was there watching it! That Celebi again!!! The green pokemon gave pikachu a signal as if to say, “follow me!” Pikachu followed the small flying Celebi, they found themselves in a flashy time warp!

***The Sea in between Johto and Hoenn: 12:00pm: Year: 2010***

Crash!!! A tall rock peeking out of the water fell down into the sea, as a giant yellow beast dog like yellow pokemon fled from the rock onto another. It let out a huge bolt of lightning toward another blue beast dog like pokemon, the blue pokemon skipped on the water avoiding the attack. A flamethrower burst out in between the two, it came from another dog beast like pokemon that was red and brown. An Entei, Suicune and a Raikou were all battling non-stop. Then a huge dark fox pokemon appeared aiming a shadow ball at them, it had red blood like colors on the tip of its fur, a Zoroark!

Suddenly hydro pump appeared in the middle of battle, it came from a fast swimming blue penguin pokemon. Behind was human riding on the boat, a young girl who had blue hair blowing in the wind. A short mini pink skirt, a black tank top, pink snow boots, and a pink scarf, was riding it. She was a friend of Ash’s! Her name was Dawn, she was apparently trying to stop the battle. The others got mad and aimed attacks at her, she quickly moved the boat out of the way. No one else dared to try and stop the battle but she got more help. “Togekiss, Pachirisu, help me out,” She called. Out of one flash of red came a white bird like pokemon, it had shapes all over its body. Out of another was a blue squirrel that had blue sparks of electricity forming on its cheeks, it hopped on to the Togekiss and they flew launching attacks at the legendaries. Carefully none hit them, they just interfered with the other attacks aiming at the other pokemon. Suddenly a burst of electricity came aiming quickly at the boat. Dawn tried to steer away but the attack was too quick! Boom!!! The boat flipped over and water rushed all over as the waves got worst, making it hard to stay at the surface and breathe.

Dawn gasped for air, struggling to keep her breath under control. The water around her was getting darker and thicker and became nothing but red blood! Dawn’s head was cut open from the boat as she was escaping, she was wet and soaked with freezing ocean water. Her lungs became filled with the non-clear water around her, she panicked trying to keep it out but horribly failed. A dark shadow that was fast and large and had the shape of a big fish was heading towards the pool of blood. Huge teeth ripped out of the water with a blue shark like pokemon attacking her…Suddenly another time warp came, but what happened to Dawn?!

***Kanto Region: Odd ruins? Battle field?: 8:00am year: 1612***

Boom!!! A huge explosion was let out field, humans and pokemon dying in a war between each other! In between the nightmare, was a tall tower with a nest lying up top, in that nest perched a large rainbow feathered bird pokemon! It was horrified as it stared at the war that was happening, never in its entire life, has it seen anything so disgraceful! Humans and pokemon were supposed to get along, not kill each other! Trust was at fault, as all the pokemon and people were no longer trusting nor caring for each other!
Some pokemon were wise and stayed out of it, but there’s always that one person/pokemon that has to get in the way and try to stop the war. Out of the water came a huge bird pokemon., it looked white and had blue feathers on the tip of its wings. A Lugia is what it was, as it aimed a solar beam in between the war. Another pokemon was on the land shooting hyper beams in the middle to try and help stop the madness. It was a tall heavy red dinosaur like pokemon called Groudon.

Out of the water came another pokemon, it was a large blue whale that aimed a strong tsunami attack at the war. From the sky was a heavy windy attack from a green flying snake pokemon, Rayquaza was the snake, Kyogre was the whale. The war however was strong and endless, they all just got sucked into the terrifying sight. It ended up becoming a war between those 4 legendaries. Ho-Oh could not take the sadness that now lied in its broken heart, it fled away from the sight with no rainbow, it said, “If you can not get along, then I will not be here to protect anymore, you all must prove peace, before safety is re-granted!” As it flew off the tower fell down and crashed, not just from war did life’s become lost, but from the crash and promised un-safeness as well. Yet another flash came and through time pikachu and celebi went.

***Sinhou Region: Mt. Coronet: 7:30pm: year: 2022!***

Inside the huge Mt. of the Sinhou region, was very young girl who looked like she was 11 years old. She had very dark purple hair, a yellow dress, green sneakers, and orange finger-less gloves. She skipped to a spot where a stone laid, some form of name was written and very hard to read. But if you looked close enough, it said, “Dawn ??? 1998-2012… here lies the kind hearted girl, one who can change a life, with determination and friendship…” Behind the little girl was another, one who had light brown hair, a red T-shirt, blue jeans, red sneakers, and white finger-less gloves. They each carried flowers with frowns o their faces, tears slipped down their cheeks. Who were they?

“April, Sandy, be careful,” yelled a voice from across the room. It came from an older woman who had brown hair, blue eyes, a green t-shirt, blue biker shorts, red sneakers, and white finger-less gloves. The two younger girls just nodded, the woman following them was also crying. “We should hurry out,” the older woman said, everyone left Mt. Coronet.

***Sinhou Region: Mt. Coronet: 9:47am: year: 2012!***

“Stop this now,” a feminine voice screamed in terror. “Look out,” warned another voice with complete fear. A 15 year old girl was running breathless from a red monster that had skin which looked like lava! The other voice yelled again in much more fear and with a sad voice, “Dawn!!!!” The girl was running but tripped with no more energy in her, her eyes widened at the pokemon charging a fire blast at her. Boom!!! Blood was all that covered the girl, along with dust, blood was the puddle that surrounded her. The pokemon walked away to return to another battle with 3 other’s. On looked like a ghostly black dragon known as Giratina, another looked like a blue and grey dog known as Dialga, the third was a pink and grey dinosaur known as Palkia.

The blue haired girl lay down with no control, her eye closed looking peaceful, her body covered with blood, bruises, and scrapes, skin nearly torn away from her skeleton, with many wounds. A young boy who looked older, with recognizable black hair, a girl with recognizable red hair, and an older boy with recognizable brown hair rushed to Dawn’s aid. However nothing else they could do was even near possible, for her body which once had life, was in a deep endless rest, it would not wake up, for she was now dead!

The other legendary pokemon kept battling each other not willing to give up. The three people picked up the blue haired girl, and rushed out as the war continued.

FINALLY DONE!!!! Yes there’s more to be discovered, the time warping continues next chapter! Chapter two: Returning to present… horror! (chapter title ends here) Now remember, if no one comments of critisizes my work, the no next chapter comes!!!

 

[PK I'm BAAACK~]

(Sorry, it took me a bit to read since I was busy...) Well this chapter was intresting! BRING ON CHAPTER TWO!!! I want to know what that present horror is! Keep up the work!... Anyways, I think the next chapter's horror could be a death? After all, you hinted it in chapter one that Dawn would die right? You should make a character death and slight blood description warning.