My Pokemon XD Manga ( english version)

[Junichi-Fan]

This is the english version of my Pokemon XD-Manga.
I made this for Wolfscomics. I hope yyou like it^-^!

the pages in biger? look here: http://gallery.bulbagarden.net/thumbnails.php?album=19

 

[Kasumi]

Very nice work! And I see you used the Japanese way of reading the panels too. I do like the water effect on the Chapter's cover.

 

[Crimson Moon]

*claps* These are very good! I just love manga! You make the characters (that includes Lugia) look so cute in my opinion! Anyway, if I had to rate this I'd give it a 10/10! I think it's really that good!

 

[Yamato-san]

what other language version are you writing this in? Japanese (I kind of assume from the sound effects)? If so, just thought you should know that "Michi" wouldn't work. His Japanese name is Lute リュート .

EDIT: Nevermind, your location says you're from Germany.

 

[Junichi-Fan]

I make a german and a japenese version of my manga.
"His Japanese name is Lute リュート"..no....he call in japan Ryuto ^-^ and in amerika Michael (Michi is the shortform of Michael).

 

[Yamato-san]

Oh, so you're making both a German and Japanese version, eh?

Um.... couldn't you read the kana I had in my post? I'm well aware that it's actually "Ryuuto", but "Lute" is a possible (and somewhat popular.... no clue if it's official, though) romanization of the name. Anyway, just pointing that if you're gonna make the name-shortening thing be a big deal to the script in any way (in other words, it's not so easily ommitable because you, for instance, have whole scenes involving how characters should refer to him), it probably wouldn't work as well if you intend to make a Japanese version. Although... you could probably play around with name suffixes instead of name-shortening if such were the case.... or maybe both in the form of "Ryuu-san" or something (in the game Disgaea, Laharl gets pissed when a character keeps referring to him as "Laharl-chan", which is changed to "Harley" in the English version).

 

[Junichi-Fan]

my first chapitel is finish^-^!!!

 

[Junichi-Fan]

 

[Junichi-Fan]

sorry ^-^° i hate this limit of post for pics-_-°°°°°

 

[*Colette*]

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow! Your manga is fantastic!!!! I adore your arts. You are a professionalist! Nobody is better than you. The boy from your comic is so damn hot!!! XD

 

[bgt]

Whoa, this just simply blows me away, I mean, just look @ the work put into the art, so detailed, XD.