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EVERYONE: - Complete Mystery At Celadon City Lake

MollyHaleIsMyFriend

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Mystery At Celadon City Lake

Ash And Molly Are Eating Peanut Butter & Jelly Sandwiches In The Park In Celadon City

Richie Comes

Richie And Ash Shake Hands

Richie And Ash Petition For The Celadon City Lake To Get Filled Up With Water.

"The Lake Might Soon Have Water" Said Molly

"I Sure Hope So" Said Ash

Molly Is Sitting On The Bench Near The Lake

Ash Joins Her

"Your Are A New Firend, Molly; We Have To Work Together" Said Ash

"You're Right, Ash" Said Molly

Molly Hugs Ash

"Let's Solve This Mystery Together" Said Richie

Ash Calls On His Pokemon

So Do Misty, Brock And Richie

Ash, Misty, Brock, Richie, Molly, Max, Tracey And May And Their Pokemon Are On The Case Of The Lake Water

"We're Ready To Rock" Said Ash

"8 Working Together To Fight Evil" Said Brock

"And Stop Team Rocket" Said Richie

"And Their Pokemon" Said Tracey

"From Destroying Our Planet Earth" Said Max

"And Ruling The Universe With Evil" Said Misty

"And Spoiling Our Plans" Said Molly

"And Stealing Our Pokemon" Said May

"We're Not Backing Down, Team Rocket" Said Ash

"We Are" Said Ash

"Ash And Friends" Said All 8 Kids

Team Rocket Drinks All the Water In Celadon Lake With Big Straws With Their Pokemon Helping Them

All The Electric Pokemon And Other Electric Pokemon With The 8 Pokemon Shcok Team Rocket So Much A Fire Erupts And Officer Jenny COmes And The Fire Dept.

They Put Out The Fire

[The SKy Turns Black With Thunder]

The 8 Kids Ride Home In A Van

Ash Gives Misty A Check For $1,000 For Thr Broken Bike

"Thanks, Ash" Said Misty

"I Am Proud Of All 8 Of You" Said Professor Oak

"You Caught A Lot More Pokemon. Ash" Said Professor Oak

Ash Is Up To 300 Pokemon

(All 8 Kids Will Stay On The Team In My Stories From Now On)
 
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You need to write actual stories from now on. This isn't much of a story. You don't need to capitalize every single word, only the first word of a sentence and any proper nouns. Seriously, my 11-year-old can write more coherent stories than you can.
 
You need to write actual stories from now on. This isn't much of a story. You don't need to capitalize every single word, only the first word of a sentence and any proper nouns. Seriously, my 11-year-old can write more coherent stories than you can.

It isn't worth it, Barb... he will not or cannot listen...
 
A very simple solution exists. If he posts another so-called 'fic' like this, he'll be banned from the stories forum forever and his other so-called 'fics' will be deleted.
 
A very simple solution exists. If he posts another so-called 'fic' like this, he'll be banned from the stories forum forever and his other so-called 'fics' will be deleted.

In my not so humble opinion that should've been done a long time ago... but you're the one in control of that, not me, so it isn't my call.
 
Please note: The thread is from 19 years ago.
Please take the age of this thread into consideration in writing your reply. Depending on what exactly you wanted to say, you may want to consider if it would be better to post a new thread instead.
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