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COMPLETE: Merry Christmas Pearlshippers (for those who celebrate!)

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Title: Christmas Moment (this was on the pearlshipping thread, but pikachuluver44 wanted me to make it longer and post it here!)
Warning: This has some kissing scenes, which may not be suitable for certain ages. If you think you can handle pearlshipping (AshxDawn) and a kiss shared between them. Then please do read! If not then turn away now!
Summary: (I'm making it a non one-shot with a nother idea added, however not that long either for amount of chapters.) This is about the chaotic christmas time! Dawn has some troubles with Ash!

Chapter One: one, two, three, FIGHT!

The trio Ash, Dawn and Brock were very cold. It was winter time all around the shinou region. They decided they were going to take a break, at a near by pokemon center. Also they had just realised the time of year... It was almost christmas time!

"Hey Brock are we almost there, I'm starving" Ash spoke anoyed. He was hungry, he also was excited for christmas time!

"The time comes when it does, let's just enjoy the view" Dawn also sounded anoyed. However it was not that she was hungry. It was the inpatience of the black haired boy next to her.

"But I'm really hungry, I'm also panicking, we just remebered about christmas" Ash complained.

"Well to bad, just be patient" Dawn was really getting anoyed now. From a tiny distance Brock, tall brown spikey haired man saw this. Right away he knew, if Ash replied there would be an argument coming on.

"But I've been pateint all day, now I'm just tired of being so pateint" Ash said with attitude. Brock was now seeing Ash with his fighting side and Dawn. He new trouble was bound to come. Espeacailly since the two had stopped not realising. Ash was complaining about wanting to get to the pokemon center. However was not going anywhere, instead busy yelling at Dawn.

"Well we all had to be pateint, and we're all tired to, of your so called pateince" screamed Dawn. Here it comes, Brock thought to himself.

"It is called pateince, and I'd still have it if we were there" Ash began to fight back. Brock new this would happen, and decided to step in.

"Listen we would be there by now, if you two would just stop arguing" Brock interupted. Before Dawn had the chance to show the side of her, everyone hated. To Brock it was her "aggresive side". To Ash it was her "opposite twin took over" side (as he called it). To Dawn it was her "fighting I'm wanna kill you" side.

The two realised Brock was right. But it only helped thier traveling. Thier friendship?... Not at all. They just didn't talk to eachother and looked away. If one turned to look at the other it was a nasty face. If you tried to help, they would get mad. First they would yell at you. Next they would yell at eachother. Then get into a worst fight! After things would be worst, because they would ignore everything. Brock thought as he sighed. He new many things about them. If they were to make up, it would haft to be a sincere apology. Normally after that apology everything would be back to normal. However for some odd reason, thier friendship would seem adorably strong right after. Brock had always wondered just why that was?

End of chapter one!
Note: This may be awile since I can't post that much. But this will come in as a late merry christmas ending. Now for you to think and review and suggest. Think about what is going to happen. Suppense is sometimes exciting!:-D

(By the way sorry if this seems to short)
 
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Suggestion:
I suggest you edit your story to check your grammer. Even though we can tell what you meant, I sometimes had to re read the sentence. Like made, was suppost to be mad, and wasw was suppost to be was.

Overall my thoughts:
It's quite good. Definately longer and funnier! Thanks for posting it! I can't wait for the "awww" part, I hope the next chapter comes soon!
 
Chapter Two: Top it of with a Star

The group finally made it to the pokemon center. However from the recent fight two people being Ash and Dawn were still not talking. This was bad news if they kept this up they would never make up. Brock sighed at thought. Though he was happy to see nurse joy, he was unhappy with his friends being mad before christmas. However that didn't stop Brock from trying at anything ordinary.

"Oh dear nurse joy I've counted the secounds since I last saw you, please would you mind giving me hug to keep me warm, after all that cold air rubbed upon..." Brock was poisin jabbed by crogunk! "Ofcourse crogunk could always give me a hug" He said as he was dragged away in pain.

"Um....so would you like a room," nurse joy asked.

"Yes please" Brock quickly interupted. "It seems the pokemon center is not decorated for christmas though! how about we help" Brock offered.

"Oh that would be splendid, but I think we should work on that tomorrow, you all seem to tired at the moment," she said leading them to thier room. Ash and Dawn did not speak like they were upset. So everyone got in bed without saying a word. Then Dawn had a horrible night mare...

***
"Huh where am I" she asked. She was in a forest of some sort. Then she herd voices yelling at eachother. She went to see it was herself and Ash fighting. Like earlier but something seemed different, Brock was not there. She watched them fight as she could not move. It went on and on. But got agreesive.

"JUST GET LOST DAWN!!!" she heard Ash say. Then she watched him push her to the ground and run away. She watched herself crying hopelessly as she was ignored. Infact to weak to get up and chase after him. To weak to stand, to sit up, to talk, or keep her eyes open. It was horrible she watched herself faint with no help. Could this be how agreesive it would have gotten? Would he really do that to me? She began to cry herself.

***

She suddenly woke up, it was 12:00 am! She felt her face have streams of tears on her cheeks as she cried helplessly... "Just like in my dream" she muttered. Then the thought of what she saw got to her. She felt horrified, and wanted to apologize and tell him. However with what she saw it was hard. Before she knew it, it was morning. She couldn't sleep so she just went in to the kitchen and started preparing food. So she could get that dream of her mind also for christmas.

"Hello, who is there," nurse joy asked only to see Dawn. "What's wrong? You look sad," she asked in concern.

"I-It's nothing" Dawn stuturred. She was upset but she only wanted to talk to Ash. Who she began to miss dearly. She found herself left in the kitchen crying. Brock had gotten up and helped nurse joy with decorating the outside. Ash had gotten up and decorated the inside. Dawn was still cooking and felt exausted. She needed sleep, but that was the last thing she wanted. Another chance for that horrifying night mare true or not! She walked in to the lobby to Ash finishing the christmas tree with a star! He almost had it but then. BANG! He feel of the ladder in distubance of Dawn. She looked at him with tears wanting to say what she couldn't.

"Here to apologize," Ash asked. All Dawn could do was cry and nod. Her tears could not be held back. Big fight or not Ash knew something was bothering her horribly. "What's wrong," he asked.

"It's just this night mare I had," Dawn said with a very weak tone.

"Ouch, night mares are scary aren't they, was it bad" He asked with much concern. After that dream she couldn't forget, she was scared and confused with his actions. She stared at him with confusion and teary eyes. "It...It was about the fight....wasn't it, what happened" Ash asked. Dawm told him just what she saw. However she couldn't say the whole thing without crying herself. "Whoa that is bad, but I promise I would never do that to you" Ash said trying to cheer her up.

"But...after that dream...that fight seemed so....scary, it felt real" Dawn shouted the last bit (it felt real).

Ash knew it really hurt her. He didn't know why exactly but he somehow understood, that she was atleast hurt. He hugged her tightly. He tried to help and all he could say was "it's ok...it's not real...and I promise it won't happen ever".

"And how do you know that" Dawn screamed. Tears filled her eyes and soaked his shirt.

"Because Dawn...I could never live with myself it that happened" Ash meant it. That Dawn knew, but it was still unbeleivable. "Dawn let's be honest, do think I'm really a bad person, more like a handsome," Ash joked, it actually made Dawn giggle for a few secounds.

Chapter Two Ended!

(Is it too long? Or too short?)
 
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*tears fall* It's getting there I can feel it! <3 I'm so excited! Curse you and your leaving us of at perfect moments ness lol (jk). But thank you for finishing up chapter two! Can't wait for the next one! (Still a few sp mistakes though but it is good enough I suppose!)
 
Chapter Three: The Bell with a Soothing Sound!

After the talk Dawn had with Ash about her nightmare. She went to sleep (it was christmas eve by the way). Next she found herself woken up, with black eyes looking at her. She was being shaked by her again impatient friend.

"What is it? Is there a fire?" Asked Dawn anoyed.

"NO! I don't think so.... But it's christmas morning and you haft to come out of hibernating now" Ash joked.

"Why? Just start breakfast without me and I'll come for presents," Dawn barely said well attempting to, fight back her yawn.

"But Brock made pancakes you haft to come! Plus we all haft to eat together, BECAUSE it's christmas!" Ash begged. Dawn just sighed and gave a nod.

"Ok I'll be there soon, you run ahead I'll see you at the table" Dawn muttered. As she said so, Ash ran out inediatly. "He's just as excited for breakfast as he is presents" She thought outloud. Then she got dressed and they all ate thier breakfast.

After going out in the snow they had a wounderful time. They opened thier presents before they went outside. They came back in and were very happy it was a white christmas! Dawn was happy that she didn't think the nightmare was as scary. She didn't worry about it anymore.

"I'm going to be back, just getting the hot chocolate" said Brock. He got a nod from the other two.

Dawn was stareing at the fire watching it's beauty. The christmas tre was lit up. If you looked closely you could see it's rainbow of lights, reflecting in her hair. The fire was glowing shades of red as, it reflected in her eyes. All in all she looked like a rainbow being reflected, upon an ocean. Her eyes shimering and twinkling like stars! Ash just remembered one last present he forgot to give, to Dawn! He looked over at her attempting to say something. Instead found himself lost, watching her beauty, as the lights danced around her. After his thoughts were quickly disturbed!

"Hey got the hot chocolate... Now of to Nurse Joy!" Brock screamed, like a fan girl. The two took the hot chocolate. Then Ash was put back on track.

"Hey Dawn I almost forgot to give you this!" Ash spoke, this time before turning. Which was way smarter than being lost again.

He handed her small saphire blue box. It's beauty was magnificent as reflected the lights, making it shimmer beautifully. Dawn took the box in surprise, and excitedly unrapped it. She found her self looking and listening to a soothe bell. It calmed her soul. Like she was floating, she began to feel joy, as all her bad thoughts disappeared into thin air!

"Ash, I love it!" She said with much joy. This made him very happy to see her in such a mood. "I have a present for you too! Just close your eyes for me to give it to you ok!" Dawn enthusiastically(sp?) said. Ash did as commanded then.... He felt a slight brush on his lips. A kiss perhaps?! This was to his shook an amazeing feeling! He had a kiss before between others, even pokemon! But never had he felt like that before ever!!!

"Merry Christmas" They both muttured gazeing at eachother. By the beautiful fire place. Well piplup cuddled on Dawn's lap. Just as Pikachu did the same with Ash. Buneary was cuddled into Dawn's side, well thier other pokemon. Were running around the pokemon center's halls happy! Aswell as playing with thier new toys, and watching Brock get pulled away by none other than crogunk!

THE END OF THE STORY!!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!!!!!! =D
Hope you enjoyed it have great holidays and a fresh (much better) new year! Thank you for reading =D!
 
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