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Hey everyone! I've been awfully busy lately, but SuBuWriMo looked too tempting to pass up. I'm going for 50k words, but we'll see.
EDIT: JK 10k words now.
EDIT EDIT: SuBuWriMo's over now, but I got my 10,502 words in. I'll finish the story, but that's all she wrote as far as the contest goes (see what I did there? Only... I'm not a she...)
I don't know how long this fic is going to be, as I honestly have no idea where I'm going to go with it. I just wanted to write something, and this idea came to mind. I'm actually writing it all on the fly, so bear with me if the story is a little choppy. It's a little different from other Pokemon fics, and to be quite honest it wasn't originally going to have Pokemon in it. I just realized when I started writing that they fit in perfectly. I'll shut up now and get on with the story.
EDIT: JK 10k words now.
EDIT EDIT: SuBuWriMo's over now, but I got my 10,502 words in. I'll finish the story, but that's all she wrote as far as the contest goes (see what I did there? Only... I'm not a she...)
I don't know how long this fic is going to be, as I honestly have no idea where I'm going to go with it. I just wanted to write something, and this idea came to mind. I'm actually writing it all on the fly, so bear with me if the story is a little choppy. It's a little different from other Pokemon fics, and to be quite honest it wasn't originally going to have Pokemon in it. I just realized when I started writing that they fit in perfectly. I'll shut up now and get on with the story.
Table of Contents
Chapter 1 - Hammer Fall (below)
Chapter 2 - Legacy
Chapter 3 - Stranger in a Strange Land
Chapter 4 - Worth of Life
Chapter 5 - Another Point of View
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Chapter 1:
Hammer Fall
Chapter 1 - Hammer Fall (below)
Chapter 2 - Legacy
Chapter 3 - Stranger in a Strange Land
Chapter 4 - Worth of Life
Chapter 5 - Another Point of View
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Chapter 1:
Hammer Fall
Clunk.
Clunk.
Clunk.
For the fourth time, I picked up my trusted hammer by its leather-bound handle and idly let it slip through my fingers until it bounced off of the cobblestone floor.
Clunk.
But for the fourth time, it failed to get the other sound out of my ears. A sickening crunch that had haunted me for the past several weeks. I picked up my hammer again.
Clunk.
I shifted on the wooden bench. It wasn’t really my fault, after all. He slipped. It was meant to be a debilitating blow to the shoulder. Instead, my favored weapon had smashed his skull to a pulp. It was his fault that his helmet had no face guard. I bet he was one of those pompous puritans that insisted a full suit of armor was “limiting”. I hated those people. I probably would have killed him anyway. But do I know that? I never decide before the exact moment. No one does.
Again the image and sound of the man with the yellow armor having his face smashed in tore through my imagination.
“NO!” I yelled, leaping from my seat and heaving my hammer at the stone wall. The noise and sudden movement made Metagross in the corner shift uneasily. As I walked over to retrieve the hammer, the Pokémon let out a soothing growl. I paused for a second, examining the damage I had done to the wall, and sighed.
“You’re right,” I said. “I need to let go. We should be focusing on this battle. We’re on soon, are you ready?”
The steely beast growled an affirmative and bobbed up and down, though his clawed feet never moved off of the floor.
Slipping my hammer into its leather loop on my belt, I gazed at the creature. Most fighters treat their Pokémon as no more than battle partners. But I was different; I shared something more with Metagross. He had saved my life too many times to be ignored. The two of us sat in quiet introspection until we were interrupted by a blinding light from the door.
“Matthan?” a disembodied male voice floated through the doorway. I shielded my eyes until they adjusted, I still had no idea why they made us wait in such dark dungeons. “Follow me to the arena.”
One more time, I checked the straps of my armor to be sure it was fitting properly, and then pulled my helmet onto my head. Hefting my round shield onto my back, I sucked in a deep breath; the familiar metallic smell of the inside of the helmet was reassuring in a way. “Lead on,” I told the man, and stepped out into the corridor. Metagross stomped behind me. The hall was a stone affair, similar to the room, but brightly lit with chandeliers and torches. The man in front of me was dressed like a noble, but obviously didn’t have a drop of royal blood in his veins. He stood slightly hunched, his scrappy beard and arrogant expression contrasting with his extravagant clothes.
We followed our guide along the gently curving hallway until we came to a large metal door. If my sense of direction was anything to go by, this was the west entrance. I smiled, that meant the sun would be in my opponent’s eyes, assuming that it hadn’t yet set behind the walls of the coliseum.
Without a word, the brightly dressed man pulled the door open and gestured outside, where the sun shone dully on the gray dirt. At the far end of the arena, I could see that the eastern door had been opened as well. Somewhere in the shadows behind the doorway lurked my next opponent. Adjusting my shield from my back to my arm, I stepped out into the gaze of the roaring crowd with Metagross stomping along behind me. The cheering seemed to get even louder, echoing in my helmet and turning into a deafening rumble in my ears.
I took eight steps forward, as was the custom, and watched my opponent do the same at the other side of the arena. Metagross gave a loud huff behind me as our adversary’s Pokémon was revealed to be a violent-looking Scyther.
As was also custom, the other fighter’s armor matched his Pokémon. Dull green segments plated his chest, while light brown leather left his arms free to swing his weapon, or rather weapons, of choice, two long, silver knives. A spiked helmet of similar color to his chest plates covered his entire face and head. I gave an unnoticeable sigh of relief at that, and then shook my head to clear my thoughts. No, I had to be ready to kill this man, as he was surely ready to do the same to me.
Silently, I hoped that my own armor was having the same intimidating effect on him. My segmented, pale blue plates covered nearly my entire body. A silver ‘X’ decorated my chest, shield, and helmet. At the center of the shield’s ‘X’ was a deadly spike.
I cautiously grasped a hand around my hammer and pulled it from its loop. It was a heavy weapon, one that proved too heavy for most warriors. That’s why I liked it so much. Plus, it requires little finesse. No fancy twirling or parrying is necessary when you can smash a man’s chest in a single blow.
Or his face. I shuddered.
The two of us stood staring at each other for what seemed like an eternity before the resonating gongs of a massive bell echoed over the din of the crowd. Then, the battle was on.
As was my usual strategy, I waited for him to make the first move. Let him decide the terms of our battle, I could deal with anything. Like most fighters do, he targeted me with his first blow, while his Scyther dashed at Metagross, light on its wings.
He rules of a battle are simple. Two warriors, each with their own Pokémon, face off in a flat circular or rectangular arena. There is no rule about who fights who, but the common approach is for the humans to duel while the Pokémon battle separately. Occasionally, the partners will help each other out, but for the most part, the two battles don’t interfere with each other. It’s all over when both the warrior and his Pokémon are incapacitated through either injury or disarmament. Then the victor gets to make the ultimate decision: whether or not to finish off his rival.
I took a step forward to meet the swing of my assailant’s short sword, letting the blade glance off of my shield. His weapons were curved, and therefore only useful in slashing, not stabbing. I could use that to my advantage.
I swung my hammer around heavily, slamming it into the side of his chest as hard as I could. The man winced, but did not hesitate to take another shot at chopping off my arm, this time with the other sword. Deftly flipping my hammer around in my hand, I let the blade hit it on the head.
Now that I had blocked blows from both of his weapons, the man’s stance was wide open. With a yell of effort, I lifted a heavily armored leg and planted it in his stomach, shoving him hard backwards. He stumbled once, and caught himself on his knee. Pressing my advantage, I led with my shield and swung my hammer down with all of my strength. But rather than taking another strike at me, like I had expected him to do, he rolled expertly out of the way. My weight carried me forward as my hammer slammed into the ground where he had been. Off balance, I pivoted on the hammer just in time to catch a double blow of my opponent’s swords in my shield.
To the side, I saw Metagross rearing back on its hind legs, pummeling the Scyther with a rapid fire assault of its clawed arms. I paid for getting distracted by catching the next double blow right across my back. It failed to slip through my armor, but still hurt incredibly. I cried out and fell forward, spinning so that I would land face up. This proved to be a good choice.
My adversary was following up with two more swings, his left hand blade leading while his right hand one windmilled over top. Out of reflex, I easily brushed the first sword out of the way with my hammer, but was forced to kick him in the stomach again so that the second blade wouldn’t get me.
The kick knocked him far enough away that I could get back on me feet, but gave me little time to recover more than that. He came at me again, his two swords spinning aggressively. I set myself in a ready stance, with my shield in front and my hammer above my head. It was a brief second of rest before the battle continued.
Our fight raged on for what felt like an hour. Each swing became slower, my helmet filled with the stench of sweat, and my hammer felt like a dead weight in my hand. My muscles were beginning to shake, and my breath came in gasps. Metagross seemed to be gaining the upper hand in his battle, but the green warrior and I were at a stalemate.
Any benefit I gained from having a heavier weapon had been lost ten minutes into the fight. I was simply too tired now. But besides the layer of dirt that had accumulated on his once shiny armor, my opponent seemed unaffected. Perhaps it had something to do with his light armor and weapons, but he continued to fight like a machine. That’s all he was to me, an inhuman being that had no purpose other than to beat me.
As we pulled out of yet another flurry of blows, I heard a sound that I had dreaded hearing since I started battling. The high pitched screech of metal tearing followed immediately by a roar of pain. My head whipped about. Metagross was on his back, his legs flailing in the air. A giant gash, oozing some clear fluid, was rent across the bottom of his body.
“No…” I whispered. We weren’t beaten yet, but as soon as one partner went down, the other was always soon to follow.
Refusing to be taken advantage of, I whipped back around to face the surely oncoming blow. But I was a second too late. Rather than blocking the blade of my opponent’s sword with the leather handle of my hammer like I had meant to, I caught it on my hand. The weapon dug between the joints of my gauntlets and easily split the leather gloves beneath. Instants later, I felt the cold steel of the blade separating the knuckle and index finger of my right hand.
Blood spilled from the wound, contrasting strangely with my blue armor. I let out a brief cry of surprise and dropped the hammer before I realized what had happened. The green warrior continued his assault, hitting me hard in the shoulder with the hilt of his other sword. I collapsed to my knees and gave out another gasp of pain, still staring in awe at the stump of my finger. My shield slowly slid off of my uninjured arm.
Everything seemed to snap back in place. The trance I had been in while battling was lifted, and the pain and tiredness that had plagued me throughout the fight hit me in full force. The cheering of the crowd reemerged as more than the white noise that it had become.
Gently, the winner of our battle placed the tip of a sword under my chin and lifted it slightly. Our eyes locked through the slits in our helmets. Am I going to die now? Was all I could think. The beady black eyes of my opponent showed no sign of an answer. He was cold, emotionless. The perfect warrior.
Suddenly, he raised his other hand and pulled the helmet from his face. With that simple gesture he was human again. I looked upon a man younger than me, with tussled black hair that matched his eyes, which were not as emotionless as they had seemed before. They were full of a wise understanding far beyond their years. Thin lips twitched slightly as he continued to stare at me. His face was covered in sweat, and he was actually breathing as hard as I was. He was human, after all.
Without a word, the sword dropped from my chin. He stowed both his weapons away in their sheaths and offered me an armored hand. I was to live.
Shakily, I grasped his hand in my uninjured one and let him lift me to my feet. This was much to the dismay of the crowd. Cheering became rampant booing. Letting your opponent live was rarely a popular choice. I had been fairly successful in my career so far, but I was no crowd favorite. Not yet.
I took my own helmet off, still maintaining eye contact. In a soft voice, just loud enough so that I could hear him over the crowd, he answered my unasked question. “I always let them live.”
As Metagross and I were escorted off of the field and into the infirmary, I contemplated his remark. Always? Surely not. I had been in seven battles before this. I had lost two and won five. Not counting the man I had killed accidentally, I had let only two of my defeated opponents live. I had no idea why I made the decision. Sometimes it just seemed right, it was all in the heat of the moment.
I shook my head to clear my thoughts as the doctor bandaged my hand. If I started thinking about stuff like that, it would interfere with my fighting. It wasn’t important. Winning was important.
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Chapter word count: 2,332
Total: 2,332
Clunk.
Clunk.
For the fourth time, I picked up my trusted hammer by its leather-bound handle and idly let it slip through my fingers until it bounced off of the cobblestone floor.
Clunk.
But for the fourth time, it failed to get the other sound out of my ears. A sickening crunch that had haunted me for the past several weeks. I picked up my hammer again.
Clunk.
I shifted on the wooden bench. It wasn’t really my fault, after all. He slipped. It was meant to be a debilitating blow to the shoulder. Instead, my favored weapon had smashed his skull to a pulp. It was his fault that his helmet had no face guard. I bet he was one of those pompous puritans that insisted a full suit of armor was “limiting”. I hated those people. I probably would have killed him anyway. But do I know that? I never decide before the exact moment. No one does.
Again the image and sound of the man with the yellow armor having his face smashed in tore through my imagination.
“NO!” I yelled, leaping from my seat and heaving my hammer at the stone wall. The noise and sudden movement made Metagross in the corner shift uneasily. As I walked over to retrieve the hammer, the Pokémon let out a soothing growl. I paused for a second, examining the damage I had done to the wall, and sighed.
“You’re right,” I said. “I need to let go. We should be focusing on this battle. We’re on soon, are you ready?”
The steely beast growled an affirmative and bobbed up and down, though his clawed feet never moved off of the floor.
Slipping my hammer into its leather loop on my belt, I gazed at the creature. Most fighters treat their Pokémon as no more than battle partners. But I was different; I shared something more with Metagross. He had saved my life too many times to be ignored. The two of us sat in quiet introspection until we were interrupted by a blinding light from the door.
“Matthan?” a disembodied male voice floated through the doorway. I shielded my eyes until they adjusted, I still had no idea why they made us wait in such dark dungeons. “Follow me to the arena.”
One more time, I checked the straps of my armor to be sure it was fitting properly, and then pulled my helmet onto my head. Hefting my round shield onto my back, I sucked in a deep breath; the familiar metallic smell of the inside of the helmet was reassuring in a way. “Lead on,” I told the man, and stepped out into the corridor. Metagross stomped behind me. The hall was a stone affair, similar to the room, but brightly lit with chandeliers and torches. The man in front of me was dressed like a noble, but obviously didn’t have a drop of royal blood in his veins. He stood slightly hunched, his scrappy beard and arrogant expression contrasting with his extravagant clothes.
We followed our guide along the gently curving hallway until we came to a large metal door. If my sense of direction was anything to go by, this was the west entrance. I smiled, that meant the sun would be in my opponent’s eyes, assuming that it hadn’t yet set behind the walls of the coliseum.
Without a word, the brightly dressed man pulled the door open and gestured outside, where the sun shone dully on the gray dirt. At the far end of the arena, I could see that the eastern door had been opened as well. Somewhere in the shadows behind the doorway lurked my next opponent. Adjusting my shield from my back to my arm, I stepped out into the gaze of the roaring crowd with Metagross stomping along behind me. The cheering seemed to get even louder, echoing in my helmet and turning into a deafening rumble in my ears.
I took eight steps forward, as was the custom, and watched my opponent do the same at the other side of the arena. Metagross gave a loud huff behind me as our adversary’s Pokémon was revealed to be a violent-looking Scyther.
As was also custom, the other fighter’s armor matched his Pokémon. Dull green segments plated his chest, while light brown leather left his arms free to swing his weapon, or rather weapons, of choice, two long, silver knives. A spiked helmet of similar color to his chest plates covered his entire face and head. I gave an unnoticeable sigh of relief at that, and then shook my head to clear my thoughts. No, I had to be ready to kill this man, as he was surely ready to do the same to me.
Silently, I hoped that my own armor was having the same intimidating effect on him. My segmented, pale blue plates covered nearly my entire body. A silver ‘X’ decorated my chest, shield, and helmet. At the center of the shield’s ‘X’ was a deadly spike.
I cautiously grasped a hand around my hammer and pulled it from its loop. It was a heavy weapon, one that proved too heavy for most warriors. That’s why I liked it so much. Plus, it requires little finesse. No fancy twirling or parrying is necessary when you can smash a man’s chest in a single blow.
Or his face. I shuddered.
The two of us stood staring at each other for what seemed like an eternity before the resonating gongs of a massive bell echoed over the din of the crowd. Then, the battle was on.
As was my usual strategy, I waited for him to make the first move. Let him decide the terms of our battle, I could deal with anything. Like most fighters do, he targeted me with his first blow, while his Scyther dashed at Metagross, light on its wings.
He rules of a battle are simple. Two warriors, each with their own Pokémon, face off in a flat circular or rectangular arena. There is no rule about who fights who, but the common approach is for the humans to duel while the Pokémon battle separately. Occasionally, the partners will help each other out, but for the most part, the two battles don’t interfere with each other. It’s all over when both the warrior and his Pokémon are incapacitated through either injury or disarmament. Then the victor gets to make the ultimate decision: whether or not to finish off his rival.
I took a step forward to meet the swing of my assailant’s short sword, letting the blade glance off of my shield. His weapons were curved, and therefore only useful in slashing, not stabbing. I could use that to my advantage.
I swung my hammer around heavily, slamming it into the side of his chest as hard as I could. The man winced, but did not hesitate to take another shot at chopping off my arm, this time with the other sword. Deftly flipping my hammer around in my hand, I let the blade hit it on the head.
Now that I had blocked blows from both of his weapons, the man’s stance was wide open. With a yell of effort, I lifted a heavily armored leg and planted it in his stomach, shoving him hard backwards. He stumbled once, and caught himself on his knee. Pressing my advantage, I led with my shield and swung my hammer down with all of my strength. But rather than taking another strike at me, like I had expected him to do, he rolled expertly out of the way. My weight carried me forward as my hammer slammed into the ground where he had been. Off balance, I pivoted on the hammer just in time to catch a double blow of my opponent’s swords in my shield.
To the side, I saw Metagross rearing back on its hind legs, pummeling the Scyther with a rapid fire assault of its clawed arms. I paid for getting distracted by catching the next double blow right across my back. It failed to slip through my armor, but still hurt incredibly. I cried out and fell forward, spinning so that I would land face up. This proved to be a good choice.
My adversary was following up with two more swings, his left hand blade leading while his right hand one windmilled over top. Out of reflex, I easily brushed the first sword out of the way with my hammer, but was forced to kick him in the stomach again so that the second blade wouldn’t get me.
The kick knocked him far enough away that I could get back on me feet, but gave me little time to recover more than that. He came at me again, his two swords spinning aggressively. I set myself in a ready stance, with my shield in front and my hammer above my head. It was a brief second of rest before the battle continued.
Our fight raged on for what felt like an hour. Each swing became slower, my helmet filled with the stench of sweat, and my hammer felt like a dead weight in my hand. My muscles were beginning to shake, and my breath came in gasps. Metagross seemed to be gaining the upper hand in his battle, but the green warrior and I were at a stalemate.
Any benefit I gained from having a heavier weapon had been lost ten minutes into the fight. I was simply too tired now. But besides the layer of dirt that had accumulated on his once shiny armor, my opponent seemed unaffected. Perhaps it had something to do with his light armor and weapons, but he continued to fight like a machine. That’s all he was to me, an inhuman being that had no purpose other than to beat me.
As we pulled out of yet another flurry of blows, I heard a sound that I had dreaded hearing since I started battling. The high pitched screech of metal tearing followed immediately by a roar of pain. My head whipped about. Metagross was on his back, his legs flailing in the air. A giant gash, oozing some clear fluid, was rent across the bottom of his body.
“No…” I whispered. We weren’t beaten yet, but as soon as one partner went down, the other was always soon to follow.
Refusing to be taken advantage of, I whipped back around to face the surely oncoming blow. But I was a second too late. Rather than blocking the blade of my opponent’s sword with the leather handle of my hammer like I had meant to, I caught it on my hand. The weapon dug between the joints of my gauntlets and easily split the leather gloves beneath. Instants later, I felt the cold steel of the blade separating the knuckle and index finger of my right hand.
Blood spilled from the wound, contrasting strangely with my blue armor. I let out a brief cry of surprise and dropped the hammer before I realized what had happened. The green warrior continued his assault, hitting me hard in the shoulder with the hilt of his other sword. I collapsed to my knees and gave out another gasp of pain, still staring in awe at the stump of my finger. My shield slowly slid off of my uninjured arm.
Everything seemed to snap back in place. The trance I had been in while battling was lifted, and the pain and tiredness that had plagued me throughout the fight hit me in full force. The cheering of the crowd reemerged as more than the white noise that it had become.
Gently, the winner of our battle placed the tip of a sword under my chin and lifted it slightly. Our eyes locked through the slits in our helmets. Am I going to die now? Was all I could think. The beady black eyes of my opponent showed no sign of an answer. He was cold, emotionless. The perfect warrior.
Suddenly, he raised his other hand and pulled the helmet from his face. With that simple gesture he was human again. I looked upon a man younger than me, with tussled black hair that matched his eyes, which were not as emotionless as they had seemed before. They were full of a wise understanding far beyond their years. Thin lips twitched slightly as he continued to stare at me. His face was covered in sweat, and he was actually breathing as hard as I was. He was human, after all.
Without a word, the sword dropped from my chin. He stowed both his weapons away in their sheaths and offered me an armored hand. I was to live.
Shakily, I grasped his hand in my uninjured one and let him lift me to my feet. This was much to the dismay of the crowd. Cheering became rampant booing. Letting your opponent live was rarely a popular choice. I had been fairly successful in my career so far, but I was no crowd favorite. Not yet.
I took my own helmet off, still maintaining eye contact. In a soft voice, just loud enough so that I could hear him over the crowd, he answered my unasked question. “I always let them live.”
As Metagross and I were escorted off of the field and into the infirmary, I contemplated his remark. Always? Surely not. I had been in seven battles before this. I had lost two and won five. Not counting the man I had killed accidentally, I had let only two of my defeated opponents live. I had no idea why I made the decision. Sometimes it just seemed right, it was all in the heat of the moment.
I shook my head to clear my thoughts as the doctor bandaged my hand. If I started thinking about stuff like that, it would interfere with my fighting. It wasn’t important. Winning was important.
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Chapter word count: 2,332
Total: 2,332
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