my rain dance team suggestion?

[magikarp ftw]

plz rate it guys
if got any good suggestion please feel free

job: lead

lanturn @ damp rock

N:modest

A:volt absorb

ev HP 252

ev SP attack 52

ev defence 100

ev SP defence 100

MOVESET

thunder wave

thunder

hydro pump

rain dance

hes job is to put up a rain dance no matter what for the advantages on the field for all my team


job special sweeper

jolteon @life orb

N:modest

A: volt absorb

ev SPattack 252

ev SPD 252

ev HP 6

MOVESET

Thunder

charge beam

signal beam

shadow ball

jolteon as a special sweeper and to use thunder as an advantange

job: special sweeper

ludiculo @ leftovers

N:modest

A: swift swim

ev SP attack 252

ev spd 252

MOVESET

surf

ice beam

giga drain

rain dance


to renew rain dance and use swift swim to outspeed alot of other pokemon and to use surf because of the boost from rain dance and leftovers and giga drain restore its hp from using rain dance and ice beam for coverage from flying type

job: physical sweeper

kabutops @ lum berry

N: adamant

A: swift swim

ev attack 252

ev spd 252

MOVESET

aerial ace

sword dance

waterfall

rock slide

with rain dance he out speed nearly anything and good revenge killer and aerial ace as coverage and sword dance when ever you think i have the chance to use sword dance i use it.

job:special sweeper

starmie @ choice specs

N:modest

A:natural cure

ev SP attack 252

ev SPD 252

ev HP 6

MOVESET

psychic

surf

thunder

ice beam

if rain dance is in play i would normally use moves such as thunder or surf due to the advantage of the rain

job:physical wall

Slowbro @ leftovers

N: modest

A: own tempo

ev HP 252

ev Def 40

ev sp def 48

ev sp attack 164

slack off

psychic

surf

rain dance

he is there to pack a punch and endure one too with he's stunning 110 defence



now, i think this can be better but i just don't know how
any help will do thanx

 

[King Eriandor]

Try using drizzle politoed with choice scarf.

also beartic and kingdra (depending on what teirs you're in) can make some good swift swim abusers. beartic would be among the best to help cover your grass weakness. another good one for covering grass types is scizor who's only weakness is cut by the rain.

It can also really depend on whether you're in singles or doubles.

 

[Takaki]

Your team really struggles against a plethora of threats in the metagame and it would be quite hard to rate without a complete rebuilding. I would suggest reading here: Smogon University - Competitive Pok for further support to get together a more viable team.

 

[magikarp ftw]

thanx for the pointers i will adjust my team now
i just wasn't using smogon at the time for sorry that

 

[King Eriandor]

The biggest problem is that you have so many pokemon of the same type. only jolteon and ludicolo don't have a Grass weakness. 3/6 are weak to electric (although 2 are immune) another 3 are weak to ground and you have 2 water/psychic types with very similar movesets.

The idea is good but you will need a lot of editing before it can reach it's full potential.

 

[Thundagere]

Also, when you edit it, I would suggest using the format
Pokemon@Item
Nature
EVs: HP/Attack/Defense/Special Attack/Special Defense/Speed
-Move 1
-Move 2
-Move 3
-Move 4

Just because it makes things much more concise and easy to rate.

 

[Charraze]

As Ferrothorn seems to be in every team ever at the moment I would throw something in the mix like an Abomasnow or Beartic. Abomasnow is my personal favourite but its your choice. I would then throw Starmie or Slowbro out.

Also Electric types will screw your team over completely, and a choice banded Jolteon/Magnezone will thunder the life out of your team. So for that a Quagsire would be perfect.

Hope you take those comments on board!

 

[magikarp ftw]

i wasnt thinking the best that day
my friend released a shiny on my black