TEEN: - Complete Mysteries of Ravenhearst

[methodistgirl]

As I get out of my car I go to investigate this old house
that was home to one of the most grosome murders.
Now this house is haunted and for a good reason sitting
on a hill beyond a creckly old gate that was in a bad need
of some oil or even W-D-40. For hours I tried to figure
how to get the key from the box to use it. Using the
screwdriver given me, it took more hours to figure the
connections. Finally the gate opened wide. I could hear
ravens, crows, and even vultures flying. A ghost came out
and pleaded with me.

 

[methodistgirl]

"Please find the missing link to our past and
set us free! Please hurry before our murderer
comes back."

What a beautiful ghost I thought. Right now was
not the time to think about beauty. As I walked
up to the door boards were nailed across it keeping
me from getting inside to investigate. So I took some
kind of rock and smashed a window to get in. It was
getting colder outside and the fire place was lit and
burning like a welcome. The stench of the old house
was enough to make me run outside to throw up.
I was horrorfied to think of what I would find in the
kitchen. The smell of death and mold choked me as
I walked across the livingroom full of moldy couches
and chairs. The kitchen was incredible with the smell
of rotten meat and food still on the shelf. I dared not
touch nothing without gloves at this point. Then another
ghost appeared.

 

[methodistgirl]

"Please unlock these doors and find my hidden
cavern to release my tormented spirit for I was
also murdered by the one who murdered the
ghost in white."

The most beautiful ghost looked like it was wearing
a white Victorian wedding dress and the one I just
met wore a blue Victorian styled dress of the time
they were as alive women. The house was an old
Victorian mansion that was ran down and unloved
that was full of old clutter. I touched one of the
many statues and it came to life.

"Don't touch me until you find a rose to place in
my hand!"

The statue stopped and went back to it's pose
scaring the life from me. As I went outside my
heart was in my throat beating loudly. I went
outside to find a garden with a pond and some
more unusual statues that even cemeteries wouldn't
dare have in them and I've been in some that
were creepy. This old house took the prise for being
the creepiest. After I rebuilt my nerve back up, I
went inside again and tried some combinations on
this hearth and the fireplace disappeared for some
stairs to appear. I was startled with some more
ghost that looked like the ghost of children.

"Can you help us find mommy? It's so dark and cold
here. Please hurry before Father punishes us and
find our brother."


I found myself in this hallway that looked like something
from a museum with large tube that ran to nowhere and
was working on another combination to undo a lock.

 

[Wes118]

interesting but i would suggest combining these short parts into chapters that are a decent size

 

[methodistgirl]

"La la la la la la la la! (laughter)"

I went through this door and found what looked like
an old store front full of more clutter. I looked to my
right and found what looked like an old grocery store.
I was afraid to see what I might find in this old place
and it was full of light where I could find what I needed
to find to help me out more. Whoever came up with
this setup was very clever. I walked into what looked
like an elevator but it was missing a lever. I went out
and walked down what looked like a street to another
place with a sign that said parlor. After figuring out this
stupid lock I finaly got in to be faced with a ghostly
picture of two twin girls that seemed to stare a hole
right through. I went up stairs to find another door with
a maze like combination lock.

"Hurry and find the missing passage" I heard from one
of the ghosts that slept there. The door opened and I
was startled by a maniquin that looked life like. I ran
for another place to throw up after smelling the stench
of a nasty bathroom full of moldy water that was
beyond soured. I picked up a lever with a rubber
glove so I wouldn't get sick from the germs that might
be on that lever. I ran totally outside to get some
fresh air to clear my lungs full of that stench.

 

[methodistgirl]

Sorry Wes. I'm just coming up with what's in my head
as I write it. Ravenhearst is a wonderful game if you
want to try it on Big Fish.

 

[methodistgirl]

"Headquarters, Inspector Diamond please respond!"

"Okay, this is Inspector Diamond. Do you copy?
I have a murder inspection going on and things are
getting creepier by the minute. I will tell you what
happens after I'm done. Over and out!"

I went back inside to investigate some more and
fixed the elevator with the lever I found. I found
what was left of a bellhop that had turned into a
skeleton and mortified. Pulling the lever I went
down even more to find a place like a canal going
out with a boat but the boat was half filled with
water. The left over cargo were bags of coffee
beans. Over to my far left was a vent like grate.

"Please hurry! You are very close."

The ghost in the blue dress appeared showing me
that her tomb was in there. Bats were thick in
her tomb and I had to shoot one of my guns to
scare them off. There she was in her casket with
tubes connected to her even though she had been
dead for decades. I had to turn off the mashine
to this gruesome sight and her ghost seemed to
rise up from the dead body and looked at me.

"Thank you so much for releasing me from this
place. I can go now."

The ghost vanished not to be seen again. Later,
I went back to the hall to find another door with
a crazy combination where you turned pebbles
to match them and the door opened. This was the
chamber to the twins. What I saw broke my
heart. How could someone lock up children like
that? I had to press on. I went to the toy shop
and found a fuse to light up the school and opened
the door after I used a combination of some kind
of crazy looking phone. Under the school was a
celler door that took me hours to get the lock
opened up to go in and found something to put
gasoline in. I walked to what looked like a doll
house and found a rope to get down to a dungon.

 

[methodistgirl]

"Please help us find mommy!"

I was startled again by the ghost twins. I finaly
got to the bottom of a well to find another door
with a stupid lock that worked like a hard puzzle.
What I found inside these doors was heartbreaking.
After I got rid of the statues that looked like dragons,
there stood a casket that looked like it had two
windows on it and you could see the bodies of these
twin girls. It stood about four feet tall and was made
of solid oak. Tearfully I opened the lid and the ghosts
invaded the dead bodies of two children that were also
hooked up on the same kind of tubes. But where did
the tubes go?

"Thank you for helping us find our way to mommy.
Good bye!"

 

[methodistgirl]

FinallyI can go back and open another door
in the hallway. This lock had a typewriter
like device connected to the lock and it opened
after I typed Jessie on it. What I found was
quite different I found a trolly that leaded up
to what looked like a log cabin. Before I
could get there I was faced with another
combination lock that took an hour to figure out.
Soon I was faced by an old man that was a
bit looney and mean.

"Well! Who do we have here? I'm coming to
get you!"

My lights went out! Where was I? I could hear
the sound of the rain falling and a bit of thunder.
I woke up to find myself in the attic of the mansion.
I looked around for something to help me down
from the trap door of the attic. I used a hair pin
to jam the lock open. Easy as pie! The hallway
of the old mansion was almost in ruins as I crossed
to find the library and then across the hall to what
looked like a theater. I reached for an axe and
chopped my way out of this mess. Now to get
back to the cabin. I found another stupid puzzle
that would unlock the back door of the cabin and
found a jeweled heart. For some reason jeweled
hearts kept appearing.

"Pop I will get you back to your chamber so you
can get some rest. Just a few more steps."

My heart was pounding again hoping I wouldn't
be discovered looking for clues. I went back
to the trolley and went for the old house.
Going down the elevator I noticed a puzzle
in this booth that took me down even further.
This was the creepiest dungeon ever

 

[methodistgirl]

"Do not come here," said a creepy voice.

I finally got about 300 feet below the old
mansion and found myself ankle deep in water
from it raining outside. My heart was pounding
hard with fright. I felt like screaming but
knew of it not being wise so I built up my
courage to get brave. Inside of this chamber
were three doors. I went to the left to a room
with a thick book full of newspaper clippings
and a blueprint of how a system worked to
keep this 150 year old man alive by using
the spirits of the dead. I went across the hall
to find a huge statue of the woman he loved
and read her story of how much he loved her
and then turned him down for marrage.
As a guy I know how it is to be rejected but
this creep went as far as poisoning her,
her nurse maid and the nurse maid's two girls.
I also found a picture of him picking up a
meat cleiver to kill the one he loved. Her nurse
maid had a child by him which was a boy and
now the boy is 90 years old and gets around
like he was still in his fifties. Remarkable!
By now I was at my wits end from working all
of these stupid locks to all of the doors that I
had to go through to get to my salution to
the murders. Now I have another stupid lock
staring at me to solve and open. As I opened
the final door I found him. He was standing
in this booth like device and he lived in it
for all of these years.

 

[methodistgirl]

"YOU! YES YOU! Come here detective! What have
you done to my family? You are the one who has
done this to me! You came here to make fun of me
and now you are here to destroy me."

"YES! I'm here to make sure Mr. Ravenhearst that
you are going down! Why did you murder all of
these innocent people you call family? Tell me this!
As of the day you will cease to exist this evil."

I looked upon what used to be an antique piano and
found another device to shut it all down. I pressed a
red button and ran. The evil old man's scream could
be heard outside as the old house burnt up and vanish
to be no more. I walked up to where the house stood
and found a deep pit full of deadly snakes being killed
and ate by rats. The sickening smell of death and
rotten flesh was gone and the 90 year old also died in
the fire for the rats were eating. The spirits of the
ghosts I encountered were seen rising up toward the
heavens free from all evil. The Queen sent me a
message of thanks to all of the work I did to solve the
mystery. I get back to my car and drove back to
the police headquarters.







The end!