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Hi. I'm flareon4ever and this is my first fanfiction. Constructive criticism is appreciated, but don't be rude.
Anyway, the story is called Ocean Waves. There is not a prologue. It could be compared to the HGSS storyline. New technology is introduced. Well, Here's chapter one. Its not very long but enjoy!
Humans
Mel- Team Rocket Commander ; in charge of Project Whirl; Dark brown hair, Brown eyes; pokemon: Houndoom and Dragonite
Becca- Pokemon Trainer of Johto; Brown hair, gray eyes; Pokemon: Quilava, Pidgeot, Gyrados
Professor Elm- PKMN Professor; You know what he looks like. Look it up on Bulbapedia.; Pokemon: Chikorita
Pokemon
All Legendary Pokemon
Walking down the road to Ecruteak City, I was challenged by a Picknicker.
“ Ok. Fine.”
We walked over to a nearby clearing. She threw her Pokeball into the air.
“ Time to shine, Aipom!”
My senses went on full alert. An Aipom? What am I, an amateur?
“ Let’s go, Pidgeot!” I called out as I threw the Pokeball. My Pidgeot and the other trainer’s Aipom sprung onto the battlefield.
I was starting to think about which attack to use when the other trainer called out, “ Aipom use Furyswipes!” Aipom started for Pidgeot when I called out, “ Aerial Ace, now!” Beak hit claw and, surprisingly, beak won. Aipom fell on the ground and fainted. “ Yes! Way to go Pidgeot.”
I returned Pidgeot to it’s poke ball.
The trainer I was fighting ran off.
Dusk approached so I set up camp for the night by a nearby stream. I let my Pidgeot and Quilava out of their Pokeballs. Later that night I asked Quilava a question that would change my life, “ Hey Quilava,” He poked his head out of the grass, “ Is it fun being a Pokemon?” He looked confused but then said something that my Pokedex translated as, “ Well, yes. It really depends on who you are.” My pokedex had an app. on it called PokeTranslate, which could translate what the pokemon said.
“ What do you mean?”
“ I mean it depends on where you are born. If you are born a legendary pokemon, then you have the best life possible. Being a wild is great, according to Pidgeot, being free. Being owned by a trainer, well it really depends. If it’s a terrible trainer then life is terrible. If a trainer like you, then life is wonderful. But, I wouldn’t know…”
“ You know. Sometimes I wish I was a Pokemon.”
Midnight came and a light shone. It caused me to wake up. A shape appeared and spoke.
“ I am Jirachi, the Wish Pokemon. I come from the distant Hoenn region. I have heard your wish to become one of us. Now, get up and fly to the Whirl Islands. I will give you your reward.”
Then it disappeared.
Anyway, the story is called Ocean Waves. There is not a prologue. It could be compared to the HGSS storyline. New technology is introduced. Well, Here's chapter one. Its not very long but enjoy!
Ocean Waves
A Pokemon Fanfiction
Major Characters
(as of start of story)
A Pokemon Fanfiction
Major Characters
(as of start of story)
Humans
Mel- Team Rocket Commander ; in charge of Project Whirl; Dark brown hair, Brown eyes; pokemon: Houndoom and Dragonite
Becca- Pokemon Trainer of Johto; Brown hair, gray eyes; Pokemon: Quilava, Pidgeot, Gyrados
Professor Elm- PKMN Professor; You know what he looks like. Look it up on Bulbapedia.; Pokemon: Chikorita
Pokemon
All Legendary Pokemon
Chapter 1
“Hey let’s battle!”Walking down the road to Ecruteak City, I was challenged by a Picknicker.
“ Ok. Fine.”
We walked over to a nearby clearing. She threw her Pokeball into the air.
“ Time to shine, Aipom!”
My senses went on full alert. An Aipom? What am I, an amateur?
“ Let’s go, Pidgeot!” I called out as I threw the Pokeball. My Pidgeot and the other trainer’s Aipom sprung onto the battlefield.
I was starting to think about which attack to use when the other trainer called out, “ Aipom use Furyswipes!” Aipom started for Pidgeot when I called out, “ Aerial Ace, now!” Beak hit claw and, surprisingly, beak won. Aipom fell on the ground and fainted. “ Yes! Way to go Pidgeot.”
I returned Pidgeot to it’s poke ball.
The trainer I was fighting ran off.
Dusk approached so I set up camp for the night by a nearby stream. I let my Pidgeot and Quilava out of their Pokeballs. Later that night I asked Quilava a question that would change my life, “ Hey Quilava,” He poked his head out of the grass, “ Is it fun being a Pokemon?” He looked confused but then said something that my Pokedex translated as, “ Well, yes. It really depends on who you are.” My pokedex had an app. on it called PokeTranslate, which could translate what the pokemon said.
“ What do you mean?”
“ I mean it depends on where you are born. If you are born a legendary pokemon, then you have the best life possible. Being a wild is great, according to Pidgeot, being free. Being owned by a trainer, well it really depends. If it’s a terrible trainer then life is terrible. If a trainer like you, then life is wonderful. But, I wouldn’t know…”
“ You know. Sometimes I wish I was a Pokemon.”
Midnight came and a light shone. It caused me to wake up. A shape appeared and spoke.
“ I am Jirachi, the Wish Pokemon. I come from the distant Hoenn region. I have heard your wish to become one of us. Now, get up and fly to the Whirl Islands. I will give you your reward.”
Then it disappeared.