New to the Pokemon battle scene, rate me please.

[Dragonaught]

Noctowl
Nature: Mild
Item: Sharp Beak
~ Hypnosis
~ Roost
~ Air Slash
~ Psychic

Feraligatr
Nature: Adamant
Item: Nevermelt Ice
~ Swords Dance
~ Earthquake
~ Waterfall
~ Ice Fang

Scizor
Nature: Quirky
Item: Quick Claw
~ Swords Dance
~ X-Scissor
~ Wing Attack
~ U-Turn

Magnezone
Nature: Timid
Item: ?
~ Thunderbolt
~ Substitute
~ Metal Sound
~ Flash Cannon

Marowak
Nature: Lax
Item: ?
~ Bonemarang
~ Endeavor
~ Thunderpunch
~ Stone Edge

For my last pokemon I was thinking of Blissy or Magmortar

I know I didn't post EV's because I am not quite sure what those are, like the title suggests I am quite new to this and was hoping someone could go easy on me xD We were all noobs once.

 

[Magmortar123]

I would give scizor an adamant nature and the same for marowak (If possible) and a calm one for noctowl. And probably should try to find a way to post EVs (again, if possible). And again if possible, change feraligatr's item to life orb and teach it ice punch.Also, does scizor have technician? Whether it be technician or swarm you should probably teach it bullet punch over wing attack. Oh and one last thing, I would take psychic off noctowl for reflect. Sorry if I sound too harsh, I'm just tryin to help you out

Edit: magnezone should have explosion also.

 

[mc2094]

We were all noobs once.

True that. If you really want to get better I would suggest the following: check out smogon, they offer tons of useful info and some basic movesets. I would also suggest downloading shoddy battle and watching other people play for a bit and then giving it a shot yourself. I gaurantee you'll improve a lot faster if you use shoddy battle as compared to wi-fi battling. Aside from that, just practice. Your current team isn't so great but don't sweat it, no one makes a good first team.

 

[Dragonaught]

Thanks for the advice magmortar and

and mc, those two things you mentioned are very helpful thanks, i greatly appreciate the help.

 

[Magmortar123]

Thanks for the advice magmortar and

and mc, those two things you mentioned are very helpful thanks, i greatly appreciate the help.

No problem =)

 

[Badal]

Its not right for us to send him to smogon as soon as he comes here for help. Buddy, if you need help contact me, I can help you get better.
But is this team for your HG/SS game?

 

[Dragonaught]

Its not right for us to send him to smogon as soon as he comes here for help. Buddy, if you need help contact me, I can help you get better.
But is this team for your HG/SS game?

Yes, this is for HG and I'll take any help I can get