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One Heck of a festival and a new perspective on life.

Light Fang

Being called Emo.
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Chapter 1 My final contest.

I am taking part of the team contest where we can use up to four Pokémon. We dress them up then show them off and then the crowd will vote for the winner. Me, Dawn, Ash, and May have entered and I’m very nervous but not because of the contest. I’ve entered with my Eevee, Vaporeon, Jolteon, and Flareon. While my Espeon, Umbreon, Leafeon, Glaceon, Pikachu, Riolu, Arcanine, and Lucario wait outside with Brock who is busy making a lunch for us after.

“OK contestants you have one minute to dress up your Pokémon and today the theme is the Natural!”
“Ok Eevee, Vaporeon, Jolteon, and Flareon you ready?”
“Ee!”
“Va!”
“Jolt!”
"Flare!”

We enter the changing room and we remember the theme the Natural. So to match the theme I put together several red, yellow, and blue flowers into four similar flower necklaces which are put around the necks of my Pokémon then I make some for them to wear as floral tiaras. Then I quickly change into my normal outfit as time runs out.

“OK and time is up.”
“OK girls just act normal because it is impossible for you four to look any cuter. We are ready for this!”

We are to out last so we can rest up and prepare. First up is Dawn and her Buneary; the crowd is thrilled by the beauty. Then Ash is up showing off his Staraptor; the crowd goes into an uproar by its pure powerful presence. Following after him is May with her Beautifly; the crowd is amazed with the beauty of it. Then Ash, Dawn, and May come back into the changing room and I’m completely nervous, shaking and everything.

“Good luck Zack.”
“You’ll do great.”
“Uh thanks Ash and thank you May.”
“Zack. No need to worry. I know you’ll do great; your Pokémon look great.”
“No offense Dawn but whenever you say that I worry… ACK!!!”

Dawn puts me into a choke hold with a rather irritated look on her face then let’s go of me since I’m up next. As soon as I step out the crowed falls silent and I see why my Vaporeon, Jolteon, and Flareon are frozen in fear while Eevee hides behind my legs. Seeing their distress, I remind them…

“Don’t worry girls, its ok…. I’m here.”

They calm down and knock me over so they can lick my face, which tickles and the display is so cute that the crowd is sent into an udder uproar of laughter, giggles, claps, shouts, and whistles. As we go back into the changing room, we can still hear them going.

“OK now to find out the winner of the contest. Audience, using your voting devices, place you votes on who you think should win the contest.”

After waiting a bit, the votes are displayed. Tt’s 5 for Ash, 10 for May, 25 for Dawn, and 60 votes for Zack. So I get called out to accept my reward a Master rank contest ribbon. I’m so happy and so is everyone else. As we leave the building, my newly born Riolu, who had been waiting outside, comes running to hug me. Its attachment to me might be caused by the fact that when I saved her egg from some hungry looking Weavile, it hatched and she saw me. But since I’m so busy most of the time my female Lucario acts like a mother to her whenever I’m too busy for her, but that doesn’t bother her because once I have time we play for the rest of the day. But she can sense my sadness, so she doesn’t try to get me to play with her now.

“Wow that was fun.”
“YEAH!”
“Hey Brock is lunch ready?”
“Yes let’s eat.”
“yeah…”

We sit down to eat and I give my Pokémon the special Pokémon food I made, but as we sit down to eat, I have troubles trying to hide my growing sadness. My Pokémon know why and they also have troubles showing it, especially Eevee who does a certain thing when she knows that I’m upset…

To be continued…
 
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Chapter 2 My sad news

“Hey Zack what’s wrong?”
“WHAT!?!”
“Yeah Dawn, what makes you say that?”

We are all surprised by what Dawn had said and even more surprised by what she said next…

“Dawn how do you know?”
“Your Eevee is pawing at your leg and for the past three months that we have been together since meeting in Floaroma Town, your Eevee would only paw at your leg when you were upset about something…”
“Good observation Dawn and you're right…”

Seeing as there is no way around this, I pick Eevee up in my arms. Then, with a heavy heart, I tell them my sad news…

“I’m going home to Pueltown… today…”
“WHAT!?!”
“Wait where is that?”
“It’s a place in the Almia region…”

Everyone looks at me, even Eevee is upset but she already knew about the news; so did all of my other Pokémon. But I continue with my reason while I pull something out of my bag.

“Wait is that a Fine Styler!?! So you’re a Pokémon Ranger?!”
“Yes I am but truthfully I am a Top Ranger…”
“Is that why you have to return?”

I stay quiet for an extended period of time as I put away my Fine Styler back into my bag.

“I’m returning because the Ranger Union wants to take my Styler and use it as a sign of what happens when you set a goal and do it while striving to be the best that one can be.” “Wow that is amazing.” “yes but it means that i have to return so i will have to leave Sinnoh and stay in Almia in case they need me for dangerous missions… so this is good-bye…”

I start to cry because I don’t want to go but I have to; they already have a ride for me and I can’t miss it, not even if I try to…

“OK. Well, how will you even get back? It will take three days to get to the nearest harbor.” “Hey that’s right.”

Again I fall silent and for about three minutes. No sound what so ever is being made. Then I finally say something…

“Someone is coming to get me…
“Really?”
“Yes…”
“Who?”
“She is another Top Ranger; her name is Wendy…”

With that a woman riding on a Staraptor arrives with another Staraptor with her.

“Hi Zack, long time no see right.” “Yeah hi…”

I climb onto a Staraptor and I give Ash and gang my address in case they ever want to come and visit me.

“Bye Zack.”
“Bye see you again?”
“Sure thing.”
“Come on Zack we need to go now.”

With that the Staraptors take off into the air and we fly back to the Ranger Union in Almia. I enter to meet the chairman and we go into a long talk of all the things I did for the people of the Almia region.

To be continued…
 
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This is a good fic, i'm enjoying reading it, but how did May get there?
 
Chapter 3 Old Friends, Older Memories

After finishing my chat with Chairperson, Erma, and dropping of my Styler to Professor Hasting, he just gives it back and tells me that they will still need me for missions so I should hold on to it. Seeing as how I have finished the things I needed to get done, I decide to go back to my home in Pueltown.

“I wonder if my home is still OK, I mean I haven’t been home for the past three months…”
“Hey Zack is that really you?”

I turn around to see my old friend Rhythmi and we start to talk with each other…

“Yes it’s me.”
“Really. Wow I’ve never seen you not in uniform.”
“Yeah that’s true, I mean when we first met I was in my school uniform.”
“Hey are those Poké balls?”
“Yes while I was away I became a Pokémon trainer.”
“Wow so you got to be what you have wanted to be.”
“Yeah but now I’m back in Almia so I’m done with being a trainer. It’s back to being a Pokémon Ranger…. Oh well it was nice talking with you. Bye.”

As I walk away, Rhythmi mumbles something under her breath so I can’t hear her…

“Zack I wish you could see how much I’ve changed since we first met back at the Ranger School I’ve seen how you’ve changed... Why don’t you see the girl I’ve become not the girl I used to be? I can remember the day we first met as if it was just yesterday…”

We cut away for a bit to go back in time to the day that Rhythmi is remembering, my first day of Ranger School, her third day…

“Hey Rhythmi have you heard the news!?”
“Oh… Hi Keith yes I heard the news about the new kid arriving today.”
“What why didn’t anyone tell me! Oh but I’m talking about that there is a strange Pokémon running around here and I’m going to get it with my School Styler!”

That Keith back then he would get bored because no one at school could challenge him at capturing Pokémon but when it came to tests he was horrible. What he needed at school was some rival. We go to the Pledge Stone to meet the new student. Then, suddenly, a figure runs at us and Keith shouts…

“Look out!”
“Ah help me!”

The figure starts to run at Rhythmi so she runs away, but it takes off after her as Keith follows, trying to catch it with his school styler. The mysterious Pokémon kept on jumping away while still chasing after Rhythmi. Then suddenly a mysterious voice rings out…

“Ha found you! Hey girl duck!”
“OK.”

As she ducks, another figure zooms over her and lands on top of the mysterious Pokémon. They roll into Keith knocking him down while kicking up dust. Once the dust settled they see a kid on his back in the grass as the smallest Eevee licks him happily. The Eevee was so small it could actually curl up and fall asleep in his open hand, which it did after it finished licking him.

“Ah you must be the new student. I’m Miss April.”
“Hi my name is Zack and I guess everyone already met my new born Eevee.”
“Yes we have…”

We come back to the present as Rhythmi sighs while saying…

“No matter how much time has gone by, Zack will always be the same old kid and I will never be able to share my feelings with him……sigh…”

To be continued…
 
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That is very good I must say, I enjoy reading stories about pokémon.
Poor Ash XD he didn't deserve that!
In chapter 3 it says "My new is Zack" shouldn't it be my name?
Reading this made me want to play shadows of almia... I'm hoping for a sequel, does anyone know if there will be one?
I can't wait for chapter 4. I'm hoping for an adventure to save someone like in a cave or something, or an adventure like in real shadows of almia.

Again, this is pretty good. Please continue.
 
Chapter 4 Finally time to Relax.

For the past week that I have been home in Pueltown I have not had a chance to play with my Pokémon because I’m always being called off for some quest, mission, or assignment. I’ve been called out early in the morning and I don't get home until late at night; all I have time for is making everyone dinner, brushing my Pokémon’s fur, getting into bed with Riolu and Eevee, then falling asleep. So another day starts off the same but I finish at 4 o’clock so I could actually spend the rest of the day with my Pokémon, or at least until my over worked body gives out on me. I’m stressed from being over worked while my Pokémon are stressed from lack of work-- ironic is it not? So I run home just to bump into some stranger and I fall back onto my butt.

“OOF! Oops sorry…”
“No problem… Here you look stressed and since your stressed, your Pokémon must be in some need of fun…”
“yeah… Wait how do you know--where did you go?”

As I look up the stranger is gone so I look at the paper that he gave me. It is a flyer to a special festival at Altru Park; it is going to be huge a special Pokémon festival with games, rides, and food which is free for the Pokémon Trainers, but Rangers have to pay. Then it mentions how it is the best place to relieve all built up stress and an excellent place to strengthen the bond between Trainer, Ranger, and Pokémon. The perfect place my team and me.

“This is PERFECT, plus I have always wanted to go to a festival!”

I run inside to show the flyer to all my Pokémon, who go completely ecstatic over the thought, so I change into my best blue jeans and favorite black shirt. Then, later at 7 o’clock, the sun goes down setting the sky ablaze with colors of gold and various reds. By the time the moon is out, the gates open letting us inside and I have my backpack with my money so we can get in.

“OK hello and your name is…”
“Oh it’s Zack.”
“As in the Top Ranger Zack???”
“Uh yes…”
“Then you and your Pokémon get in for free!”
“Really?”
“Yes but you will still need to pay for the food you get for yourself.”
“OK thanks!”

So I run in and release all my Pokémon, but before I let them start they promise to meet me back at the gate at eight-thirty. Then they zoom off except for Eevee and Riolu, who decide to stay with me. So we start to walk around checking out the things when Eevee and Riolu start to drag me to a booth.

“Hey where are you taking me?”
“Eevee!”
“Riolu!”
“Oh you want to try this game?”
“RI RI”
“Eeeeee!”

So I help them up onto the booth and the owner of it quickly greets us with a big old grin which in a way is kind of creepy…

“HELLO!”
“Uh… hi… my Eevee and Riolu would like to play this… uh… game?”
“Oh sure sure! All they have to do it track this ball and find it after the cups are shuffled.”
“Oh OK; you two ready?”
“Eev!”
“Ri Ri!”
“OK then here we go!”

At first the ball goes under one cup then they are slowly shuffled around so we all can keep a good track on it. Then suddenly it goes faster and faster until all we see is a blur of white as the cups go and go and go then STOP!

“Whoa dizzy……”
“Eeeeeeeee….”
“Riiiiiiiiiiiii….”

They dizzily choose the middle cup then the booth lifts it up slowly as I fall down, dizzy, because I can still see the cups spinning around…

“CONGRATULATIONS!!!”
“What?”
“Your Pokémon win here you go.”

They give me the prizes that they pointed to dizzily and I put them into my bag. Then the three of us slowly and dizzily walk away and sit down on a bench. After we are feeling much better I stand up just to have Riolu grab my arm and drag me off somewhere with Eevee keeping up pace, heading to the same destination.

“What, is there something over this way that we can all do together?”

They turn back to look at me and nod yes so I go along with them having to follow Riolu as long as she is holding my hand. Seeing how happy they are I feel like there is nothing I would not try for them.

To be continued…
 
Chapter 5 Something in the water besides me.

They continue to drag me and I still don’t have a clue about where we are even going just that Eevee and Riolu are taking me somewhere to try out something. Eventually we come to a dunk-tank with a sign-up sheet.

“Oh I see you want me to sign up for it.”
“Ri Ri!”
“EEEE!”
“OK I’ll sign up.”

So I find the person who runs it to sign up. They take me into a changing room where I find a pair of trunks. I get out of my clothes and take off my bag as I change into the trunks; then I get into the line of fifteen other people who signed up to get dunked.

“Hey who do you think is going to dunk us?”
“Oh it will be your own Pokémon.”
“Oh really? Well, I think my Riolu can but my Eevee will have trouble.”
“Well best of luck to you. Me it’s my Lucario so I’m going to get dunked.”
“Well then you have a nice swim.”
“HAHAHAHAHA. Good one kid.”
“Hey thanks.”

After what seemed to be about eight minutes the wind starts to pick up giving me a cold chill on my exposed skin so I shiver until I step into the dunk-tank. First up to try is my Riolu. She picks up the ball and is about to throw but just as she is about to, she sees me shivering which makes her stop.

“Riolu don’t worry. I’m not shivering cause I’m scared. I’m shivering because I’m cold so don’t worry. Now try and dunk me.”
“Ri!”

So Riolu picks up the ball, backs up, and gets ready to throw it as the moon comes out. What is strange is that the water in the tank starts to glow a strange white color which scares me. Then I remember Riolu is about to knock me into the water.

“UH-OH!”
“Riolu!”
“CRUD!”

Riolu threw her hardest but the ball missed and hits the padding behind the Bulls-eye so I let out a sigh of pure relief then my Eevee is up. I just relax as the thought of how Eevee is small so she can’t hit the target so I just relax then suddenly…

“EEVEE!”
“WHOA NELLY!”

SPLASH! She hit with her tail so hard it flew up and slammed the target surprising me. The crowd gathered around as the ball flew through the air into the target and thus soaking it’s trainer. I get up above the water and my body starts to feel funny.

“Whoa I think there is something in this water besides me…”

But I get out and the weird tingling sensation stops. I look to see that my Pokémon are surrounded by the amazed people, so I walk back to the changing room, still dripping wet as people point and laugh at me because I got soaked by an Eevee while others insist on helping me dry off because they know I’m the Top Ranger, but I make it back to the changing area.

“Strange that seemed a whole lot longer than before maybe I’m just getting tired…”

Once I get in I change back into my normal clothes and start to walk back but stranger then the walk back to the changing room the walk back to the Dunk Tank seems to be taking like twice the time to head back the second time everything just seems to be getting bigger.

“Whoa things are looking more noticeable then they did earlier. They even look bigger, if that is even possible and… OOF!”

I walk into something really big and really fuzzy.

“Ok I know this was not here before… I think?”

To be continued…
 
Chapter 6 Normal sized giants

As I continue to investigate this new thing I had bumped into, I notice something else behind me. It might be large but it seems so familiar…

“What is this big, fuzzy, brown thing???”

I decide to touch it so I can feel it but once I touch it, the ground starts to shake then it goes up then comes back down nearly crushing me. When I jump out of the way, I see that the thing is a giant Eevee. Then I see that the other thing is a giant Riolu. At first I’m a little scared but when a piece of popcorn the size of a comet lands next to me I scream because I have shrunk down to about three inches in height.

“AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!”
“Eevee?”
“Ri?”

They look down to see me and they get shocked. Then the Eevee starts to get close to me. Every single muscle in me is screaming to run away but my legs will not listen so I get ready for the worst as the Eevee starts to sniff me then it licks me. Its large tongue knocking me backwards and covering my entire front in saliva.

“EW! No not again…”

The Riolu sniffs my back then it licks me causing my shirt to go up over my head and I fall over onto my face, as both of these Pokémon have covered me in saliva.

“Oh come on now I’m covered in saliva! So one get me a towel!”
“RI RI!”

The Riolu lets out a rather happy sounding call then it runs off as the Eevee uses her paws to pin me down on the ground so she can start to lick me some more. Then it dawns on me…

“These are my Pokémon! Of course otherwise I might have been squashed by now… but given the present situation I am surely glad that I bathe my Eevee regularly otherwise the scent of her paws right now would have knocked me out for sure…”

Eevee continues to lick her beloved trainer over and over until she removes her paw which kept me anchored down so that she could lick my entire body but as soon as she licked me I got sucked right into her mouth without her even realizing that it had happened. At that moment my Riolu had returned with my bag which I had forgotten in the changing room.

“Ri! Riolu?”
“Ee. Eevee?”
“LET ME OUT OF HERE!!!”
“RI! Riolu!”
“Eevee!”

Eevee spits me out and I land with her saliva completely coating my body as I try to shake it off Riolu reaches in to my bag and removes a handkerchief to dry me off with.

“Thank you Riolu.”
“Riolu!”
“And Eevee you need to be more careful since I’m smaller then you.”
“Eevee…”

Eevee gives me her sad puppy dog eyes which given my smaller size just completely over takes me so I can’t help but let out a sigh…

“OK apology accepted…”
“Eevee!”

Eevee gets her tail beneath me so she can then flick it so I flew in the to land on her back which I had to hold on tight when she broke into a run to follow Riolu. As Riolu apparently took the position as a leader, Eevee follows and I question just where we are going because since I’m now three inches tall I could get really hurt even if it is an accident.

To be continued…
 
Could you guys please explain to me how this is good? It's enjoyable in the way Ed Wood makes films but...all these comments about how "good" it is really isn't helping the author. Don't people usually post fics to get critique?
 
Chapter 7 Into the belly of the Lucario.

My wondering about where we are going ends when I see a sign saying Food Court but then I wonder why are we going to a food court but that is answered when I see my female Lucario sit at a bench about to eat some pizza because here food is free for Pokemon but the trainers have to pay. I quickly give an order…

“Ok… STOP!”
“Eevee!”
“Rio!”
“WHOA NELLY!”

We stopped so quickly that I’m launched off of Eevee’s back and unfortunately for me I land on the piece of pizza that Lucario is about to eat which make me try to get off but the cheese is keeping me from jumping off or even getting up.

“NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! AH!!!!!”

Then everything goes dark as I enter Lucario’s mouth and she starts to chew I’m being bounced around her mouth then my shoes and socks get caught in her teeth and then everything gets much much worse.

“Oh no please don’t tell me she’s going to-”
(GULP!)
“SWALLOW!”

She swallows and I start to travel down her throat until I reach her stomach. Now what’s going outside of my Lucario? (With Pokemon translation…)

“Riolu Ri olu riolu?” (Uh-oh where is Zack?)
“Eevee Ee vee Eevee.” (He’s on my silly… Uh-Oh!?)

Eevee used her tail to check if I’m still on her back and she doesn’t my little body there anymore which startles them and Lucario over hears their confusion.

“Lu cario lu Lucario?” (What are you two talking about that has you so confused?)
“Ri olu riolu Rio Ri riolu lu.” (Zack shrunk and he was riding on Eevee’s back and now we realized that he is GONE!)
“Lu lu Lucario ooo!” (Ow ow my stomach hurts all of a sudden. OW!)
“EEVEE!” (UH-OH!)
“RIOLU RI OLU!” (YOU’VE SWALLOWED ZACK THEN!)
“LUCARIO!” (NOT GOOD!)

Now back inside of Lucario I refuse to be digested in any Pokemon especially my own so I’m running around and literally bouncing off the walls of her stomach.

“LET ME OUT! I’m not going to die and I’m definitely not going down to find an exit!”

I continue as Lucario’s stomach acid rises and touches my bare feet at first my skin tingles then it starts to burn so I pick up speed but just as it looks like the end for me suddenly…

(BURP!)
“WHOA NELLY!”

She burps and I zoom up her throat, fly out of her mouth, hit the table rolling, and slamming into metal napkin dispenser which falls down on me.

“LUCARIO!”
“Riolu!”
“EEVEE!”

Lucario picks up the napkin dispenser that fell on me to see if I’m ok but I’m not under it so she gives it a shake and I fall out of it. Once she can see me she picks me up and starts to nuzzle me against her cheek trying to get my forgiveness for swallowing me.

“Lucario!”
“Lu?”
“Open your mouth.”

Lucario does and I shock everyone by jumping back in then I jump back out with my luckily still intact shoes and socks then I jump out Lucario’s hands and land on a napkin that at my current size felt like I was landing on a cushion and I start to mumble as I get my shoes and socks back on.

“Why do I have to be the lucky one getting swallowed by my own Pokémon then nearly crushed by a napkin dispenser. Why do things this bad usually happen to me… Well this is the first time I’ve been shrunk but not the first time I’m nearly crushed there was the rock the fell on my leg and the time a Bidoof head butted me in the gut…”

I continue to mumble angrily until my stomach growls so Lucario gives me a piece of pizza and we eat but I’m still pretty steamed.

To be continued…
 
lol Yayz for keep writing it! And wow about almost getting killed. Great job [I can still edit if you want (and I recommend it)]
 
Nice god, but you could you more description and you need to fix your grammar and spelling. You are also missing some words.
 
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