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Hello denizens of Bulbagarden! Anywho, the fic I'm about to present was one I started quite awhile ago and currently have 5 episodes written of. This is the 1st (and worst) of them, because its the one I wrote the farthest back. I plan to add a new chapter every week if all goes well, and they get better as we go along, so bear with me. Withour further adieu, here's the fic!

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Neo-Poke: Episode One, Season One: Pallet Boy and Neko Girl

12 year-old Hoshi Morgan looked back at Neko Town, a small town just south of Pallet. She pushed a strand of crimson hair back and scanned the town over once again with her emerald eyes. The place she'd grown up, but also the place she'd felt a certain sense of confinement that could only come from a small town life. The few times she'd been out of it previously the wonder of the outside world had amazed her and she'd resolved to leave as soon as possible, though, every time she imagined leaving she was always with her family, but of course Miya, Kazuma, and her parents were still back there.

'But that's ok!' she told herself, 'I'm no baby, I just need myself and I'm completely FINE!' She looked down at the pokeballs containing her first Pokemon and the one her parents had sent to 'keep her out of trouble' contemplating letting them out for company, though before she could do that a female Nyasu released itself-well, rather herself.

"What's the idea putting me in that...that THING, huh?!" the Nyasu demanded angrily, for she had just about as much tolerance for the small, confined balls as her father did. And her father just happened to have zero tolerance.

"You're a Pokemon, it's where you generally go," Hoshi replied sarcastically.

"But I'm a SPECIAL Pokemon! How can I watch you like yer parents want me to if you keep me in the THING?!"

"I don't need anyone or anything to help me! I'm going to become number one!"

Nyasu sighed, "Still stuck on being a better trainer than Miya, huh? Well I'll tell ya one thing I've gathered so far about life. Bitterness and anger can't be you're drive behind this, you won't REALLY accomplish anything then. Not even if you win the league."

"I'm not just doing this to be better than my older sister!" Hoshi defended herself, "I want to see the world too!"

"It's not enough."

"Who asked YOU, huh?!" snapped Hoshi, then turning around curtly and walking past the cat Pokemon onward toward Viridian City.

"Be dat way then! See if I help yo-no wait! WAIT FOR MEEE!!!" Nyasu screeched running after Hoshi's retreating figure.

************

Meanwhile, in Viridian Forest a boy barely 12 years old was engaged in his first Pokemon battle with his Pokemon, Pichu.

'Don't wanna brag, but I'm gonna win this sooooo easily!' he thought smugly. His name was Shinji Ketchum, the over-confident son of Pokemon Master Satoshi Ketchum and water pokemon trainer Kasumi Ketchum. He turned an old, worn Pokemon League official cap back, just as he'd seen his father do in pictures and videos of his (Satoshi's) youth.

"You're in over your head. I've competed in the League before, I’ve just returned to some old stomping ground," said his opponent.

"You'll NEVER be able to beat the son of Satoshi Ketchum!" Shinji returned with a confident smirk on his face.

"Piiiii!" Shinji's Pichu gave the opponent a raspberry to show that he too shared his trainer's view.

The opponent shrugged, "A stupid Pokemon deserves a stupid trainer I suppose. GO DUGTRIO!"

"Trio Trio," the evolved, highly leveled Pokemon croaked upon release.

"A GROUND Pokemon?! B-but you aren't playing fair...Dugtrio is resistant to Pichu's-"

"Don't whine boy," reprimanded his opponent, "in the world of real battles you need to expect anything. You won't be able to complain about," the man's voice took on a purposely whiney tone, "'He doesn't play faaaaaaiiiiiir'," his voice returned to normal, "You just have to think with your head! DUGTRIO, USE DIG ATTACK!"

"Trio," the Dugtrio complied burrowing under ground.

"GAAAAAK!!" Shinji yelled, eyes widening. Then he saw a form coming from under ground, "PICHU GET OUT OF THE WAY!"

"PICHUUUUU!" the small pokemon responded in a shrill voice as it was flung into the sky and battered by an underground force.

"Better luck next time child," the man's voice brought Shinji out of the horror thoughts racing though his head, "Challenge me again when you have something called SKILL," the man recalled his Dugtrio and took off.

"W-wait Mr....b-b-but you can't just leave me out here with Pichu injured like this! I don't have any potion! I-I don't know what to do!" Shinji yelled desperately, cradling his Pichu, with a few tears forming in his blue green eyes.

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"WHAT DO YOU MEAN I CAN'T GO INTO VIRIDIAN GYM?!" Hoshi shrieked like hell's harpy.

"What I just said," the guard responded, "the gym leader, Sakaki-San is out doing business. No one is here. Go to Pewter and come back some other time."

"Just listen to the man," Nyasu whispered to Hoshi, "he looks like a body builder. We don't wanna meddle in the affairs of body builders, trust me," poor Nyasu was envisioning the rough-looking man stationed at the door twisting she and her human companion into many different shapes, beating them up, standing at two graves and laughing manically, ripping out a chainsaw and shredding them, plus a number of other horrible things.

"I wouldn't care if he was Son Goku! He isn't getting in MY way!" declared Hoshi bravely-er...stupidly.

The guard sighed, no one EVER wanted to take the easy way out, "Look, do I have to call in the REAL security? They're at least ten times burlier than me easily!"

"Bring 'em o-waaaaaah?!" cried Hoshi as Nyasu dragged her away in an amazing act of strength brought on by the self-preservation instinct.

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"What did you do that for Nyasu?!" demanded Hoshi near the entrance to Viridian Forest, "My Charmander could have taken care of whatever men he called on!"

"And it's dat very same arrogance that made yer parents demand I accompany you. You don't think straight when yer pissed--or ever for that matter--and you get inta losta trouble."

"I do NOT! And I could have had an absolutely triumphant first victory if you hadn't ruined it!" Hoshi roared.

'Her temper almost rival's her mom's! I really gotta be careful of what I say!' thought Nyasu.

"We battle the first trainer we meet in that forest, no question asked, alright Nyasu?" Hoshi said, in a tone of voice that had the cat Pokemon knowing she didn't actually have much of a choice in the matter.

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"P...Pichu," murmured Shinji, who was now curled up in a fetal position still holding his injured Pichu, "just hold on...until someone finds us."

"HEY YOU!" called a feminine voice, "YEAH, YOU! IF YOU'RE A TRUE POKEMON TRAINER I DEMAND A BATTLE!" the voice belonged to none other than Hoshi, who, in a desperate search for opponents has scoured the forest for another trainer and captured a wild Spearow in the process with her Charmander.

Shinji leapt to his feet and looked at Hoshi up and down, "I'd fight you, but first...do you have any potion? My only Pokemon, Pichu is real hurt but I don't have none!"

"What bad grammar," observed Nyasu quietly, not thinking at all of the times she'd said "dat" instead of "that", "yer" instead of "your" and other such things, "good thing I ain't like dat in no way!" she nodded to herself, satisfied with her sense of superiority over this boy.

"Shame on you!" Hoshi scolded, also looking for a chance to bolster her ego, "I mean, with all that can happen in a place like this you just run in unprotected?!"

"D-do you have any potion?" Shinji asked once again, quietly though, this time.

"Well.....no," Hoshi confessed causing everyone around to fall down anime style.

Shinji jumped up, "You got no reason to lecture ME then, ya know!"

"Well!" snapped Hoshi.

"Well what?" asked Shinji.

"Well...well...well..." she mumbled, not quite having a comeback.

"Ok, I got it. Yer both equally unprepared and stupid-like," announced Nyasu, "so don't go around making it obvious. I don't want people to think I'M a nitwit too!"

"A...talking Nyasu?! How is that p-p-possible?!" stuttered Shinji.

"It's possible. Unfortunately for the good of humanity," Hoshi replied, "and don't you have any other pokemon? I want a fight RIGHT NOW!"

"N-no, and since you don't have any, I guess I should go back to Pallet to get some."

"Pallet? Why not just go back to Viridian?"

"I tried that about an hour ago, but these people in black were blocking the entrances and telling me I couldn't go through."

"Viridian was fine two hours ago."

"It's not fine NOW! But that's ok, I know a way back to Pallet from here. I just didn't want to go home until after I'd asked someone else for help since I'm kinda the "chicken" in my class and everyone was mad I got to go on a Pokemon journey and picked on me, saying I'd be back crying for my mommy in no time."

Hoshi raised her eyebrow, to her it didn't exactly make sense that people were "picked" to go on a pokemon journey instead of choosing freely, but she'd heard things had changed a bit around Pallet since the death of pokemon legend and expert, Professor Oak.

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"When you said you had a shortcut back to Pallet I didn't quite think you had THIS in mind!" growled Hoshi from where she was next to Shinji crawling through thick, thorny underbrush

Shinji shrugged, "You agreed."

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Later at night, the humans and Pokemon had decided to stop, just short of Pallet Town since they were all obviously tired.

"Let's sleep here," called Shinji pointing to a small clearing in the underbrush.

"Oh good, a thorn-free sp-" Hoshi wasn't even able to finish her sentence because Shinji had set up Pichu, a little bed and all, so the mouse Pokemon was taking up the almost the entire clearing.

"There, now Pichu will be nice and comfy during the night!" Shinji announced triumphantly.

"What about the rest of us?!" snapped Nyasu and Hoshi at virtually the same time.

"We'll be fine," responded Shinji, plopping down and taking up what was left of the clearing.

"What a gentleman," muttered Hoshi sarcastically, laying low in the most thorn-free spot she could find.
 
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And here I am, back again with chapter two. I've had it ready since before I posted this originally, but it looks like I forgot to post it on the 8th 0_o. Sorry to anyone who actually reads this. I *do* hope the 12 that did didn't click, say "Augh! New trainer fic! Head for the hills!" and run off. I'm not going to do any of that immature, "OMFG U PPL BTER GIV ME 100000000 REVIWS OR IM NOT GUNA RITE INYMOR!!!!111" because this writing is for myself, but I *really* would like to see what you think of it. Hell, you can even say you hate it as long as you explain why it's so detestable and don't just say, "UR FIC SUKKS ASSSSS!!1 OMG I WULD NEVIR REED IT AGIN EVR BECUZ IT JST SUKKS!!!!!!!1"

Oh, and regarding Seto and Miaka, who make their first appearance here, they aren't going to be like our favorite TR team from canon because they won't appear in every episode simply to appear. The way I have it planned, they won't come up in the slightest again until episode 7, then disappear for a bit again. This is also Keiko's lovely first appearance. Ok, now that I'm done rambling, here's chapter two!

Neo-Poke: Episode Two, Season One: Mysterious Rockets Seto and Miaka


In the morning, Hoshi, Shinji, and their pokemon set off again, reaching Pallet very soon, much to Hoshi's chagrin she learned that if they'd only kept traveling twenty more minutes the night before they'd have been in Pallet and she'd have been able to sleep in a REAL bed.

Kasumi Ketchum was cooking breakfast early that morning when to her surprise her very tired looking son and some girl burst in through the front door, "Shinji? Why are you back? Did something go wr-" Kasumi took one look at Pichu and shook her head, knowing she didn't need to say anymore. She abandoned her cooking and got some potion out of a nearby cupboard and sprayed it on Pichu. Within seconds the little Pokemon looked healthier.

"Thanks mom!" said Shinji grinning.

Kasumi sighed, "What did I tell you about packing potion, antidote and other healing items?"

"Well, I didn't think I'd need them and when I knew I did some guys wouldn't let me back into Viridian City."

"And how is she related to this?" asked Kasumi pointing toward Hoshi and Nyasu.

"She didn't have any healing items either, but I told her I'd have a battle with her when Pichu was healed."

Just then a Pikachu bounded down the stairs, with a man following it. Hoshi's mouth dropped open at the sight of the man, "Y-you're that Pokemon Master, Satoshi Ketchum!" then she turned to Shinji, "AND YOU NEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT BEING RELATED!"

"You never asked," squeaked Shinji meekly, under the pressure of her glare, "and you didn't tell me who YOU were either!"

"I," she grinned in a manner of self-glorification, "am the almighty Hoshi Morgan!"

"She's just egotistical and new to all of this, dun mind her," Nyasu put in.

"A talking Nyasu?!" Satoshi's eyes widened at hearing Nyasu speak for the first time in years.

Nyasu rolled her eyes," Yeah, I'm a Nyasu. And I talk. Whoop de doo."

"We knew a talking Nyasu once," Kasumi said, scrutinizing Nyasu carefully to make sure this wasn't the same one they'd known before.

"How wonderful for you."

"Nyasu!" snapped Hoshi, "Be a bit more polite, I mean, obviously talking Pokemon don't happen every day."

"Is it my fault dey don't got no one to teach 'em to talk or don't do it on their own like my papa? Noooo."

Satoshi coughed, deciding to change the subject abruptly, "So what brings you back home so soon..."

***************

Satoshi frowned, "Men wearing black with an 'R' on their shirts wouldn't let you into Viridian City?"

"That's right!" replied Shinji.

"Some guard in black shooed Nyasu and I out of Viridian City about an hour before he said we couldn't get in, think there's a connection?" Hoshi asked.

"Actually, he just told us we couldn't fight at the gym but he kept giving us 'get out' looks until I'd exited the city, pullin' Ms 'but I wanna fight' out with me," Nyasu gave Hoshi a pointed glance, a 'You're sure lucky I got you out of there when I did' look.

"I wonder if the news says anything," Kasumi suggested walking over to turn on the Ketchums' television.

"And in our latest new report on the hostage situation in Viridian City..." the newsman began.

"Hostage situation?" murmured Shinji.

"It seems the nefarious Team Rocket has managed to lock all the citizens of Viridian in their city and block any outside efforts to enter. We don't know thei-" suddenly the TV filled with static and screaming in the background. When it cleared up, two faces were staring at the screen.

"Hello good citizens of the world," said the male half of the two breezily.

"We are Team Rocket, as I'm sure even you simpletons know," the female half continued.

"And all we want-" but before those in the Ketchum house listening could here the rest of what these two had to say, a female figure came through the door.

"SHINJI KETCHUM! AND YOU THOUGHT YOU COULD LEAVE WITHOUT ME!" declared the girl.

"No," groaned Shinji, "Not Keiko..."

"That's right! You can't escape from me Shin-Chan! I promised you, remember!"

"I try to forget," mumbled Shinji.

"Who are you?" asked Hoshi, looking a bit surprised by the girl's sudden entrance.

"I'm Keiko Sketchit, 10 years old, and yes, my father IS Professor Kenji Sketchit. No autographs, please," Keiko stopped to pause dramatically, "and Shin-Chan here made me promise when he was a small, small boy that when he started Pokemon training that I'd accompany him so he wouldn't get all lonely, then," she stopped to glare at Shinji, "he up and left without me! The LITTLE JERK!"

“How are you today, Keiko?” Kasumi asked, relatively used to this sort of thing.

“Wonderful, aside from a little hurt and beat up and angered and surprised by certain boys,” she folded her arms and gave Shinji a quick death look.

Hoshi rolled her eyes, “Ok, now that we have that all cleared up,” she waved her hand in front of the TV, “we have breaking news to watch!”

Keiko looked at the TV dismissively, “Oh, Team Rocket. I thought they were practically extinct. The leaders of Viridian must be completely inept to be taken over by THAT organization,” she glanced at them all as if expecting them to agree, “I mean, daddy’s told me SO much about the times when he traveled with you guys,” she ushered towards Satoshi and Kasumi, “and blasted off Team Rocket. So what’s to be afraid of?”

Satoshi looked at her sternly, “The people we fought were only one team. There were a lot of other ones, and Team Rocket as an entire organization is not something that any of us should be taking lightly, especially people that are going to be traveling the world.” this time the look was directed at all three trainers.

Keiko stuck her nose into the air, “But you aren’t expecting us to be overly cautious are you? You said Team Rocket as an entire organization, not as small teams. And YOU had an easy enough time with them.”

Hoshi watched this all unknowingly, having no clue about her family’s origins.

Nyasu’s ‘ahem’ brought them back to reality, “They’re actually stupid enough to tell dey’re names! So the lot of ya, SHUT UP!”

The male half locked his violet eyes on the camera, “I am Seto.”

The female brushed a bit of her long dark green hair back and said, “My name is Miaka.”

“We will not tolerate the rebellions of the citizens of Viridian nor will we honor heroics from outside by sparing their lives,” Seto held up a handgun as if to prove his point.

Miaka nodded, “So those of you who enjoy being alive would do very well to stay away from the vicinity of Viridian.”

Hoshi snorted, and said sarcastically, “Oooh look at me. I’m a big bad Team Rocket elite and I’ma gonna shoot you if you so dare to question my tyranny. Yeah, I’ve got all these shivers now,” she finished by rolling her eyes.

Kasumi looked at the three youths, who seemed to be unafraid, even mocking, of the current situation, “This is more serious than you think. I’d tell you to go somewhere else and stop watching, but,” she raised her eyebrows, “If I do that, you could decide that by ‘somewhere’ I mean Viridian.”

Shinji blinked, “Wow mom! Are you a psychic or something?” he asked, totally serious.

“No. I just know you very well.”

Satoshi stood up, “Kasumi, I’m a Pokemon master, I should be doing something.”

Kasumi shoved him down, “Like letting the police do their job!”

Keiko blinked, “Is this one of those ‘family things’ you were talking about earlier Shinji? Well then, we should leave it to the family,” she chirped.

“What do you mean-” Nyasu was cut off as this strange girl, identified as Keiko Sketchit dragged she and her trainer away, apparently to her house.
 
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Am I da first to review? Schweet.

Picking apart first, then roaring praise, okay, JSS? I really like it, but I wanna point out some things:

1. At first I thought this was going to be a Japanese-language journeyfic -- we have Hoshi, Nyasu, and Neko Town (which is really cute, but isn't Pallet right on the coastline? How can Neko be south of it, unless it's an island? o_O). But then the other pokémon are referred to in English... I think you'd better stick with one language. Even if Hoshi, Shinji, and Keiko have Japanese names, Misty, Ash, and the others are still English-speakers, and they probably wouldn't use honoraries. "Mr. Giovanni" would do instead of "Giovanni-sama" (and incidentally, it would be "Giovanni-san"; he's not the ruler of Kanto, or a god, despite his best wishes).

I'm sorry to be so anal about it, but one of my biggest pet peeves is the overuse of Japanese language where English would do just nicely. I learned that from my boyfriend, the five-year Japanese major. >.<

2. Don't stick author notes in the middle of the chapter. ^^; It interrupts the flow. That's why you place them at the beginning or end.

3. Watch out for continuity. Is Misty Mrs. Ketchum, or Mrs. Waterflower-Ketchum? ^_~

4. Hoshi doesn't know about her own parents' past!? What's up with that!??

Alright, I'm done. Now I rave.

1. All of the kids' personalities are adorable. Seriously. They're all so erratic and hyper... it's great. At least it is to me. And Nyasu is just like her father.. I wonder who her mother is?

2. Speaking of half-known parentages... OMG Keiko Sketchit. XD I'm DYING to know who her mother is. And what Keiko looks like, too.

3. OMG again Rockets Seto and Miaka. You pick the best names. ^.^

4. You've got a really good and clear writing style. It's become my tradition to glomp anyone who knows how to use proper grammar and spelling. *glomp* It's people like you who make the fanfic board a happier place to visit. Good luck with chapter 3!
 
Originally posted by Shuichi Shindou
(and incidentally, it would be "Giovanni-san"; he's not the ruler of Kanto, or a god, despite his best wishes).

I'm pretty sure his agents call him -sama, though.

I mean, that's what the *elites* are called...

<--is not about to slog through her tapes to find the *one* ep where they would have addressed him
 
Originally posted by Jirarudan
I'm pretty sure his agents call him -sama, though.

I mean, that's what the *elites* are called...

<--is not about to slog through her tapes to find the *one* ep where they would have addressed him

Musashi and Kojirou refer to him as either "Boss" or "Sakaki-sama".

However, it grates more than a little to see a mix of dub names and Japanese honorific suffixes.


Other than the matter of language consistency, which I hope gets resolved soon, this is a story I think will be worth be keeping an eye on.
 
Yay, reviews! Ok then, to answer the questions/concerns.

Originally posted by Shuichi Shindou
1. At first I thought this was going to be a Japanese-language journeyfic -- we have Hoshi, Nyasu, and Neko Town (which is really cute, but isn't Pallet right on the coastline? How can Neko be south of it, unless it's an island? o_O). But then the other pokémon are referred to in English... I think you'd better stick with one language. Even if Hoshi, Shinji, and Keiko have Japanese names, Misty, Ash, and the others are still English-speakers, and they probably wouldn't use honoraries. "Mr. Giovanni" would do instead of "Giovanni-sama" (and incidentally, it would be "Giovanni-san"; he's not the ruler of Kanto, or a god, despite his best wishes).

About Neko Town, I was basically thinking about the R/B games where there's that area south of Pallet where the Tangellas were (And I only remember that because of how long I spent looking for one >_<) and I thought, "If she were from Pallet, I'd have plotholes on my hands, like, 'Why doesn't she KNOW Shinji and Keiko already?' ect." so I'll use that field to my advantage. Think of it: Pallet looks small in the games, but in the anime, it was larger, and the field was larger than that, which would mean that there's room for a relatively new town to crop up.

Ok, that probably sounded stupid, but that was my line of thinking when I made it up -_-'.

And the Nyasu was so that you don't confuse her with her father, but I probably should have had, for example:

"A talking Meowth?!" Satoshi's eyes widened at hearing a Meowth speak for the first time in years.

Nyasu rolled her eyes...

In the future, Nyasu and her father are going to be in the same scenes and I didn't want:

"..." said Meowth.

"....!" repsonded Meowth.

Or something of that nature because it would've made no sense. But from now on, the species will be referred to as 'Meowth' and the individual that Hoshi has as 'Nyasu'. And with the people's names, I think I'll go with Japanese names from now on (if you don't think it's annoying for me to use "Kasumi" and "Staryu" for example, as oposed to "Kasumi" and "whatever Staryu's Japanese name is"). With the honorifics, well, I thought Sakaki's agents would probably use -Sama, and the -Chan ending Keiko uses for Shinji at times...just a bit of fun to torture him. 12 years old boys don't like to be referred to as '-chan' or anything else essentially meaing '-dear' ^_~



2. Don't stick author notes in the middle of the chapter. ^^; It interrupts the flow. That's why you place them at the beginning or end.

My bad entirely and I won't do it anymore. Nearly every other fic I've written is humor, where the rules are obviously a bit mroe lenient on that sort of thing.

3. Watch out for continuity. Is Misty Mrs. Ketchum, or Mrs. Waterflower-Ketchum? ^_~


Will do.

4. Hoshi doesn't know about her own parents' past!? What's up with that!??

Well, if I were J&J I'd find it slightly *awkward* to sit down with your children and blurt out that you used to be members of an evil, criminal organization. Wouldn't you want to hold off talking about that to your kids as long as you could?

Alright, I'm done. Now I rave.

1. All of the kids' personalities are adorable. Seriously. They're all so erratic and hyper... it's great. At least it is to me. And Nyasu is just like her father.. I wonder who her mother is?

Hehe...thanks ^^. I LIKE erratic, hyper personalities. Much funner to write then characters who spend 5 pages in a monologue angsting over the reason for their life, good or evil, who they can trust, and the bean burritos they ate for lunch. For no reason. If they did have a rather traumatic past, good for them, but Keiko, Hoshi, Nyasu, and Shinji grew up happy little campers, so happy little campers they will be ^_~. And the issue of Nyasu's mother will be resolved around after the fifth gym battle the way I have it planned. I've already thought ahead to a lot of what's going to happen.

2. Speaking of half-known parentages... OMG Keiko Sketchit. XD I'm DYING to know who her mother is. And what Keiko looks like, too.

Well, it's not going to be anything dramatic when it's revealed in episode four. It's like those scenarios that some people have made up about Ash coming home and his mother making a casual reference about, "Oh, by the way, your father's out back dear", and everyone is like "WHAT?! HE'S BEEN THERE THE WHOLE TIME?!" it's just mentioned in passing, and it's not exactly important...XD but I'll keep you wondering anyway.

3. OMG again Rockets Seto and Miaka. You pick the best names. ^.^

Thank you. What do you think of the name 'Doseki'? Just interested...

4. You've got a really good and clear writing style. It's become my tradition to glomp anyone who knows how to use proper grammar and spelling. *glomp* It's people like you who make the fanfic board a happier place to visit. Good luck with chapter 3!

Thanks again! I try to make clear, concise stories, because I know what a pain it is to try and deciper a huge block of text all put together o_O. (Because sadly enough, the only time one of my friend's took interest in fanfiction, what she gave me to read was a huge block of text, and she was my friend, so I couldn't outright say, "No, no, NO! You've got it all wrong! First of all...").

Keep reviewing, I like to know what people think!

~TRF ^.^
 
Originally posted by James's Saiyan Stalker
About Neko Town, I was basically thinking about the R/B games where there's that area south of Pallet where the Tangellas were (And I only remember that because of how long I spent looking for one >_<) and I thought, "If she were from Pallet, I'd have plotholes on my hands, like, 'Why doesn't she KNOW Shinji and Keiko already?' ect." so I'll use that field to my advantage. Think of it: Pallet looks small in the games, but in the anime, it was larger, and the field was larger than that, which would mean that there's room for a relatively new town to crop up.

*nod* Just that on my map in the R/B/Y guide, Pallet's right there on the coastline. Unless north points left or something. ^^;

And with the people's names, I think I'll go with Japanese names from now on (if you don't think it's annoying for me to use "Kasumi" and "Staryu" for example, as oposed to "Kasumi" and "whatever Staryu's Japanese name is").

Tis a good idea, if you're attached to your -chans and -samas. I don't know all the pokémon's names in Japanese, but that's why there are dozens of websites that translate those for you. Just be sure to go back and change each name in the first two chapters. ^_~

Well, if I were J&J I'd find it slightly *awkward* to sit down with your children and blurt out that you used to be members of an evil, criminal organization. Wouldn't you want to hold off talking about that to your kids as long as you could?

A bit awkward, yes... maybe it's a personal thing, but I hate it when parents keep things from their children... alas.

Hehe...thanks ^^. I LIKE erratic, hyper personalities. Much funner to write then characters who spend 5 pages in a monologue angsting over the reason for their life, good or evil, who they can trust, and the bean burritos they ate for lunch.

*laughs* Maybe you need to give my characters a good smack.

Well, it's not going to be anything dramatic when it's revealed in episode four. It's like those scenarios that some people have made up about Ash coming home and his mother making a casual reference about, "Oh, by the way, your father's out back dear", and everyone is like "WHAT?! HE'S BEEN THERE THE WHOLE TIME?!" it's just mentioned in passing, and it's not exactly important...XD but I'll keep you wondering anyway.

Heehee! Okay, I'll be on the edge of my seat wondering who has the nameless honor of bearing Tracey's.. er, Kenji's child.

Thank you. What do you think of the name 'Doseki'? Just interested...

Doseki Tomokazu!? har. It sounds pretty good to me.

And my bad on the Sakaki-sama thing. You Rocket experts/Japanese-speakers would know better than I would. I picked up from somewhere that -sama is reserved for emperors and deities, so that's why I thought he was a -san.
 
The use of honorifics is quite complicated. It depends not only on who is talking and who they are talking about, but also who they are talking to.

*tries to remember ingroup/outgroup details from last year's classes*

Members of the TR organization, speaking about Sakaki among themselves, or addressing him, use -sama. Speaking about him to outsiders, they probably would not. Outsiders would most likely refer to him using -san, when they use any honorific at all.
 
...And here we go with episode three. I think I changed all the humans' names to Japanese, and I wasn't exactly sure if people were saying I should, or didn't have to change all of the Pokemons' names to Japanese, so if you think I should, just tell me.

Anywho, about the actual episode...well, I don't like how I had Keiko acting here. I mean, she did grow up rather spoiled, but I have you finding out later that she likes to be very polite, and here she is instigating a fight between herself and Hoshi. But, after I began to really understand her more myself (Unfortunately, with my OC's, it takes a few chapters before I can really get into their characters) I found a fesible explanation for why she acted like this. Virtual candy to whoever figures it out! *Waves a virtual Snickers temptingly*

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Neo-Poke: Episode Three, Season One: “I’ll take Team Rocket on!” Hoshi’s Confident Challenge!

When they got to Keiko’s house, Hoshi whirled around to glare at the other girl, “Why the hell did you grab me?! I can walk myself!”

Keiko giggled, “You shouldn’t use bad words you know, anyway, they’re having a discussion that has to do with family, so it wouldn’t be polite to intrude!”

“Well aren’t we just the pinnacle of politeness?” grumbled Hoshi.

Keiko stuck her nose in the air, “It’s better to be polite than down right rude. That’s what anyone who’s anyone knows.”

“Ooooh!” Hoshi cooed, “You’re really stuck up rich snob who hides it behind ‘elegance’ aren’t you? I know your type!”

“Nu-uh! Just because you’re probably from some,” Keiko paused to consider her choice or wording, “SLUM! You’re jealous because my family’s rich!”

Nyasu sighed, “And they call this a cat fight huh? Well, that’s just insulting to us felines,” no one paid her any attention.

Hoshi rolled up a sleeve, “You want to really fight, huh? Well then, I’m afraid charm doesn’t get you out of this!”

“A dirty fight! That sounds just like what someone like YOU would come up-” suddenly Keiko caught her father approaching out of the corner of her eye, and fell down onto the ground and started crying as though she’d been pushed.

“This won’t be good,” Nyasu murmured.

Hoshi’s jaw dropped, “You crybaby…” she grumbled watching Kenji approach faster at the sound of sobbing, “You scheming little b-…”

Nyasu once again had to intervene for her trainer’s sake by firmly scratching her across the face and getting the enraged preteen to jump into nearby hedges after her.

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After Kenji had checked to make sure his daughter’s ‘attacker’ had left the area, he led her inside, to make sure she wasn’t hurt.

“You really owe me a lot, and we’re only on your second day!” Nyasu grumbled, “Lesson One: Don’t mess with the spoiled daughters of rich professors.”

“You know, I’d rather not hear your input.”

“It’s all only for your own good, kid.”

Hoshi glanced at the ground, “Yeah, well…none of this is my fault! You can’t possibly blame this on me! I have dumb luck! Emphasis on the ‘dumb’!”

“If you can’t take responsibility, den I’m afraid dis is the farthest you’re ever gonna get kid. With you, NOTHING is your fault when you have your way.”

Hoshi snorted, “Well pardon my right to defend myself.”

“Dere’s a line between defending yourself and being downright irresponsible and you’ve crossed it more than any self-respecting human OR pokemon should,” snapped Nyasu irritably, “I ain’t just talking about recently either. Keep acting like that and you might as well be in Team Rocket.”

“Hoshi folded her arms, “Don’t say that! In fact, I’m going to go and take them on RIGHT NOW! If they’re using guns, I bet they have no real power so it won’t be a problem!” with that she skirted out of the hedge and began walking sulkily to the edge of town.

“Fine! When you realize what yer really up against come back here because I’ll be at the Shinji kid’s house!”

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As Hoshi walked down the road, she subconsciously kicked a rock, ‘What does Nyasu thinks she’s saying anyway? I can take care of myself well enough and if she doesn’t like it, she can just sit back at home and be pampered! Because I really wouldn’t give a crap! Plus, with all this insulting and lecturing she’s doing, I wouldn’t be able to STAND her much longer!’

As she walked farther, the more her anger faded and a feeling of loneliness took over, along with doubts about what she was going to do. They did have guns after all…that meant they could make a clear-cut shot and kill her if they wanted to. But if she went back, she thought, Nyasu would look at her so smugly, Shinji would tease her for chickening out and those parents of his would give her one hell of a reprimanding, not to mention what would happen if they called HER parents into the situation. Thinking about this made the anger start to bubble again, and in turn, drive common sense away.

‘Bring them all on! Charmander is ALL I need!’

But doubt lingered still, as she took half a step back near Viridian’s gates…but it was now or never.

‘I’ll stop this all by myself and show them how stupid their worrying and nagging at me is!’

The gates seemed unearthly big now, she knew they weren’t, but they looked that way to her now. And instead of just the two Rockets from before who would probably fight against her, her imagination was plagued with thoughts of millions of them…all waiting to pounce. Ticking time bombs, predators chasing a sickly pokemon…

‘I’m NO sickly pokemon! I can do it! I’m Hoshi Morgan, and if I keep all my wits about me and believe that I can do it, then I can do ANYTHING! Or maybe survive…no, not maybe survive! Will survive! Yes!’

As she approached further up, a reporter who was taping from the bushes to record the situation spied her and snaked out to grab her in the bushes.

‘My God! Why am I getting dragged in all these bushes today?! You know…that just sounded really perverted…’

“Excuse me miss,” he started, “I believe you are going to challenge Team Rocket, correct?”

“Let’s put it this way, would I just take a pleasurable walk around where a gang of murdering thieves is hiding out?” she smirked cockily. Cameras. Focused on her. What fear of dying? Glorious cameras, glorious moment in the spotlight, ‘This is what being a trainer should be about!’ she thought to herself.

“Well then,” the reporter coughed, “a little background information before you di-er…challenge Team Rocket?” then the cameraman taping all of this smiled to himself, ‘Great! A cocky kid taking them on! We’ll have to emphasize on how heroically this young trainer died, having a promising career cut short! The ratings will be great! They’ll go through the roof and I’ll get a promotion! Good-bye minimum wage camera job! I’m going to get my face in FRONT of this camera!’

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At the Morgan residence in Neko Town…

Seven year old Kazuma Morgan sighed as he flipped through channels, his parents, Meowth, and his oldest sister had gone a short errand for something and the same thing was on every channel: The people of Viridian are being held hostage. Now, watching this was all good and well for a while, but after hours upon hours with no developments and stupid reporters talking about how ‘horrible and hopeless’ the situation was, a seven-year-old boy tended to get bored.

“My name is Hoshi Morgan-”

Kazuma quickly went back to that channel. Was that his sister? But who would be interviewing her? After watching a bit of what was going on, he had a sudden feeling of happiness thinking that maybe he’d have a famous heroine for a sister, but then he had a sudden deep feeling of dread in the pit of his stomach.

Something wasn’t right. Those other people had guns. Pokemon were able at battling, that was true, but guns…if they hit her or her pokemon it was going to be over quickly. He bit his lip, what do you DO when your older sister is miles away and possibly minutes from death? Luckily though, the door opened to signal that his parents, Meowth and Miya were back home.

Kazuma abruptly abandoned the TV and ran to them, “Mom! Dad! Hoshi’s gonna get herself killed! It’s on TV!” he said urgently.

Seventeen-year-old Miya nearly dropped the parcel she was carrying and looked slightly disbelieving, “What?!”

Kazuma was nearly jumping up and down, “Team Rocket took Viridian City hostage and Hoshi’s there saying she’s going to fight them! They have guns!”

Now, this was obviously enough to send the rest of the Morgan family to the TV, and Musashi was the first to say anything, “What is she thinking?! Kojiro, go get the car! We’re going to Viridian RIGHT NOW!”

Kojiro, knowing that an angry Musashi was a force to be reckoned with and being concerned with the fate of his daughter, obediently went outside to start up the car.

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At the Ketchum house in Pallet Town…

Satoshi spit out his soda, seeing the newest development on the news station, “That girl can’t possibly-”

“That conceited idiot!” snapped Nyasu, “I swear!”

“Wow,” Shinji simply stared at the TV.

“Kasumi!” cried Satoshi, “You can’t just tell me to do nothing NOW!”

“I’m not. Go before she dies!”

Shinji perked up, “Can I come?”

Kasumi looked at her only son evenly, “No.”

“But-”

“No.”

“I told her I’d fight h-”

“NO, Shinji!”

Then Shinji blinked and looked around, “Where’s dad?”

“Your dad already left,” Nyasu motioned to the open door.

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Hoshi, meanwhile was grinning at the cameras, not at all aware that she had both her parents and Satoshi Ketchum on her tail at this very moment, “Well, I have a Charmander, and a Spearow. Oh, and Nyasu, but she isn’t important,” Hoshi cockily told reporters with a smug smirk on her face.

“I see,” said the reporter with a false grin plastered on his face. But of course the grin didn’t look fake, reporters need to be good at fake grins after all, “Now, what of your home life ah…Hoshi?”

“Well-” suddenly a bullet zoomed through the bushes and, luckily, Hoshi and the cameraman were out of its range…however, let’s just say that the reporter wouldn’t be having any more children. He let out a high-pitched squeak of pain.

“We know where you are,” came the cool voice of Seto, “we’ve known it for a while, but Miaka and I find it extremely amusing that some bratty child thinks herself so mighty as to be able to beat us.”

“I find it extremely amusing that you think yourselves so mighty as to not be beat,” Hoshi retorted cockily, but suddenly found herself facing the barrel of a gun as Miaka hopped off of the platform she’d been standing on a few seconds ago and pointed the gun at Hoshi.

“Do not mock Team Rocket, girl. We are mightier than you will ever live to know, for your information,” looking into the blue eyes of Miaka, Hoshi could’ve sworn she saw a complete emptiness. No feeling, not even anger for Hoshi’s cocky attitude towards them or joy at killing the enemy.

The cameraman placed himself in front of the camera, since his colleague was quite indisposed at the moment (AKA: He was whimpering and rocking softly near the edge of the bushes) and began to speak, “Well folks, this may very well be the end for more than one of us. Before I die a bloody, gruesome death I’d like to say…MY COMPANY SUCKS! I SERVE THEM SO LOYALLY FOR FIFTEEN YEARS AND THEY KEEP ME BEHIND THIS F*CKIN’ CAMERA! THEN, NEWBIE OVER THERE JUST WALTZES IN AND GETS TO BE IN FRONT OF IT! I HATE YOU ALL AT THE COMPANY! MAY TEAM ROCKET BURN DOWN THE BUILDING WHILE YOU’RE ALL IN IT!” he began to laugh maniacally. This odd display was enough to catch the attention of Miaka (Who had a giant sweatdrop rolling down her head) and Hoshi took the opportunity to edge herself away, but as she backed out of the bushes, she felt the cold metal of Seto’s gun being pointed at her back.

“Oh crap,” she whispered.

“Yes, it seems you won’t get out of this one so easily,” said Seto softly.

Hoshi chanced a pathetic look at him, ‘Hey, I just noticed this, but he’s extremely hot!’ she thought suddenly. The gun was pressed harder against her back, ‘And he’s going to murder me. Why are all the hot ones gay, taken, or psychopathic?’

“I do pity you,” Seto mused, “but that isn’t a good thing. I hate weak people and creatures, and I’m going to enjoy ridding the world of one of them.”

Then, as if by some miracle (And the fact that I can’t kill a main character in episode three!) a purple aura enveloped the gun and it flew away from Seto, “The hell?!” he said in an agitated manner that didn’t suit him at all.

Satoshi appeared in site, his Noctowl at his side. When he saw Seto’s surprised expression he gave a nonchalant shrug, “Well, I live nearby and I’m one of the greatest trainers in the world. You can’t expect me to do nothing. Noctowl, you know what you need to do.”

Noctowl cooed in agreement, and in a few seconds, a pile of guns with the same purple aura as Seto’s now had appeared at Satoshi’s feet. The Noctowl seemed to concentrate for a moment, and they were all blown into smithereens.

“Oh my God, I’ll never doubt my religion in the slightest again,” whispered Hoshi in awe, “There really are miracles.”

Satoshi turned to her, “You should leave right now,” his eyes held a stern expression that clearly seemed to be saying, ‘I may not be your parent, relative, or guardian, but I can and will still punish you for this,’.

“Y-yes sir,” murmured Hoshi, dashing away nimbly away from Viridian. Then as she ran down the path, she stopped suddenly at something heading up from the opposite direction, ‘Holy crap! That’s my family’s van! I’m definitely in much worse trouble now than I was before!’
 
Yay! This one was fun, and quite amusing. That poor cameraman... and this:

Hoshi chanced a pathetic look at him, ‘Hey, I just noticed this, but he’s extremely hot!’ she thought suddenly. The gun was pressed harder against her back, ‘And he’s going to murder me. Why are all the hot ones gay, taken, or psychopathic?’
Yeah, I think I like her. I'll agree with her if Seto bears resemblance to another Seto I know and love. ^.^

As for Keiko... I think she's jealous and on the defense against Hoshi. She wants to pick on her before Hoshi does so first, thereby making Keiko the victim. Do I get some virtual Snickers? *eyes binary candy*

The same thing happens to me with my OCs. I never would have guessed Amara likes much younger guys until I started writing for her. *sweatdrops*
 
Here's episode four! My virtual Snickers goes to Shuichi Shindou for a correct answer on my question about Keiko ^^ *Happily hands SS the binary candy* Yay! Someone who understands the way I think things through! Anyway, not much to say about this chap except that Keiko's mom is anti-climactically revealed. See you in episode five!

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Neo-Poke: Episode Four, Season One: Forced To Travel Together? The Unwilling Alliance.

As Hoshi stared at the van, her parents suddenly hopped out from either side of the front of the van. First, they both hugged her, glad they weren’t traveling back with a corpse, or visiting a hospital emergency room, but then, first her mother and then her father gave her a ‘you-are-in-so-much-trouble-young-lady’ look.

“Hoshi Kimberley Morgan, may I ask what you were thinking?” asked her father in a tone that had forced itself to abandon all fury.

“My question exactly,” agreed her mother.

“Umm…” she said, looking at the ground and shuffling her feet, “Well, Nyasu was lecturing me and basically said I bend the rules to make everything not my fault and that was behavior that was endorsed by members of Team Rocket and I said I wasn’t like that and I’d go beat them and…well, I went.”

“And where is Nyasu now?” asked her mother with raised eyebrows.

“At this moronic Shinji kid’s house in Pallet Town. She didn’t think I was serious.”

Her mother turned to look at her father, “I think we should resolve this there, then.”

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Getting out at Shinji’s house was a huge relief for Hoshi, who had endured stony silence in the car for fifteen minutes. Too eager escape the silence, Hoshi never noticed the look of remembrance and nostalgia that her parents shared with each other as they looked at the Ketchum family residence. Upon opening the door, Shinji practically leapt on her, “You don’t have a bullet hole in your head!”

“No I don’t. It’s really too bad you don’t have one though,” snapped Hoshi irritably, eager to lash out at someone who couldn’t punish her.

“Huh?” asked Shinji, looking adorably clueless for a moment. Then it dawned on him and he frowned, but decided it was too late for a comeback.

“Thank God!” said Nyasu, running up next, “Oh I bet I’d be as good as dead if I let you die…”

“Why don’t you ask my parents about that? They’re coming in now,” sniped Hoshi.

Nyasu gasped and ran to the door, “Musashi! Kojiro! I’m sorry, I honestly didn’t expect-”

“It’s alright,” said Kojiro reassuringly, “We don’t blame you for this.”

‘Oh yeah!’ thought Hoshi angrily, ‘No one cares that SHE practically egged me on! How typical,’ she crossed her arms.

Kasumi walked into the area where the rest of them were. She eyed Hoshi critically, looking like she was checking for injuries, then, apparently satisfied, she turned her eyes to Musashi and Kojiro, “Excuse me, but who exactly are you?” it seemed she didn’t immediately recognize her old adversaries.

“My parents,” muttered Hoshi.

“You in trouble?” whispered Shinji.

“Gee, no, I almost got myself killed in what everyone basically thinks was a reckless act, of course I’m not in trouble,” mumbled Hoshi back sarcastically.

At the word ‘trouble’ Kasumi suddenly had a flashback to sometime about twenty years ago…a man with blue hair and green eyes and a woman with crimson hair and blue eyes, named Musashi and Kojiro…a part of Team Rocket, or rather an ex-part of Team Rocket the last time they’d seen each other. And she made the connection, “Let’s…discuss this in the kitchen,” she said, raising and eyebrow at Jessie and James. She looked at Shinji, Hoshi and Nyasu--well, mostly Shinji--, “And I advise you all against eavesdropping.”

“Mom is a psychic!” Shinji said excitedly. Hoshi and Nyasu rolled their eyes.

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Four or so hours later, long after Satoshi had come back saying happily that Team Rocket had been locked in jail and gone to join the conversation in the kitchen, Hoshi, Shinji, and Nyasu were utterly bored. Keiko had stopped by earlier, her earlier brawl with Hoshi forgotten, but then about forty-five minutes later, she declared it was time for her to be going because her mom probably had supper nearly ready.

“We could play pretend,” suggested Shinji meekly, staring at the room before him, strewn with earlier boredom remedies that had failed.

Hoshi snorted, “No.”

“How about we play ‘I Spy’?”

“Didn’t we do that earlier?” asked Nyasu.

“Well, yeah but-”

“Are you sure you don’t have any more computer games?” asked Hoshi.

“Nope. Except those first-person shooters that mom forbade me to play when she found out about them. I ‘spect she’ll burn them when I leave.”

“What’s going on in there that takes such an ungodly long time?!” moaned Hoshi.

“Who cares what yer mom said about eavesdroppin’! I’m gonna find out what dey’re talkin’ about!” declared Nyasu. But unfortunately for her, when she touched the door, a few volts of electricity coursed through her body, “WHAT’S ON THAT DOOR?!” she yelled angrily.

“Oh, that’s what I thought mom probably did to the door. We have a certain system that you can turn on in the kitchen and in my parents’ bedroom. If they turn it on, anyone that touches the door gets a few volts of electricity sent through them,” said Shinji mildly.

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In the Kitchen…

“Ah,” said Satoshi glancing at the door and hearing Nyasu’s yell, “The anti-eavesdropping security system still works.”

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Back in the living room…

“I’m hungry,” whined Shinji, “Why couldn’t they talk somewhere else?”

“Go look under the couch and maybe you’ll find some crumbs,” suggested Hoshi sardonically.

“No. Mom just vacuumed yesterday,” replied Shinji solemnly.

“Ugh!” moaned Hoshi in frustration, “My life for an intelligent conversation!”

“Are you sure that’s wise?” asked Shinji, wide-eyed.

“You got no concept of melodramatic, do ya?” asked Nyasu.

Suddenly, the kitchen door opened, and the three stared attentively as Satoshi, Kasumi, Musashi, and Kojiro came out.

“Thank you! I was gonna starve!” yelled Shinji gratefully, running for the kitchen.

Satoshi chuckled slightly, “We can eat after we discuss something with you.”

“Is it going to take as long to explain as it did for you in the kitchen? I don’t wanna wait that long,” complained Shinji.

“We’ll give you the condensed version,” said Kojiro.

“Oh good!” said Shinji looking at them, “but what does ‘condensed’ mean?”

“It means if we’re lucky, we might be done talking about whatever it is by midnight, or maybe one in the morning,” replied Hoshi, acting as though that would be the best-case scenario.

“What?!” Shinji looked stricken.

Musashi gave her daughter a hard stare, “It shouldn’t take more than fifteen minutes.”

“Or hours,” muttered Hoshi for Shinji to hear. His eyes widened, but he then realized she *hopefully* wasn’t serious and scowled at her.

“Well,” Kasumi began, “We were thinking it over, and we decided that instead of having three children on separate journeys getting into separate trouble, we would have three children on one journey, keeping each other out of most trouble.”

“Who’s the third..?” asked Hoshi, unable to think of anything else to say at the moment.

“Keiko,” Satoshi answered, “I talked to her parents over the phone and they thought it was a good idea.”

“But…but…that means I’ll be with two girls!” protested Shinji, throwing his parents a pleading look, “Girls put on make-up and have slumber parties, and giggle, and have ear-splitting screams, and worry too much about how they look, and only want cute Pokemon, and worry about breaking their nails! I won’t be able to get very far at all with people like that!”

“I don’t want to travel with anyone else!” cried Hoshi, trying to convince her own parents to let her go on her own, “Keiko is really spoiled, and I don’t want to have to travel with someone like that! And he’s,” she gestured towards Shinji, “the most gullible, pathetic boy I’ve met! Please…I won’t take on Team Rocket or anyone like that alone anymore!”

“If dey went on dey’re merry way, could I go back home?” asked Nyasu, considerably cheered by this thought.

“Sorry, but no,” Kojiro replied over the two children’s yelling, pouting, screaming, and threatening to hold their breath until the parents gave in.

“Well, dis don’t concern me in no way then,” mutter Nyasu crossing her arms and glaring at the ground.

“Shinji, you are twelve years old now, and you cannot continue to act like a baby and try to hold your breath and whine when things don’t go your way!” reprimanded Kasumi. Shinji let out the breath he had been holding and crossed his arms obstinately.
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At the Sketchit residence…

Keiko’s parents, Kenji and Haruka, called their daughter after dinner to inform her of the plans they had made with Shinji’s and Hoshi’s parents, “You’re going to travel with Shinji and Hoshi, whom I hear you met early today,” concluded Hakura.

Keiko stared at them, and then shrugged, “Ok mommy, daddy,” she said, and walked towards her room again, wondering what the yelling going on at the Ketchum’s was all about. Probably, Shinji had turned up the TV too loud to a soap opera, she thought. Oh well. She went to sleep.
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The following morning…

“Just because I travel with you does not mean I will be kind to you, by any means,” groused Hoshi, towards a sour-looking Shinji.

“Hello!” called Keiko’s cheerful voice, “Ready to travel?”

“Oh yes, especially since it’ll be with you. I would have never been able to ask for better company, not in a million years,” snapped Hoshi sarcastically.

“So be it. Just ‘cause you both are crabby, I’m not going to let it ruin MY day,” she proclaimed.

“Please tell me that you didn’t pick the most sickeningly cute starter Pokemon that you could have!” said Shinji, looking at Keiko hopefully.

“I was able to get Chikorita,” she answered, “Why?”

“Will you let it evolve?” he asked.

“No, of course not! I think the evolved forms are sorta UGLY!” she answered, like it was the most obvious thing in the world.

“I was RIGHT about girls!” he muttered to himself, “It’s always about how cute something is for them…”
 
Mmm, virtual Snickers... *devours* *reads wrapper* Best by 010101? Oh wait.. that's just the code. ^^;

Haruka, bweee! I love her. I was expecting Gary's-sister-May, as she seems to get paired with Kenji a lot.

Keiko needs to meet my Tracey's future children. Who aren't Haruka's, mind you. Half-siblings! Heee. (<-- chocolate kicks in)

Those three are going to have the most amusing fights, aren't they? I can't wait to find out. ^.^
 
Yup, and here's chapter five! *Noddles*. Ok, I was actually contemplating cutting this out, but it had Doseki in it, and then I realized that I have plan for Sagi to appear later because of past ties with Seto, so...yeah. It's really not odd, semi-dark filler. It only looks that way. I don't like it very well u.u. Sagi's general attitude and brashness rubs me the wrong way for some reason. Plus, eppie seven, with Seto and Miaka is a bit dark and serious too. I feel bad having a "serious episode-gym battle-serious episode" all sandwiched together. Don't know why, though. Maybe it's just not the overall tone I'm going for with this series. But I do get things how I want them again after episode seven.

See you next week for eppie six!

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Neo-Poke: Episode Five, Season One: Sagi The Pierrot! Fire in Viridian Forest!

“We’ve been through Viridian Forest before,” mumbled Hoshi, “It feels like we’re regressing.”

“I haven’t been here!” cried Keiko, “Oh look at that cute little thing over there…what is it?” she asked.

“It’s a Pidgey,” responded Shinji gruffly, “Would’ve thought, being a girl and liking cute things, that you’d know that,” he muttered sullenly.

“I want it!” she exclaimed, “Go Chikorita!”

“Chika!” it said, being let out.

“Go tackle that Pidgey!” she ordered.

It nodded and ran towards the Pidgey, but the frightened bird flew out the way at the last moment.

“We aren’t done yet! Use vine whip and trap it!” Keiko called.

“Rita, Chika!” the grass Pokemon complied, extending its long vines until it had wrapped them around Pidgey.

“Squeeze it until it faints!”

“Bit harsh, isn’t it?” asked Hoshi.

“Well, no. Not if I want that Pidgey,” responded Keiko. Then, as she saw it go limp in Chikorita’s hold, she threw a Pokeball and captured it, and then recalled Chikorita.

“You know…I need to catch something. I wonder if that tree has any bugs in it…” speculated Shinji.

But then, at that moment, a huge fire engulfed the tree suddenly, “Oh. My. God…” said Hoshi with wide eyes. Then, as the tree started toppling over, the three trainers screamed and started running.

“What happened to it?!” asked Keiko as they ran.

“I don’t know…but I think it lit fire to some of the other trees!” cried Shinji with barely contained hysteria, as trees with fire slowly crawling up them appeared closer to them with each passing second, burning almost completely at the base before falling down with loud thuds and blocking routes of escape.

Hoshi scanned the area quickly, “We can get out over there,” she pointed, “if we hurry!” and they wasted no time dashing out. The tree came crashing downward as Keiko was just about to run across. She screamed and jumped back into the ring of fire.

“Uh-oh…” said Shinji softly.

“GET ME OUT!” Keiko screamed.

“What do we do?!” asked Shinji.

“I don’t know! We don’t have any water Pokemon, so we can’t do anything except run away,” muttered Hoshi, seeing the grass light aflame and grow closer to them.

“Don’t leave me here!” pleaded Keiko.

“W-we won’t!” Shinji yelled.

“What do you mean by that?! Why should all three of us die?!” demanded Hoshi.

“YOU wouldn’t want US to leave you behind, so you got no reason to say we leave her!” replied Shinji stubbornly.

Just as Hoshi was about to scream that she didn’t care about honor, and all that stuff as long as she lived through this, a man riding a jet pack flew down and grabbed Keiko out of the fire, “Keep going this way!” he shouted to Hoshi and Shinji, pointing straight ahead of them. The two were too nervous, and had too little time to argue, so they simply complied.

Following the man’s instructions, they were led out of the forest, and after running east of it for a bit, he stopped them at a log cabin. Close up, they could see that he appeared to be around his early to mid twenties with light green hair spiking upward in one direction. Lowering himself and Keiko to the ground, he walked up to the front of it and told them, “This is where I live. Please, do come in and sit down.”

The three of them were tired out from their experience and simply nodded wearily and sat down at the kitchen table.

“My name is Sagi. I’m sorry about the fire,” the man said, looking highly bothered.

Shinji gave a weak grin, “Why should you be sorry? It isn’t like it’s your fault or anything. You saved us, actually.”

The man frowned, “Actually, it IS my fault. It started it.”

“How? Did one of your Pokemon accidentally catch something on fire?” asked Keiko.

“No! I HATE Pokemon!” the man suddenly burst out scowling, “I made the fire to get RID of them!”

“What?!” asked all three trainers at the same time.

“My parents were tortured and killed when I was very young. All I remember seeing was Pokemon torturing them…I hate them for it…” he growled.

Hoshi snorted, “Not ALL Pokemon are like that, and plus, have you ever considered that it was a trainer telling them to do that?”

“Sorry about you parents by the way,” said Keiko politely.

“I know for a FACT it was a trainer ordering them, but that doesn’t change the fact that they listened!” he snarled.

“That’s unfair,” protested Shinji, “These Pokemon had nothing to do with it.”

“They’re all the same. Once they get a trainer, they become probable hazards to anyone willing to use them for the wrong purpose. I want to eliminate that risk!” he pounded his fist down on table.

Hoshi raised an eyebrow, “They have a name for people like you,” she remarked breezily, “it’s called ‘fanatic’.”

“Call me what you will, but I’m only working for the best of mankind!” he proclaimed.

Hoshi coughed, “Fanatic,” she said softly, coughing again, this time purposely.

“Are you Pokemon trainers?” he asked suddenly.

“Uh…yes…” admitted Keiko.

His eyes flashed, “Then you will turn your Pokemon over to me, or get out of my house before I take them myself!”

“Look Mr., I think you should think about-” began Shinji.

“Well, we’ll just get out then. Thank you for your hospitality,” Keiko cut in courteously, grabbing the sleeves of Hoshi and Shinji’s clothes and dragging them towards the front door.
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The following morning…

After the encounter with Sagi, the group had gone on to Pewter City and spent the night in the Pokemon Center there. Presently, Nurse Joy was checking out their Pokemon to make sure they were fit for battles. Now, normally the first thing on their minds would have been to challenge Pewter gym, and its leader, Takeshi, but yesterday’s encounter weighed heavily on them.

“We should tell someone about him,” said Shinji.

“We should fight him!” Hoshi disagreed.

“We should just leave him to his own business, and someone else will find out eventually,” objected Keiko.

“Well, how many Pokemon will die before that happens?” asked Shinji looking a bit impassioned. He looked at Hoshi, “And whaddya want, a repeat of the Team Rocket incident? Adults coming to your rescue AGAIN?”

Hoshi bristled, “I won’t need anyone to come to my rescue!”

“As you so plainly showed us when you fought Team Rocket…” Shinji trailed off sarcastically.

Hoshi merely looked amazed, “YOU can be sarcastic. Wonders never cease, do they?”

Shinji blinked, “What did you think I was, stupid?”

“You leave one to wonder.”

“Really?”

“Really, and THAT is in no way sarcasm.”

“Darn.”

Keiko glared at Hoshi, “Don’t pick on Shin-Chan. It isn’t going to accomplish anything!”

“I really wish you’d stop calling me that, cuz ya know…it’s kinda embarrassing, since -chan is an ending for girls and all…” Shinji trailed off, staring at the ground with a blush growing on his face.

Keiko looked rather affronted and appeared to be about to say something when a teary-eyed boy burst into the Pokemon center and began to sob. Nurse Joy came out from the back and ran over to him, “What’s wrong?” she asked gently, “Did one of your Pokemon get injured?” she knew that young trainers were very sensitive when it came to their Pokemon getting even the slightest bit scratched up.

“N-no…” said the boy through sobs, “My older sister and I…we were looking for Pokemon in the forest when a fire started, and it blocked the way out…My sister managed to lift me up over it and have me run for help, but that was about 20 minutes ago even though I ran as fast as I could…she’s probably…probably…” the boy exploded into sobs again.

Nurse Joy’s face turned serious, “I’ll call the fire station and the police right away.”

A nearby teenager of about fourteen or fifteen with dark brown hair leapt up and took Nurse Joy’s shoulder, “Don’t worry about that. I’ll take care of it, you might just want comfort him,” he said gesturing towards the boy, his reddish brown eyes betraying the fact that he wasn’t counting on the survival of the boy’s sister.

She nodded, “Thank you, Doseki,” the teen, Doseki, seemed reluctant to let go of Nurse Joy’s shoulder, but did so anyway and dialed the number for the fire station, “Now then,” said Joy, giving the boy the best smile she could muster, “Would you like to see some of the Pokemon I have? Right now we’ve got a trainer from a land called Hoenn staying, and I’m sure she wouldn’t mind me letting you have a look at her Kirlia,” the boy nodded mutely as Joy led him away.

“It’s Sagi,” whispered Hoshi.

“That kid’s name is Sagi, too? Wow, small world,” remarked Shinji.

Even Keiko seemed to want to yell at him now, “No. Sagi lit the fire. I think we should go now.”

“Oh? I thought you wanted us to let him go about his business?” inquired Hoshi cockily.

Keiko frowned, “Not anymore.”
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Sagi’s house…

The three trainers burst in through the door, definitely not waiting for an invitation. Sagi looked up from something he was doing, and seemed to be trying to hide whatever it was, “Oh, hello. Decided to join me?” he seemed to be trying to keep his voice neutral at the very least.

“We know what you did!” cried Hoshi, getting straight to the point, “We know that girl is…” she gasped.

Sagi stepped away from what he was trying to hide and lowered his head mournfully. A blanket covered what looked to be the shape of a teenager girl’s body, “I never meant for it to happen…” he whispered.

“Then you shouldn’t gone fire happy!” exclaimed Shinji, looking horrified at the body.

“We’re turning you in,” Keiko added.

“You don’t understand…my work must continue…” he took out a flamethrower, “I’m sorry, but no one can know…”

“Don’t you realize, after this, how wrong what you’re doing is?!” growled Hoshi.

“IT ISN’T WRONG, YOU INSUFFRABLE LITTLE GIRL!” he yelled and turned on the flamethrower, aiming it at Hoshi who dashed to the side just in time.

“Charmander, go!” she said, throwing her Pokeball to release Charmander, ‘Flames shouldn’t hurt a Charmander…’

“And thus my proof that Pokemon can be used for wrong!” he pointed the flamethrower at Keiko who squeaked and ducked out of the way just as the place she’d been standing moments before was reduced to nothing. Its power was directed toward Shinji next, and he threw himself to the ground, luckily escaping with no more than the back of his hat being singed.

“Charmander, use Fury Swipes to get him away from the flamethrower!” Hoshi ordered. Charmander nodded in understanding and made its tail flame envelope itself and rushed at Sagi, scratching his hands until he couldn’t ignore the pain, and dropped the flamethrower harmlessly to the ground, where Hoshi ran to the side of it, turned it off and took it to where Shinji and Keiko were.

Then Keiko released Chikorita, “Quick, use vine whip to hold him!” she commanded.

“I’ll go get a police officer,” said Shinji running out of the house.

“Why won’t you accept it…Pokemon are wrong…” snarled Sagi, trying to break the vines.

“It’s more wrong to kill someone then to just accept what happened in the past,” Hoshi said glaring at him, saying the first thing that had popped up in her mind.

“You’re merely a child, what would you know of the world?” asked Sagi bitterly.

Hoshi thought on this a moment, “That…if bitterness and anger are your drive behind something, you won’t get very far,” she responded, ‘Thank you Nyasu! Never thought I’d say that, though…’

Sagi glanced at the girl’s body and something suddenly seemed to touch him very deeply, “I did as great a wrong as those who killed my parents…” he said slowly and softly, “God…how did it come to this..?” he clenched his hands together and let a few tears run down his cheeks, “I deserve whatever sentence I get in court…”
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That night…

“..And in recent new, three young trainers stopped a man who lit fire to Viridian Forest, and killed a girl identified as 16-year-old Kina Ostrike,” the TV screens showed pictures of Hoshi, Shinji, and Keiko.

“Oh Good Lord…” whispered Kasumi, who was watching TV with Satoshi, “They could have died…” she fainted thinking of the prospect.

Satoshi groaned, “Uh-oh. I pity the kids for what will happen when Kasumi wakes up,” he said, smiling slightly at the inevitable fact that his wife would find them wherever they might be, and give them the biggest chewing out of their lives.
 
*finally sits down to read* Wow... I don't think I've ever seen a villain quite like Sagi. Fanatic, yes. Good chapter -- I like where this is headed.

Is Doseki supposed to be Mr. Dark and Mysterious? He's sticking with me... *^.^*

Midori: Hey, that's my title. o_<
Zukin: Then you two would get along, wouldn't you? hmmm? *giggles and pokes Midori teasingly*
Midori: *blush* What's THAT supposed to mean!?
 
Hum...Doseki being Mr. Dark and Mysterious? o_O you know, I never even thought of that. *Pats Zukin* Sorry, at least from my POV of his character, he really like that. You find out much more about him in this eppie, though (Title is a dead giveaway). And yus, Sagi is a definate fanatic. I thought, well, we've never seen someone who truly *hates* Pokemon, but what if...? And that's where the lovely guy with severe issues came from ^^. And I apologize for not being able to get up a chapter last week. Life called and I had to answer (as much as I didn't want to), and my unfortunate traditional winter writer's block is setting in (It's extremely odd. I suffer from frequent writer's block in winter and mainly winter alone).

About the actual episode, well, I need to work on my battle scenes u.u I'd much appreciate tips on how to do them. And I *think* Tsusutji is Roxanne's (Hoenn gym leader who trains Rock types) Japanese name, but feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.

Anywho, 'nuff of my ramblings. Here's episode six!

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Neo-Poke: Episode Six, Season One: Takeshi and Doseki! The Pewter Gym’s Father-Son Combination!

“I heard the gym in this town is something else,” said Shinji casually as the three trainers relaxed in the waiting area of the Pokemon Center as Nurse Joy finished the examinations that she had been interrupted from yesterday on their Pokemon to make sure they were fit for battle.

“Yeah. And our parents,” Keiko motioned to herself and Shinji, “know the gym leader very well. Maybe he’ll go easy on us…” she said wistfully.

Hoshi rolled her eyes, “Oh? You want him to go easy on you? What great indicative of how hard you’ve trained your Pokemon.”

“Shut up!” snapped Keiko, who then looked rather embarrassed, “Sorry.”

Shinji smirked, “You know we don’t really mind if you’re rude.”

“But…well, I just don’t think it’s all that proper…and I wasn’t brought up like that…” she was blushing heavily now, looking rather uncomfortable.

“Are implying MY parents brought me up to be rude?” snarled Hoshi, on the defensive at once.

“I didn’t say that!” Keiko replied.

“I didn’t say you did. I asked if you implied it. There IS a difference, but I guess in your parents’ hurry to teach you manners, they left out lessons on vocabulary,” Hoshi shot back.

“Uh…I think you both take a bunch of offense too easily,” Shinji put in.

“And who asked you?” inquired Keiko in purposely civilized tones, cupping a hand around her grape soda and raising it up to take a drink.

“Well, no one…but…” he shook his head, “Oh never mind. Ya can’t win with girls, can ya?” Hoshi and Keiko glared daggers at him, and he sweatdropped, “Whoops. Didn’t mean to say that out loud…” he murmured quickly hoping that God would be merciful.

As it turned out, God was, in fact, in a merciful mood and their attention was distracted from the current conversation by the boy from yesterday whom had called the police and fire department. He was currently trying to convince a very pretty girl that he was the kind of boyfriend she’d always dreamed of, “Oh come on Charlene! You know your last boyfriend? Well I’m the exact opposite of him!”

The girl raised her delicate eyebrows, “I liked my last boyfriend. He found out he was gay. We’re still friends.”

“Oh…um…that’s exactly what I meant by opposite! Opposite as in I’m 100% sure I’m straight!” he replied eagerly.

“Get a life and stop hanging out here trying to get a girlfriend, would you?” demanded Charlene sticking her nose in the air and walking toward the counter to give her Pokemon to a waiting Chansey.

He groaned and sat down on the same couch he’d been on yesterday, “There’s always tomorrow,” he said longingly to himself, “I’m going back to the gym,” he decided abruptly and stomped out the front door looking less than joyful.

“The gym?” asked Hoshi, interested, “Do you think he trains there?”

“Oh! I’ve seen pictures of him! He’s Takeshi’s son!” exclaimed Keiko suddenly.

“Huh? Oh I remember now…he came over with his dad, mom and sisters for a Christmas party around five years ago!” said Shinji triumphantly.

Just then, Nurse Joy walked into the waiting room, “Your Pokemon don’t seem to have anything wrong with them,” she told them, handing back the Pokeballs that contained them. Nyasu immediately popped out of hers and complained about how small and uncomfortable she found them all the way to the Pewter City Pokemon Gym.

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The Gym…

“So dis is da the famous Pewter Gym, huh?” asked Nyasu, “Looks kinda shabby to me.”

“It’s made of rock. Not rock that was put together very evenly either,” said Keiko flatly as she walked forward and rubbed her hand against the building.

“Could there be a purpose for that? Like, gee, I dunno, the leader trains ROCK pokemon?” asked Hoshi sardonically with an eye roll. She then took a closer look, “Jeez, it is rather horrid isn’t it? Just screaming for a makeover…”

“Buildings can’t scream,” Shinji pointed out.

“It’s called a figure of speech, genius.”

“Hey! I…uh…knew that! I just wanted to see if you knew!” said Shinji self-righteously.

“While dis banter is ex-tre-me-ly interesting, I’d rather not stand outside anymore, so if youse dim watts don’t mind, maybe we could go inside,” interjected Nyasu.

“Yeah! That’s a great idea!” exclaimed Keiko cheerfully clapping her hands together, eager to stop the arguing between her comrades.

“Fine,” mumbled Hoshi and Shinji at the same time, both looking sour as they walked inside.

***
Inside…

Inside the gym, the lights were dimmed and even when the trio adjusted to the darkness, they could barely make out anything in the gym.

“Heeeeellooooo, is anyone in here?” called Shinji, grinning as the sound echoed around the room, “Shinji Ketchum rocks! He’ll be the greatest Pokemon Master ever!” he yelled, simply for the satisfaction of hearing it echo.

“You are such a dolt,” grumbled Hoshi.

“It’s cool!” said Shinji smiling brightly.

“This would be prime occasion to practice my singing!” proclaimed Keiko excitedly, “Ooooooooh…Faaaaaaaar awaaaaaaay, looooooooong agoooooooo, glowiiiiing diiiiiiiiiim as an eeeeeeeeembeeeeeeeeer-” she began.

“’Scuse me, my baby brother is trying to take a nap!” came a young girl’s voice out of nowhere, and the lights suddenly exploded in the room. A child who couldn’t have been more than eight years old with dark brown hair and squinty eyes appeared where the voice had come from.

Keiko suddenly seemed very embarrassed about her singing, as her cheeks were tinged with red, “Excuse me, but are you from next door or something little girl?” she asked.

“No,” said the girl, “Me and my family live in the back of the gym. My daddy’s the leader,” she added for emphasis.

Shinji’s eyes lit up, “Hey! Could we battle him?”

“You’d have to ask him. You could battle me for practice, ‘cuz I’ll be a trainer some day!” announced the little girl.

Hoshi laughed slightly, “No thanks. We’ll take your dad right on, plus we wouldn’t want to hurt your little Pokemon or you’d cry,” she said gently.

“Fluffy-Chan isn’t little!” the child protested, glaring at Hoshi.

“Really? Let’s see ‘Fluffy-Chan’ then,” replied Hoshi, in a joking tone.

“You asked for it! Go Fluffy-Chan!” she cried, and a Graveller—a rather big one, at that—came out of her Pokeball.

“He just evolved two months ago,” she informed the group proudly.

“That’s…s-something…you would name…F-Fluffy-Chan?” asked Hoshi, staring at the huge Graveller.

“I ain’t fighten’ dat!” Nyasu piped up.

Then, another voice filled the room, “Aiko! Are you alright in there?”

“Yah Doseki, I’m fine!” she yelled, “There’s some trainers out here who want the Boulder Badge!”

“Really?!” Doseki, the same guy as before, obviously, practically made a mad dash to where they were all standing, “Oh…no teenage girls…” he said sighing.

“Doseki can’t get a girlfriend,” whispered Aiko in a conspiratorial tone after recalling ‘Fluffy-Chan’.

“Aiko!” yelped Doseki angrily. He turned to face Shinji, Hoshi, and Keiko, “So you want a boulder badge, huh? Well, you’ll need to fight me and my father!” he told them with a lopsided grin.

“One after the other without any rest?” asked Shinji, looking rather put out.

“No. In a three-on-three battle. Since there’s three of you, dad will probably send out two Pokemon, I’ll send out one, and you each send out one of your own,” Doseki explained.

Shinji’s face immediately transformed into an exuberant one, “Cool! Could you go get him now?”

“Aiko could. She’s not doing anything important,” replied Doseki, glaring at his younger sister, who frowned at him, stuck out her tongue, and stomped out, “Little kids, I swear…” he said apologetically.

“Yeah, my little brother’s really annoying too,” Hoshi sympathized.

As she said this, a man came through the doors. He looked to be about in his mid-thirties or so came through. He definitely resembled Aiko, and Doseki appeared to have inherited his hair color.

“Hello,” he said in a pleasant voice, “As you probably know, my name is Takeshi and I’m the gym leader in this town,” he looked at Shinji, “And…maybe I’m wrong, but I think you’re Satoshi’s son, Shinji, isn’t it?”

Shinji beamed, “Yeah! That’d be me!”

“I thought so. He told me you’d started out recently, and to keep an eye out for you. Should we start the battle?” he asked getting straight to the point.

“Yeah!” said Shinji enthusiastically. Takeshi and Doseki moved to the other side of the gym, and a spotlight appeared where they were, where Hoshi, Shinji, and Keiko were, and in the middle of the arena.

Doseki looked at his father nervously, and with a nod from Takeshi, he called out, “This will be a three on three match between Takeshi and Doseki of Pewter City, and the challengers from…um…oh forget it, the challengers! The last team with a Pokemon remaining is the winner! Begin!”

“Onix, Rhyhorn, go!” yelled Takeshi.

“Go Pineco!” shouted Doseki.

“Chikorita!” cried Keiko.

“Pichu, I choose you!” hollered Shinji.

“I choose you, Charmander!” shrieked Hoshi.

“Pineco, use rapid spin!” commanded Doseki, starting the battle off. Pineco complied and began its rapid spin towards Pichu.

“Pichu, get out of the way!” yelled Shinji. Pichu ducked towards the floor and Pineco continued its assault toward Charmander.

“Ember, Charmander!” Hoshi told her fire Pokemon.

“Char, char! Maaaander!” it said, using its ember attack in the direction of Pineco.

“Pineco, try to spin away!” shouted Doseki, albeit, a bit too late. Pineco was spinning too fast to change direction quickly, and it spun right into the ember, and fainted on the ground. Doseki looked slightly put out, “You did your best Pineco, return,” he said.

As this was going on, Takeshi yelled, “Rhyhorn, use Take Down!” and the rhino Pokemon flew at Pichu, who it battered to the ground. Pichu struggled to get up.

“Now Onix, use Bind!” commanded Takeshi.

“Chikorita, use Vine Whip to try to stop Onix from using Bind!” said Keiko quickly.

“Chika!” cried the grass Pokemon lashing out its long vines around part of Onix and trying to restrain it.

“Now Charmander, start running and when you get up close, jump and use tackle going for the face!” exclaimed Hoshi.

“Mander, Charmander!” it cried, running for Onix and jumping as high as it could.

“Onix, bite!” called out Takeshi, on spur of the moment thinking as Charmander closed in.

“No!” screamed Hoshi as Onix bit Charmander and it fell to the ground and fainted, “Charmander return,” she muttered sullenly.

Meanwhile, Pichu still struggled to regain power in its legs, and Rhyhorn stood by doing nothing, as his trainer was preoccupied at the moment.

“Come on Chikorita, try to use Razor Leaf while you’re holding Onix, if it isn’t too much!” hollered Keiko.

“Chi, Chikorita!” it said nodding, as leaves flew from its back and bombarded a struggling Onix until it fell with a crashing thud.

“Good try, Onix, return,” said Takeshi, who then lost no time in ordering, “Rhyhorn, use Horn Drill!”

Rhyhorn said nothing, and immediately barraged Chikorita with a Horn Drill attack that hit dead on, causing a one-hit KO.

“Good job Chikorita,” murmured Keiko as she returned her Chikorita.

“This has been a good fight, but I’m afraid it’ll have to end now. Rhyhorn, Fury Attack!” commanded Takeshi.

Shinji’s stomach did flip-flops, ‘We got this far…’ , “Pichu get up and try to get on Rhyhorn!”

“Pi…Pi…Pichu,” the weakened Pokemon struggled to its feet as Rhyhorn prepared its Fury Attack, and as it released it, Pichu used its tail—the only part of its body that wasn’t aching—as a spring and hopped up on Rhyhorn’s head.

“Now clutch its horn and use Thunderbolt!” yelled Shinji, suddenly grinning triumphantly.

“Piiiiiiiiiiiiiichuuuuuuuuu!” the small Pokemon cried, releasing all of its electrical energy and shocking Rhyhorn through its horn. The Pokemon stumbled backwards and fell over unconscious.

“The challengers win,” said Doseki in a somewhat downtrodden voice.

“Great job Pichu!” said Shinji happily rushing out to catch his Pokemon as it began to fall to the ground out of fatigue.

Takeshi stepped across the arena smiling, “You know, that’s the same move your dad used to win against a gym leader named Blain’s Rhydon.”

“I know. He told me, and I’m glad I remembered,” responded Shinji, also smiling.

***
Later…

“Our Pokemon are all going to be alright,” said Doseki as he, Keiko, Shinji, Hoshi, Takeshi, and Doseki’s mother, Tsusutji sat in the reception area of the Pokemon Center. Doseki had quickly gotten over his slight anger at his earlier defeat, especially since his father wasn’t angry at all.

“Youse are some lucky dim watts,” remarked Nyasu shaking her head, still in disbelief that they’d actually won.

Tsusutji survey the three trainers, “So you’re traveling alone, then?”

“Yeah,” replied Shinji, “No big deal, though. I can take care of myself,” he added proudly.

“Well, I’ve been thinking, Doseki is going to take over the gym one day, and it would probably be good if he knew more about different Pokemon, and you may need someone slightly older at certain times, so maybe…” she left the sentence hanging.

“That’s a great idea, Tsusutji!” exclaimed Takeshi suddenly.

“W-wait…you’re implying that I do what you did,” Doseki pointed to his father, unconsciously nervously messing with his right ear, which he had had pierced last year (much to his mother’s chagrin) in hopes of ‘attracting girls’, “and travel around the world…” he stared.

“Well, yes, would you like to?” asked Tsusutji.

He stared for another two minutes, as though in heavy shock, and then responded, “I’D LOVE TO!”

Takeshi smiled amusedly at his son, “Then I guess that whenever they’re ready to leave, you could go.”
 
Fluffy-chan!? *still giggling*

It seems to me that battle scenes are best written short. I never found a need to document every single move and effect, and whenever I come across a scene like that, I end up skimming over it. I want a conclusion, not a hugely drawn-out description. ^^;

Mkay, Doseki has gone from Mr. D&M to Mr. .... um. I can't say it without being insulting. I know someone who acts just like he does in this chapter, and I won't go into it because this is the fanfic forum and MAYBE I NEED ME SOME ANGER MANAGEMENT. GRRR. HATE. SO. MUCH.

You didn't see that. ^^ I think I need more binary chocolate.

Oh, and I believe Tsusutji is the right name. Check Dogasu's site, he has all the translations you could need.
 
Hum...ok, I didn't see it. *Turns away respectfully* ^^. I agree with you about battles, actually. They don't do much for me, but I'd like to improve them for the people who do like them.

Anywho, I know it's been awhile since I updated, but writer's block has been ravaging me for quite some time. I know where I want to *get* at this point, but I'm not sure of exactly the best way to go about *getting* there, if you know what I mean. Would any of you (if, in fact, Pika-Zukin isn't my only reader) be opposed to a semi-humorous gym battle after this eppie? Or would you rather see a Shinji-Pichi focused type thing? I'd go for the gym battle if I were you, but I want to look out for people's interests.

On another note, I decided the order of all the seasons (so far)! We will have Kanto-Hoenn-Orange-Johto-A Secret. I want to get to Hoenn quickly because of Pokemon Contests! I love them, and besides, I can see the Hoshi-Keiko cat fights now (*Is probably evil for looking forward to writing such a thing*)

Ok, then, what you were really waiting for, THE EPISODE!
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Neo-Poke: Episode Seven, Season One: Dangerous Grudge! Team Rocket Reappears!

After the fight at Pewter Gym, where Shinji, Hoshi, and Keiko won Boulder Badges and Takeshi’s son, Doseki, joined them, we find them resting by a stream about half a mile out of Pewter.

“Jeez…why do girls need to keep resting? I could’ve been to Mt. Moon by now!” Shinji groused, laying his head back on the soft, green grass.

“Oh, stuff your self-righteous mouth!” snapped Hoshi, “YOU were the one holding onto a walking stick, not us!”

“Well I wasn’t the one who said ‘Let’s stop here and rest’,” returned Shinji, purposely making the last part seem extra whiney.

“No, you’re right. That was Doseki. Or have you forgotten?” asked Hoshi, grinning triumphantly and crossing her arms.

Shinji turned slightly red, “Er…you see…um…that can be explained by…”

“By the fact that you looked ready to pass out,” Doseki interjected cheerfully.

“No! That was a disguise! I wanted nearby trainers to think I looked bad and challenge me because they thought they could win!” the twelve-year-old boy protested.

“Yes…and a flying Squirtle just passed by, near the swimming Onix and the Bulbasaur engulfed in flames…” said Hoshi sarcastically.

“Does Hoshi always provoke people?” Keiko asked Nyasu quietly from where they sat under a large maple tree.

“Oh all da time. You shoulda been deyre when we was grown’ up. Always tryin’ to talk down to authority, and everyone else. Unless you was her parents you couldn’t ever get her to do anything she didn’t want to,” responded Nyasu.

“Do you ever shut up?!” growled Shinji.

“I’LL shut up when YOU stop acting stupid and hypocritical!” she muttered, glowering, “Which means that maybe sometime in the next millennium, we might have a chance.”

“What did I do to deserve being with someone like you, huh?!” he yelled, balling his hands into fists and scowling.

“You got incredibly lucky!” retorted Hoshi quickly, cracking her knuckles and turning them into fists as well.

“You’ve got the incredible luck. I guess when you’re a jailed convict, you’ll at least be able to say you knew a Pokemon Master once,” returned Shinji smugly.

“Sorry, but your tiny brain has processed it all wrong. When you’re sitting at a homeless shelter wearing rags because you’ve got no purpose in the world, can’t get a job, and blew all of your cash, you’ll be the one who can tell everyone you knew a Pokemon Master.”

“Take it back! I’ve got a million more things that’d make me a better Pokemon Master than you!” shouted Shinji, getting red in the face by now.

Doseki sighed, “I can see why these kids need me…they’d murder each other if I wasn’t here…” he muttered, then louder said, “Ok. I think we’re all done resting now. Let’s carry on…”

Keiko got up quickly, “I think you’re my savior,” she told Doseki quietly before going over to where Shinji and Hoshi were glaring each other down, approximately an inch from the other’s face, apparently unfazed by Doseki’s announcement and pulled Shinji away from Hoshi’s face frowning at him.

“Fine. But I’d like you to tell a certain Mr. Ketchum that I won’t be speaking to him,” replied Hoshi coldly.

“I can hear just fine from over here!” yelped Shinji angrily.

“Glad to hear it. At least a part of you works like it’s supposed to.”

“You’re the most unbearable person I’ve ever met!” Shinji moaned.

***

“Look at them…warring within their group…creating separate factions…we really need not intervene, Miaka. They could ruin themselves,” murmured Seto smirking lightly.

“Ah, but it wasn’t my idea to get revenge. It was yours,” responded Miaka giving him a mischievous look.

“Mmm…so indeed it was. But, on all accounts, we cannot simply let that girl get away with sending that arrogant Pokemon Master on us. Had she not come, that man probably wouldn’t have shown up,” he told his partner.

“So then, what is it you plan to do with them?” she inquired.

“This is one game I make up as I go along. Ransom looks good, murdering, torture…whatever I decided most appropriate and you go along with.”

“I’ll have you know then that I’m not all that keen on torture,” Miaka said with a troubled frown.

He chuckled softly, “Didn’t think you would be, dear. You were brought up with the morals that my lifestyle barely allowed room for.”

“If you call being berated and otherwise overlooked being taught about morals…well, one must wonder about you sometimes, Seto Mikuno,” she finished with a light smile, brushing back some of her long forest green hair.

“Good. I’d rather be wondered about than be one of those fools who wears every single detail about themselves plainly and proudly on the outside.”

***

“You know,” said Shinji conversationally as they walked around Mt. Moon, “there’s rare Clefairy in here, and I intend to catch one!” he proclaimed to them, striking a melodramatic pose and grinning.

“Gee, and people roll their eyes when I do this, but no one says anything about HIM,” said Hoshi lightly with an air of annoyance in her voice, “It’s just normal I guess. There’s always s double-standard, and I’m always the one on the rotten side of it.”

“Uh…you didn’t give us time to say anything about him…” replied Doseki raising an eyebrow as Hoshi crossed her arms and stormed over to rock, plopping down on it.

Shinji blinked, “Hey guys, what’s a double standard?” he asked innocently.

Just as quickly as she’d sat down, Hoshi flung herself up and continued walking, upturning her nose and giving a haughty sniff.

“Drama queen, much,” mumbled Keiko to the rest of the group, who nodded in agreement as they also resumed watching.

After walking rather aimlessly for about fifteen more minutes, on what seemed a stroke of good luck, a Clefairy jumped out of some nearby rocks, “Clefairy! Clef!” it cried in its high-pitched voice.

“Alright! I told you I was gonna capture it! Just shows you how much of a master I’m already beginning to turn out to be!” said Shinji smugly, turning to smirk at Hoshi, who glowered in response and let a low, growling noise escape her throat.

“Clefairy!” said the fairy Pokemon lightly as it began to skip away towards a dimly lit area of the cave.

“Hey! You aren’t gonna get away from me that easily!” exclaimed Shinji, with a broad smile as his adrenaline kicked in and he ran after it.

“Hey Shinji, wait!” yelled Doseki as Shinji ran towards the dimly lit area, “This sign right here says that this part of the cave is reserved for wild Pokemon!”

Shinji halted, but only for a second, “Well, I remember someone saying once that rules were made to be broken! Plus, it’s not like I’m gonna cause a ruckus, just gonna capture the Clefairy and get out!” he then continued his chase.

“Hmph…and people would get mad at me for this exact same thing…here we go with the double standard again…” grumbled Hoshi irritably as she, Keiko, Doseki, and Nyasu ran after Shinji.

“Oh just shut yer mouth!” snapped Nyasu, “We’re mad at dis kid too! We ain’t gonna treat you any differently den we would him!”

Hoshi snorted, “As if.”

“I’m over here!” they heard Shinji’s voice ringing, “I can’t see it!”

“Then let’s get out, please Shinji!” pleaded Keiko in her most pathetic voice.

“No way! I know it’s in here, I just…AAAAGH!”

“Shinji?! Are you alright?! What…SHIT!” yelped Doseki as a relatively small iron cage enveloped the area he was in. Nearby, he saw a similar cage trapping Keiko, and another holding Hoshi and Nyasu. He could only guess that one had gotten Shinji, too.

Suddenly, light enveloped the area they were in, and Seto and Miaka stepped onto a rather large rock in the center of the circle-like area they were in. Seto was holding the Clefairy they’d seen moments earlier and sneering at them.

“Hey! You can’t be here, you’re in jail!” protested Shinji, flailing his arms, “My dad put you there!”

“Oh?” asked Seto softly, “Funny thing about jails around here, not built that well.”

Miaka nodded, “Yes. All we had to do was burn the bars off with my Flareon.”

“Then we threw a bomb at the building from outside, so any officers who hadn’t been inside at the time, and any survivors from the blast couldn’t regroup quickly enough,” added Seto sadistically. At this, Keiko cupped her hands to her mouth and looked horrified, and Hoshi, the closest to the duo, was sure that, just for a moment there, she’d seen a pained look in Miaka’s eyes. Then she decided it’d probably just been a hallucination, as bad guys never show remorse. It just seemed to be a given in the bad guy handbook. At least, in her opinion.

“Then you own that Clefairy we saw, and you used it to get us here?” asked Doseki accusingly.

“No. We just asked it help us and then gave it a little extra…incentive,” murmured Seto. Miaka stepped to the side to reveal a baby Cleffa trapped inside a clear machine with an ax inches from its face. There was a switch on the side that, Doseki decided, probably swung the ax.

The younger Cleffa waved its arms as much as it could without hitting the ax and motioned towards the larger one, “Cleffa, Clef, Cleffa!” it wailed.

The Clefairy looked positively miserable, “Clefairy, Clefairy, Cle!” it responded in what it seemed to hope was a comforting tone.

“H-how could you…” began Keiko, eyes wide.

Seto shrugged slightly non-chalantly, “This is the reason why it’s so unnecessary to be around anyone, friends or, in this case family, who can’t take care of themselves. If you’re a bleeding heart, you’ll always find yourself in this situation,” he said silkily.

“That’s not fair!” cried Shinji.

“That’s right, it’s not,” responded Miaka, “and…it’s you kids’ fault, too. If you’d never have interfered with our Viridian City takeover plan, these Pokemon would be getting hurt.”

“That was only Hoshi though,” replied Keiko, “why are you doing this to us?”

“We wouldn’t be. We have no use for you, but it just so happens that you’re here with her. You may all thank her in hell,” said Seto softly.

“…Y-you think you’re getting away with it then?” asked Hoshi, trying to appear unconcerned, “Well…then you’re mistaken!”

“Oh? Am I then?” asked Seto mockingly.

“Yeah…because well, think of it! I bet you were weak once too, and you still have some weaknesses!” Hoshi hoped dearly that she could sway them off course by rambling, “I bet there was a time when you hid behind mommy and daddy all of the time!” she added sinisterly. When she saw anger bubble ominously on Seto’s face, she instantly regretted it.

He handed the Clefairy to Miaka and leapt forward and stood outside her cage, pointing a rifle, “DON’T…EVER…SAY…ANYTHING…ABOUT…MY[/]…PARENTS…” he shouted, sounding almost near insanity at that moment. It was a definite contrast from his normal voice.

“Point taken,” squeaked Hoshi, shrinking down in her cage. Nyasu glared indignantly and ran to another spot in the cage just as Hoshi was about to crush her.

“Well, it was taken too late then, I’m afraid…” murmured Seto, back to his normal voice.

Doseki stared up at Miaka, “Do you really want him to do this?” he demanded, hoping to take the Rocket on a guilt trip, “she’s just a kid!”

Miaka faltered for a spilt second, “And we’re Team Rocket, and she interfered with us! I don’t care what you’ve heard of our organization’s failures, because you’re going to witness one of our wins!”

“She only spoke the truth!” Doseki shot back, “He can’t have always been this way!”

“He was forced to grow up sooner then you, I gather, and he’s going to do the best thing for him and us! You don’t realize that your own government is probably more corrupt then the inner workings of our organization, do you?” she asked.

“That’s propaganda,” replied Doseki, glaring at her.

“You don’t know anything about propaganda until you’ve looked at YOUR government in the right way! Me, Seto, and every other Rocket under the leadership of Sakaki will lead you to a better era,” she snapped narrowing her eyes, “However,” she stepped down, near Doseki, “I think that if you joined us, you’d be incredible assets with the right training. This has all…slightly impressed me,” she said, and she let the Clefairy go. It immediately ran to help its child.

Seto turned around suddenly, “Are you saying what I think you seem to be implying, Miaka?” he asked in a slightly surprised voice.

“I think so,” she responded.

“You realize…I believe you’re being too rash,” he said softly.

“Mmm, no, I think they will do fine. Trust me, Seto,” she responded quietly.

He shook his head lightly, “I can’t say there’s ever been a time when you asked me to trust you that you’ve been wrong, my dear,” he walked over to her, “Are you positively sure this is how you want the winds of our destiny to blow? There are better targets out there, much more challenging, much more worthy.”

“Er…what are you guys talking about?!” interrupted Shinji with a thoroughly confused look on his face.

“It is business for us to know and you to find out,” Miaka replied, giving the twelve-year-old a hard look.

“And if Miaka is right, find out you shall, in do time,” finished Seto, “As for the present,” he took out a controller and pressed a button that lifted the cage, “Now let’s leave, Miaka.”

Hoshi glared at them. She didn’t take kindly this sudden brushing off, even if it had saved her life, “And you expect us to let you escape?!” she demanded, “What sort of morons are you tw-”

Doseki and Keiko ran forward to cover her mouth before she could say anymore, “Please, continue on your way out!” called Keiko nervously.

Seto arrogantly flipped his hair as he and Miaka began to disappear into the unlighted part of the cave, “Teaching your friend there manners is highly in order. I don’t want to have to use the force I came close to using today on her out of pure frustration when we meet again,” the group stood and waited until Seto and Miaka’s footsteps faded out before attempting to move, or even speak, again.

Doseki rubbed his forehead, “I don’t understand what just happened…but whatever it was, it was good luck,” he went over to the Clefairy and Cleffa and took the glass cage off of the Cleffa, “You should both be safe now.”

“I still want to catch one,” moaned Shinji with octopus tears running down his face as they left.

“Well, at least we all know we’ll live long enough to have another chance now,” said Keiko. She giggled nervously.

“Hmph. I’m tired of this stupid cave, let’s keep going!” exclaimed Hoshi suddenly, marching out of the area.

“Psssssst…” whispered Nyasu to the others, “Didja seem dem googly, starry eyes dat she was makin’ when she first saw dat Seto guy? I tink our little Hoshi just suffered a severe disappointment!” the cat Pokemon grinned deviously.

“Oh yeah?” asked Hoshi loudly, “Well I ‘tink’, as you say, our little Nyasu is going to suffer a sever CONCUSSION if she doesn’t shut up soon!”
 
Heee! Very cute, as usual. *applauds* Congratulations on getting over your writer's block! I love this fic, and I think together you and I will save the fanfic forum! [/overdrama] (<-- is still very silly tonight)

I vote for the silly gym battle! Also, I regret to inform you that if you expect high readership, bmgf isn't the place to find it. Y.Y

“Good. I’d rather be wondered about than be one of those fools who wears every single detail about themselves plainly and proudly on the outside.”
Dear Seto, I worship you. Can I have your phone number? Love, Zukin.

Sorry about that. ^^ Should I still be picturing him as looking like Mr. Kaiba? Because I do.
 
Yes, Zukin! Together we shall purge 3V1L from the forum! *Takes out a cliche magical girl wand, waves it, and transforms into SAILOR FICTION! DUN DA DUN! Then tosses a similar wand to Pika-Zukin* Quick, transform into Sailor Fan!

Ok, so I'm a bit hyper ^_^. Ah well.

Gym battle? Ok, that's good *wipes sweat off forehead* That should be easier--and less cliche--than a Shinji-Pichu eppie. And as for Seto...hum...you can imagine him basically as Kaiba with green (think Butch's shade of green) hair that's slightly longer than Kaiba's, violet eyes, and a black TR uniform o' course. That should suffice enough until I can finally do him justice on paper.

Glad you enoyed the last episode. I must admit I was slightly worried that it was too...corny or something (especially the Seto and Miaka parts, as I'm not sure how good I am seriousness)
 
Can I help? Pwease? yay. I have to say, I had a nice morning reading this. ^_^ Addressing points in random order:

1. I think I have the same problem with Japanese/English names. Maybe not. *doesn't know*

2. Die Suzaku. Long live Tails. :hbreak: [/no relevance]

3. *assume Haruka is the Sailor Senshi Haruka* *whistles innocently*

4. Stars. My. Okay, for the most part you do well with using the stars, which obviously represent a scene and character change or a lapse of time. However, I noticed a couple spots where you kinda misused them. When Hoshi-tachi were in front of the Pewter gym, Keiko said something like "Let's go in!" or she was agreeing with Shinji IIRC, and you used stars, when all they did was simply walk inside the gym. I think the would've flowed more smoothly if you didn't use stars and just wrote something like, "Hoshi pushed opened the heavy doors, with her two companions following. As the doors closed behind them, they marvelled at the structure of the gym. Shinji called...." HOWever, I do congradulate with the stars. I find then difficult to use after my "six-grade experience," so I barely use them anymore in my writing. So there's my spheal. ^^;

5. On episode five, you made some kind of type with the Italics. Same with Seto's point about his father in episode seven. Being a webpage coder, things like that bug me. Sorry for being picky... :embarass:

6. I liked how Hoshi quoted Nyasu during the Sagi encounter. Sagi is very interesting, I hope he recurres (sp). :-D

7. Doseki/Hoshi shipping = weeeeee :p

8. La tee dum....there *was* something I was going to say here....right. I look forward to seeing more of Miaka's past. I've always liked villains that don't approve of their evilness. :p (wrong choice of words).

9. Gym battle.

10. I've seen Tutuji, but the way the Japanese language is, I think it makes the most sense as Tsutsuji. Yanno, the way the letters of and stuff, with half-letters. Yeah. Good pairing, btw! I like how Doseki takes after his father!

11. Very good length for chapters, and they are all about the same length, which is good IMO. My chapters are all like short and then really long and screwy. So yeah, well done.

Keep it up! Now, watch me disappear because I have nothing more to say! *poof*
 
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