Griff4815
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Rated 14A (or PG-13) - Violence and gore, language, some mature themes, and sexual innuendo.
Genre- Action/Adventure, Drama, some Romance.
You probably already know this but I still have to say:
“Example” is for humans and pokemon speaking their native tongues.
“<Example>” is for Pokemon translated into English.
“Example” is for people/pokemon in thought.
I'll add each chapter once I feel it is done to it's best, so don't get too impatient as I have most chapters done and just need some editing.
I'll add the Disclaimer/Author’s Notes later
The prologue is much, much shorter than my usual chapters, since it's only here to set the mood and anticipation for the story. Oh and I know I'm not supposed to call the Prologue "Prologue" but I wanted to put it there for formality. Once I post the first few chapters, the prologue will seem more in place.
Everything was a dark green and brown blur in my eyes. I ran through the eerie, misty forest, bounding over roots and branches. There were few beams of light trying to enter the forest; they were clearly seen in the haze.
I knew I was being chased, I could sense it. Beside me was a moving shape…maybe a figure. It blended in with the forest but had blur of red with it, as it ran by my side, as if a piece of the forest was running with me.
I felt myself trip over a root and fall face first into the leaves and dirt. I tried to get up and move forward but my legs wouldn’t let me, they couldn't move. I used my right arm to try and crawl forward.
The dim figure in front of me extended its hand. I tried to reach out and grab it but I couldn’t reach. I looked up and saw a beautiful girl, who I knew, beside the figure. She smiled sweetly at me. I tried to grab for them but the two continued to be forever out of my reach. I tried to get up again but my legs were limp so I fell back to the ground.
I heard whispers and high, raspy shrieks of a creature surrounding me. They gradually grew louder and I struggled, helpless.
I looked down at my left arm and saw a gigantic gash appear down my left bicep. It didn’t bleed but I could see the insides of my arm, revealing veins, muscle, and tissue. I, horrified, continued to try to stand up and run.
The shrieks echoed all around. I could see the glint of a metal blade in the corner of my eye. I closed my eyes as I heard the “swish” of it. I felt a stinging pain my head as I then heard a final shriek. Then I saw whiteness.
Genre- Action/Adventure, Drama, some Romance.
You probably already know this but I still have to say:
“Example” is for humans and pokemon speaking their native tongues.
“<Example>” is for Pokemon translated into English.
“Example” is for people/pokemon in thought.
I'll add each chapter once I feel it is done to it's best, so don't get too impatient as I have most chapters done and just need some editing.
I'll add the Disclaimer/Author’s Notes later
The prologue is much, much shorter than my usual chapters, since it's only here to set the mood and anticipation for the story. Oh and I know I'm not supposed to call the Prologue "Prologue" but I wanted to put it there for formality. Once I post the first few chapters, the prologue will seem more in place.
Prologue
Everything was a dark green and brown blur in my eyes. I ran through the eerie, misty forest, bounding over roots and branches. There were few beams of light trying to enter the forest; they were clearly seen in the haze.
I knew I was being chased, I could sense it. Beside me was a moving shape…maybe a figure. It blended in with the forest but had blur of red with it, as it ran by my side, as if a piece of the forest was running with me.
I felt myself trip over a root and fall face first into the leaves and dirt. I tried to get up and move forward but my legs wouldn’t let me, they couldn't move. I used my right arm to try and crawl forward.
The dim figure in front of me extended its hand. I tried to reach out and grab it but I couldn’t reach. I looked up and saw a beautiful girl, who I knew, beside the figure. She smiled sweetly at me. I tried to grab for them but the two continued to be forever out of my reach. I tried to get up again but my legs were limp so I fell back to the ground.
I heard whispers and high, raspy shrieks of a creature surrounding me. They gradually grew louder and I struggled, helpless.
I looked down at my left arm and saw a gigantic gash appear down my left bicep. It didn’t bleed but I could see the insides of my arm, revealing veins, muscle, and tissue. I, horrified, continued to try to stand up and run.
The shrieks echoed all around. I could see the glint of a metal blade in the corner of my eye. I closed my eyes as I heard the “swish” of it. I felt a stinging pain my head as I then heard a final shriek. Then I saw whiteness.
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