New Pokemon Comic

[Mizzy]

Hey, sort-of new here, signed up a long time ago but never used the account. I write a Pokemon fancomic and the Comic Genesis archive now has all the information on it that I need (no frills though, pretty much default site design) so I figured I'd show it to a Pokemon community.

Pokemon: Plastic and Pleather

It's a PG-13 comic that takes place in a region analagous to America, and follows the adventures of two low-ranking idiots in the local Team, who are following Team Rocket with the intent to capture them, just as they are following Pikachu. Hilarity ensues?

 

[Mizzy]

*cough*

 

[Turtle Tamer Kammy]

Don't be bumping...

I don't understand the comic. The art is too choppy. Sorry. :/

 

[Pseudonymiss]

Hm, well...your drawing style is great; but it would help if you could work on the lineage. Every stroke you make overlaps with another one from another character and most of the time the reader won't comprehend what the character's doing or what motion they're trying to portray. Fix that up and I think I'll consider reading it. Hopefully I'll be able to read it next time.

Keep Up Your Artistry,

a_f

 

[The Pig King]

Well, it looks Ok, but I think it really looks like a design sketch, like you got halfway and got bored.

 

[Mizzy]

All this is true...mostly because it's a draft. *shrug* My handwriting IS pretty awful.