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COMPLETE: M Pokemon : The Evil Jigglypuff (Short Ghost Story)

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One cold night at the base of the Igglybuff Camp was the campfire. All of the Igglybuff were there to hear the daily campfire story. The Counsler Jigglypuff got up. As he did, all of the Igglybuff went silent. The Counsler said in a quiet voice," The story I am about to tell you is ths story of the evil Jigglypuff!" "It goes like this..."


One day in this camp, there was a Igglybuff. He was lonely because no one would talk to him because he could not use the move Sing. This Igglybuff was starting to go insane.

Then the next week, Igglybuff evolved into Jigglypuff. When this happened, the Jigglypuff lost all of his sanity. He replaced his microphone with a sparp knife. With that he went out and slaughtered all of the Igglybuff who did not talk to him.Some Pokemon say he still lives today!


"That's it.'' said the Jigglypuff. One Igglybuff got up and said,"That is 100% bull, just like humans exist!!"
The Jigglypuff laughed and said evily"It's true, becauseI AM the Jigglypuff in the story!!!" He then went out and slaughtered all of the Igglybuff around.

When the parents came up to pick up thier Igglybuff, the evil Jigglypuff told them that they were all killed by a wild Ursaring.


The END

How do you like it? please tell me. It is my 1st one.
 
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AGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*runs behind couch and hugs Magma Krystal doll*
 
What??

Anyway, The next one is called, "Pikastien" Comes out in a few days.
 
Very funny, Chimchar26. OK, I am about halfway done writing my new one on paper.
 
Nice ghost story. I would never had guessed Jigglypuffs could be so evil.(Mua ha ha!)
Can't wait til next weeks instalment.
 
The 2nd one: Pikastien.



One day, a Pichu was born. On a normal day like this,it would be considered nothing. But this Pichu was a diffrent, but not a shiny. It had a greenish hue, like the color of an apple. His parents were scared of his color so they took him to the scientist in the next town. They were carefull not to let anyone see the green Pichu.

When they got there, the scientist, who was a Raichu, shooed the parents away.He took the Pichu to his lab and straped him to a table. The Raichu then shocked the Pichu until it evoloved into a green Pikachu. The scientist then kicked the Pikachu out of the lab.

When other pokemon saw the green Pikachu, they ran away, scared. The green Pikachu was called "Pikastein" and had no friends. The Pikachu finally felt so sad that it jumped off a 400 foot cliff.
 
ok, happy early birthday...wait, that means your 2 yrs and 10 days older than me! ^^
 
WTF are these... they read like PETA ads.

I mean, the first one was just slightly amusing when the Jigglypuff who told the story revealed that he himself was the one in the story, but the second one had no reasoning or plot development whatsoever.

The second one was horrible. Let's go over it again: A green Pichu is born. His parents take him to a scientist's lab, and the scientist shocks him into a green Pikachu. He leaves and is rejected by society so he commits suicide by jumping off a cliff.

The things that happen are too disconnected, and happen too suddenly. And it's not a fable either, so it can't really be excused.
 
i like the first, but srry
ino Chan, i have to agree with Zekurom about the 2nd one.
 
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