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Molly's New Scooter

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Molly's New Scooter - Patt I

Mrs. Ketchum takes Ash to the store to get a scooter for Molly, Ash can't decide on what color to get for Molly.

"Maybe Molyl will like a yellow one." said Ash.

"Good choice/" said Professor Oak

so Ash and Professor Oak decided on the yellow scooter for Molly, so they put the box onto the hand truck and took it to the check out counter

"I jsut hope Team Rocket isn't hungry for trouble today." said Ash

"Let's get thuis scooyrt paid for anso we can take it home and put it together for molly" said Professor Oak.

Molly is sitting on the porch at the Ketchum house playing with her yo-yo, she ios excited about her scooter

"I can't wait to see what mt scooter will be like." said Molly

:Your scooter is here." said Professor Oak

Ash helps Professor Oak pu the scooter together, it is yellow. it has a footboard and a kickstand to keep the scooter in place

Molly treis out her scooter, she loves it, she rides it around the backyard

"I love my mew scooter." said Molly

Mr. Freeze fereezes everything in sight

"It might be Team Rocket!" said Ash angrily

"Prepare for trouble" said Jessy

"And Make it double!" said James

"To protect the world from devastaion" said Jessy

"To unite all people within our nation" said James

"To denounce the evil of truth and love" said Jessy

"To extend our reach to the stars of above" said James

"Jessy!" said Jessy

"James!" said James

"Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light!" said Jessy

"Surrender now or prepare to fight!" said James

"Meowth, Thats Right!" said Meowth

Mt. Freezes freezes everything in sight includMolly's scooter

"My Scooter!" cried Molly

"It's gatting colder!" siad Ash angrily

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
What....in the name of Arceus.....WAS THAT?!

That made absolutely NO sense!
 
If the world's education system was like that, I'm going to fail my GCSE 'O' levels.

Whoa! Mt. Freeze freezes everything in sight, including Molly's scooter!?!?! And exactly WHO was on the scooter?

Is this Batman or Pokemon?

Lawl, Mew scooter? And it was yellow? Is it PikaMEw? Seriosuly, GET A SPELL CHECKER.
 
Another story of entirely dialogue and no plot whatsoever, and this time it's gatting colder? I wish you would write more of this incredible stuff!
 
Molly's New Scooter - Patt II

The whole gang goes to Professor Oak's lab and sit and listen to Professor Oak.

"Mr. Freeze is a very dangerous creature, his difficulty level is dangerously high." said Professor Oak

"We'll need major power to destroy that monster." said Molly

"Right!" said Ash

The kids talk to each other and figure out a way to destroy Mr. Freeze and warm everytghing up again, Mr. Freeze is still amking thoe whole world cold with his powers.

Molly is sitting at her desk drawing with her crayons while watching cartoons.

"A cold monster nown as Mr. Freeze is making thwe whole world cold and the temperture in Pallet Town has dropped to 17º

"That monster is doing great." said Jessy

"I agree." said James.

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
Guys, I have experience with this person. Years of it. (Anyone who wants the story, feel free to PM me and I'll share)

He is, to put this bluntly, seriously mentally impaired. The only real thing you can do is just give him his space...
 
If we ignore him he'll stop? Excellent idea, why didn't I think of that before attacking?
 
Molly's New Scooter Part III

still cold out, Mr. Freeze is still attacking the world, it will take all 8 children to destroy him

"How are we goign to defeat Mr. Freeze?" asked Ash

"Teamworl." Professor Oak replied

"My scooter is still frozen." cried Molly.

"We'll wearm it up, Molly" said Ash.

The 8 children walk down a dirt road and climbs a tree and sees a castle in heaven, and walk down a dirt road to a moat, and they cross the moat, and they make it to the castle and they find a w3ay to destroy Mr. Freeze once and for all.

"You'll pay for freezing my brand new scooter!" yelled Molly.

"The good guys are here!" yelled Ash

"We always wim!" yelled Brock

""You're going down, Ice Brain!" yelled Richie

all 8 children destroy Mr. Freeze and defeat team rocket

"My Scooter is warmed up and good as new again" said Molly excitedly

back at home Molly rides her new scooter all over the backyard, Molly loves her scooter, she rides it for a great 10 hours, then at night the children are tucked n beed and sleep for the night.


THE END
 
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What are you, four? Read the advice for aspiring authors or something then try again.
 
PRECISELY. That's why he isn't bothering us anymore with his utter lack of grammar.
 
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