Chapter One - On Our Way
(VICTORY, HERE I COME!)
This is an OT fic. I'll try to mix things up just a bit.
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Pete kneeled down and looked into his beginner Pokemon's eyes. "What is it, Ivy? Are you thirsty?"
The green grass-type Pokemon nodded. A strained raspy sound escaped from her mouth indicating that she was obviously parched. Pete scanned the surrounding area until he found a lake.
"When we get to Viridian City I can feed you all you want and give you lots of water, but until then..." He didn't need to say more. His Bulbasaur rushed over to the pristine body of water. Her face plunged into it, cooling off her insides with fresh water as she drank, and drank, and drank.
"Uh...Ivy?" He stood, watching, as she gulped away to her heart's content. Finally, she sucked in air, returning to him grinning. Her face was wet and dripping with the lake water.
"You full buddy?" He inquired and chuckled when she nodded. "Boy, you have quite an appetite for such a little Pokemon!"
Ivy laughed with him. She enjoyed tasting food and drinking very much. Her bulb suddenly vibrated. Pete knew that this meant trouble. Instinctively, Ivy jumped, and a Krabby soared through the space she had recently occupied. It foamed at the mouth, turning to her pinching the air in a violent frenzy. Maybe their laughter had disturbed it, she mused, simultaneously leaping away from a Bubblebeam barrage.
"Wow! Nice dodge Ivy, now give it a Headbutt!" Pete was surprised that the sudden attack was launched at his Pokemon. However, he quickly gathered himself together and was ready to engage in battle with Ivy.
The crab glanced angrily at Pete, pelting him with bubbles and causing him to cough. Pete hopped away from the Pokemon, just as Ivy charged. A literal "head-on" collision made Krabby topple over, yet it righted itself immediately. This battle would not be quick or easy.
"Vine whip," Pete said, hoping this would work. No luck, as the Krabby used Clamp to grab the vines with its pincers. Krabby spun Ivy round and round, then finally flung her into the water. Bubbles popped at the surface, then there was silence. Krabby snickered in its own language, thinking it was victorious. Just when he thought this, Ivy broke the surface of the water, landing, drenched in water, on the edge of the lake. She walked forward, glaring silently at Krabby. She wasn't going to make the battle any easier than he would.
This message came across well through her eyes as she glared at her opponent. Suddenly, Krabby lurched forward at her with Crabhammer. His pincers lashed out at her, crashing into her forehead. She staggered backwards, and found herself at the water's edge once more. Ivy was too determined to lose like this, so she charged at Krabby with another headbutt, knocking him several feet back.
The quick attack that followed rammed Krabby, and sent it tumbling farther. The low, lush grass around them set a calm mood for the battle, yet that was ONLY the mood of the setting, nothing more. This battle was fast-paced, and both were persistent enough to keep attacking. Ivy jumped forward hitting Krabby again with Headbutt. This time, however, he nimbly flipped onto his feet and sprayed her in the face with a powerful water gun! She sank limply to the ground. Because the attack had been at close range she was hurt badly. Heroically, she struggled to her feet, weighed down with water and her own sweat.
"Don't give in Ivy," Pete urged. "Use your brain to overcome Krabby's quick moves, all right?"
Ivy groaned, nodding slightly. Easier said than done she thought. Maybe if he knew how a jet of water and solid pincers in your face felt, he'd keep quiet. She neared Krabby again, this time getting knocked back by a volley of bubbles. This wasn't enough to hold her back, she told herself, and swept Krabby off its feet with one vine. Next, she unleashed thin, sharp objects known as leaves. The small leaves left cut marks as they sliced Krabby's legs. He held up an arm to ward off the blows during the Razor Leaf bombardment. Next, he ran toward her, pincers ready, ignoring the injuries he had.
His pincers began to glow, as he lunged forward with Crabhammer. Ivy grinned, a plan forming, and she flipped over Krabby, whipping around to prepare for another attack. Krabby sped up, catching Ivy off gaurd, his pincers glancing off the side of her cheekbone. Taking the golden opportunity to do great damage, Ivy met Krabby right in the face with headbutt, catching him in mid-air with her vines.
"Good battling Ivy. Now finish it!" Pete encouraged. He saw battle wounds on her forehead.
What did he think she was doing? She turned her mind back to the task at hand, and forced him down. Finally beaten, Krabby slammed onto the ground, bounced off the grass, and landed in the lake.
Ivy had prevailed. Weak, but pleased with herself, she willingly fell to the ground groaning. Pete approached her, and returned her to her Pokeball, where she could rest without any disturbances. He was proud of her. He knew he would spoil her to reward her for her exceptional perseverance in battle. When she woke up he was going to treat her to her favorite pink pokeblock.
(VICTORY, HERE I COME!)
This is an OT fic. I'll try to mix things up just a bit.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
REVISED
Pete kneeled down and looked into his beginner Pokemon's eyes. "What is it, Ivy? Are you thirsty?"
The green grass-type Pokemon nodded. A strained raspy sound escaped from her mouth indicating that she was obviously parched. Pete scanned the surrounding area until he found a lake.
"When we get to Viridian City I can feed you all you want and give you lots of water, but until then..." He didn't need to say more. His Bulbasaur rushed over to the pristine body of water. Her face plunged into it, cooling off her insides with fresh water as she drank, and drank, and drank.
"Uh...Ivy?" He stood, watching, as she gulped away to her heart's content. Finally, she sucked in air, returning to him grinning. Her face was wet and dripping with the lake water.
"You full buddy?" He inquired and chuckled when she nodded. "Boy, you have quite an appetite for such a little Pokemon!"
Ivy laughed with him. She enjoyed tasting food and drinking very much. Her bulb suddenly vibrated. Pete knew that this meant trouble. Instinctively, Ivy jumped, and a Krabby soared through the space she had recently occupied. It foamed at the mouth, turning to her pinching the air in a violent frenzy. Maybe their laughter had disturbed it, she mused, simultaneously leaping away from a Bubblebeam barrage.
"Wow! Nice dodge Ivy, now give it a Headbutt!" Pete was surprised that the sudden attack was launched at his Pokemon. However, he quickly gathered himself together and was ready to engage in battle with Ivy.
The crab glanced angrily at Pete, pelting him with bubbles and causing him to cough. Pete hopped away from the Pokemon, just as Ivy charged. A literal "head-on" collision made Krabby topple over, yet it righted itself immediately. This battle would not be quick or easy.
"Vine whip," Pete said, hoping this would work. No luck, as the Krabby used Clamp to grab the vines with its pincers. Krabby spun Ivy round and round, then finally flung her into the water. Bubbles popped at the surface, then there was silence. Krabby snickered in its own language, thinking it was victorious. Just when he thought this, Ivy broke the surface of the water, landing, drenched in water, on the edge of the lake. She walked forward, glaring silently at Krabby. She wasn't going to make the battle any easier than he would.
This message came across well through her eyes as she glared at her opponent. Suddenly, Krabby lurched forward at her with Crabhammer. His pincers lashed out at her, crashing into her forehead. She staggered backwards, and found herself at the water's edge once more. Ivy was too determined to lose like this, so she charged at Krabby with another headbutt, knocking him several feet back.
The quick attack that followed rammed Krabby, and sent it tumbling farther. The low, lush grass around them set a calm mood for the battle, yet that was ONLY the mood of the setting, nothing more. This battle was fast-paced, and both were persistent enough to keep attacking. Ivy jumped forward hitting Krabby again with Headbutt. This time, however, he nimbly flipped onto his feet and sprayed her in the face with a powerful water gun! She sank limply to the ground. Because the attack had been at close range she was hurt badly. Heroically, she struggled to her feet, weighed down with water and her own sweat.
"Don't give in Ivy," Pete urged. "Use your brain to overcome Krabby's quick moves, all right?"
Ivy groaned, nodding slightly. Easier said than done she thought. Maybe if he knew how a jet of water and solid pincers in your face felt, he'd keep quiet. She neared Krabby again, this time getting knocked back by a volley of bubbles. This wasn't enough to hold her back, she told herself, and swept Krabby off its feet with one vine. Next, she unleashed thin, sharp objects known as leaves. The small leaves left cut marks as they sliced Krabby's legs. He held up an arm to ward off the blows during the Razor Leaf bombardment. Next, he ran toward her, pincers ready, ignoring the injuries he had.
His pincers began to glow, as he lunged forward with Crabhammer. Ivy grinned, a plan forming, and she flipped over Krabby, whipping around to prepare for another attack. Krabby sped up, catching Ivy off gaurd, his pincers glancing off the side of her cheekbone. Taking the golden opportunity to do great damage, Ivy met Krabby right in the face with headbutt, catching him in mid-air with her vines.
"Good battling Ivy. Now finish it!" Pete encouraged. He saw battle wounds on her forehead.
What did he think she was doing? She turned her mind back to the task at hand, and forced him down. Finally beaten, Krabby slammed onto the ground, bounced off the grass, and landed in the lake.
Ivy had prevailed. Weak, but pleased with herself, she willingly fell to the ground groaning. Pete approached her, and returned her to her Pokeball, where she could rest without any disturbances. He was proud of her. He knew he would spoil her to reward her for her exceptional perseverance in battle. When she woke up he was going to treat her to her favorite pink pokeblock.
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