My Pokemon Town

[frazzer]

This is just 2 show of my self created town since the original thread is closed now.
Hope you like it, tell me if you like it or if you think anything should be changed i accept constructive criticism.
There will be a story 2 go with the picture soon thanks.

THE STORY - Team Galatic have kidnapped Prof. Rowan so they can locate Shaymin in an attempt to summon Arceus at Startic Town, so they can realize there dream of complete universal domination. Our protagonist teams up with his cousin Ruby’s protagonist, also he gains help from Prof.Oak Rowan’s once prodigy. Will Team Galatic be able to realize there dream or will our heroes stop them.

P.S IF I GET POSITIVE COMMENTS I WILL FINISH THE STORY WHICH INCLUDES A NEW SELF MADE TOWN.

 

[Æsahættr]

It's alright, but there is a reason the old thread was locked. There's no artistic merit to these towns, and the quality of the posts and posters was on a steady decline, and I don't like the way this is starting.

If you want this seen, post them when you post the story to go with them.

 

[Tadashi]

The town itself looks well done, but what else is there?

Why Team Galactic here? What kind of Gym is that in the corner? Which way do you go to enter/leave? Why does Arcanine look so... strange? Is Brendan sprite the hero? Or is it the Lucas sprite? How did Oak come about these parts?

If I were you, I'd put a story in to generate more interest. The poster above me said you're off to a bad start already, and I'd have to agree. Sorry.